Tere sukoon ke liye ho jaau mein fanaah IshOm ff Part-1

Hello all. Thank you so much for your lovely comments on prologue. I am sorry, I am not providing any CS for this story as I think the surprise elements will be disclosed. You will get to know about the characters as the story progresses. And most important thing, this is not a Ishkara ff. This is the story of Omkara with the character I created i.e ISHANYA played by Madirakshi mundle as i think they would make a really good pair. Ofcourse, you can imagine it as Vrushika too. Ok now enough of my talks, here is the 1st part. Hope you enjoy reading it.

Chapter-1

The first look

Guitar playing in the background, winds are wild, cars got struck in the traffic. In that traffic a girl coverd her face in brown scarf is trying to pass the traffic by walking in between the spaces of vehicles.

In the same traffic Omkara too got struck. He is waiting helplessly for the traffic to get clear. He is impatient and irritated by the vehicles horns mixed with guitar music as he lowered the window glass.

He noticed the girl coming towards his car. “So much eager to go somewhere” he thought. He looked at the girl who is now passing by his car. Her scarf got struck in his car’s door handle due to wind. She is trying to take it off. And suddenly their eyes met.

They were looking into each others eyes for few seconds. Suddenly the scarf flew from her face and she broke the eyelock. She looked at the handle and tried to free her scarf. Omkara mesmerized for a moment tried to help her take the scarf. She withdrew her hand seeing omkara’s hand coming. He took the scarf and offered her not taking his eyes from her face even for a second, while she was looking sideways and not noticed her scarf in his hands. He cleared his throat to get her attention, she looked at him and then at the scarf. She took her scarf without touching his hand while he continued to look at her and listened to her tingling bangles. she left from there in the same hurry. Omkara who was still looking at her retreating back was got to reality by a horn sound and he focused his eyes on the traffic. But that 3 second moment still lingering in his mind.

Some where else the same girl, is rushing on the road and a bike came before her halting.

The biker looked at her while she was looking beyond him. He asked “hey, you! Mana ki girls rudy se milne ke liye bahut betaab hothe hain. Par itni bhi kya jaldi kit um bhaagthe bhaagthe mere bike ke neeche aagayi?”

She bluntly looked at him and then looked past him and said hurriedly,”ghumao!!”
He looked confusedly at her, when she came to him and sat on his bike.

“I said, bike ghumaao! Jaldi!!” She ordered him. He took his glasses and looked back at her shocked.
She shouted at him “Sunai nahi diya?! Jaldi karo who log jaarahe hai!”

He was baffled and said “OH! Hello! Pehle tum mere bike se uthro, Only hot girls have right to sit on my bike. Aur meinne toh tumhe teekse dekha bhi nahi kit um hot ho ki nahi!”
She climbed down his bike and stood infront of him. Before he can say anything she slapped him!

“What the hell!!!” He uttered in shock clutching his cheek
She again slapped him on his other cheek. He opened his mouth in shock.

She shouted “Chup chaap bike ghumao, aur unlogon ka peecha karo.” And again sat on his bike.

This time he did what she said. And she said “who, uss red van ka peecha karo, jaldi!!”
He saw the van far away from him and sped his bike to follow it.

They both reached an old warehouse kind of location. He tried to ask her something while she looked around and finally got courage and asked her “hum yaha kya karne aaye hai?”
“Unhein bachane, aur kya?” She said confusing him. He asked “Kisse?” She pointed towards something from a broken window and said “unhe”
The scene he looked horrified him.

There was a gang of few men with a group girls tied with ropes and their mouths plastered.
He looked at her shockingly, and tried to ask something, while she was talking hushed in her phone.
He looked at the broken window and saw the girls were being auctioned. His blood boiled, he was disgusted and started to walk towards the door to enter inside.

The girl who realized that he is trying to enter into the warehouse, grabbed his hand and dragged him to a side and asked “kya, kar rahe ho?!”
“Unhe bachana hai na, isliye andar jaa raha hu!” He said as a matter of fact.
She said “Zyada hgeropanti dikhane ki zarurat nahi hai! Mein ne police ko phone karliya hai who log aate hi honge!”
He tried to say something when a loud voice interrupted them

“yeh tum log koun ho?!” Shouted a man, may be from the same gang who kidnapped the girls.
They both are shocked and looked at each other.

“Chalo, yaha se!” Said the girl holding his hand trying to run. But he stood rocked at the same place and looked at the gathering gang of men with blo*dy eyes.
She looked shockingly, while he took back his hand from her and went towards the gang.
What followed was an action sequence, rudra had beaten the men with the occasional help of the girl with pepper spray.

Just when they handled all the members, Police arrived with media.
Rudra looked at the girl and tried to say something, when the girl noticed media and covered her face with scarf and left from there without saying a word or looking back once.
Rudra was surrounded by media, while police were busy in arresting the men. He didn’t shied away from media and showed his heropanti. He thanked the girl in his mind for giving an opportunity like this.

Note:- So, how is it? Any suggestions for presentation of the story are welcomed. As you all know I am new here, I am getting used to the forum. Any help would surely appreciated. And lastly, comment honestly and give me a big comment about how you liked the story, even if you don’t liked anything you can tell me in comments. I won’t mind. 🙂