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Home»Fan Fiction»Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 22)
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Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 22)

DarshiniBy DarshiniApril 11, 201741 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi my dear friends..how are you all??did you missed me??I missed u all…sorry for taking such a long time…here we go…
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Bala:kaun bolreyo…
OS:tumhare bhaai…where is Ragu??in which floor you are now??
Bala(shocked):Krish bhaiyya…
RagLak (jerked):kya…
Ragini starts panicking…
Bala(nervous):shshh..
“bhaai…i…i… ca…can’… can’t understand what do you mean…you tell me where are you now…”Bala stammers…
OS:I know everything…don’t change the topic and tell me the room number where Ragu got admitted…
Bala:How did you know!!…
‘shit…you’re here…oh no..’bala drags laksh outside…
But before he could do anything Krish opened the door…
Ragu:bhaiyya…

A sudden blow made her silent and dumbstruck…
Laksh holds his hands and takes bala’s side who was holding his cheeks…
Krish(pointing towards Laksh):stay away..this is my family issue…who the hell are you to interfere…
Bala:bhaai…am sorry but…
Krish:just shut up…i don’t want to hear anything from you…i have send you to take care of Ragini and protect her from those who used to hurt her always…but you too joined their side na…
Laksh gets hurt by his words…
Bala:bhaai not like that…still laadoo and laksh loves a lot…
Krish(bursts out in anger):I said I don’t want to hear anything from you…what did you say…haan…love…did he know the meaning of true love…love lies in trust…did he trust her 4 years before…no na…then is this called his so called love…and now Ragini got hurt because of him…if anything happened to her then…he never bothered about that and all…he knows only to hurt her…
Ragini:bhaiyya please don’t say like that…it was me who came in between and got hurt…laksh didn’t do anything and he was not at fault…
Krish glares her and says”yes that’s what I said…he didn’t do anything…try to understand that laadoo..i don’t want you to get hurt again…”

Laksh:Sir…i agree I was wrong 4 years before…everything happened because of Kavya…i realised everything and am ready for your punishment but please don’t hate me…
Krish:oh really…finally you realised…waah…it took 4 years for you to understand the simple truth but how do you expect from me to forgive you within a day…did you know how much you hurted Ragini…i know the pain she experienced in these 4 years…
Laksh:I know sir but i will accept whatever you say…it’s upto you i will agree with your decision…
Saying that laksh stands silent…this makes Krish to feel something good about laksh….
Bala(in mind):omg this laksh has some magic yaar…he places ice no no glaciers above Krish bhaai’s head…but see me all are slapping…am i a toy for them…why all are hitting me…
Krish thinks for a while…others looks on what he gonna say…
Ragini bites her nail in frustration…entire room was filled with silence…
‘aahh..’ragini screams…
Laksh and Krish rushed towards her in a same time saying”what happened”
Ragini(pouting):wo…i bite my skin nervously…

Laksh caresses her finger smoothly…Krish looks on…
Ragini:bhaiyya…please bhaiyya…
Krish caresses her face and nods in yes…He takes a deep breath of relief…
Krish:look Mr. Whatever…frankly speaking I don’t like you…but my laadoo is still in love with you even after experiencing so much of pain in her life…but still I was not able to accept you…on the other side I can’t hurt my sister too…
Ragini:bhaiyya I know you don’t like him just because I experienced lot of pain in those years…you know what Laksh attempted suicide after our break up…he loves me truly but time played in our life…please bhaiyya give him a chance na…
Krish:what suicide!!who gave you rights man to end your life…you have to face the problem…
Laksh(bending his head):Wo…i don’t fear about facing my life…but I heard about ragini’s accident and one friend said that Ragini…

Tears gushed out from his eyes…bala places his hand on his shoulder and consoles him…
Krish looks on while Bala smiles sheepishly..
Krish(in mind):chote you too joined his team…i don’t have any option…
Krish:okay fine…but for a month you should do whatever I says Mr.Laksh…will you…
Laksh(in mind):that’s so simple…thank god I thought he will punish me hard…
Laksh nods with his million dollar smile…
Door gets opened and a girl says”Ragini tum teek hona…just now…”
Without completing the sentence she rushed towards Krish and hugged him…
Krish(excited):darshu…
Darshu:bhaiyya…kaise Ho tum(how are you)…
Krish:am good da and you!!tell me when did you came here and laadoo didn’t told me that you’re here…
Darshu(shocked):laksh…why you’re here…
Bala:stop acting…bhaiyya came to know everything…
Darshu(little loud):kya…
Asra and Vidhu entered the room saying”laksh jeju…Ragini didi is fine na…”
They get shocked seeing Krish…
Krish:so except me everyone knows about him…ok be ready laksh…
Krish leaves glaring Bala…
Laksh rubs bala’s cheeks and says sorry and Ragini too apologized…
To be continued •••

Precap:
Krish asks laksh to sign in some papers…

So done with this chappy…i thought of giving some funny moments but it turned out boring…and in next epi you will have fun for sure…
Take care ?
Don’t forget to comment
~Darshu

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    41 Comments

    1. Ammu on April 11, 2017 5:06 pm

      Awesome episode and loved Raglak bala krish scenes. Plz post next part ASAP

      • Darshini on April 11, 2017 5:49 pm

        Tq so much dear ammu? glad that you liked it…

    2. avika on April 11, 2017 5:35 pm

      Superrr

      • Darshini on April 11, 2017 6:24 pm

        Tq dear avika? glad that you liked it…

    3. Sindhura on April 11, 2017 6:09 pm

      Nice

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 12:19 pm

        Tq dear Sindhu ? glad that you liked it…

    4. Sharanya on April 11, 2017 6:51 pm

      Superb

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 12:20 pm

        Tq dear sharanya ? glad that you liked it…

    5. Mintu on April 11, 2017 6:57 pm

      Awesome sisy..!!! It’s not boring..Its fabulous..!!! Pavam bala… Avan mind voice sema..!!! Nenga krish character ah yara nenaichu frame panirukingalo correct ah vandhuruku ?? hehee… Laksh Voda bala ku ena punishment iruko..!! Dharshu shock supr..!!!! Ena paper ah irukum..??? Maybe agreement ah??? ???? waiting for next part dear.. Post it soon

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 12:23 pm

        Thnks a lot da..ama da Bala daan rmba paavam…
        Aama da my Krish Anna character crct uh varavekkanum…hehe!!
        Aama laksh and Bala Ku aapu on d way…
        I missed u a lot dear..
        Agreement illa da..adhukkum mela…hehe!!
        Will post soon dear…tc da

    6. aleeza2 on April 11, 2017 7:02 pm

      Nice

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:41 pm

        Tq dear aleeza? glad that you liked it…

    7. dharani on April 11, 2017 7:10 pm

      awesome as usual

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:43 pm

        Tq dear dharu? glad that you liked it…

    8. lovely7 on April 11, 2017 7:12 pm

      Nice

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:44 pm

        Tq dear lovely ? glad that you liked it..

    9. Rockleon on April 11, 2017 7:14 pm

      Nyc!!!

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:45 pm

        Tq dear rockleon? glad that you liked it…

    10. Sinni on April 11, 2017 7:37 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:46 pm

        Tq dear sinni? glad that you liked it…

    11. Follybraverl on April 11, 2017 7:42 pm

      Awesome akka

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:47 pm

        Tq my dear sweetie ? glad that you liked it…

    12. Sreevijayan on April 11, 2017 8:06 pm

      Nice update dear…

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:47 pm

        Tq dear shree and wlcme bck…?

    13. asra on April 11, 2017 8:46 pm

      Ohh my darshu back…fabulous update dear….Bala pavam yeana pavam avan panano ellarum avanaey adikiranga…ohh poor boy…avan mind voice semma akka…krish un entry ya ivalavu sudden na varum nu na nenaikala…sema entry…bro don’t give any punishment to us….nenga darshu vuku punishment kuduka madenganu nenaikiren…but enoda mintu oda nelamaya nenacha bayama iruku….bro i got one idea…enaku kudukira punishment enaku pathila en cutie Bala vuku kuduthirnka…mintu ku kudukanum nu nenaikira punishment laksh ku avan punishment oda seithu kuduthirnka bro…Bala vum laksh yum pavam than….but Bala jeju Enga 2perukaga Idhu kuda pana madengala nenga 2perum…
      laksh Ipa than real krish mission start aga poguthu….all the best dear…
      krish laksh caring superbbb dear….
      andha paper la…santhose subramaniyan mathiri v2oda iruka vachu koduma paduthama irundha Kk….
      anna engagement muduncha dear…eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear…

      • Mintu on April 12, 2017 1:41 pm

        Same asra…nanum sandhosam subramainiyam dhn da nenaichn..!!! Krish anna Voda favourite dharshu…bt nama 2peru Voda nilamai dhn kastam..!!!omg.. Nama dhn pavam…!!! namakaga bala nd laksh jiju seiyvanga da..??apo dhn laksh nd bala ku nama support irukum.. Ilaina kastam dhn..!!! Ena asra.. Na solradhu correct dhana??? Next episode la theriyum nama situation ??

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:51 pm

        S da asra…am bck…hw was ur xams??aama poor guy Bala…porava varava lam adikranunga…aama ennaya ethuvum seiya maatanga …Krish annanta sollidren unga punishment uh split panna sollli..hehe!!
        I was laughing reading ur cmnt da…
        Athane ungalukkaga itha koodava seiya maatanga…hehe!!
        Abt that pprs.. U r hlf right hlf wrng..thnk pante iru nxt epi post panra varaikkum…bye da nd tc too

    14. IQRA222 on April 11, 2017 8:59 pm

      darshu di it was an awesome episode
      waiting for the next part

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:52 pm

        Tq my dear sweety iqu? will post soon da..tc dear…

    15. Arjuna on April 11, 2017 9:16 pm

      AWESOME

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:53 pm

        Tq Arjuna ? glad that you liked it…

    16. Ammy on April 11, 2017 9:38 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:53 pm

        Tq dear ammy ? glad that you liked it…

    17. Akshata on April 11, 2017 10:31 pm

      awesome, update soon

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:54 pm

        Tq dear akshi? will post soon dear

    18. keerthu on April 12, 2017 9:50 am

      Nice

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:55 pm

        Tq dear keerthu? glad that you liked it…

    19. Sherin on April 12, 2017 12:55 pm

      awesome

      • Darshini on April 12, 2017 1:56 pm

        Tq dear sherin? glad that you liked it…

    20. A.xx on April 15, 2017 2:09 am

      amazing xx

      • Darshini on April 15, 2017 11:03 am

        Tq so much dear ? glad that you liked it…

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