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Home»Fan Fiction»Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 1)
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Tere liye duniya chhod di hai-RagLak ff (Chapter 1)

DarshiniBy DarshiniFebruary 4, 2017Updated:February 4, 201746 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi friends…am back with the first chappy of tere liye duniya chhod di hai…i hope you guys would like it…sorry haven’t proof read…
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It seems to be 5 in the morning…
A women in the age of 50 knocks the door and enters into the room calling”laadoo…your flight is at 8…come on get up…”

She was so surprised because her laadoo wasn’t there…
“laadoo”she shouts and goes near the washroom and there too she can’t find anyone…
She doesn’t know what to do…she then runs to Krishna and Balaji’s room…to her surprise she can’t find them too…
“So all the three were missing…hmm…it becomes habitual…Eeshwara…they doesn’t change even after grown up…ha ha”she grinned and goes down the stairs to their secret underground room…

She opens the door”I know you all will be here only…”
All laughed”maa…”all the three hugged her…
Yes she is ragini’s mom sharmishta and Krish and Balaji would also call her as maa only…
They used to spend their days together in that room only…it’s specially renovated by Krishna for his bro and sis…

They just came over here and recreated their golden memories by playing,painting,dancing madly,teasing because Ragini is leaving the town today morning to Mumbai…
She got transferred to Mumbai where she don’t
want to go…
But she can’t do anything…Krishna requested her not to go because he and Balaji alone knows her bitter past…

What to do??nothing can be Changed…happened is happened…they can’t tell her to quit the job because of her past…IAS is her dream and now she attained it and it’s been 3 years she joined her office at Kolkata and the city is cleaned because of her powerful and smartest decisions against corruption,gundas and also she established some necessary schemes to people inorder to create her birth town as smart city…
Ministry transfers her to Mumbai where her need is essential and she is the tactful lady to deal against rowdism and also she is most needed for the welfare of the city…

Ragini do her best in cancelling her transfer but her fate brings her back to the same city where she doesn’t want to step in…
“chalo na Ragini…it’s already 5:15…your car will be here at 6…go get ready…”sharmi drags Ragini…

For the first time sharmi sees her daughter coming silently with her without creating any dramebaaz…
She feels the difference…time runs so fast…sharmi reminisces their childhood moments…
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During their bachpan all the three will be here only…hiding when badipaapa insists them to study for exam…both Krishna and ragini enjoys and at the same time they are toppers too but Balaji is too lazy to concentrate on his studies so instead his aim is only on sports and no studies,no exams and nothing…
When sharmi comes to wake them up all the three would hide under the cot…if she bends down to catch the three…they would run from the other side…
Sharmi used to plead them to come out from the room…Ragini won’t come so easily…she would jump over here and there…fearless doll in doing stunts…
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But today she feels the difference between her doll and the grown up IAS officer…
Tears rolled down from sharmi’s eyes and today it was tears of happiness…
“Maa…i can understand…”Krishna hugged from behind…
Sharmi hugged him back…
“Maa…me…”Balaji opened his arms…

“areyy mera bachcha…aao aao…”sharmi hugged him and kissed both of them…
“chalo…orelse our sweety will starts screaming and we will get pooja(scoldings) for coming here from dad…”Krishna drags Balaji and goes up the stairs…
“Shiv ji…noone evil eyes shouldn’t fall on them…they should be happy like this forever and ever…”sharmi prays to god…

She also goes along with them…Ragini comes after freshen up…she wears dark blue colour silk cotton saree with pink colour patterns on it…
She reached the hall after combing her hairs and she just applied kajal and nothing more than that…she looks like she is the beautiful girl in the world even without any makeup…
“Sweety…why today also saree…”Krishna raised his eyebrows…

“Wo… darling (she would call him like that only)I have a meeting today at 2’o clock with the higher officials…i have no time in between..so dressed formally…what say Bala”saying like that ragini snatched bala’s roti and teases him…
“maa…dekho…she is always doing like this…see Ragini you have grown up but still behaving like a kid…kiddooo…”Bala makes a pout…
Ragini laughs and suddenly her face changed…all of them sees her crying…
“hey my sweety…am just kidding…how can I scold my pyaari bestie my cutest behen haan…don’t cry na…”Balaji wipes her tears…
“Sweety…see your eyes…your kajal gets spreading over…”Krishna teases her…
She blabbers and sees her face in the mirror…”nothing got spread out…”Ragini realized his prank…

“you…”she started chasing them…
Ragini jumps over the sofa but fell because she felt uncomfortable with the saree…
“hey carefull na sweety…”Krishna and Bala comes for her rescue…
She holds them both…”I caught u…”Ragini winks…
They hears the horn sound…
Their happiness gets fullstopped…
“I have to…”Ragini makes them understand and tooks blessings from everyone in the family…
Badepaapa asked her to inform him when she reached there…
She nodded and leaves…
Krishna comes and drags her…

“darling…where is the car…”Ragini asked him…
“chill na…i kept your luggages on that car and we three are going to airport in our car…chalo chalo…”Krishna drags them…
“bhaai…i haven’t bath yet…”Bala make a pout…
“even cows and goats too not taking bath daily…what’s the big deal…come come…”said ragini and gets into the front seat…
“bhaiyya..”bala stamped his foot…
“chalo na chote..”Krish laughs…

Bala sits down at the back seat…
“see…it’s all because of you…why you urge to Mumbai so early even don’t want to…there will be so many girls in the airport…what they will think about me…”Bala starts his blabber…
By hearing his words…her past flashed before her…
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“laksh…please believe me na…i haven’t done anything…”Ragini pleads him…
“it’s over Ragini…there is nothing between us…”laksh punched his hand on wall…
She goes near him and hold his hand…he jerks…

“laksh..really…is it over…”Ragini in a sad tone…
“Areyy…please go off from me…don’t stick to me like a bubble gum…am getting irritated to see your face…please don’t show off again…just go away…”laksh shouts…
Tears were coming like a hell from her eyes…she wipes it but it’s flowing continuously like unstoppable…
She ran away from that place…
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Ragini wipes her tears…
“chote…you gonna regret for this…”Krishna bursts out…
“am so sorry sweetheart…am gonna miss you a lot… my good girl na don’t cry baby…”Bala kissed her cheeks…
“am ok…”Ragini calms down Krishna…
They reached airport…

To be continued •••

Precap:
RagLak meeting…

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So how was the chappy??do you like it??
Drop your views on comment box…
Take care friends…bye…
~Darshu

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    46 Comments

    1. Folly brave on February 4, 2017 1:36 pm

      Waiting for raglak meet

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 1:56 pm

        Tq dear…will post soon…am glad u liked it…

    2. jazzy on February 4, 2017 1:41 pm

      superb

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 1:52 pm

        Tq jazzy…am glad that u liked it…

    3. Mintu on February 4, 2017 1:44 pm

      Superb dear… Interesting…!!! Eagerly waiting for their meeting nd want to know about their past…!!!!

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 1:54 pm

        Thnk u dear…am so glad that you liked it…
        Tmrw post panren about their meeting…
        Past seekram reveal panren…
        Take care da….

    4. lovely on February 4, 2017 1:55 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 3:19 pm

        Tq lovely dear…glad you liked it…

    5. gayu on February 4, 2017 2:06 pm

      Nice. Waiting for raglak and their past

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 3:20 pm

        Tq gayu…and sure dear will post soon..am glad that u liked it…

    6. Jaan on February 4, 2017 2:22 pm

      Nice start. Waiting for raglak meeting

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 3:21 pm

        Tq jaan…will post soon…am glad that you liked it…

    7. Sindhura on February 4, 2017 2:36 pm

      Awesome

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 3:22 pm

        Tq Sindhu dear….am glad that you liked it…

    8. Devihaa on February 4, 2017 3:33 pm

      Make raglak meet soon…
      Amazing I love this IAS ragini ….

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 3:47 pm

        Tq devihaa dear…am glad that you liked her…

    9. Pooja on February 4, 2017 3:38 pm

      Wowwww nyc

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 3:47 pm

        Tq Pooja dear…glad you liked it…

    10. asra on February 4, 2017 3:48 pm

      awesome darshu dear…Bala krish rag scenes r awesome dear….aadu matu lam kulichu kida iruku….Indha dialogue semma dear…apadi yeana nadanthirkum past la…raglak pirunchudanga…wait panren dear Adha therunchuga….and raglak meeting kagavun wait panren….tkcr darshu dear….

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 6:06 pm

        Tq asra…
        Ha ha…the dialogue…*secret…adhu en thambi da…anda aadu maadu character *yaartayum sollatha…
        Seekram solren da past pathi…
        I won’t make you wait more…tke cre too da…

      • asra on February 4, 2017 7:05 pm

        Top secret dear…..na yardaiyum solamaden dear….

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 9:25 pm

        Thnks da?

    11. IQRA222 on February 4, 2017 4:11 pm

      awesome

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 6:08 pm

        Tq IQRA dear..glad u liked it…

    12. tani on February 4, 2017 5:18 pm

      Super awesome

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 6:09 pm

        Tq tani dear…am glad u liked it…

    13. Aastha on February 4, 2017 5:29 pm

      Interesting plot……plzzz update soon…

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 6:10 pm

        Thnks dear…will post soon…
        am glad that u liked it…

    14. Tejaholic on February 4, 2017 5:47 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 6:11 pm

        Thnks dear and am glad that you liked it…

    15. A.xx on February 4, 2017 8:00 pm

      Amazing and wonder what happened between raglak xx

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 8:21 pm

        Thnks dear..am glad u liked it…will reveal soon da…

    16. Ammy on February 4, 2017 8:16 pm

      Amazing

      • Darshini on February 4, 2017 9:24 pm

        Tq ammy…glad you liked it…

    17. Duggu on February 4, 2017 11:09 pm

      Yaar….vdiya hga……(.awssmmm)

      • Darshini on February 5, 2017 6:34 am

        Tq duggu…am glad that u liked it…

    18. Aim on February 5, 2017 12:12 am

      Awesome dear.Post the next part soon

      • Darshini on February 5, 2017 6:35 am

        Thnks dear and am glad that you liked it…

    19. nikky on February 5, 2017 3:46 pm

      yipee eagerly awaiting for raglak next part soon

      • Darshini on February 5, 2017 4:02 pm

        Thnks Nikki…am glad that u liked it…i posted the next part…plz do read it dear…

    20. nikky on February 5, 2017 3:47 pm

      nice amazing surperb mind blowing its a request to all raglak ff os ss ts writer plzz write more give more raglak raglak and plz who is already ready keep writing don’t leave in middle plzzz at least reach 100 episode bcoz many swasan ff have reach more than 50 but none raglak ff reach plzzz now days raglak ff are very less plzz try to write more ff plzzz and thanks to all those who write with so much effort plzz its raglak aka temish fan request

      • Darshini on February 5, 2017 4:03 pm

        Thnks Nikki ?

    21. Vk on February 6, 2017 12:19 am

      Awesome

      • Darshini on February 7, 2017 12:05 pm

        Tq Vk…glad u liked it…

    22. Ammu on February 7, 2017 10:26 am

      Awesome dear

      • Darshini on February 7, 2017 12:06 pm

        Tq dear…glad you liked it…

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