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Home»Fan Fiction»Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 16)
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Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 16)

DarshiniBy DarshiniMarch 4, 201718 Comments5 Mins Read
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Ragini don’t know what to do…whether to accept him by forgiving his mistakes or to leave him like what he does 4 years before…
Laksh shooks her…she comes out from her trance…
She blinks…
“I will sort out everything…will you come back to me…i can’t live without you Ragini…please…”laksh holds her hands…
“dekho…i don’t want to hurt you but…”Ragini got interrupted by him..
“don’t worry…i won’t mess up again…i will make Krish bhaiyya by my side like Bala…”laksh bites his tongue…
“oh no…i splitted out…”laksh said under his breath…

“kya…what did you mean by that…”Ragini was shocked and confused with his words…
“Wo!!”laksh stammers and turn to other direction…
“laksh tell me the truth…don’t try to act smart…see my eyes and say what exactly you meant…”Ragini turns him towards her…
Laksh sees her small mesmerizing but angry eyes…he lost in her eyes…
Ragini shooks him”tell me laksh…”
“Ragini…please yaar am going crazy and some weird feelings are running over…don’t ask me to see your eyes…”said laksh and pat his hand on wall…
Laksh was panting…
“What!!”Ragini glares him…
“wait…”said laksh and opened the windows to get some oxygen…
Ragini goes near him and says”over…”
“kya…”laksh shrugged…
“dramebaaz…do you think am a fool…is Bala taking your side…”Ragini asked straightly…
Laksh nods…he is not left out with any other choice…he said everything to her…
“I doubt you guys before itself but Bala…”Ragini smirked…
“hey please don’t harm him…”laksh laughs…

Ragini goes outside by shutting the door harshly in anger…
“I don’t know what she gonna do with him…”laksh whispers and calls Balaji’s number…
His number was busy…but laksh keeps on trying his number…it was busy still…
“oh shit…with whom he is talking…idiot…storm is coming on your way…”said laksh and dialled his number again…
It was busy again…
“it’s your fate man…no one can save you now…your jeju…am coming for atleast to take your side…”laksh rushed outside and enquired about Ragini to her assistant…
“mam went out just now sir…”he replied…
“oh shit…”said laksh and rushed to ragini’s quarters…

Ragini reached her quarters and goes to bala’s room but he wasn’t there…she was about to leave the room but she heard some giggling sound from balcony…
Ragini goes towards balcony and she pat his shoulder…
“I will call you back…”said Bala and turned towards her…
“Ragu…you said that you will be late today but you came now itself…”said he and smiles…
Ragini slapped him without saying anything…
\*hehehe….all guessed that it was Krishna who slapped laksh…some said Ragini slapped that officer who scolded laksh…but it’s our cutiee pie…poor Bala…*\
“Ragu…”said Bala by holding his cheeks…
“I didn’t expect this from you…”Ragini wipes her tears..
“hey Ragu…that I have to say…i didn’t expected this…”Bala makes puppy face…
Ragini sits on sofa and started crying…
“you all hide it na…”Ragini cries bitterly…
Laksh comes to her quarters and hears her sound and reached towards the room where the sound is coming…
Bala kneels down and trying his best to console her…
“please laadoo…don’t cry like this…i have done everything for you only…”Bala said by cupping her her face…

She blinks…
“yes I know you still love Laksh…infact you don’t gave space to any other person than laksh…i know laadoo…”said Bala…
Ragini cries hugging him…laksh sees everything from outside and wipes his tears…
“tum…”Bala broke the hug and Ragini wipes her tears..
“I thought you would be in trouble but here rakshabandan scene is going on…”laksh grinned…
Ragini gave him a death glare…
“it’s all because of you laksh…see my cheeks…it turned red…”Bala points the place where Ragini slapped him…
“oh no…poor you…”said laksh by rubbing his cheeks…

Ragini hits bala’s shoulder and sighs him to keep quite…
“RG…this is not fair yaar”laksh makes a pout…
“RG…oh Ragini gadodia…”Bala scratches his head…
“na…My sweetie RasaGulla…”laksh grinned…
“you…”said Ragini and starts hitting laksh playfully…but laksh runs…Ragini chased him…
“ok…you two fight…i have one important work…am leaving…bye bye love birds…”said Bala and leaves from there…
RagLak didn’t heard that…Ragini chased him and was about to get him…
She pulled his collars but she slipped by stepping into her saree fleets…
“aahh”Ragini falls down…
Ragini closed her eyes tightly because of fear…but nothing happened to her…she feels something around her…
Ragini opened her eyes and sees laksh who is under her…
She fall over him…laksh tucked her hair which is falling over her face…
Both shared eyelock…

“I love you…”said laksh by seeing her eyes…
Tear drop falls from Ragini’s eyes and it touched laksh’s cheeks…he touches the drop…Ragini gets up and was about to go…
Laksh holds her wrist and pulls towards him…
“you haven’t answered my questions…”laksh sees her eyes now…
“I don’t want to…”said she and freed from his grip…
“Ragini…”he holds her again…
She smiles…
“what’s the meaning for this…”laksh lifts her head upwards…
She blushes..

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“I don’t want to in the sense that you have to understand that without saying anything…”Ragini said by brushing the ground…
“really…”said laksh and hugged her tightly…
\*with this I end this chappy…i will update the next epi after 12 days…bcz of my xams…see you all on march 16…take care and don’t forget me…*\
Hope you all liked it??is it boring??
~Darshu

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    18 Comments

    1. jazzy on March 4, 2017 10:23 pm

      awesomee yaar and best of luckkk for ur examss

    2. lovely7 on March 4, 2017 10:25 pm

      Super

    3. Sindhura on March 4, 2017 10:30 pm

      Nice

    4. Mintu on March 4, 2017 10:44 pm

      Awesome dear….!!!! Aiyoo laksh olaritan…Pavam bala….nanum laksh mari dhn da nenaichn..ragini periya punishment bala kuduka poranu..!!! Bt pasamalar scene dhn pochu ..Hehe ..!!! kandipa ragini slap panuva nu nenaikala da…raglak conversation superb da…!!! Athukula sendhutanga…???idhuku mela laksh thanguvan ah nu therila.. Athn ragini seekram sendhuta …Pavam dhana avanum ..!!!?? We r waiting da…nenga xam mudichutu post panunga…!!!!! All d best dear …Take care dharshu ..!!!

    5. IQRA222 on March 4, 2017 11:08 pm

      Awesome episode darshu di
      Best of luck for your exams

    6. gayu on March 4, 2017 11:29 pm

      Wow awesome update.

    7. Jaan on March 4, 2017 11:56 pm

      Nice
      All the best for your exams

    8. Priya on March 5, 2017 12:21 am

      Superb.. All the best for your exams

    9. Follybraverl on March 5, 2017 8:00 am

      Sweetie it is awesome you nailed it Waiting for your ff all the best for your exams miss you….

    10. Arjuna on March 5, 2017 8:08 am

      AWESOME

    11. Malu on March 5, 2017 11:44 am

      superb part

    12. saranya on March 5, 2017 1:07 pm

      Awesome awesome

    13. asra on March 5, 2017 2:17 pm

      awesome dear……ada laksh oda vaai olaru vaai…..yean da ellathaiyum olarida….anyways na darshu dear kida olara mathiri ne ragu kida olarida….parava illa….pavam Bala unala adi vangidan….poor boy…ragini adipanu oru guess irunthathu…..aana adi vangu rathu Bala nu nenaikala…..krish Bala va adipanu oru guess iruthathu….but nenga 2 aiyum mingle pani….ragini Bala va adikirapla panidenga…..
      cho sad Bala….rmba valikutha….aama ne yarda ma phone peasidu irundha…..gf illa lover ra cute Bala….
      Ohhh ragu u accept laksh…..happy for you dear……
      waiting for nxt one…..
      All the best for ur exam darshu dear…..nalla panunga….project viva Yeanaiki dear…..tkcr dear….

    14. Ammu on March 5, 2017 9:22 pm

      Awesome episode dear and loved Raglak scenes

    15. Rehna on March 6, 2017 9:59 pm

      Superb dear, all the best for your exam

    16. A.xx on March 7, 2017 2:07 am

      Fab and sorry for late comment xx

    17. tëìtō kUn on March 9, 2017 5:30 pm

      Awesome….
      Best of luck for your Exams….

    18. Darshini on March 15, 2017 5:57 pm

      Sry I can’t able to rply all individually *holding ears *bcz of my xams…
      Tq all for ur support ??
      Missd u all my lovely frndz

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