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Teri Meri Dosti….Yaariyaan…Manmarziyaan!!! Chapter 4

So guys…how are you…I knew m late….ahhhh….i mean toooo much late…but really I typed a chapter and then lost it…dnt knw where the hell I saved that…so have to change whole idea and now writing a new one….sammy….for u baby…specially!!!

Neil is in office when he got a call from saral, his cousin, he want to throw a party for neil and radhika’s marriage but neil denied because he himself and his beloved wife both are quite busy for next few days and they seriously doesn’t have time for any party and all…but saral blackmailed emotionally so neil finally told him that he will speak to Radhika and if she will become ready only then a small get together between close friends and cousins…no extra unwelcomed guest. Saral is not ready to agreed but obviously he also understand their problem, so he surrender…also he is worried now that what if radhika denied…everyone knew this girl love her work more thn anything…..so he dialed samaira…radhika’s cousin…
Saral “hey sam…how are you?”
Sam “o…..saral….how u remembered me?”
Saral “what do you mean??? Cnt I remember you as a friend?”
Sam with pouted face “awww……dnt b senty now…tell me the reason”
Saral “ok listen…” and he repeated all his chat with neil to sam..
Sam “ohkkk….dnt worry, I will make her agreed…”
Saral whole excited “I knew….i knew…m so proud on u samm”
Sam laughingly “stop ur drama u bimbo….and tell me if u need any help”
Saral “urghhh…stop calling me bamboo….and I need ur help obviously to prepare everything….neil flopped my plan for big party and so…have to make arrangements in another way for a get together”
Sam “dnt worry…we will do this together….i will call other duffers too”
Saral and sam laugh and finally bide good bie…

In the night time
Neil speaks to radhika about saral’s plan and like expected she denied “neil….u knw na…I have so much busy schedule for at least ten days….”
Neil “I already denied him…so dnt worry…”
Radhika “thnkyou buddy” and they dozed off for the day!!
Radhika’s phone is viberating continuously….she is busy on a video call and till now she reject sam’s call for 15th time…..she knew what sam will say…..and finally she wrap up her meeting and picked her call “sam….are u out of your mind?”
Sam “hawww…is it the way to wish your sister?”
Radhika feel good with her drama and a smile captured her lips “o my drama queen….before you speak anything…let me tell you that I seriously dnt have time to do any party…I have so much pending work baby”
Sam with a pouted face “huhhh….thts not fair….dnt u even have single day for us?”
Radhika “stop this sam”
Sam “okkk….lets change the time…we will party on Saturday late night…and Sunday u have off na”
Radhika “but…”
Sam “no butt…I knew…no matter how much work u have…but I knw u never work on Sunday…so please”
Radhika “but I have a meeting on Saturday evening itself”
Sam “its okk…we will wait….u can finish ur meeting and after that join us”
Radhika “ahhh….i dntt knw”
Sam excitedly“that means a yes”

At the same time neil entered radhika’s cabin to take her out for lunch…radhika give him a dnt knw what look…and cut the call
Neil “so….sam convinced you?”
Radhika “u knw me so well na”
Neil “ahhh…atleast someone is able to convince you”
Radhika feel bad but she arrange her feelings and smile to him “okk…lets go…m hungry now”
They left the place and reached a nearby restaurant, ordered their food….radhika detailed him all her conversation with sam…..
Neil “and tell me do u have anything comfortable to wear?’
Radhika with opened mouth “no…..:( “
Neil “its okkk…we will buy something na….”
Radhika “do we really have time to go for shopping?”
Neil “o yess….lets buy something online”
Radhika “okkkk…..”

Both of them finished their job for the day and finally left for the home in evening…
After dinner coming back to room neil and radhika sat down together on the bed with the support of bed head and started searching a dress for radhika….
They search a lot a lot a lot on almost all clothing sites and literally exhausted….
Radhika “neil…just shut this or I will have a brain hemorrhage”
Neil “just this last site…”
Radhika “okk…then check and order something if you like”
Neil “ohhhooo….u trust my choice so much”
Radhika “no…I trust my choice and you are my choice”
Neil “u r too smart…dnt u think so”
Radhika “no….i dnt think so…but I knw that”
Neil “ok…to smart radhika ji…..i think u wear XXL size na”
Radhika widened her eyes “neil…u duffer I will kill you…do you think I am so much fat” and she jump on him and pull his hair tightly….
Neil “o…junglee……leave me”

They have a good fight…..like really jungle waali fight…..
Finally…radhika dozed off showing her back to him….and he again starts his search of a dress for her….
His eyes brightened with the satisfaction when he finally got one simple and elegant dress for her…..
http://www.aliexpress.com/item-img/2015-Pink-White-Half-Sleeve-Knee-Length-Women-Wedding-Party-Dresses-White-Lace-Formal-Prom-Gown/32409736477.html?spm=2114.10010108.1000017.2.mtrute
he ordered all matching accessories also…..

two days passed like this…radhika is still angry on him for calling her fat….and talk less…neil tried so many times but no…she is also want to irritate him to the core…
neil sitting on the bed after getting ready want to make one more try to patch up wit his wife….aaa….wait let me correct…her best buddy…yes she is his best buddy more then a wife
radhika is setting her hair and neil start “ahhh…I was thinking to atleast show you the image of your dress I ordered but now…dnt think u r interested”
radhika widened her eyes..she totally forget about dress…she dnt even knw that he ordered something for her…”okkk…show me”
neil “wait….i think someone speaks with me”
radhika “neil…”
neil “arrreyeyyy…again I listened someone’s voice”
radhika tried, but this time neil win…..
next two days the clock move in anti clockwise direction…means radhika tried to convince neil to show her the image of dress and on the other side…neil just gv her a deaf ear….same a s she did with him!!!
Finally…its Saturday morning……
Radhika “neil….tonight we hv to go there..at least show me that image now…please”
Neil “dnt u have trust on me?”
Radhika “more then myself…”
Neil “then u got ur dress in the evening…..and believe me…u will like that”
She smiled, noticing such a calmness on his face….

Its 8 pm now…she come out of her meeting and run towards parking but then noticed neil is waiting for her…she feel so happy….a different feeling….and took the passenger seat before neil even come out of the car…
They reached home and neil took the bath first….the time he is getting ready radhika took the bath…when she come out neil is all ready and there is a big box on the bed….he wave his hand towards the box and left the room….

Radhika opened the box and stunned to see the dress…..its gorgeous…..she quickly fit herself in that dress….done little make up….with liner..maskara and lip gloss….loose her hair with the curls at the bottom….wear matching earings and high heels…..carry a matching clutch…neil choose everything perfect for her…..
She exited her room and find neil assuring someone on phone that he will be there in half an hour..the time when his gaze settled on her…he lost his speech…..feel proud on his choice….not about clothes and accessories but to the girl who is standing in front of him..turning pink with blush…..radhika keep standing there waiting to get a compliment but neil…he forget everything……he dnt want to go anywhere…just want to fill his arms with a tight hug to his dearest wife….
Prerna come from behind and broke their silence with a fake cough…
The couple come out of their imaginary world and to avoid awkward scene..radhika speak with prerna and eyes settled on neil “ma…how am I looking?”
Prerna “ohh…you are looking so beautiful my baby…..muahhh…may god bless you”
Radhika hug her “ok..maa now we should leave..its already 9 o clock”
Prerna…”yes and take care”
Neil come out before radhika and open the passenger door for her….she thank him and took her seat…on the other side neil settled on his seat and drive the car…there is an intense silence whole way…no body speak….neil keep gazing her and she keep blushing.

They reached their farm house. Venue of their get together…they decided to stay back tonight here
Neil’s cosion…saral.nitin.rajat and nikita; Radhika’s cousion sam, manya, sanyukta and priyanshu
Gang of these eight people jump on them to wish again for their wedding…..
All of them sit on sofas and start chit chatting….sam shout on all of them suddenly “enough guys…are we here to discuss any business meeting?”
Lets go for dance and drinks….” She completed
They get up and come on the backyard…it’s a big green park with a swimming pool and on a side drink counter with some chairs and dj…
All of them started having drinks…except radhika all of them are having hard drinks…but she is so nervous…she noticed neil’s intense eyes on her only, this make her nervous….
Sam “what happened radhika ?”
Radhika take her to a side and tell that I am tired but sam denied and ask neil to join the dance floor where nikita, saral, priyanshu and manya are already dancing….
Radhika show sam her widened eyes while grinding her teeth but its too late now, neil reached there and hold her hand..take her to dance floor…they dance on some romantic slow tracks….after few minutes radhika started feeling comfortable and neil come so close to her…they dance with eyelock so calmly…just like they have their entire life to be here like this…..they come out of their special zone with a sound of clapping……

All ten dance on their personal weird style after that and atlast again neil and radhika dance on little bit fast music this time.
Sam and saral decide something and ask all others to play truth and dare now…..radhika denied first coz she knew her sister is upto something but watching other’s excitement she also join them…
First turn saral
Truth or dare?
Saral “truth”
Saral “how many affairs do you have till now?”
Saral gulp hard watching manya…as he like her a lot and manya also look at him in a serious mode to knw his answer “5”
Manya “5….”??
saral shut his eyes tightly “but yaar…those were about 2 years back na”
manya “whatever…”
sam make her calm and roll the bottle again…this tym it stopped on priyanshu…”truth or dare?”
priyamshu “dare”
nikita “u have to stay under water for 10 minutes ryt now”
priyanshu “ok….he get up and with the blink of eye jumped in the pool…..and completed his challenge
this time bottle stopped on radhika “dare”
sam “u have to kiss neil”
radhika “are u mad?”
sam “arrey..m not asking u to liplock with him…just a simple kiss”
if you can kill someone with your eyes..sam will be dead till now….radhika’s anger and nervousness is at no bound….and neil… his eyes show how excited he is..
all other cheer for radhika to kiss neil, who is sitting on her right…
she quickly with the speed of electricity turn and kiss him on his left cheek and stand up from there…..m tired…not playing anymore…u ppl carry on”
neil feel so bad for this , only one thing revolves in his mind.. “why is she so uncomfortable with me?”
and before anyone speak radhika left the group and entered her room….neil also stand up and left from there….he climb the stairs and reached on the terrace…..there is a chair on the left side of the stair and sit on that …a tear drop come from his eye and reached to his chin……what is happening with him…..
after sometime sam reached there… she place her hand on his shoulder to get noticed….neil quickly get up and move his palm on his face to clear any water droplet


sam “what happened?”
neil “ahhh…nothing…just cm here to have some fresh air”
sam “neil….she loves you”
neil become statue “no…no sam…she doesnt…..”
sam “cnt u see love for yourself in her eyes?”
neil “and cnt u see how uncomfortable she was with me”
sam “neil……u have to make her comfortable….she herself dnt knw that she loves you”
neil “i dnt knw….i dnt want to force myself on her”
sam “neil..”
but before she complete neil “and if you are right then let her realize her love….i will wait”
sam “but..”
neil “lets go downstairs”
sam nodded but she want to unite them….
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