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Home»Fan Fiction»Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 18)
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Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 18)

DarshiniBy DarshiniMarch 18, 201752 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hii my dear lovely peoples..bck with the next epi…thnks for supporting me all the way…sorry haven’t proof read…
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Laksh reached commissioner office and makes excuses…
“Lakshya..you are not my boy..you are changing a lot nowadays…”commissioner said in angry tone…
“Wo…sir am really sorry…”laksh stammers…
“do that girl accepts your love!!”commissioner asked by controlling his laugh…
“Sir…”laksh gave him a blank expression…
“I know Lakshya…love alone deviates us from our work…who is that lucky girl…won’t you introduce her…”commissioner laughs making him embarrassed…
“it’s me sir…”Ragini comes inside to handover some files…
Commissioner freezes…
“S sir…i am that lucky girl…”Ragini smiles seeing laksh…
Laksh sighs her to keep quiet…

“I thought it was you Ms.Gadodia…congratulations Lakshya it’s you who was really lucky…”commissioner pats his shoulder…
All laughs…commissioner invites them for a lunch…
“sir files…”Ragini handovers the files and she excuse from them and leaves from there…
“Lakshya…we have to work as per our plan soon…so you have to go to nearby district today itself…have it…this is the address of my friend who will help you in this mission…be safe and keep updating me…”commissioner gave him the address and arranged gaadi for him to reach over there…
Laksh calls Ragini and informed about the plan…
“take care laksh and be careful…miss you so much…”Ragini feels sad…
“take care too RG…i will be back after completing the mission…till then take care of yourself…miss you too laadoo..”laksh kisses his phone…
“are you calling doggy…what chh chh chho…don’t even know how to kiss itself…”Ragini sadden him…
“do you really meant it…i don’t know kissing uh…wait once mission gets end…you will see my different shades…love you…”laksh hanged up…
“love you too laksh…”Ragini blushes…

Few hours later…
Laksh reached nearby village in disguise…he goes to the place where commissioner asked him to go…
Laksh gets inside…one man came and enquires about him…laksh gave the same chit to him…
Few minutes later that man asked him to go inside the cabin…
Laksh excuses and opens the door…
The chair is turned in opposite direction and a man is sitting facing towards the wall…
“Good evening sir…officer Lakshya reporting for duty sir…”laksh salutes…
“is this the way to respect your senior uh…”that guy said in serious tone…
Laksh looks downwards and also around him…
“what wrong I did…”laksh whispers…
That guy sees his reaction which reflects clearly in his coolers which he holds in his hand…
“what man…no response from your side…”he sounds like he is angry with his behaviour…
“sir please tell me what I have to do..”laksh uttered silently…
“aahaa…don’t have manners of getting blessings from elders..don’t you know what I mean…”he raised his tone even higher…
“sry sir…”laksh goes towards that man and bends down without seeing his face…
That man lifts him up and pinned him towards the wall…
“sir…what is this…”laksh pushed him aside…
Laksh hears giggling sound from behind and realized some hands wrapping him from behind..
“what’s this nonsense…”laksh pushed that man and he falls down on sofa…
Laksh gets shocked…

“Ragini…tum…what are you doing here…”laksh lifts her up…
“I came here because I missed you…”Ragini removed her cap and her fake beard and moustache…
“achcha…so RG missed her Gulab jamun…hey na…”laksh grinned…
Ragini blushes…
“but how do you know that I will be here…if anyone sees you then…”laksh starts panicking…
“shshh…your investigation brain works with me only uh…are you an university exam question paper…keep on questioning…you wanna know na…it’s my idea…i requested commissioner sir to do so…this is my relatives home…so I wanna do a prank on you…i won…how was the surprise…haan…”Ragini raises her head and winks…
“not bad RG…and what did you say today afternoon…haan….i don’t know how to kiss know…today I will prove my talent…”said laksh and moves forward…
“laksh please….if someone sees means…then…”Ragini gets nervous and her legs started shivering…
“I don’t care of what others think…it’s my prestige issue…”laksh smiles and moves towards her…

To be continued •••

Precap:
\*RagLak moments…*\

I just wanna end up here…keep thinking what will happen next…
I hope you all liked it??tell your views through comment…
Keep smiling ? Take care dears
~Darshu

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    52 Comments

    1. IQRA222 on March 18, 2017 11:19 am

      awesome awesome episode di
      loved it

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 2:50 pm

        Tq IQRA dear…glad that you liked it..

    2. dharani on March 18, 2017 11:30 am

      awesome

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 2:51 pm

        Tq dharani dr? glad that you liked it…

    3. Jaan on March 18, 2017 11:42 am

      Awesome

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 2:51 pm

        Tq dear…glad that you liked it…

    4. lovely7 on March 18, 2017 11:47 am

      Nice

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 2:52 pm

        Tq lovely ? glad that you liked it…

    5. Mintu on March 18, 2017 12:13 pm

      Awesome sis…!!! Commissioner laksh ah tease pana scene semaya irundhuchu.. Ragz avaley na dhn andha lucky sonadhu lam chancey ila..!!! Ragz surprise supr da..andha sudden entry ah expect panvey ila…?!!! Raglak moments nice dr…!!!! Waiting for next part dr.. Post it soon da..Take care dear

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 2:55 pm

        Tq da Vidhu…paavam laksh ellarum tease panrango…
        Surprise liked uh??tq…
        U asked mre raglak moments na…so tdy’s both updte for u dr..hw is my treat??
        Will post soon dear…
        Take care da…

    6. Berdilla on March 18, 2017 12:18 pm

      Awesome dear friend

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 2:57 pm

        Tq dear frnd…hey berdi am wtchng amarkalam mvie and ur dp is same na…?

      • Berdilla on March 18, 2017 3:06 pm

        yes dear and r u studying?

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 3:11 pm

        Mba dear…u??

    7. Sindhura on March 18, 2017 12:19 pm

      Awedome

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 2:57 pm

        Tq Sindhu dear ? glad that you liked it…

    8. Tigeress on March 18, 2017 12:43 pm

      hahah….ragini is really a prankster hahaha, and commissioner sir also…poor laksh bechara
      awesome epi dear

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 2:58 pm

        S dear…she is really a prankster..
        Thnks for liking it…poor laksh…

    9. asra on March 18, 2017 12:54 pm

      awesome darshu dear…..commissioner kuda laksh tease pana aaramichitara….ragini ku official person kidalam brave va laksh lover nu solirva but family members kida solla than bayama irukum illa ragu ma…..
      but unga sudden surprise entry ya na nenachu kuda pakala….superbbb irundhathu….last raglak scenes semmmma…
      loved it alot….waiting for nxt one…tkcr darshu dear…

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 3:00 pm

        Tq asra dear…ellarum laksh uh daan tease panraanga including ragz too…hehehe…
        Will post soon dear…
        Tc too…
        Aama adhu ennavo crct daan veetla solla mattum bayanthng..?

    10. Follybraverl on March 18, 2017 1:03 pm

      Hey sweetie awesome da

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 3:02 pm

        Tq da sweetie…glad that you liked it…
        Waiting for ur ff da…updte I need you soon dear…

    11. Sinni on March 18, 2017 1:07 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 3:02 pm

        Tq sinni dear…glad you liked it…

    12. Ashnoor on March 18, 2017 1:13 pm

      Amazing

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 3:03 pm

        Tq ashnoor dear ? glad you liked it

    13. Fairy on March 18, 2017 1:55 pm

      Wowwwww loved it….omg!!!precap???heheh waitng for nxt part eagerlyyy….uodate ws superbbbb …fabulous yaar…keep roclng n stay blessed sweety????

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 3:05 pm

        Oii sweety wlcme bck dear…missed u a lot dear…
        Thnks for liking it da…
        Will post soon..
        TC dear

      • Fairy on March 18, 2017 3:22 pm

        Aww!!!dats so sweet…thnx for welcomng me back yaar??????n who said I liked ur update????huh???? Heheh I loved it yaaaar??????if u”ll write so amazngly,den how come nyone resist to love it haan???k post nxt part soon???lotz of love..??umaah?

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 3:26 pm

        Thnx a lot dear…i was jumping…y can’t I bcz it’s a grt feeling to get appreciation from whom who is the best writer themselves…
        Keep smiling ??
        Love you too

    14. Ammu on March 18, 2017 2:16 pm

      Interesting episode. Loved Raglak scenes. What happened next? Eagerly waiting for next

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 3:06 pm

        Thnks da? to knw wat hpnd nxt u have to wait dear…will post soon…take care…

    15. Astra on March 18, 2017 6:56 pm

      nice one darshu..

      • Darshini on March 18, 2017 7:53 pm

        Thnks da asthu…glad that you liked it…

    16. saranya on March 18, 2017 8:40 pm

      superb…

      • Darshini on March 19, 2017 9:53 am

        Tq Saranya ? glad that you liked it..

    17. Arjuna on March 18, 2017 8:45 pm

      AWESOME

      • Darshini on March 19, 2017 9:53 am

        Tq Arjuna ? glad that you liked it…

    18. Malu on March 18, 2017 8:56 pm

      Superb

      • Darshini on March 19, 2017 9:54 am

        Tq malu dear ? glad that you liked it…

    19. mk on March 18, 2017 9:55 pm

      awesome ragini prank is superb

      • Darshini on March 19, 2017 9:55 am

        Tq mk? s Ragini is really a prankster…hehe
        Glad that you liked it

    20. Sherin on March 18, 2017 10:03 pm

      Superb… Can’t wait for next

      • Darshini on March 19, 2017 9:56 am

        Tq sherin? will post soon dr?
        Glad that you liked it…

    21. jazzy on March 18, 2017 11:30 pm

      Amazinggg

      • Darshini on March 19, 2017 9:56 am

        Tq jazzy dear glad that you liked it…

    22. Ammy on March 19, 2017 10:50 am

      Awesome

      • Darshini on March 20, 2017 6:10 am

        Tq ammy? glad that you liked it…

    23. tëìtō kUn on March 19, 2017 11:37 pm

      Awesome….
      Poor Laksh….
      Ragini’s Prank is Superb….

      • Darshini on March 20, 2017 6:12 am

        Tq teito and yes poor laksh…
        Glad that you liked it…

    24. A.xx on March 20, 2017 1:59 am

      fab xx

      • Darshini on March 20, 2017 6:13 am

        Tq dear ? glad that you liked it..

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