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Home»Fan Fiction»‘Tears from your eyes’, are ‘The blood from my heart’ part-11
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‘Tears from your eyes’, are ‘The blood from my heart’ part-11

Moonlight_luverBy Moonlight_luverNovember 17, 201710 Comments5 Mins Read
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HELLO AL……..This is Moonlight_luver sighing……..Thank you so much for all the likes and comments…really sorry that I couldn’t reply…it really feels good to watch all your comments and likes….so now let me off to the next part….happy reading and please kindly ignore the mistakes….

**********Next day*********

everyone were present in hall for the pooja…Pinky and jhanvi were walking busy with all the responsibilities..Shivaay came down with Omru..all other guests present there were totally lost in those brothers..Dadi looked at them and felt proud watching them together..pinky looked at them..

pinky: OMM..look jitani ji..our sons have all grown up..
jhanvi: yes pinky..our almost all the responsibilities regarding them is to end..now what we have to do is to get them married and make them capable to handle a family..I know Shivaay have almost reached that level..

pinky: arre, our Om is noy bad either.. I know that Shivaay is the eldest among them..but even Om is as intelligent and capable as Shivaay..you know na, I never used to show any type of partiality between them..and about rudhr..he is still young..uski fikr aap chodiye..
jhanvi: yeah..you’re right..but we can’t leave Om’s matter like that..we should find a girl for Om..as you know now a days Om is getting too much busy with his sculptures..
pinky: has to be..after all he is one of the famous artist all over the world..even the foreigners are coming to OM to have a talk with our Om..

jhanvi: umm..(looking at pinky) I’m very happy that my Omru got such a loving chote maa like you..
pinky: not your..they are our sons..and they hug each other..
ShivOmru descended the stairs..Shivaay looked at Anika..she was in a orange dress with a simple make up..Shivaay for a moment got lost in her beauty..suddenly his phone rang which made him shake a bit..she went to a side to attend the call..but before he could Ragni came in mid and stopped him..
Ragni: Shivaay,what are you doing? come the pooja is about to start..
Shivaay: Ragni, just a minute..it’s very important call..I have to attend..
Ragni: shivaay, just come na..and she pulled him towards the hall..

*********At hall********
dadi: come on everyone..pooja is going to start..and everyone gathered..
jhanvi: One minute mummy ji..I’m waiting for a special guest..
Om: mom, who is that?
jhanvi; have patients Om..they will be coming..(looking at Anika) they are special…
Rudhr: aise koun aa raha hai?
Shivaay :I think it’ll some relatives..

Om: if it’s any relatives then she could tell us na?
Rudhr: may be she’ll be planning to give us a surprise..
Jhanvi: here they are…
everyone looked towards the entrance..Anika turned opposite to the door as she received a message…
AKKA !!!!!!!!
Anika’s eyes widened listening this..she turned to the door…
there she was..Gauri enters with a bright smile..she was in yellow dhavani…seeing her, Anika had received the biggest surprise…gauri ran to Anika and gave her a tight hug..Anika too reciprocated with equal love…
Rudhr: who is this?
Shivaay: and what is this Akka?

Rudhr: strange dress right?
Shivaay :who is her to Anika?
Om: she is beautiful…
Shivru: what??
Om: umm…um..I..I mean to say their bond is a beautiful..
Shivru: ( mocking Om ) haa haa haa beautiful….
Om: shut up guys…

Anika( getting apart): chutki, you..that too in Mumbai??
gauri: yeah..how are you Akka?
Anika: how will I be?
Aniri: just kidkithod!!…and they both laughed…
dadi: Anika, who is this?

jhanvi: mummy ji, this is gauri..Anika’s sis..
pinky: OMM, Anika has a sister too? Anika, why didn’t you tell us about her?
Anika: sorry aunty ji..but I didn’t know that, she’ll come here alone all the way from home..
gauri: umm..Akka, I’m not alone..and she turned towards door while the rest did the same… there, Gayathri entered..
Anika’s face turned pale watching her..jhanvi went near her and hugged her..
jhanvi: kaise hai thu?

gayathri: I’m just perfect..say how are you?
jhanvi: good I am..( turning to OFM) she is gayathri..my good old friend and moreover, Anika and Gauri’s mother…Anika looked at gayathri hearing this..Anika turned to go but gauri caught her by her wrist and signaled her to stay..
gayathri noticed this but making it aside she went near dadi and took blessings from her..
dadi: khush raho beta..
gayathri looked at ShivOmru..
gayathri: jhanvi, are they your sons?

jhanvi: nehi but hai tho bachon se bhi zyada..that is Shivaay, Omkara and Rudhr..
Shivru greeted gayathri joining their hands..but Om was still lost in gauri’s beauty..they looked at Om..
Shivaay: Om..?
Rudhr: O? what happened to you?..they shook him and he came back to reality…
Om: huh? kya hua?
Shivaay( whispering) Om, this is gayathri..Anika’s mother..
Om: huh? ha so?
rudhr :O !!
Om: what?? just then he noticed that, Shivru were joined heir hands in greetings…Oh!! umm..Namasthe aunty..

gayathri: Namasthe beta..
dadi: chalo..now everyone has came..let’s start the pooja.. and everyone were seated..gauri and Anika sat opposite to Shivaay and Om..
Om’s POV
what’s happening with me? why is she attracting me so much? hurrh..she is your to be bhabhi’s sis..behave yourself..

Shivaay looked at Anika..
Shivaay’s POV
wow..she is really beautiful..and happy too..it really feels good to see her smiling..hope that this remain for always..ek minute Shivaay, why you’re thinking about her?

this chirotta is quite strange..always looking at Akka..hmm.. he is good looking..and this bade baal wale creature is strange too..whatever..wanna find out what this kanchi aankhon wala is up to.. dabang gauri is always ready..

****screen freezes**********

this is it guys..do tell me the reviews and pls do comment..
so this is Moonlight_luver bidding farewell..
stay safe and keep smiling..
bye…

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    10 Comments

    1. alekhika20 on November 17, 2017 8:45 pm

      Awesome update

    2. san on November 17, 2017 9:27 pm

      Khidki thod epic ?

    3. nikita_jai29 on November 18, 2017 12:15 am

      It is nice one dear

    4. UF3355 on November 18, 2017 1:44 am

      AWESOME CUTE EXCELLENT INTERESTING PERFECT SUPERB??????
      Dear moonlight
      Pinky Jhanvi conv about ShiOmRu? gauri entry in OM? Om mesmerize in gauri beauty??Om lost in gauri beauty?? ShiOm gauri pov about AniRi and ShiOm? It’s very nice part?????????
      Take care and stay safe?

    5. pavani on November 18, 2017 1:55 am

      loved it and waiting for the next part eagerly
      please post it soon and a unique one can’t wait for it??

    6. Moonlight_luver on November 18, 2017 9:30 am

      Thank you so much Alekhika, San, Nikita, UF3355 and pavani….next one will be posted soon….

    7. Niriha on November 18, 2017 10:03 am

      Awesome

    8. Moonlight_luver on November 18, 2017 1:35 pm

      thank you Niriha…

    9. Shreya nikung on November 18, 2017 4:33 pm

      Thanks thnx yaar awesome for gauri and om I loved them I am comment first time in your ff I like your update soon next update plz plzzz and promise I will daily comment on your update thnx and my one request plz in next update make rikara bond

    10. Moonlight_luver on November 18, 2017 5:02 pm

      Awwww….that’s really sweet of you…thank you so much for commenting, Shreya…really sorry yaar, the next part have been already posted… but I’ll definitely include rikara scenes in the coming parts..

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