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Tejvi and Ishkara- Journey Through Their Lives – part 6

RenimarenjuBy RenimarenjuOctober 12, 201618 Comments5 Mins Read
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TEJVI & ISHKARA :JOURNEY THROUGH THEIR LIVES [PART6][By Renima Ishqie]

Scene-10(continuation from part 5)
Omkara : Choti maa, where is priyanka? She is alright, isn’t it?
Pinky : Omkara, you know that nothing sticks on my tongue.
Jeth ji and Swethlana have taken prinku with them….
Omkara : What ??

Pinky : Beta….I don’t understand what’s wrong with Jethji……
You know omkara we were @ Mata rani’s chowk and we really shocked when Jethji made entrys with swethlana….Oh my mata!!!….. Jethji said me that…..
{Their conversation interrupted as Shivaay shouted “What the wuck?” Pinky and Omkara are shocked……}

Pinky : Oh my Mata! Shivaay…..
Shivaay : This is disgusting…..That blo*dy swethlana has send the wedding invitation to me….….
Pinky : Shivaay…..

Shivaay : Mom…..{he shows invitation to om and pinky}
Swethlana….you have to pay for it…..
Pinky : Oh my Mata!!….I will slaps her if she will become my…
Shivaay: Mom…..
Omkara : Shivaay….I expected this…..
Shivaay : What, Do you have any idea what are you saying?
Omkara : Am speaking truth…..

Pinky : Yeah Shivaay…….Jethji and Swethlana took Prinku when we were @ Mata rani’s chowk……She insulted our prinku by asking prinku to call Mom……I felt angry and I raised my hand to slaps swethlana…but jethji stopped me and said that I have no rights to slaps her as soon she will be Mrs. Oberoi……then he told me that he is taking prinku with him and they left….And when I questioned it jethji said priyanka is my daughter and I can take her with me…….and its better if you don’t interfere on my personal lifes…….
Shivaay : blo*dy swethlana…..

Omkara : Shivaay….. Mr. Oberoi …..
Shivaay : Om….please….instead of blaming I think we should focus on our family…..We should find a solution to this problem……And am worried for prinku…..
Pinky : Oh! My Mata…..I hope she is safe…..Prinku was not willing to go with him…But when Jethji scolded her…..she was unable to resist as she was much scared……and I was unable to do anything for prinku……Jethji just pressed her hands and pushed her into car……I tried to stop Jethji…but he said that I have no voice to question it as Jethaniji has no objection with his new relationships…..Then who am I ? {Pinky burst into tears…}

Shivaay : Mom……
Omkara : Choti maa……
{Pinky hugs both of them……But all of a sudden she released herself from the hug as she saw Jhanvi }
Pinky : Jethani ji…….
Shivaay : Badi Maa…..

{Jhanvi she was unable to walk properly as she has consumed too much of alcohol…..She was about to fall….Om holded her and seated in a chair }
Jhanvi : You are right, Pinky……The same question now am asking to myself….Who am I?
Pinky : Oh my Mata!! Jethani ji…Sorry I didn’t noticed it…..
Jhanvi : Pinky……am alright….Priyanka…….
Pinky : Jethaniji….you call Jethji and asks him to come soon

Jhanvi : Now…..i really can’t force Tej ……
Pinky : But priyanka…Jethaniji…priyanka is your daughter…..
Jhanvi : But she is the daughter of Tej also…….
Pinky : You didn’t listens what I said……Get up……
Please…….we will go and tell Maaji…..Am sure maaji can convince him….. Isn’t it ? Shivaay …..
Shivaay : Exactly badi maa….Please …….

Jhanvi : May be you’re right……
Pinky : Not right…we are corrects….Shivaay beta, Omkara……take jethaniji to maaji’s room…..

Scene- 11 (Dadi’s room)
Dadi : Tej said that he want to meet Shivaay and me….
Pinky : For what, Maaji….you didn’t tells him to return home with priyanka….
Dadi : I told him….but he said he want to talk personally with shivaay and me @ his guest house…….
Pinky : Oh my Mata! What Jethji think about himself? Maa ji…..how can he say like this ?
Dadi : Pinky, This is not the time to judge what is right or wrong…..I will certainly go as it’s a serious matter related to Jhanvi puttar……Billu….lets go……{Dadi and Shivaay leaves}

Jhanvi : Pinky…..
Pinky : Jethani ji……Don’t worry….Shivaay will deal it……
Jhanvi : I know him…..But am….
Pinky : Jethani ji you just take rest here……Just lay on the bed
Jhanvi : Pinky…..
Pinky : Oh my Mata…I asked you to take rests….not to talks
{Jhanvi slowly lies down on the bed and gradually closes her eyes…..Pinky sat beside her}

Omkara : Choti maa……
Pinky : Beta Omkara….i will take care of Jethani ji…..
Omkara : Choti maa…..{Om hugs pinky}
Pinky : Omkara beta….don’t worry…….beta…you have to go to the clubs, right?
Omkara : Choti maa, it is hub…not club…..
Pinky : Yeah…club or hub….both are same…..you can leave now…..
Omkara : Choti maa….Thank you…..
Pinky : Beta….why are you saying Thanks ? Am also your Mom….right ?
Omkara : Yes….Am glad that I have two mothers…… {emotional}
Pinky : Now you will make me also emotional…..just go beta…
{Omkara leaves}

Scene-12 (@ Art hub)
{Its evening and Omkara was engaged in making a sculpture.Ishana reaches there and stares Omkara…..In mind….she start thinking…..”How beautifully he converts each and every thing to art….Seems he is able to fill colours @ minute things also……But……” Ishana closed her eyes and placed her hands @ ears as she stared Omkara’s face deeply ….since it reminded her vague memories of her life and incomplete words……like somebody calling her as Ishana and asking help…..Amidst of these Omkara has finished his work…..He stared@ ishana…..}

Omkara : Ishana….Ishana….
Ishana : {with closed eyes}Please don’t call me……I can’t help you…..
Omkara : It’s me….Ishana…..Omkara….
{Ishana slowly opened her eyes. She looked around with fear and tension}Are you ok??
Ishana : Can I get some water{tensed}please?
Omkara : Sure….{Omkara gives water. Ishana hold the glass with two hands as her hands were shivering}
Ishana : Thanks….{Omkara gets confused…..}

PRECAP : Priyanka- Swethlana- Argument

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    18 Comments

    1. Priya15 on October 12, 2016 5:37 pm

      Its sooo emotional di…

      M confuses with ishu behaviour…

      • Renimarenju on October 12, 2016 6:11 pm

        Ishu’s suspense will reveal soon @ upcoming parts

    2. Sat on October 12, 2016 5:40 pm

      Wow very nice, how can the take our prinku like that, it is her own wish to stay with whoever she want, tej??. And really I loved the way you expressed om’s feelings. Please update your next epi ASAP???

      • Renimarenju on October 12, 2016 6:14 pm

        Sat karan johar…wait and read my next part ….and dear will try 2 post next one tonight…..but not able 2 promise ….and u will see prinku as bold in next part….i mean situations will make her to behave strong

    3. attu on October 12, 2016 6:27 pm

      Sat can u update ur ff coz iam eagerly waiting for that plz do update asap

      • Renimarenju on October 12, 2016 7:36 pm

        Sorry attu u replied sat @ my ff……I mean….u have commented here after reading my ff or you have replied to sat…..Please make it clear……I hope u don’t mind

    4. Chetna on October 12, 2016 6:38 pm

      Nice one renima di

      • Renimarenju on October 12, 2016 7:36 pm

        Thanks chetna

    5. bshama1239 on October 12, 2016 6:51 pm

      My emotions ki Queen is back with a bang your all episodes touched my ????❤
      Your writing skills just connect our heart and emotions as a bridge dear just continue…

      • Renimarenju on October 13, 2016 7:37 pm

        Thanks bshama

    6. Yazhu on October 12, 2016 7:58 pm

      Nice as always renima di…loved it…it’s really nice to read jhanvi and Tej’s story…emotions and relationships are expressed in an amazing way…superb di…

      • Renimarenju on October 13, 2016 7:37 pm

        Thanks yazhu

    7. Disha on October 12, 2016 9:17 pm

      So emotional one DI
      Why ishana tensed

      • Renimarenju on October 13, 2016 7:38 pm

        Thoda intezaar karo disha ishqie

    8. roz on October 12, 2016 10:08 pm

      wow di,,,,!!! nice one 😀

      • Renimarenju on October 13, 2016 7:38 pm

        Thanks

    9. Luna on October 13, 2016 7:19 pm

      Hi Renima!!!!!!! how is ur leg now??? episode was nice. U know very well how to show the emotions of all the characters. But I think the focus is more on Tejvi story than Ishkara story, Ishana is also getting less scenes. U have also not shown much of Tejvi interaction. And Shwetlana desperately wanting Om and Priyanku to call her mom looks strange as she is’nt much older than them.

    10. cuteprincess on October 13, 2016 7:44 pm

      nice one …
      i liked the last part…you expressed her emotions in a wonderful way…

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