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Home»Fan Fiction»Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 21)
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Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 21)

DarshiniBy DarshiniApril 6, 2017Updated:April 6, 201739 Comments5 Mins Read
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Am really really sorry my friends…from Tuesday onwards I will be free…in between I thought to update this ff…sorry haven’t proof read..here we go…

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“Ragini”laksh screams and hits the man at his head who is holding him tightly…
That man collapsed on the floor while laksh rushed towards Ragini and placed her head in his lap…
“why did you do this Ragu…”laksh cries and ties her waist with his shirt where she got shot…
Ragini (emotionally):laksh tum teek hona…
Laksh:Ragu…why did you come in between…because of me again you’re undergoing this…
Bala comes and says”laksh..happen is happened come lets take her to hospital…i will start the car…make it fast..”
Bala didn’t shown his emotions outside…he cries inside and proceeds towards the car…
Laksh lifts Ragini in his arms and makes her sit in back seat…laksh sits besides her by holding her head….
Bala drives the car in full speed…
Ragini (smiles):laksh…how much do you love me…
Laksh(crying):chup karo Ragini…
Ragini:tell me na…i want to know…if not today then how would…
Ragini got interrupted by Bala…
Bala(angrily):stop it Ragu…why are you killing us..don’t dare say that you will leave us…
Ragini:areyy mere chote…i know you are crying inside…dramebaaz…Bala am leaving all the responsibilities to you…please take care of Krish bhaiyya,our family and my lucky boy…
Laksh (sobbing):Ragini please stop talking like this…i won’t leave you for any cause…
Laksh hugged her tightly and cries bitterly…Ragini smiles wiping her tears…
Ragini was about to close her eyes…
Laksh(shouts):Ragini…Ragini…don’t close your eyes…Ragini…
Laksh pats her cheeks and shouts her name…
Ragini:areyy laksh…don’t shout like this..am I deaf…my ear drums are paining…aahh…
Ragini rubs her ears…
Laksh glares her…
Ragini (pout):aww mere lucky boy…don’t glare me like this…am ok but it’s slightly paining..don’t worry I won’t leave you alone…i just wanted to show the pain which I gone through from yesterday…see like this only you tortured me…
Laksh (amazes):what!!when did i tortured you…haan..
Ragini (winks):in my dreams…
Laksh (angry):you idiot..stupid…rascal…
Laksh starts beating her while she holds his hands…
Ragini:areyy I got wounded for you but you’re hitting me…aahh(fake cry)
Bala:dramebaaz is you only…my idiotic sister…within a minute you stopped my heart beat using your acting skills…wait wait I will take revenge for it…
All laughs…
“aahh…”Ragini screams by holding her waist…
Bala:started Again…
Ragini (pout):no no..this time it’s really hurting…
Bala raised the speed and they reached the hospital…
Doctor:it seems like police case…first file the complaint then I will treat her…
Laksh (holding doctor’s collar):do you know who is she…
Doc:Mister…behave yourself…whoever she may be but this is police case…
Laksh:areyy that’s what am saying she is our district collector and am ACP Lakshya…and don’t worry I will handle everything..first operate her…
Doc:how can I believe…
“go to hell..”bala murmurs…
“then he have to visit your house once…”laksh whispers..
Bala glares…laksh shows his id card…
Doctor nods and tooks Ragini to operation theatre…
Operation was going on..laksh walks here and there…
Bala fears about doctor’s condition…
Bala(in mind):poor you…ragu have destroyed the entire clinic when a doctor puts her injection…today what gonna happen I don’t know…
They(laksh and Bala) hears some noise from the OT…
Laksh:oh god…this girl bina…
Few minutes later…
Light gets off outside the OT door…Doctor came outside…
Doctor(irritated):I don’t know really how you’re managing this girl…my god…
Laksh:doctor!!she is fine na??everything ok right…
Doctor:yaah Mr.Lakshya she is fine only…but she caused heavy damage to our OT…I pity on you…she is very dangerous…
Laksh gave ‘what do you mean’ expression..
Doctor:yes Mr.Lakshya she didn’t allow us to give anaesthesia…she pushed away all the equipments and somehow we managed operating her…
Laksh and Bala sighs a breath of relief…
Bala(curious):but without anaesthesia…how did you operate her…
Doctor says”after struggling more we injected and finally succeeded too”
Doctor:by the way you are laksh hey na…
Laksh nods…
Doctor:Wo..that girl keeps on saying your name even in unconscious state…i think she loves you a lot..but i really pity on your future man…
Laksh chuckles and they both goes inside…
Ragini slowly opened her eyes..laksh goes near her and cups her face…
“I told you na nothing will happen to me when you’re my side…”Ragini said by holding his hand…
Laksh wipes his tears…
Bala(pouting):laadoo this is not fair…in your unconscious state too you murmurs laksh name only not even uttered this crazy boy(Bala) and Krish bhaiyya’s name…go I won’t talk with you…
“areyy mere Saale my sister will keep on chanting your name don’t worry…”said laksh and messed bala’s hair…
Bala(eagerly):really…but you didn’t told me about your sister…
Ragini pats his head and says”areyy chote…he is saying your wife as his sister…buddhu…”
Laksh reminisces his moments with his sister swara…
Laksh(in mind):swara I really miss you my princess…
Ragini keeps hand on his shoulder…laksh came out from his trance…
Bala phone rings…some unknown number…he attends the call…
OS:you cheater…am coming…
Bala:Kaun bolreyo…
To be continued •••

Precap:
Someone slapped the other…
\*guess who*\

I know this chappy will be boring but next chappy will be full of fun…so don’t miss it…surely I will update on Apr 11…tc dear friends…
Bye!!don’t forget to comment…
~Darshu

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    39 Comments

    1. dharani on April 6, 2017 4:18 pm

      oh god even in that condition they are making fun of each other and enjoying awesome mainly anesthesia scene was awesome

      • Darshini on April 6, 2017 4:27 pm

        Hehe!!thnks a lot da dharu…am hpy that u liked it…

    2. Sindhura on April 6, 2017 4:23 pm

      Nice

      • Darshini on April 6, 2017 4:55 pm

        Tq dear Sindhu ? glad that you liked it…

    3. IQRA222 on April 6, 2017 4:27 pm

      darshuuu di maan gayi apko aaj
      only you can do this much funny scenes in a serious situation
      and about the precap i think the new entry maybe swara slapped our bala
      waiting for the next part

      • Darshini on April 6, 2017 4:57 pm

        Hehe!!thnks da iqu…
        Oh swara…may be…bt am not sure ur guess was right ? tc da…will try to post it soon da…

    4. Tigeress on April 6, 2017 5:08 pm

      Hahahaha, dii it was amazing , ragu ka dimaag iss situation m bhi itna chlta h ??????? and may be next is Swara’s entry

      • Darshini on April 6, 2017 7:11 pm

        Hehe!!thnks dear sissy…our ragz is a special piece only she can do like that..swara’s entry is right bt it takes time dr?

    5. avika on April 6, 2017 5:25 pm

      Superrrrrr

      • Darshini on April 6, 2017 8:50 pm

        Tq dear avika? glad that you liked it…

    6. Mintu on April 6, 2017 5:37 pm

      Awesome sisy…!!!! Ragu laksh ku oru mini tsunami ah kamichuta…bala yarta ph la pesuran??? Maybe laksh Voda sister dhana da?? epidi guess panalum thappa dhn irukum..next chappy vara wait pananum..!!! Miss u dear…Take care da

      • Darshini on April 6, 2017 8:53 pm

        Tq dear sissy ?…hehe!!big waala tsunami…bala yaarta pesura??solla maatran da…
        Bt one secret phne call nee guess Panna aal illada…chorry?
        Am missing you a lot da…
        Msg Panna twr kedaikka maatenguthu…
        Monday Ku aprm I will be free only dear…bt u would b bcy…
        Tc da..bye!!

      • Mintu on April 6, 2017 11:07 pm

        Hehee… Namalam epovum free dhn da…free ah iruka apo panunga..!!! Nala njoy panunga anna engagement ah..!!! Bye da..!!!

    7. saranya on April 6, 2017 5:41 pm

      superb …so funny

      • Darshini on April 6, 2017 8:54 pm

        Tq dear sara? glad that you liked it…

    8. lovely7 on April 6, 2017 6:12 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on April 6, 2017 8:54 pm

        Tq dear lovely ? glad that you liked it…

    9. Arjuna on April 6, 2017 6:14 pm

      AWESOME

      • Darshini on April 6, 2017 8:55 pm

        Tq Arjuna ? glad that you liked it…

    10. Sherin on April 6, 2017 6:24 pm

      Superb

      • Darshini on April 6, 2017 8:56 pm

        Tq dear sherin? glad that you liked it…

    11. Ajitha on April 6, 2017 7:27 pm

      It’s beautiful dearrr

      • Darshini on April 6, 2017 8:57 pm

        Tq dear ajitha? glad that you liked it…

    12. Astra on April 6, 2017 7:32 pm

      awesome yar

      • Darshini on April 6, 2017 8:59 pm

        Tq dear Asthu? am so happy that you liked it…

    13. asra on April 6, 2017 9:43 pm

      awesome darshu dear….ragu ne nejamaley oru dramabezz than….pavam laksh Bala vum bayanthu danga…hospital scenes semma dear….Bala Ipalam Unaku adikadi call varuthu sari Illayae…..yeana marupadiyum oru slap precap ah…..waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear…

      • Darshini on April 7, 2017 8:09 am

        Hehe!!crct da really Ragu oru dramebaaz daan…
        Paavam laksh and Bala…
        Nee nenaikra maari illa da Bala…
        He is vry vry gd boy…hehe!!
        Slap precap inda vaati yaaru ara vaanguva…
        Tc too da
        Will post soon dear

    14. Ammu on April 6, 2017 9:44 pm

      Interesting episode and loved Raglak scenes a lot. Eagerly waiting for next episode

      • Darshini on April 7, 2017 8:11 am

        Tq dear ammu ? will post it soon dear…tc!!

    15. Follybraverl on April 7, 2017 6:19 am

      Awesome di

      • Darshini on April 7, 2017 8:11 am

        Tq dear sweetie ? glad that you liked it…

    16. aleeza2 on April 7, 2017 10:31 am

      Nice

      • Darshini on April 7, 2017 11:03 am

        Tq dear aleeza? glad that you liked it…

    17. keerthu on April 7, 2017 12:43 pm

      Dharsu Super dr………… Romba late panatha ma Quicka update panu ma…….. Waiting for another ma………… Bala slap ah illa Laksh ah……… Pavam laksh Yapadi adivanguvan a theriyala………….. Yapo ma Krish entry……… Swara enga pona……….

      • Darshini on April 7, 2017 1:09 pm

        Keerthi sry dear…bcy wid my brother’s engagement fnc…phne kudukka maatraanga vandoos lam gme vilayuduthunga en phone uh vechu…Monday lenthu knjm free aayduven da…thnks for commenting dear….Krish is on the way…hehe!!nw u may understand abt the precap I thnk…hehe!!tc dear…

    18. Rehna on April 8, 2017 11:42 am

      Superb dear

      • Darshini on April 8, 2017 2:52 pm

        Tq dear rehna? glad that you liked it…

    19. A.xx on April 12, 2017 10:44 pm

      amazing and I think it was Krish on the phone and Krish slapped Bala xx

      • Darshini on April 13, 2017 7:47 am

        Tq so much dear ? wow dear u r really smart…hehe!!

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