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Home»Fan Fiction»Teri Meri Dosti….Yaariyaan…Manmarziyaan!!! Chapter 3
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Teri Meri Dosti….Yaariyaan…Manmarziyaan!!! Chapter 3

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After a long working day, neil and radhika reached back home,..….both of them lay down on their bed entwining their fingers……facing the roof…..after 2 or three minutes they turn their sides to face each other…
Neil “ok…kiddo…lets fresh up now…m very hungry…”
Radhika “seriously…m so tired that may be I skip my dinner…I just want to sleep….even without changing”
Neil runs his fingers in her hairs while caressing them… “no way, you have to eat…I dnt want anyone to blame me for ur dull face”
Radhika feel butterflies in her stomach with his touch….it s not the first time that neil is doing this…but she herself doesn’t understand what is happening with her…why suddenly she want neil to be her side……….why suddenly her heart want the attention of neil on her only…….she come out of her thoughts when neil get up from bed to take a bath….

She quickly move towards washroom and lock the door before neil understand what happened with the blink of his eye….
Neil shout “kiddo…what the hell is this?”
Radhika “guddo..” before she speak further neil shouted again and with the thud he break the door….
Radhika’s jaw on the floor…..”what the hell…”
Neil “say me guddo one more time, I will detach the door from its frame and then let me c where u bath…”
No single word come out of her mouth…just like a fish her lips move……open…close….she lost her words…
Neil’s eye widedned now… he realized what he did…… radhika is standing in front of her in her blouse and skirt…without saree……
When radhika’s eyes notice where neil is staring she shout “aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh…” she fold her arms on her chest
Neil doesn’t understand and he also shouts along with her “aaaaahhhhh” placing his hands on his eyes…
radhika doesn’t understand she remove her arms from her chest and place her hands on hips asking neil “why are you shouting….?”
Neil move his fingers from his eyes to give one look to radhika and when he again see her posture he fainted!!!
Radhika feel deadly embarrassed she move towards his closet take one of his shirt and wear that….then she run towards neil and sprinkle some water on his face…but no response…finally she turn the shower on him….neil get up with continue splash of water on his face……

Radhika move towards door “happy now…u can take a bath before me…” making irriked face
Neil hold her hand quickly and push her towards him.. “we both will together take the bath na……”
Radhika ….butterflies…butterflies…… “on one condition”
Neil with raised eyebrow “and what is that?”
Radhika “u have to sing a song of any latest movie…so we can dance in shower “
Neil with his cute dimple smile “anytime babes”
N here he started….
“tenu itna main pyaar karaan…ik pal wich so baar karaan….
Tu jaave je mainu chadd k…mout da intezaar karaan…
K tere liye duniya chodd di hai ye tu kabhi soch na sake…”
Radhika is lost in the thoughts….she does never expect this song…as its so emotional and romantic….otherside neil sing that coz akshay kumar is his favorite actor and he listen this song on the fm while drivig back home…..
They do…slow dance…couple dance…..funny dance…..neil hold her finger above her head and she spin around him…….finally neil stopped singing….and move out of washroom….he come back in seconds having his ipod…..they play many songs…..bollywood style…… like kar gyi chull…..high heels…. And dance like lunatics……
This time radhika come out and slowly slowly move towards kitchen….open the fridger take the whole ice cream bowl and one spoon….she forget to take another one….
Neil eyes start dancing again when radhika reached there with favorite black current ice cream…..they stand like this that water slash on their back while enjoying…no no…fighting for the spoon…..neil took over the charge in the end and play fair game…one spoon to her…one to himself……and we all knew when we feed someone like this…our own spoon is filled with double quantity thn our partner………

After some more fun and play in water……neil ask radhika to turn her face…she obliged and do the same….neil took out his clothes and wrap a towel around his waist quickly……
“now u can see here also” she listened and turn…..turned red after staring neil like that…he s looking more thn handsome ……. She tought in her mind “whats wrong with you radhika…he is neil…..ur best friend…how can you stare his body like this…”
He comes out of her thoughts when neil speak “now you also change in yor night clothes quickly” n he exits…..

after 5 minutes radhika also come out wearing a lose bottom with front buttoned loose top, neil having a tray full of food entered in room…..
radhika “o..thank you so much…m so hungry and have no courage to go ouside and hv dinner”

they started having dinner……radhika noticed tht neil move his eyes here n ther…but not on her…… radhika “what happened to you now?”
neil “no…nothing…..m done…u need something else?”
radhika “no….m dead tired……hungry but just want to sleep….”
Neil move towards her n feed her with his hands…..
Radhika happily enjoy like a 2 year old kid…..
Radhika applying her night cream when neil come and stand behind her….she turn and before she speak….he hold her shirt and start tucking her button which is open till now………radhika s pink….from tip to toe!!!
Neil reached to bed and radhika is following him……
“you can sleep here…I will sleep on sofa” she said
Neil “why???? Before our marriage also we use to sleep together/….what happened now?”
Radhika in her mind…tell what happened …stupid girl…
She join him on bed while slowly cursing herself….
Neil “kiddo…”
Radhika “hmm..?”
Neil “what happened?”
Radhika “no…nothing…y r u asking?
Neil “u started turning pink now a days very quickly….”
Radhika blushed again…..neil hold her tight in his arms and sleep(she thought) before she answer!!!!
Neil in his mind….. “what is happening with me…firstly kiss in office….then washroom incident….how to tell her what I am feeling….when I saw her open button…nd…she doesn’t wear anything under her shirt……ufff…neil…whats wrong with you…she is your best friend…how can you think like this about her”
Morning…..when radhika opened her eye…she found herself in neil’s arms….her lips are touching to neil’s color bone….shockingly… She quickly get up from the bed..neil also wake up with the disturbance and asked what happened….but instead of replying him….she run towards bathroom to take a bath….
Neil understand…..she is uncomfortable with me I think….he thought…
In washrrom..radhika turn on shower and stand there for along time…to understand what s happening with her…..nd weather neil is also facing this???

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36 Comments

  1. Siva Abirami on June 26, 2016 4:08 am

    Simply… Superb…. Pls continue and do update…. Manha

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 8:12 pm

      thx alot manha…..m happy tht u r backk!!!

  2. Brin on June 26, 2016 5:46 am

    Awesome episode, waiting for the next episode. 🙂

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 8:12 pm

      thx brin!!!

  3. amita singh on June 26, 2016 8:50 am

    wow ritu superb dear……….inki chemistry m v dum h hot chemistry h…..plz post next soon

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 8:12 pm

      thx alot amita!!!

  4. dipika on June 26, 2016 10:21 am

    Di its superb….you r very good in writing such romantic moments.. i loved..their confusions… omg..soooo lovely…. n they shout.. hahaha..i can’t stop laughing still… love you.tc

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 8:14 pm

      thx piku……i just tried!!

  5. Jessie on June 26, 2016 11:20 am

    Neil too shouted.hahaha gosh
    I laughed again n again…u brought out their inconvenience nicely..so caught in their own thoughts.. hmm waiting 4 next one.

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 8:15 pm

      thx jessie….!!!

  6. Sammy on June 26, 2016 1:13 pm

    It was fabulous maandey di 🙂 🙂

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 8:15 pm

      thx sammu…..!!!

  7. Ritu on June 26, 2016 1:38 pm

    Jst superb..raneil bonding was cute and adorable..both behaving weird..washroom scenes were mind blowing..waiting for nxt..love u ?

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 8:16 pm

      thx ritu….will update soon…!!!

  8. sreee on June 26, 2016 2:10 pm

    raneil was superb…waiting for samarj…are they present here di?

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 8:17 pm

      present but these r main characters!!!

  9. Bella on June 26, 2016 2:49 pm

    It’s really superb… I loved their nok joks n their feelings towards each other
    Update next part soon

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 8:18 pm

      thx bella…..n sure!!

  10. neetz on June 26, 2016 4:23 pm

    Pls dont change the pair..i love them 🙂

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 8:19 pm

      no…no change

  11. Gauri on June 26, 2016 5:01 pm

    This was so awesome 🙂 let it be RNeil I am loving it … amazing Ritu waiting for the next one 🙂

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 8:20 pm

      sure babes…..lov u!!!

  12. lakshmi05 on June 26, 2016 7:07 pm

    Superb update dear… Will be waiting for next one… Luv u..tc…

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 8:21 pm

      thx alot lakshmi…good to c u!!

  13. Supriya on June 26, 2016 8:38 pm

    Amazing di…loved it to the core…m loving raneil…Pls next one soon dear…love you loads….tc?

    • RituM on June 26, 2016 10:44 pm

      thx supriya dearo!!!!

  14. subha on June 27, 2016 12:09 pm

    awesome episode…interesting .eagerly waiting next one..tc

    • RituM on June 27, 2016 9:08 pm

      thx subha!!!

  15. Gianna on June 27, 2016 12:12 pm

    Am so much loving this Maandey, such a cute update am enjoying raneil’s conflicting feelings

    • RituM on June 27, 2016 9:07 pm

      thx alot gianna!!!

  16. nisha on June 27, 2016 2:36 pm

    siva abirami manha is that u dear my oldy friend manha

    Do u remember me or not ?????????????????

    well if u are then love u and miss u the mostttttttttttttttttttttt

    and if u are new then nice to meet u dear and loved ur name making me remember the most important friend in tu till now.

    love u dear keep smiling

    and yaa maandey aka ritum fab part I love ur update whenever updated

    I am reading this story with open minded knowing the fact that I am ardhika lover

    but still reading this new yet fresh story

    Loving it till now dear keep updating the next one hurrily

    • RituM on June 27, 2016 9:06 pm

      nisha…..yes…she s d same manha…ur frnd…..even v r talking about u today……nyc to c u…n thxxx!!

  17. Gracy on June 28, 2016 2:36 am

    Hey Ritum, Though am an Ardhika fan, I have always wondered how radhika and Neil would be like as lovers and couple , and u made that come true and its just superb. This is so exciting. Great job. I can’t wait for your next update….

    • RituM on June 28, 2016 11:42 am

      thxxx allotttt gracy….u hv a nyc name!!!

  18. priya on June 30, 2016 4:05 am

    superb

  19. Roma on June 30, 2016 10:31 am

    Awesome, wowwww rituuuuuu…my buddy. …it’s really superbbbb n mind blowing episode. ..raneil feeling something something. ..lol….just loved it from the bottom of my heart. …keep it up honeyyy. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. N infinite love to our little don arya…..muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂 ♡♡♡

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