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Home»Fan Fiction»TANHAIYAAN !! ( RAGSAN SS ) shot 1
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TANHAIYAAN !! ( RAGSAN SS ) shot 1

Richa19By Richa19December 21, 201757 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello welcome namaste!!!! So as I promised a new story on my birthday, here it is “TANHAIYAAN”….. IK I was supposed to post this yesterday but I was so busy and then so tired that I just couldn’t post!!!! So a very big sorry!!!

So now coming to this story… This is a few shots story…. This idea popped up in my mind in night and then this story happened…… I really hope u guys will like it!! And support me!!!

So let’s get started ??

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So the scene starts with a beautiful open restaurant in Dubai where a girl ,wearing jeans and shirt and stole covering her head ,is sitting and munching something .

 

Girl : cant he come on time yaar ? im sitting here for past half an hour … huh… had hoti hai yaar ……..

 

She turns her head and her beautiful black orbs are shown , and seeing someone coming a beautiful smile covers her lips . she again turns back her head and her pretty face is shown …. she is our beautiful Ragini … she almost jumps in excitement but then breathes in and out to relax herself ……….

 

RAGINI : control ragz … he has just come … he hasn’t seen u yet … but Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari ….  u hv to notice me no matter wht ……

 

The same guy seeing whom ragini got excited is our one n only handsome Sanskaar Maheshwari !!! he’s there to attend a meeting in a same restaurant with the people of Dubai !!!

After sometime his meeting is over and the people leave from there . now sanskaar is alone . ragini finds this as a right time and starts crying loudly but no one gives a damn even sanskaar .she gets agitated and starts crying more loudly and to gain his attention she starts speaking in hindi …

 

Ragini ( the dialogue is in hhindi but i’m writing in English ) : y bhagwan ji y ??? y u always do this to me /???  ( she looks at sanskaar from corner of her eyes and sees him still sitting like before …. now her blood starts boiling ) * wht type of guy he is ?? a girl is crying that to of his nation still he is unaffected …. huh heartless person …*( she thinks .. but then again starts her emotional drama ) u know that i’m  all alone here in this big city still u don’t care n there my blind parents are waiting for me in india … in bharat !!!!!!

 

Now listening the word bharat and parents sanskaar gets emotional and decides to at least ask her . so he gets up and walk towards her ….

*As she was talking in hindi no other people understood as they were all the ppl of dubai ….. *

 

Ragini again saw him from corner of her eyes and smiled a bit seeing him coming . she again started crying . sanskaar came and sat beside her , nervously . ragini saw him .

 

Ragini : wht now u also want something from me ??

 

She spoke in English and shouted on him . he got a bit afraid due to hr sudden outburst .

 

Sanskaar ( in hindi ) : listen ms .. i heard u crying thats y i came to help u … i don’t want anything from u …… but tell me y r u crying ???

 

Ragini , smiling in heart …. she starts speaking but is also crying at the same time . sanskaar was not able to understand anything . he clenched his fist and banged on the table leaving ragini scared . she looked at him with puppy eyes . he smiled seeing her like that . * she looked cute ….. * he thought …..but came out as ragini started speaking ..

 

Ragini : see u r smiling ….. no one loves me … everyone akes fun of me always …..

 

Sanskaar : sorry sorry i didn’t mean to hurt u … n who said that no one loves u …. I …..

 

RAGINI LOOKS at him and they both hv a cute eye lock which sanskaar breaks and continues …

 

Sanskaar : ….. i mean ur parents love u right …. now stop crying n tell me wht happened ?? may be i can help u …….

 

Ragini nodded .

 

Ragini : actually i came from india ….a company offered me a job so i came here … but when i came i got to now that there is no such company and that person who called me wanted ……. wanted ….

 

She again started sobbong .sankaar felt pity on her and offered her water . she nodded no … he squeezed her hand ( just to calm her down ) and asked her to drink water . ragini felt his touch and shivered down her spine . she drank the water from other hand .

 

Sanskaar : wht did that persn wanted ??

 

Ragini : he knew that i need money so h told me to sleep …. sleep with him and his friends and then he’ll give me lots of money ………..

 

Sanskaar ( shocked  ) : whttttt ??

 

Ragini nodded .

 

Ragini : i somehow ran from there but someone stole my … my passport …. n now i cant go back …….

 

She looked at him . he was still angry …

 

Sanskaar : u tell me name of that person … i’ll kill him … how dare he do this kind of cheap thing with a girl from india ???/ huh …

 

Ragini thought arre wht type of guy he’s here I’m crying n he’s talking abt bharat n all…. Huh…..

Ragini: no use of that…..

Sanskaar: y?? I’ll make sure that he doesn’t try to do this again…..

Ragini: he was not from dubai….

Sanskaar: Then???

Ragini: I don’t know…. He went from here……

Sanskaar ; ohh….. Acha listen……

He looked towards her and saw that she was fainting…..

Sanskaar: hey get up….. ( he took her head in his palms so that she doesn’t fall and patted her cheeks) arre get up…. Wht happened to u???

SHe was not getting anything wht to do….. No one was interested to help him…. He sprinkled some water on her face but she didn’t got up.

Sanskaar: arre… Whts this new problem??? Now wht Should I do????? Huh….. Ajeeb musibat hai……….

He sighs and picks her up in his arms in bridal style and makes her lie on the back seat of his car. He sat on driving seat and moved towards his house.

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The shots might be short and the reasons given might be irrelevant too ?? so pls dont mind haan ?

So pls do tell me through your comments votes/likes how was it and should I continue or not ??? n yes the pair is RAGLAN!!! BUT ______________ ?

Pls do share my stories with your friends who love to read! I would love to get feedback from everyone!! ??

And then thanks to all my 102 friends who are following me for my stories!! I’m really glad that u ppl are liking my stories!!! Thank you so much!!! ❤❤ Much love ???

Keep reading ?
With love
Richa

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    57 Comments

    1. vini on December 21, 2017 6:02 am

      awesome

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:18 pm

        Thank you vini ?

    2. nive on December 21, 2017 7:40 am

      Awesome sissy. Princess is such a drama queen.

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:18 pm

        Tysm nive ?

    3. aditi on December 21, 2017 8:16 am

      Belated happy birthday yaar. Awesome

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:39 pm

        Thank you so much aditi!! ?

    4. nishu on December 21, 2017 10:52 am

      nice looking interesting hope we get regular updates nice amazing superb next part soon don’t be a late plzz update all the ff try to regularly for raglak or ragsan Plzz raglak or ragsan writer u guys so inactive plzz write more be regular bcoz now their is very less raglak or ragsan ff plzz write for them actually temish and tever fan is really need Ur ff as now they are not getting temish or tever pics plzz keep writing and all those who ended plzz start new one and who stopped in middle plzz keep writing and keep both are amazing pair and. Raglak aka temish iconic pair alive always forever so writer plzzz Plzz watch rishta likhenga hum Naya in TV give trp @tejasswiprakash needs u guys bcoz channel @sonytvofficial is weak in trp plzz don’t let awesome show and amazing performance by tejasswi suffer @sumeetm give awesome production

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:41 pm

        Thank you ?

    5. PriyaS on December 21, 2017 5:08 pm

      Interesting

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:41 pm

        Thank you so much!!

    6. manu on December 21, 2017 5:35 pm

      Amazing

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:41 pm

        Thank you manu ?

    7. shalini on December 21, 2017 5:56 pm

      Interesting

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:43 pm

        Thank you shalinj

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:43 pm

        Shalini*?

    8. mk on December 21, 2017 6:44 pm

      Richu awesome dr. Update sangini

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:44 pm

        Thank you ?

    9. RAGSANIAN on December 21, 2017 6:53 pm

      Amazinggggg. Happy birthday dear

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:44 pm

        Thank you so much dear ??

    10. vani on December 21, 2017 7:05 pm

      Superb dear.

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:44 pm

        Thank you ?

    11. Keerthi on December 21, 2017 7:17 pm

      Awesomeeeeee

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:45 pm

        Thaannk youu ?

    12. vinu on December 21, 2017 7:19 pm

      Liked it alot

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:47 pm

        Thank you so much!! Really means a lot ?

    13. Rehna on December 21, 2017 7:22 pm

      Awesome, Ragu is a great drama queen

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:47 pm

        Thank you ?

    14. maha on December 21, 2017 7:41 pm

      Seems interesting. Looking forward

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:48 pm

        Thank you ?

    15. Rikashini on December 21, 2017 8:02 pm

      Awesome

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:48 pm

        Thank you ?

    16. Ammy on December 21, 2017 8:08 pm

      Very good start dear love it.waiting for sangini ff

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:50 pm

        Thank you so much!! Really it means a lot ??

    17. harneet on December 21, 2017 8:56 pm

      wow ……………

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:50 pm

        Thank you ?

    18. Neethu on December 21, 2017 9:01 pm

      Awesome

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:56 pm

        Thank you?

    19. geet on December 21, 2017 9:20 pm

      Superb.

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:57 pm

        Thank you ?

    20. asra on December 21, 2017 9:48 pm

      awesome dear….loved it alot…Ohhh my ragu dramabezz….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:58 pm

        Thank you so much asra di!!! ??

        I miss you so much! ?

    21. nive on December 21, 2017 9:59 pm

      Interesting sissy. Princess don’t do this much drama.

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:58 pm

        Thank you!! ?

    22. moni on December 21, 2017 10:18 pm

      Nice

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:58 pm

        Thanks ?

    23. sug on December 22, 2017 5:13 pm

      Ossommmmmm

      • Richa19 on December 22, 2017 7:59 pm

        Thank you ??

    24. Asw on December 22, 2017 7:48 pm

      Nice yaar I’m not understanding the pair name u given raglan belated birthday wishes to you ? keep you ?

      • Richa19 on December 23, 2017 4:19 pm

        Thank you?

        Sorry for the confusion.. It’s RAGSAN only……

        N thank you so much!! ??

    25. AMkideewani on December 22, 2017 9:23 pm

      Baby doll it’s fantabulous❤️❤️❤️

      • Richa19 on December 23, 2017 4:19 pm

        Thank you so much di!!! ??

      • AMkideewani on December 23, 2017 6:32 pm

        You are welcome baby doll❤️❤️

    26. Bela on December 23, 2017 9:38 pm

      Arey Rey Rey itni nautanki? ??
      Hilarious. I am waiting to see what happens now❤❤

      • Richa19 on December 25, 2017 10:51 pm

        ???? thank you bela ?

    27. Riya_Mitra on December 29, 2017 8:02 pm

      Nice start dear. Carry on. Keep smiling and stay blessed.

      • Richa19 on December 30, 2017 4:56 pm

        Shukriya riyu!! ?

    28. SPP on January 3, 2018 11:10 pm

      Awesome Superb Fantastic Amazing Lovely
      Start is really good Fab???
      Our Rags drama started now itself Awww ???
      Excited for the upcoming story ???
      Waiting For The Next One……..

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