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Home»Fan Fiction»TEI–a diff story(epi 9)
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TEI–a diff story(epi 9)

administratorBy administratorMarch 14, 201654 Comments5 Mins Read
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thank u so much guys for liking my ff & for ur hearty support… my spcl tnx to Haya,Mann,Tannu & Barbie for commenting for d first tym…& komal,sunaina where r u guys?? I miss u & ur cmnts…OK,enough of my blabbering… it starts—

scene 1
twinkle’s in laws(in their room)

twinkle heard her hubby saying Aarohi & others to listen to him but of course they don’t pay a heed to him & just ran from there locking d door…
finding no other way he(hubby) decided to face d awkward situation & so did our heroine…
but she felt a big wave of chills running down her spine when she saw those hands coming closer to her face to lift d veil & she clutched on d bed-sheet thinking what will happen now & she opened her eyes to hear…OH FREAK!!!!
of course it was none other than Kunj (u all were correct guys,,,how cd I separate my twinj?)

She took a few seconds to understand d matter & when she did- her joys knew no bounds & she ended up hugging him tight…but kunj not knowing that she was his awaited dream girl got a shock & jerked her off slowly….

[ FB shows:
Manohar saying to kunj that he had found a perfect match for kunj & whether he wants or not he has to marry cz guruji confirmed that this girl was lucky for d family & business..when kunj wanted to see d girl his dad said it was inauspicious to see her b4 marriage… kunj then tried to contact twinkle on tu but getting no response he had to agree for it…
FB ends ]

K: so u knew that u r marrying me??

T: no,I swear I didn’t…

K: then why r u so excited & hugging me for what?

T:(stammering) wo…wo..i..I was nervous & thought what will happen if u turn out to b an ugly face & fat one but u don’t look so bad..so I just got excited…

K: what?? u thought I’d be lyk that??!!!

T: I hadn’t seen u na..isiliye…(funny tune plays)

K: but what now?? what will we do with each other??? mujhe to tum ek min bhi bardasht nahi ho…

T: huhh!! as if I’m dying to be with u…but what to do if I’m so ill fated( making a crying face )

K: u must be very hpy..as u got such a dashing & cool guy but I m doomed cz u r so irritating… ufff!!

Twinkle remained silent…(suddenly she remembered leela & started thinking-u got really whom I wanted maa,,I luv u & I miss u so much…tears dropped from her eyes…)

K: (thinking- oh god,why do I talk so rubbish… I made her cry & it’s not her fault if I don’t luv her & even she didn’t marry me knowingly ) I’m sorry,plz don’t cry…I was just kidding,,in fact u r a sweet girl & we will get along well…

T: what? r u saying this!!

K: ya,don’t worry…I guess we fight so much cz we met in a wrong way probably,,so it’ll be fine..

[ kunj’s thought: now that I’m married to her I can’t let her down,,I’ll perform every duty of mine & I will have to forget twinkle (tu) cz I guess my luv was one-sided for her but I just wanna know why she didn’t reply to me…]

T: OK,I’ll try to make this work also…

[ twinkle’s thought: I know u’ll be very happy to know that I’m ur that twinkle with whom u can talk for hours & who loves u….I’ll tell u tomorrow itself & she blushes….]

then they went to sleep letting go d fight… kunj slept on d couch & twinkle on bed

scene 2
d next day—

kunj as usual got up early & checked in tu page as per his habit…but then he saw d sleeping twinkle & remembered everything..so he decided to not visit tu again when he saw that finally twinkle had replied-

T: I know u must b angry wid me..but I was too busy so couldn’t reply…btw,,can we meet today at 12 pm in shadow garden?

Kunj(thinking- so finally she got tym to reply…but I’m just gonna meet her & end this today…I know it will hurt a lot but i have to control my emotions as I’m not single anymore) & so he replied-

K: OK,I’ll meet u today at 12 sharp…I’ll be in black & coffee combination & u wear chocolate color…

he got ready & went out…twinkle got up hurriedly as soon as he was gone cz she was up before him…she thought she’d get ready quickly & perform d remaining rituals & then go to meet him…

screen freezes on her excited face

PRECAP: confession or a big fight??what do u think??

**************************************I know it was short so m sorry for that…but I got exams coming… plz comment everyone…I luv u all

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54 Comments

  1. vidushi on March 14, 2016 7:51 pm

    amaging.very nice epi

    • prapti on March 14, 2016 9:40 pm

      tysm vidushi…

  2. yashika on March 14, 2016 7:53 pm

    Nooo
    Plz update a longer one …
    Epi was gud
    Actually i was waiting eagerly for it even today when i was writing myexam , I was just thinking about the cute nok jhok and the cute moments b/w them .
    Thank you so much for updating as it cheered me up as i was feeling down ..
    Thanku so much prapti .love u loadzz..
    Update the next part ASAP. Plz

    • prapti on March 14, 2016 9:43 pm

      well I feel honored yashika & thank u sooo much for that…I felt so good to hear that it could cheer u up!!!

  3. Chandra on March 14, 2016 7:54 pm

    I am dead with happiness . Plz unite twinj . Plz… I m a silent reader so u ll definitely wont recognize me . So go on .

    • prapti on March 14, 2016 9:53 pm

      plz don’t die dear cz I don’t wanna lose a frnd whether known or unknown….?? & ya tnx chandra

  4. Ff reader on March 14, 2016 7:55 pm

    Oh dear ur ff is just fab and i think a confession and if not plz make it confession…

    • prapti on March 14, 2016 9:53 pm

      thank u muskan

  5. sanam on March 14, 2016 7:59 pm

    prapti prapti and prapti
    u r chig chig boom
    FIRE!!!!!
    Ma favourite Mudassar’s dialogue 4 u
    loved it soooooooooo much

    • prapti on March 14, 2016 9:56 pm

      oh sanam…u r such a dear…luv u ?

  6. sanjana on March 14, 2016 8:00 pm

    i think so big fight nic episode prapti thanks for ur comments fr my ffs

    • Prapti on March 14, 2016 11:04 pm

      Tnx sanjana…

  7. twinkle on March 14, 2016 8:06 pm

    Please post the next part soon

    • Prapti on March 14, 2016 11:08 pm

      Mmmm…ya twinki,i’ll try to post soon

  8. Mann on March 14, 2016 8:11 pm

    M in luv wid ur ff prapati . N thanku sooo so so much for updating today itself. I would love a confession not a fight n if fight thn it should end up fast and lead to d confession. ##I jus love twinj. Now cant wait for d next episode. Toooo exited. Love u prapati . I believe silent readers r more then how many of d ppl comment.

    • Prapti on March 14, 2016 11:13 pm

      I believe wht u believe is true,mann…& tysm

  9. srija on March 14, 2016 8:14 pm

    confession and please sweet moments between them
    please!!!!
    ur update is just awesome

    • Prapti on March 14, 2016 11:18 pm

      Tnx srija & i lyk ur name…

  10. Star on March 14, 2016 8:16 pm

    Big fight !
    Because it will add spice to your story.
    Don’t make them confess so soon.
    Make them feel the love.

    • Prapti on March 14, 2016 11:42 pm

      Missed u yesterday & seems that u lyk spice…

  11. phycho on March 14, 2016 8:24 pm

    Confession plzzzzzz diiiiii n yah plzzzzz update the nxt part sooonishhhhh!!!
    Plzzzzzzzzzz diiiiiiiiiii!

  12. phycho on March 14, 2016 8:24 pm

    And the update was FAB di…………loved ittttt!!!!

    • Prapti on March 14, 2016 11:52 pm

      Sweetu sis..tnx a lot & m trying & wht’s ur name?

  13. panchi on March 14, 2016 8:36 pm

    wow loved d episode…… waiting fr d nxt one…. pls update it asap…..

    • Prapti on March 14, 2016 11:54 pm

      Thank u panchi…

  14. maya on March 14, 2016 8:46 pm

    its becoming more instresting.. love it..

    • Prapti on March 14, 2016 11:56 pm

      Tnx yaar,,m glad that u cmntd

  15. zikra on March 14, 2016 8:48 pm

    What will happen?????

    • Prapti on March 15, 2016 12:04 am

      Hehe…u look tensed!! Well,don’t be cz m sure smthing wl happen 4 sure…tnx 4 cmntng

  16. Tanvi (tannu) on March 14, 2016 8:51 pm

    vry nice .. and maya is right.. please update next part soon ..

    • Prapti on March 14, 2016 11:59 pm

      Tnx tannu…

  17. Sana on March 14, 2016 9:41 pm

    Your ff is just too amazing..I’m a silent reader and never commented before but I must tell you that I’m in love with your ff ??❤

    • Prapti on March 14, 2016 11:49 pm

      Thank u sana,it means a lottt…

  18. gopika on March 14, 2016 9:52 pm

    plzz make it…confession…..
    it is becoming interesting day by day…loved it…
    love ur ff sooo much prapti…..

    • Prapti on March 14, 2016 11:48 pm

      Tnx & m so glad…

  19. tara on March 14, 2016 10:03 pm

    now where is my comment..sorry prapti idk y my comment didnt got posted..bt i loved it yaar..nd can’t wait for twinj meeting..

    • Prapti on March 14, 2016 11:46 pm

      I know..same thing happens to me also & no need of sry…& ty sooooo much…

  20. Sunaina(SUU) on March 14, 2016 10:31 pm

    Hey Prapti!! I m so so sorry fr not cmnting on ur previous epis actually i was a bit bzy nd main thing tht there r new nd other ffs too so i got confused bcoz i ffrgot ur ffs title i m so sryy once again!!! Btw epi’s awesome i lvd it nd yes ur previous r also.awesome. Luv them yr . Precap’s interesting waiting eagerly fr the epi..

    • prapti on March 15, 2016 12:14 am

      its OK, u don’t have to be sry…thank u sooo much suu…

  21. Aimen on March 14, 2016 10:55 pm

    Prapti, i guess you are bigger than me so i’ll call you di, its very nice, keep it up ?

    • prapti on March 15, 2016 12:15 am

      well I’m 18 & thank u aiman…

  22. Meenat Abubakar on March 14, 2016 11:07 pm

    pls make confession prapti. nice epi luv it!

    • prapti on March 15, 2016 12:16 am

      tnx meenat….

  23. Rakshita on March 14, 2016 11:52 pm

    Hey prapti is anything left to say ur ff says everything my heart thinks of Nd btw why did u end in climax….this time I m dying for ur next part!!!??????

    • prapti on March 15, 2016 12:49 am

      wo actually rakshita,,I thought that I’d end it in d next epi but now I think I’ll try to write sm more but can’t continue for long as my boards r dancing above my head…ughh..I just hate examsss?? & u r praising too much dear but tnx

    • tara on March 15, 2016 8:21 am

      hahaha..good use of the bengali phrase..”porikha mathar opor nachhe” lol…bt wt did u say?? u wanna end it?? nooooooooooooooo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont do that..u can continue after ur xams we dont mind..bt plzz dont end..

  24. tina on March 15, 2016 12:25 pm

    wow i great story and episode

  25. komal on March 15, 2016 12:43 pm

    M really sorry prapti for not being able to reply to yr ffs m so hooked up widy exams now have i read all d parts its amazing.. u had given me lots of surprises in a day.. thanku.. so much love u ?

  26. sanam on March 15, 2016 12:47 pm

    prapti plzzzzz upload the next asap
    can’t wait anymore
    and all the best 4 ur exams my dear
    ♥♥♥♥

  27. prapti on March 15, 2016 2:04 pm

    thanks komal & wlcm back…tnx Tina & sanam I’ll post it soon…

  28. prapti on March 15, 2016 2:09 pm

    tara dear…I wd luv to continue but my boards will be starting from 3rd April & will end on 31st may!!!! so I think if I upload it after 2 months almost then no one will even remember abt it…

    • tara on March 15, 2016 4:31 pm

      oh!! 🙁 🙁
      so then i cant force u..anyways all the best for ur xams..nd plzz do come back with another ff..

    • prapti on March 15, 2016 7:37 pm

      of course I’ll write if any new idea comes up…hope it will

  29. Sanu on March 17, 2016 11:40 am

    Not liked it but loveeed it

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