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Home»Fan Fiction»{SWEET GIRLS}…SNS & YHM…FF… CHAPTER-1
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{SWEET GIRLS}…SNS & YHM…FF… CHAPTER-1

RianaBy RianaMarch 16, 201734 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hey guys…Thanks a lot to all who have given there respective comments on my S.G ff (prologue)…Lets start…Pls share your comments below!!…

MAIN-CHARACTERS…

Ishita Walia——[DIVYANKA TRIPATHI DAHIYA]
Gopika/Gopi Walia——[DEVOLEENA BHATTACHARYA]
Raman Kapoor——-[KARAN PATEL]
Ahem kapoor——-[MOHAMMAD NAZIM]

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World map is shown??..
Pointing at U.S.A…New York?…
New york city is shown…

@WALIA HOUSE

Walia house is shown with all sorts of luxury…
The Entire mansion is shown well decorated!!…
Scene shifts to a room…
The girl is shown sleeping on her bed??…
She dreams herself on a beauty contest…
She shown blurred!!…
Host: And the Award goes tooooo?…
She wakes up n shouts: Ishitaaaaaa Waliaaa???!!!…
Her Beautiful Face is shown [DIVYANKA TRIPATHI]??…
Ishita: Shit…again i discontinued my dream…fffshhh?!!…
She throws the blanket n goes to washroom…
She brushes n baths…
After that she comes out n dresses herself??…

She is shown in a jogging outfit!!…
Ishita: Ishu…be ready…you need to be zero figure!!?…
She starts jogging wearing earphones…
She comes downstairs n hits a lady who she is shown in a pink nighty!!?…
The lady: Aaahh…Ishu…cant you see me!!??…
Ishita: Sorry Abiraa?…
Abiraa [KARISHMA TANNA] is shown…
Abiraa: Its okay…No?..
Ishu looks on…
Abiraa: Its not okay!!?…you destroyed my face pack!!??…
Ishu sees the face pack fallen on floor!!..
Ishu: Ooopss…i am so so sorry Abi?…
Abiraa: Okay go now…go!!…
She gets irked!!?…
Ishu regrets n leaves!!?…

She joggs on the road n the New york streets are shown!!?…

SONG:
 
Khwaab dhatoora hai
Chillam mein poora
Shuru ru ru ru taiyari

Aaj kimaam wali shaam chatai hai
Shuru ru ru sawaari

Khwaab dhatoora hai
Chillam mein poora hai
Shururu ru taiyari
Aaj kimaam wali shaam chatai hai
Shuru ru ru sawaari

Kaisa ye nasha hai
Aisa sar chadha hai
Badla ye jahaan hai pal bhar mein hi
O Gujariya..O Gujariya?..
O Gujariya..
Hai Kya, Kya Hai
Hai Kya Iraada Tera
O Gujariya..O Gujariya..
Show Me How To Party

O Bijuria..O Bijuria..
Sar Aankhon Pe
Nazrein Girana Tera
O Bijuria..O Bijuria..
Show Me How To Party??

Humne To Yeh Suna Hai
Dil Darwaaja Hai
Choti Si Ek Dua Se
Yeh Khul Jata Hai
Tu Bhi Yeh Chaal Chala De
Khud Ki Hi Baat Bana De
Show Me How To Party

Aayegi Tu Jo Cham Se
Sab Jhoom Jayenge
Tere Uthte Kadam Pe
Sab Jhoom Jayenge
Dhadkan Se Dhol Baja De
Hothon Pe Bol Saja De
Show Me How To Party

Kaisa Yeh Nasha Hai
Aisa Sar Chadha Hai
Badla Yeh Jahan Hai
Pal Bhar Mein Hi
Aa…
O Gujariya..O Gujariya..

O Gujariya..
Hai Kya, Kya Hai
Hai Kya Iraada Tera
O Gujariya..O Gujariya..

She continues jogging n listening music??…

@SWISSTON PARK

A girl is shown sitting on a bench?…
She is shown skating uniform…
A water bottle is shown??…
She takes the towel n drinks water!!…
She: Wooooofff…Now lets go!!??…

She goes on the stage n starts Skating!!!…
She skates on a zig zag way!!…

SONG:

Le compte à rebours de L’Amour?
(It’s the countdown of love)
Dix, neuf, huit, sept, six,
Cinq, quatre, trois, deux, un!!
(Backward counting in French 10-1)

Ude dil befikre??
Ude dil befikre
Angaaron mein nikhre
Ude dil befikre (x2)

Raat bhar jhoomenge
Aasmaan ghoomenge
Chand ye choomenge
Taaron ke maarenge phere

Ude dil befikre
Ude dil befikre
Angaaron mein nikhre?
Ude dil befikre

Uhh!

Dix, neuf, huit, sept, six,
Cinq, quatre, trois, deux, un!!

Dhandhana jhanjhana
Sansana jaaye saansein
Jagmaga jaaye ankhein
Milte milte milte hi

Dagmaga khankhana
Hadbada jaaye saansein
Tadpada jaaye bahein
Milte milte milte hi

Aag ke rele hain?
Barf ke dhele hain
Baazi pe khele hain
Thode thode dil ke tukde

Ude dil befikre
Ude dil befikre
Angaaron mein nikhre
Ude dil befikre

Uhh!

After a lot of Roller Skating…
She comes down…
Ishu comes to the park…
And sees the girl
Ishita shouts: Hey Gopiiii!!!!…
Gopi [DEVOLEENA BHATTACHARYA] is shown smilling??…
Wearing helmet n skates…
Gopi shouts: Hey Ishuuu??…
In excitement she jumps from the stage…
Ishu gets shocked!!…
She falls over Ishu?…
They both falls n shouts…
Aaaaahhh??…
They laughs a lot!!!??…

@WALIA HOUSE

A woman is shown in the kitchen…with some servants!!!…
Woman: Is the Breakfast ready!!…I will serve today!!…
Family members are shown sitting on dine!!!…
A man shouts: Madam where’s our food!!…
She turns…
Her face [MANINI MISHRA] is shown and its Gopi-Ishu’s mom Akansha Walia☺…
Akansha shouts: The food is ready!!…
She serves it to everyone!!…
Abiraa is shown sitting with her husband Gourav [LALIT BISHT]?…
Gourav: Mom where’s Gopi…Ishu!!…
Akansha: I dont know…maybe in jog n Skating…
An old woman [SUREKHA SIKHRI] is shown coming towards dine table?…
She is the dadi of the family…Saraswati Walia…
Saraswati: I think girls should be limit!!??…
Gourav: But dadi?…
Saraswati shows her palm✋…
Abiraa: Relax dadi…dont be so old fashioned!!…
Saraswati: Abiraa…behave yourself!!…dont you know how to talk with elders!!..
Gourav: Dadi…
Saraswati comes in her real attitude!!???…
She wores sunglasses??…
Saraswati: Oh come’on shoot those boring weird rituals…goddd Gourav beta its too weird to follow old dadi type rituals????…
Akansha: I catched your acting for the first time!!?…
Abiraa: Dadi you’re so funny!!??..
Saraswati: Fun should be the part of our life beta!!?…as bcoz…
She starts her boring lecture!!!??..
Abiraa slowly: Ufff…inkaa boring lecture!!?…
Gourav: Relax baby?…Dadi paratha?…
Saraswati: Really…give me two??…
Akansha n his husband Pranay [RAKESH KUKRETI] laughs??…

@KAPOOR MANSION

Kapoor mansion is shown having a modern interior…
Cars are shown getting washed!!!…
Flower garden is getting watered!!…
A girl is shown swimming in pool!!…
She is shown in bikini?…
And its Kavya,Raman-Ahem’s sister [KRYSTLE D’SOUZA]?…
She comes out of the pool…
And wears dry clothes!!..
She rests on couch!!…
Servants gives her Orange juice!!..
Kavya: Thankyou??…
She sipps it?..
Kavya: Mmm…Perfect life…with perfect refreshment!!??…
Suddenly a crow comes n shits??…
The shit falls on her juice!!!…
Kavya screams: Aaaaahhhhh!!!!!?????…What the hell you bl**dy crow!!…Go n catch the crow???…
She orders the servants…
Servant: Mam its a crow!!??…
Kavya: I cant eat this??…
She throws the glass in panic!!?…
She shouts: Disgusting life!!…with disgusting happenings!!!…Uggghhh!!???…

A woman is shown doing Pooja inside the house…
Servants are shown standing!!…
She completes the pooja…
And turns back holding Aarti Thaali…
And its Madhavi, Raman-Ahem’s mom [NEENA KULKARNI]…
Madhavi: I heard Kavya screaming…What happened!!☺☺…
Servant: Mam…a crow had shit on her glass…
Madhavi: Ooooohh????….

Kavya calls Ahem…
Ahem picks up the call…
Ahem: Hello?…
Kavya: Ahem bhai?…
He is shown blurred!!…
Ahem: Hey Duffer!!?…
Kavya: Stop it!!?…Bhai…
She tells him about the shit incident!!??…
Ahem jokes: Oh i see…I think the crow was your boyfriend from your previous birth…Loool…He took the revenge in this birth??…as you ditched him bcoz of his complexion…Looool???….
Kavya: Shut up!!!…Where’s Raman bhai????…
Ahem: Bro is busy with clients!!…dont irritate him…you know naa that he is OCD maniac???…
Kavya: Oh yah…Okay bye!!…(Cuts call)…
She gets irked!!?…
Kavya: I just hate Crows!!?…
She leaves fuming!!?..

@WALIA HOUSE

Gopi n ishu comes home!!…
Ishu: Btw..are u okay!!☺…
Gopi: Yah yah??…
They greets everyone!!…
And starts having breakfast!!…
Gopi: Mom…Paratha?…
Akansha: Specially for you?…
Ishu: Mommmm…
Akansha: Relax honey…here’s your Oats n Fruit salad!!…
Ishu gets glad!!?…
Ishu: Thanku mommy?…
She grabs…
Suddenly she gets a msg on FB…
Ishita reads out n gets excited!!…
Ishu: O…M…G!!…Guys!!??..
Gopi: What happened!!?…
Saraswati: Tell tell?…
Gourav: Yahh?…
Ishu: I am selected in NY’S Topnext SuperModel Contest!!??..
Gopi: Reallyyyyy!!????…
They all rejoices!!????…

SONG:

Rokna tokna thaamna na maane?
Tairna yeh jaane dariya dariya dariya mein
Jeetna haarna chheen’na naa jaane
Doobna ye jaane dariya dariya dariya mein

Dard mein ye nikhre
Haath mein jo pakde
Banke rooi bikhre
Armaan hai roohon ke nakhre

Ude dil befikre, Ude dil befikre
Angaaron mein nikhre
Ude dil befikre… (x2)

Ude dil Befikre…
Befikre… udey…
Befikre… Befikre…?

dix, neuf, huit, sept, six,
cinq, quatre, trois, deux… un!

Entire family dances!!…
Gopi n Ishu have a Cute n squeezy hug!!??…

SCREEN FREEZES on Sweets girls faces!!??…

❤????❤???❤???❤????

PRECAP-Raman n Ahem had a chopper/helicopter race!!…Ishu prepares for her beauty contest…Gopi helps her!!…

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HOPE U GUYS LIKED THE FIRST EPISODE?…SHARE THE COMMENTS BELOW!!???

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    34 Comments

    1. Rani on March 16, 2017 1:17 am

      SOOO FUNNY!!

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 9:19 am

        Thanx Rani???

    2. raven on March 16, 2017 2:10 am

      WOW!!! AMAZING!!! SPLENDID!!! too good keep it up you have a very long way to go hun

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 9:19 am

        Thanx a lot Raven???

    3. Jasminerahul on March 16, 2017 2:47 am

      i thought the day was boring without raina’s ff.suddenly i saw ur ff update,thanku so much.ishu gopi intro was nice.loved their funny scenes.ishita on diet.i miss the slim divyanka.she was so slim before.i wish in real life too she tries to lose her weight n get slim again.Now in real life Devoleena is a slim beauty like a model.Manini as gopi ishita’s mother was a surprise.Lalit Karishma too.Abiraa’s scenes made me laugh.Surekha as dadi.i thought she was very strict,later the way u showed her true colour was so funny.loved it.i got reminded of PMHMD as u used 3 actors from pardes.hopefully u will write a RaIna ff too in future which matches ur name.Krystle as Ahem Raman’s sis Kavya was a surprise.Her introduction was so funny.She was enjoying n suddenly the crow…ha ha.Ahem’s comment on d crow being her previous b’th’s bf who got ditched by her due to complexion n crow took revenge on her in this b’th was so funny.ishita to participate in d beauty contest.wow.Gopi to groom her.cool.Bcz in real life though Divyanka is modern n one of d most beautiful ladies Devoleena is ultramodern n a style icon.The story happens in new york n when ishita went 4 walk u wrote new york streets r shown..then d bgm…i really felt watching a hindi movie which was shot in a foreign country

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 9:20 am

        Thanx a lot Jas for a such humungous comment???

    4. Jasminerahul on March 16, 2017 4:56 am

      though devoleena is ultramodern and fun loving in real life gopi is very traditional.I guess you have portrayed gopi as modern fun loving girl in your ffs. can you please tell how you got the idea of showing gopi as modern in your ffs?

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 9:24 am

        Actually i want people to imagine devoleena as a young n smart girl not like gopi’s character as i dont like gopi’s character much?…Yah right Devo is in ultramodern girl in real life!!…But everyone calls her old just bcoz of that crap leaps on sns…They never showed gopi in a successful proffesion…i know that housewife is always good…but atleast she can talk smartly like now she’s talking…The makers of sns made it too late that Gopi’s character is now at 50’s…Anyways Thanx?

      • Jasminerahul on March 16, 2017 12:28 pm

        you are right.first when I decided to make karan tacker devoleena in my ff my friend said devoleena looks very old.but I argued with her that its the bun hair style which made her look old on sns and in real life she looks very young. later when I wrote ffs and edits on them people accepted that devo matches young dashing heroes too.
        what is your opinion about ishita?she is also shown as middle aged lady.but better than gopi?

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 1:41 pm

        Divyanka is much elder then Devo…But still her acting is always Brillaint!!…I hate the way in which Ishita is shown in yhm as Jagatmata!!…Everyone calls her by this name!!…Though i think Ishita acting is good!!…I think in Saathiya n Yhm…Gopi character is of 50’s age n Ishita’s is of Late 35 or 40…And i think that Gopi is great but Ishita is equally grt…

      • Jasminerahul on March 16, 2017 2:33 pm

        not that.I asked whether u think Ishita’s look is better than Gopi’s look in YHM?I mean the make up,hairstyle n costumes

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 4:48 pm

        Ofcourse ishita looks better than gopi

    5. Nandhini on March 16, 2017 5:07 am

      Riana you give ur ffs a stylish promo at start, and with a fantastic intro episode followed by an amazing story! If this is a story, when i go to read next line, its full of surprise makes my day! I mean…say like the intro of kavya started with a hot scene but it ended in a so much funny way…and also saraswati dadi…started as a strict grandma in her as usual ways but at the end she is a jovial lady?man! All unexpected! Seriously, you must make a film…or the producers out there must approach you!

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 9:24 am

        Thanx a lot Nandi???

    6. Siddharth on March 16, 2017 7:45 am

      Good story Raina?. But krystal d Souza in negative character ah

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 9:25 am

        No krystle is not any vamp…Thanx a lot Sid???

    7. Riana on March 16, 2017 9:26 am

      Hello Yhm fans pls share ur views too☺

    8. jyoti on March 16, 2017 10:31 am

      awesome loved gopi and ishita’s introduction in walia family everyone is cool in kapoor family i think raman and ahem mother is treditional pls continue soon

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 10:46 am

        Thanx a lot Jyoti???

    9. Mansi on March 16, 2017 11:50 am

      Wow awesome start???loved ishu’s dream of winning beauty contest n suddenly she wake up from dream n got broke?the way u protrade the newyork streets I thought I am there too??the the song?gopi’s intro was also cute n the song ude Dil??abiraa as karishma?surekha sikri as Dadi I love her a lot?first I thought Dadi is traditional but what a surprise she was just acting?kavya’s intro too was sweet?but the crow thing made me laugh??ahem telling her crow as her previous birth boyfriend??precap is ?update soon?

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 1:36 pm

        Thankuu??

    10. Isuri on March 16, 2017 12:02 pm

      Superb epi waiting for next epi

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 1:42 pm

        Thankyou Isuri???

    11. KAN on March 16, 2017 1:28 pm

      So nice …. With combination of minf blowing songs … Good jobs ur casting and plot are very intresting …. But can u plz share what is the retion betwwn gopi nd ishita…. Are the sis..

      • KAN on March 16, 2017 1:30 pm

        Now i undersatand they both are sis

      • KAN on March 16, 2017 2:28 pm

        Mind**

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 2:48 pm

        Yah right they r sis…Thanx a lot KAN☺☺☺

    12. KAN on March 16, 2017 1:28 pm

      I like karshimaa tanna a lot …

    13. kumud on March 16, 2017 4:21 pm

      Wow awesome really like it

      • Riana on March 16, 2017 4:49 pm

        Thanx a lot Kumud???

    14. shakaib on March 16, 2017 11:29 pm

      I don’t like it at all!!!! Loooool……..I love it! Truly, its so awesome to read. All character are awesome.

      • Riana on March 17, 2017 8:06 am

        Thanx a lot dear???

    15. Parichary on March 17, 2017 12:53 pm

      Nice and funny part.

      • Riana on March 17, 2017 1:40 pm

        Thanx parichay☺☺☺

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