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Home»Fan Fiction»SWASAN(SS) – THE LOVE MELTED ME – EPISODE 1
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SWASAN(SS) – THE LOVE MELTED ME – EPISODE 1

AbirshaBy AbirshaDecember 4, 2016Updated:December 7, 201664 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hello guys this is a short story…. It will be 15-20 chaps…. Hope u guys like it…..

Episode 1

A girl is shown sleeping in her room….. She is sleeping so cutely by cuddling the pillow….. The bed is in round shape…. The room is not neat…. All the things are scattered here and there…. At that time the girl woke up from her peaceful sleep…. She took the intercom and press 1…. Then again she slept…. After 1 minute she heard the knock sound…. She took a remote and pressed a button…. The door opened automatically….. A maid came there…. She went to the cupboard and took the girls necessary things…. Then she went to the bathroom and filled the tub with water…. Then she kept the dress in the bathroom and came out….. She saw the girl sleeping…. Without disturbing her she started to clean the room…. At that time she dropped a thing unknowingly….. The maid shivered seeing the girl….. The girl lying in the bed woke up and saw the maid…. She got angry and slapped the maid…..

“Is this ur first day??? How many days u r here haan??? Dont u know that u shouldn’t disturb me??? Now u r lost…. When i come down u shouldn’t be there…. Now i dismiss you….. Get lost…. “saying this the girl went to fresh up….

The maid came out of the room…. She went down….. There the girls parents were there….. They saw the maid and guessed what might have happened….. The maid went to them….

“Sir… If u take me from the job our family will suffer a lot sir…. Pls tell mam to not dismiss me sir…. “the maid said with teary eyed…. The couple saw the maid with sad face….

“Sarla its not in our hands…. She won’t hear what we said…. I can do one thing…. U can work in my frnd house…. He will also give u more money…. R u ok??? “The man said to the maid….

“Sir i am very happy….. Thank you soo much sir…. “the maid said and folded her hand…

“Its ok…. Now u go from here before she comes…. “the lady said and the maid also went from there….. At that time they hear a bell sound…. Another servant ran to the girl’s room with cup in his hand…… He knocked the door…. Then the door opened…. There the girl is sitting in her bed listening to music…. She is in her night dress…. The man came and kept the cup in her side table and stood there….

The girl took the the cup and she drank it very casually…. Till that the man stood with his head down…. After 30 minutes she stopped the music and saw the man….

“Mm today morning make me roti with palak paneer and a salad…. “the girl said with an attitude….. The man just nodded his head and came out and gave a long breath…. He shake his head on both sides and went from there hurriedly…..

Then after 1 hour the girl came down…. The couple is sitting in the sofa…. The man is reading newspaper and the lady is reading magazine….. Both saw the girl coming…..

“Gud morning swara” the couple said….

“Gud morning…. “she said without any interest and went to the dinning table…. The servants came there and served her…. After finishing the breakfast she went to the living area…. At that time she heard a horn sound…. She took the man’s valet and took some money and went from there…..

Outside her frnds were waiting for her in the jeep…. Seeing them she got happy and went with them…. The couple saw all this and felt bad….. They dont like her friends…. But they too can’t do anything…..

“Shekar how much time our swara will be like this??? Wont she change??? ”

“Shomi even i want my old shona…. But do no what made her to change like this…. If we ask her anything she just shout on us otherwise she is leaving the house…. ”

“Ya shekar…. On that day she left the house and we searched for two days…. After telling her that we wont tell her or ask her anything only she came back…. ”

“Ya shomi…. I do no how many days we have to be bear all this…. Hope one day we will get back our shona back…. Ok i am going to office…. Bye…. “saying this he went to office….. Shomi wiped her tears and went to her ngo…. (she runs a ngo)

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A small house is shown….. Its not so small…. It is a two flore house….. A lady is seen working in the kitchen and a man is sitting in the hall reading a newspaper….

“Sujatha bring my tea soon… How much time i have to wait??? ”

“Ji wait for few minutes…. Anyhow u r going to be in the house only…. Our son and daughter are going to office and college…. First i will finish their work then will give ur tea…. ”

“Sujatha this is not fair…. It will take 30 minutes…. I can’t wait ma…. ”

“Ji is this ur first tea??? No na… Stop drinking this much tea…. Come and eat ur breakfast…. After that i will give ur tea…. ”

“Oh god…. What wrong i did that u gave me a hitler wife??? “Ram said dramatically….. At that time sujatha throw a spoon on him…. He jerked from his place and closed his mouth and silently went to the dinning table…. Sujatha saw all this and laughed…. At that time uttara too came there…. She saw them and laughed….

“Offo u both won’t stop ur morning teasings haan??? ”

“What to do uttu without teasing ur ma i can’t live… ”

“Haan that much love?? ”

“Not love… I m here sitting silently and i dont have any work na…. So its a time pass…. “he said and winked at uttara…. Sujatha came there angrily with roti stick…. Ram gulped seeing her…. He smiled sheepishly and said, “sujatha see its late already otherwise sanskar will go without having food…. “hearing sanskar name sujatha ran from there……

In the upstairs…. In the room the man of early 20’s came out from the washroom with towel in his waist….. He stood before mirror and ruffled his hair and put some cream….. Then he got dressed in formals and went down…. He saw his dad and sister teasing his ma…. He smiled and went to them….

“Papa, uttu stop teasing my suju…. ”

“Sanskar u came… See these two are not allowing me to do the work…. Come and sit….. Ur breakfast and lunch is ready…. “saying this she dragged sanskar and made him sit in the chair and fed him…. Ram and uttara saw this with their jaw open….

“Oh u alone will fed ur son??? See i too will also feed my daughter…. “saying this he feed uttara…. Uttara showed his finger and tongue to sanskar and suju…. After finishing their breakfast sanskar and uttara went out…. Sanskar took his bike…. Uttara sat behind him…. After dropping uttara in her college sanskar went to his office….

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Hows it??? Do u like it??? Comment ur views guys….

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http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-ff-unpredictable-lives-chatterbox/

Guys this ff is a combination of 5 people….. Pls do read this and comment…. All 5 people have different readers…. And guys dont worry about being swasan only 60%….. Mostly this ff will have swasan only…. It will revolve around swasan only…. Just 20% only raglak…. So dont worry about this guys…. So comment pls…. At first u may feel like a common ff…. But as the ff goes it will be interesting….. ?

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    64 Comments

    1. Simi on December 4, 2016 5:00 pm

      Nice dear

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:11 pm

        Thank you…. ?

    2. Simin on December 4, 2016 5:21 pm

      Awesome shan
      But keep posting early orelse u know what i mean

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:11 pm

        He he i know the consequence dr….. Dont worry will post soon…. ?

    3. Shreeyu on December 4, 2016 5:30 pm

      Awesome didoo…. Waiting for ur next update … Dekho I told na that I’ll read it on my own … And c I did. …. ??

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:12 pm

        Ha ha u r intelligent sweeto…. Will post soon sweeto…. ?

    4. Kakali on December 4, 2016 5:35 pm

      Shan diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…. i need choco for this new SS… gimme gimme… yeiiii let’s party… !!! goshhhh it’s semma semmma….
      Nanri Akka…

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:15 pm

        Awww kaku…. Surely i won’t give u chocolate….. Bcoz u r already ill…. So no chocolates…. U get well soon… I will give u…. But only one…. Waw kaku is learning tamil…. Not bad…. Thanks dr…. ?

    5. SNY on December 4, 2016 5:52 pm

      Awesome akka…..
      Nxt one soon….
      And tc

      • niku on December 4, 2016 6:28 pm

        Awesome Amazing Interesting chp.

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:19 pm

        Thank you niku…. ?

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:18 pm

        Thank you so much dr…. ?Ya sure dr… ?

    6. rabia on December 4, 2016 6:00 pm

      Shaaaaannnnnnn ???????? awesomeeeeeeeeee ?????? loads of kissess and huggies from my sideeee and that hugs will be bear hugsss ????

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:26 pm

        Thank you di…. Love you too…. ???

    7. Stg on December 4, 2016 6:16 pm

      Awesome ?

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:26 pm

        Thank you… ?

    8. Purvi on December 4, 2016 6:17 pm

      Awesome and different…….

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:27 pm

        Thanks purvi…. ?

    9. shalini on December 4, 2016 6:30 pm

      Superb yr ek story m itne sare shades actually intro bhi abhi read ki h Maine or mujhe story bhut bhut interesting LG rahi h post NXT part soon ??????

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:27 pm

        Thank you soo much dr…. Will post next part soon dr…. ?

    10. Nagamanasa on December 4, 2016 6:33 pm

      Interesting shan…continue soon

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:28 pm

        Thank you Dr…. ?

    11. Deeksha gupta on December 4, 2016 6:44 pm

      Nyc …

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:39 pm

        Thank you….. ?

    12. pooja26 on December 4, 2016 7:05 pm

      awsm dear……..

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:39 pm

        Thank you…. ?

    13. Anniya on December 4, 2016 7:26 pm

      Shannnnnnnn its awsm …
      So much suspense also

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:40 pm

        Thank you soo much titi…. ?

    14. Arshaanya on December 4, 2016 7:42 pm

      I knew it its u only….
      Its something dffrnt… didn’t lykd swaraz attitude at all…
      Continue soon

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:41 pm

        He he wow u found out…. Thanks Arshanya…. But what to do in this swara’s character will be grey only…. ?

    15. s on December 4, 2016 7:59 pm

      nice..

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:41 pm

        Thank you…. ?

    16. hi on December 4, 2016 8:04 pm

      Super start continue

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:42 pm

        Thank you dr…. ?

    17. swarmayi on December 4, 2016 8:08 pm

      Akkkaaaaaa…. what an amazing ss… loved it.. post next part soon..

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:57 pm

        Thank you sammy…… ?

    18. mariyajap on December 4, 2016 8:11 pm

      Awesome di

      • SHAN on December 4, 2016 11:57 pm

        Thanks Mariya…. ?

    19. Mirna on December 4, 2016 8:18 pm

      Awesome dear continue soon 🙂

      • SHAN on December 5, 2016 12:01 am

        Thanks Akka…. ?

    20. Soujanya on December 4, 2016 8:39 pm

      Awesome…?

      • SHAN on December 5, 2016 12:03 am

        Thanks dr….. ?

    21. sammykapoor on December 4, 2016 9:35 pm

      nice

      • SHAN on December 5, 2016 12:07 am

        Thanks…. ?

    22. Saba on December 4, 2016 9:44 pm

      Plz na add more raglak story …like raglak 70% nd swa San 30%….plzzzzz dear

      • Sanswa on December 4, 2016 11:15 pm

        Awwe hw cutely u r saying I liked ur way?

      • SHAN on December 5, 2016 12:09 am

        Sorry…. I am swasan fan…. So swasan will hold more….. And this ss is completely full of swasan only…. The one i talked is about another ff which i gave the link…. ?

    23. Navi on December 4, 2016 9:59 pm

      Awesome shan…

      • SHAN on December 5, 2016 12:09 am

        Thank you Navi…. ?

    24. Chinna on December 4, 2016 10:02 pm

      Awesome

      • SHAN on December 5, 2016 12:10 am

        Thank you…. ?

    25. Nive.. on December 5, 2016 1:12 am

      awesome shan..

      • SHAN on December 5, 2016 9:30 am

        Thanks Nivi…. ?

    26. chandu on December 5, 2016 7:06 am

      superb…!!loved it…!!! Swara is wierd…!!! Lets see…!!

      • SHAN on December 5, 2016 9:31 am

        Thank you chandu…. ?ya sure u will know the reason soon…. ?

    27. Mahjabeen on December 5, 2016 8:05 am

      Awesome shan…loved it…waitng fr nxt

      • SHAN on December 5, 2016 9:32 am

        Thanks dr….. Sure will post soon…. ?

    28. vyshu10 on December 5, 2016 8:42 am

      Awesome Shanu….surprised n happy to see another ff. Did anyone betray swara before? Upload soon

      • SHAN on December 5, 2016 9:32 am

        Aww thank you vyshu….. He he i won’t tell…. U will find it…. ?

    29. anu on December 5, 2016 10:27 am

      awesome

      • SHAN on December 5, 2016 12:02 pm

        Thank you dr…. ?

    30. srushti on December 5, 2016 1:13 pm

      it was really interesting and I have a doubt that in ur group all r 20 sorry if I hurt u

      • SHAN on December 5, 2016 1:24 pm

        Thanks dr…. No all are not 20 and no pblm dr….. May i know y u asked it?? And dr this not group ff….. The group ff’s link i gave just read that once…. ?

    31. mica on December 5, 2016 4:48 pm

      muahahaha.. i love this grey shade of Swara

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