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Home»Fan Fiction»Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 6)
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Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 6)

DarshiniBy DarshiniFebruary 10, 201746 Comments7 Mins Read
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“excuse me sir…commissioner sir is waiting for you…”Prithvi(laksh’s asst) informs him…
“Wo…i will be back within 5minutes…you go…”laksh made an excuse…
Prithvi nods and went away…
“Commissioner is waiting for me..oh no…if really Ragini had filed an complaint against me uh…cha cha..no no….i know about her…she won’t do like that…where is she…am in her cabin but she went away…there commissioner… if he asked about her what will I do…arghh am confused…”said laksh by scratching his head…
“I have behaved so rude with her…no lucky…morning was good but I made it worse with my activities…i don’t know whom side I should be…either my ragini’s side or Kavya’s…arggh…after hearing her words am getting mad even more…Ragini you confused me again…both girls doesn’t tell me what exactly happened…but Ragini…no no Kavya was not like that…Kavya knows how much I love Ragini…how can Kavya harm her best friend’s life…but Ragini won’t lie…what’s the need for her to blame Kavya…oh god please give me peace…i can’t understand my life…am stucked…”laksh panics…
“this is the only way…”laksh runs down the stairs…he goes to the place where commissioner is waiting for him…
Commissioner handover him the file regarding the mission…his eyes searches for Ragini…
“Mr.Lakshya…the one your eyes were searching is not here…”commissioner teases him…
Laksh gets awkward…”where is she??”he asked immediately…
“she was busy with her works…went outside I think…”commissioner patted his shoulders…
Laksh runs faster and turns back”which place sir”he asked..
Commissioner shooks his head negatively…
Laksh calls her but she didn’t picked…how can she after all these happened laksh expected this and soon he called her assistant not wasting his time in calling her back to back…
Her assistant said that after finishing the works mam left from there without informing anyone..
“oh no…anyway thank you Mr.Kumar(Ragini’s asst)for helping out…”laksh thanks him and cuts the call…
“I know where she will be…am coming Ragu ma…”laksh smirks..
He reached the garden where Ragini would go whenever she feels heartbroken…he searched her but couldn’t find…he runs to the back gate and finds a girl who is walking on the road incautious…
Laksh sees a truck coming towards her with full speed…”yeh you..miss…”laksh jumps over the gate and run towards her fastly…
He pulled her towards him…while pulling he thrown something on the truck it passes away…laksh was above the girl and he didn’t see the girl and notices the truck’s number in that position itself…
Then he turned”be caref..u….l…l”laksh got interrupted seeing her…it’s none other than Ragini…
Both lost in each others eyes…both reminisces their first meet…

!*!*!*!*!*!*!FB
RagLak first meet happened when they were in their second year…laksh is an lateral entry student in the campus… the previous institute he studied gave him TC because of his naughtiness…he joined here because of his father’s influence…
On their first week itself entire 2nd year aeronautical students got suspended for two days because of making the library dirty due to their party celebration…
Unfortunately Ragini also got suspended…eventhough she didn’t took part in that event she got suspended…it’s a first black mark in her life…
She got heart broken because it was a biggest thing to digest for her…she goes to the garden nearby inorder to get rid off the sorrows…
She was walking on the road lost in her thoughts that if her family knows about this then…
Suddenly she feels two hands wrapping around her and pulled her towards him…they fall over each other and laksh was on the top…
Ragini closed her eyes in fear…while Laksh lost staring her…he tucks her hair which falls over her face…she opened her eyes…they shared a cute eyelock…it seems to be love at first sight for him…
Their eyelock breaks when they hears the horn sound…laksh gets up slowly…
“Wo…am sorry…”laksh apologize because of embarrassment…
“nahi…thanks for helping me from…”Ragini got interrupted…
“that’s ok…hi…am Laksh and may I know your name please…”laksh was curious to know her name…
“I know you already…we are in same class only…am Ragini…”Ragini introduces herself…
“oh really…actually I won’t be in class regularly…so I haven’t seen you I think…but it’s pleasure to meet you Ragu…”laksh forwards his hand…
“it’s not pleasure here…the accident from which you saved is because of you only…”Ragini gave him a death glare…
“What do you mean by that Ragu…”laksh asked in a confused tone…
“don’t call me Ragu…got it…and the reason na…because of you only I got suspended for two days for the first time…do you know how much it hurts…haan..how do you know about that and all you’re spending your father’s wealth only…anyway thanks for saving…bye..”Ragini rushes towards her hostel…
“attitude uh…”laksh patts his head and smiles stupendously…
!*!*!*!*!*!FB ends…

Their eyelock breaks when laksh’s phone beeps…laksh tries to get up but falls again due to stepping over wet grass…their eyes met again…Ragini pushed him beside and tries to get up but falls…
Finally they comes to a mutual agreement…they hold each other’s hand and tried to get up and succeeded too…
“Ragini…be careful na…”laksh uttered finally…
Ragini glares…
“don’t say like our first meet that it’s also because of me…”laksh laughs…
“what if I say yes…”Ragini in a harsh tone…
“then I will get you back in my life like before…”laksh bursts out laughing…
Ragini gets irritated and stops the cab and gets into it…
“see how mean you are laksh…first behaved rudely with me and not believed too…now saved me and making fun of me…i hate you…”Ragini cries again…
Ragini reached her quarters and run towards her room…laksh words keeps on echoing in her mind…
“I will make you understand laksh…i will bring Kavya’s real face infront of you…after that I will end it…our relationship…”Ragini wipes her tears…
Laksh reaches some unknown place…there he hides behind the pillar and spy on a man who is wearing a black jacket and he covered his face with a black cloth…that man was waiting for someone…
!*!*!*!FB few minutes before…
After Ragini left from the spot…laksh called control room and gave them the truck’s number and asked them to track it because he thrown his gps over the truck…
They tracked the location and informed him that it is @xyz area which is 15 km away from his position…laksh immediately rushes to the spot
!*!*!*!FB ends…

Laksh didn’t shown up and he silently watches him from little farther because to catch him red-handed…
Suddenly a girl is shown who is walking towards the man with a blue over coat covering her face with the duppatta…
The man unfold the kerchief from his face and says”the plan is flopped…that too because of your boyfriend…he saved Ragini…”
Suddenly that girl grabbed his neck and says”I don’t want any reasons…you should kill her and it must be an accident…got it…i will give you one more chance…and it’s the last chance for you if you didn’t complete it then I will kill you”…
“sorry mam…i will complete my work this time…please leave me mam…”that man pleaded her…
She pushed him on the floor and throw money over his face…
“last chance…use it properly…Ragini I won’t leave you..”the girl goes away in her car…
Laksh noticed the car number and starts following that man who drop the truck over there and went in a cab…laksh covered his face with the helmet(bcz laksh understand that the man knows him)and he followed his car…
He finally reached an old bungalow(looks like bhooth bungalow)and laksh informs that area to his colleagues and asks them to come over there…
Laksh slowly enters into the bungalow following that man…
The man turns suddenly…laksh hides behind the sofa…laksh slowly lifts his face and sees him..the man proceeds to forward direction…
That man feels that someone is following him…he turns right and opens the room…
Laksh followed him and enters into the room but no one is there…he turns back…
Suddenly he got hit at his back…laksh is shocked…
!*!*!*!*!

To be continued •••

Precap:
Flashback episode…

So how was the chappy???this one also small only…am sorry…I know it’s too bad…plz bear me and don’t curse me…i won’t drag it and reveal the flashback within 2 episodes…what say friends…till then take care all…bye bye….
~Darshu

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    46 Comments

    1. Sindhura on February 10, 2017 10:41 pm

      Howcan someobe kill a ias just like that

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 9:32 am

        Yes dear…it was a planned one dr..they are spying her…but don’t worry nothing would hpn to her when laksh is with her…take care dear…

      • bubbly on February 11, 2017 4:48 pm

        sindhu di…. plZ update ur ff naaa…… y u yakibg long long tym..

    2. Arjuna on February 10, 2017 10:44 pm

      AWESOME

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 9:33 am

        Tq Arjuna ? glad u liked it…

    3. Jaan on February 10, 2017 10:55 pm

      Nice. I think that girl is Kavya. Hope lakshya find out the truth soon

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 9:34 am

        Tq jaan..and may be your guess is right…? soon laksh will realize it…glad you liked it…

    4. Ashnoor on February 10, 2017 11:18 pm

      Amazing

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 9:35 am

        Tq ashnoor…glad that you liked it…

    5. Priya on February 10, 2017 11:28 pm

      Superb.. finally laksh has started to find out the truth

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 9:36 am

        Tq Priya…and yes finally laksh started his investigation…ips sir hai na…ha ha…
        Am glad that u liked it

    6. Mintu on February 11, 2017 12:16 am

      It’s fabulous dear.. Nenga kandipa post panuvinganu nenaichn da..athey mari panitinga…andha man sahil nu guess pandrn.. May be its right or wrong…..pavam ragini.. laksh avala nambadha nala rmba kasta padura…!!!! Laksh unmaiya therinjadhum neriya raglak moments kudunga dear….!!!! Mudinja next part seekram post panunga da…xam iruka nala kastam dhn..!!! It’s k dear.. Take care ??

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 9:38 am

        Tq so mch dear…no dear its not sahil da…
        Laksh will realize soon..
        Nee enna solra Ragini forgive pannanuma illa punish pannanuma…
        I need suggestions da…
        I will post nxt updte tmrw dear…
        Take care da…

      • Mintu on February 11, 2017 9:48 am

        Kandipa ragini laksh ah punish pananum ah da…avan ragini ah nambama ponadhuku….bcoz lovers kula nambika irukanumla dear…avan childhood frnd dhan kavya bt avan yosichu irukanum la.. Ragini poi solra nala avaluku ena benefit irukunu ..!!!! Laksh knjam kasta patu dhn dear aakanum… Apo dhana indha mari again thappu pana matan… Apapa laksh naughtiness athula irundha innum nala irukum da….!!!! Unga story ah rmba miss pandrn… Comeback soon dear…!!!!!!! ??

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 10:12 am

        Aww thnks a lot dear…i will mke it as per ur wish…take cre da…

    7. Tejaholic on February 11, 2017 1:44 am

      Awesome…

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 9:42 am

        Tq dear…glad u liked it…

    8. IQRA222 on February 11, 2017 9:32 am

      Awesome

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 9:44 am

        Tq IQRA dear…glad you liked it….

    9. Megha on February 11, 2017 10:08 am

      Mindblowing

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 1:51 pm

        Tq megha…am glad that you liked it…

    10. lovely on February 11, 2017 10:17 am

      Awesome

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 1:52 pm

        Tq lovely ? glad u liked it….

    11. Fairy on February 11, 2017 10:44 am

      Darshi…u r jst amaznggggg!!!!!! A fabulousss writerrr??? uodate ws soooperbb…waitng for nxt part..keeep rockng n stay blessed sweeety????

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 1:53 pm

        Aww tq so much sweetheart…i was jumping bcz of ur cmnts…take care dear…

    12. Aasthu on February 11, 2017 1:03 pm

      Hey Darshu…..it’s nice…….raglak FB was a bit funny…..their convo too…..I loved raglak moments on the day they both met in the conference room….and then in Ragini’s apartment…..fun to watch him climb the pipe……waiting for the next for the past….I’m not worried abt Ragini bcoz she has Laksh……

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 1:55 pm

        Aww aasthu..thnks a lot dear…
        U observed it so keen…and yes u r right when laksh is there with Ragini na nothing to worry…
        Glad that you liked it…

    13. saranya on February 11, 2017 3:51 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 4:24 pm

        Tq Saranya…am glad that you liked it…

    14. bubbly on February 11, 2017 4:48 pm

      fabulous.

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 5:31 pm

        Tq bubbly…glad that you liked it…

    15. Ammu on February 11, 2017 6:15 pm

      Awesome episode and it’s interesting. Loved it. Waiting for next

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 7:31 pm

        Tq dear…am glad that you liked it…

    16. Devihaa on February 11, 2017 6:54 pm

      Amazing…

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 7:32 pm

        Tq devihaa dear…glad you liked it…

    17. dharani on February 11, 2017 7:40 pm

      awesome just amazing

      • Darshini on February 11, 2017 8:21 pm

        Tq dharani dear…am glad that you liked it…

    18. sangeetha on February 11, 2017 8:58 pm

      It’s an interesting story again from u..the way of delivering each scene s so good in this story..Today I’ve read ur 1-6 episodes..awsm da..keep writing..waiting for the next episode

      • Darshini on February 12, 2017 2:08 pm

        Thnks a lot sannu…infact am waiting for your cmnt here…u have read all together…am glad that you liked it…

    19. asra on February 11, 2017 10:49 pm

      fabulous darshu dear…..sry darshu late comment panrathuku….inaki knjm busy adhan…..sry yar…..raglak oda fb rmba comedy ya irunthadhu…laksh Una already college la irundhu thorathi vidu inu oru college ku vandhum ne thirunthama suspend aanathum illama our ragu vaiyum korthu viduda…very bad yar….laksh pona epic la unna na thidirthen but Ipa na Adha vaapas vangikiren bcz inaki ne ragini ya kapathirkela adhunala….adhukaga un mela na kovama illainu lam nenachuratha….ne ragu va nambathathuku un mela kolaveri la than iruken….darshu Andha kavya than idhuku pinati irukala….anyways shocking ya break panunga dear seikirama….waiting for nxt one….tkcr darshu dear…

      • Darshini on February 12, 2017 2:10 pm

        Asra dear laksh is feeling bad bcz u r n kolaveri with him na? he he…
        Don’t worry I will tell Ragu to punish him sweetly…
        Don’t feel sorry and all dear…
        Take care too da…

    20. Vk on February 13, 2017 5:13 pm

      Nice

      • Darshini on February 13, 2017 5:29 pm

        Tq Vk..am glad that you liked it…

    21. A.xx on February 13, 2017 8:22 pm

      amazing and sorry for late comment xx

      • Darshini on February 13, 2017 9:24 pm

        Tq dear…no sry and all dear…am glad that you liked it…

    22. jazzy on February 14, 2017 5:22 pm

      amazinggg

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