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Swasan…Love Beyond Ages… Chapter 12

FROZEN CHOCOBy FROZEN CHOCOSeptember 9, 201660 Comments5 Mins Read
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Link to previous Chap: Chapter 11  

 

Chapter 12:

Everything is perfect, swara thought when she awoke from her sleep… now he is no more upset with dadi and papa… her didi arrival only left, and then it’s a complete family… (She really doesn’t have any idea what will happen when her didi arrive…) slowly she gets down from bed move towards bathroom…

 

She is still in her heavy saree…  yesterday night she is about to change her saree but after sanskar compliments, she don’t want so… a small smiles plays in her lips remembering sanskar words… 

 

‘swara, umm…umm… saree suits you’, swara imitates him looking at mirror… she closes her face with one hand and shies…

Arre, swara what happen to you… why you behaving like this… she shooks her head… It’s all because of lack of sleep… this sanskar daily wake me early morning na so oly… she tells herself…
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Swa(shouts) : kaki my milk… kaki: beta one minute… kaki replied from kitchen… sans: kaki till now u didnt gv milk to my kitten, its too bad… he says while descending from stairs… swara turns hearing sanskar voice… swa: sanskar Good morning, see today you’re late, wait what u said… she angrily stares him… sans: I asked milk fr my kitten frn kaki… he chuckled…

Swa: you said u wont call me scaredy kitten if i tk seminar, but u r calling… liar… sans: point to be noted my kidoo, I said I wont call u ‘scaredy’ kitten not kitten… swa: I’m nt any kitten… sans: oops, its proved ur proofs are false in sanskar court… so you’re kitten… swa: I dnt want result from ur forgery court…  sans(self appraisal): you knw even justice of god is staying in sanskar court only… swa(mockingly): haan…haan.. so many told… liar… both starts there nok-jhok…

‘The court is dismissed…’ kaki says irritatingly… both swasan shuts their mouth at a very minute and looks her with puppy eyes… kaki: uff… kids are fair better than you both…  kaki starts her advice… they tk thr breakfast silently…

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As soon swara entered class all her frnds started to burst out… swara doesnt understand anything…

Swa(innocently): what happened to u all..? Kav: swara do u forget, arjun invited all of us for janmastami pooja… but u didnt came… swa: shit I totally forget about that… Karthi: he and his mom waited for u so long… they did thr pooja too late… swara feels bad after listening her frnds…

Deepi: u knw hw much he worried about you… wr is ur mobile… haan..? Swa: its in my bag… she tk it and notices so many msd call and msgs from arjun and her frnds… Rosh: if  u dnt use mobile then throw it in dustbin…  swara feels more guilty…

swa: wr is he now… Rosh: we dont knw… kav: Guys leave it na, already she is feeling guilty… not yt he cme, dnt feel bad… swara nods and dialed his number…

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when sanskar car turn its crashed with someone bike.. Sans: oh gosh… he get down from his car to help that person… sans: I’m sorry, very sorry… I didn’t notice you… actually… boy: it’s ok boss, mistake is also mine… sanskar smiles and helps him…

Boy: arjun… sanskar looks on… he forward his hand: I’m arjun… sans: sanskar, nc to meet u… 

arj: boss, I heard ur name somewhere… Sans: I too feeling same… arj: we are feeling like this bz our names are common na… Sans:yep, you’re right…

they both about to leaves but sanky notices arjun mobile on road… he tooks it, it display pagal calling… Sans: bro pagal calling u… I mean ur phone… arjun gt his mobile and cuts the call…

 

Sans: pagal..? He asked with some curiosity… Arj: haan pagal hain but bohut cute… she always irritate me by her nonstop fm but if she is silent then its irritate me more… if we upset her one smile is enough to sent our worries faraway… if we think she is kid at very moment she prove she is a sensible girl… she always keep her surroundings happy one… she is an angel… but now I’m upset with her….

All the while sanskar smiles by remembering his kiddo from his every word… arj: oh god, why I’m saying all this to you… I’m sorry for wasting ur time… being with her I’m also bcm crazy like her… sanskar smiles bz he always used to say this words…

sans: no prob… hmm, girl friend..?  Arj: hmm…Nope, friend in girl… I mean she is girl and my friend…

Sans: all says same… arj: I’m not in that category…why can’t girl and boy be friends… sans: we’ll see… arjun smiles: haan…

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I’m really sorry frnds… I always used to say nxt tyn I wont to be too late but again and again I’m posting late… what to do… getting busy with personal life… sorry…

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Thank you all… 🙂 🙂

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    60 Comments

    1. sanya on September 9, 2016 2:44 am

      Amazing yaar but I want know that swara friend should know that she is married or ragini reentry to make swasan relize there loveer

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 3:33 pm

        Hi sanya, swara frnds doesn’t knw about her marriage and about ragini re-entry not yet decided… thanks for the support dr… 😀 😀

    2. Sravya sri on September 9, 2016 5:23 am

      Awesome
      But update regularly yar

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 3:35 pm

        Thank you dr… 🙂 🙂 sorry yaar its difficult to be regular…

    3. mica on September 9, 2016 5:41 am

      oohhooo, just wait and watch for massive burning 😀
      luv it Nive.. please update soon as time permit..ty

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 3:38 pm

        ha ha ha…Massive burning… lol… will try to gv… thanks mica… 🙂 🙂

    4. Purvi on September 9, 2016 6:29 am

      Superb………. Really loved it………. Pls continue soon and update regularly……….

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 3:40 pm

        Sorry Purvi its difficult to update regularly… Thanks for support dear… 🙂 🙂

    5. Gulshara on September 9, 2016 7:33 am

      Excellent epi

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 3:41 pm

        Thanks dear… 🙂 🙂

    6. Soujanya on September 9, 2016 7:36 am

      Awesome

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 3:42 pm

        Thanks dear… 🙂 🙂

    7. maryum on September 9, 2016 7:54 am

      Awesome

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 3:42 pm

        Thank you dr… 🙂 🙂

    8. ria..!! on September 9, 2016 8:04 am

      NYC one…plz show some swasan romance..little wala…don’t turn arjun negative

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 3:48 pm

        swasan romance..? ok will try it dear… thanks for commenting… 🙂 🙂

    9. SHAN on September 9, 2016 8:20 am

      Awesome very nice…. Super

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 3:50 pm

        Hey Shan thanks dear… 🙂 🙂

    10. little princess on September 9, 2016 9:28 am

      Awesome dude…but its a small chappy…try to update regularly…. Was missing ur ff…make them realise their love for each other… Wanna see their love story..
      Loved todays episode

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 3:54 pm

        Thank you little princess.. 🙂 🙂 yep soon they will realise their love…

    11. chanu on September 9, 2016 9:35 am

      awww.
      im waiting 4 dis epi. lv it as always
      swara also lv him bt ddn understand. ufff. plz them realize their lv 2 eo & show sm cute romance btw swasan.
      dnt make arjun as negative charachter.
      plz nxt epi asap.
      keep writing
      be happy always

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:07 pm

        chanu dear, thank you so much… they will realise soon… dnt wry about arjun yaar, he is just swara frnd…

    12. namanya on September 9, 2016 9:44 am

      Thanx fr postng wtng fr next epi

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:09 pm

        I need to say sorry for late …. sorry 🙁 🙁 will try to post asap… n thanks for the support dear…

    13. vijay on September 9, 2016 9:49 am

      good

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:10 pm

        thanks dr… 🙂 🙂

    14. anu on September 9, 2016 11:13 am

      awesome…. hey arjun taking about swara with sanskar only.. want him to know swara is married… please post next part soon.. dont be late

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:13 pm

        oops i didnt mention about that sorry… yeah he is talking about swara only… will try to post soon… thanks for commenting dr… 🙂 🙂

    15. Navi on September 9, 2016 11:15 am

      Superb loved it…. swasan nok joks and here sanskar and arjun talking abt same girl… i think swasan and arjun shud meet coincidentally once. Thn it wud b awesome.. since ur tired im leaving and tc rest.. today do u hav office???

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:18 pm

        ha ha ha… yeah both are talking about same girl… avanga meeting pathila no plan dr… yeah I’m hell tierd today ofc irukku… sunday tha kovil thiruvizha mudithu… so no rest… 🙁 🙁 thank you so much dr… 🙂 🙂

    16. Arshaanya on September 9, 2016 12:14 pm

      Its superb i luvd it… bt its too short ?
      Want to see little pidu sa romance btwn swasan plzz start it nw ?…
      Plz dun take so long n post next part ASAP

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:19 pm

        thanks yaar… 🙂 🙂 will try to give swasan romance frm nxt epi… I’m nt sure… 😀 😀

    17. s on September 9, 2016 12:14 pm

      nice..continue soon..tc..

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:19 pm

        Thank you dr… 🙂 🙂

    18. shiksha on September 9, 2016 12:25 pm

      Awesome wonderful cute

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:20 pm

        thanks shiksha.. 🙂 🙂

    19. maisha on September 9, 2016 12:50 pm

      awesome dear love it a lot

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:21 pm

        Thank you maisha… 🙂 🙂

    20. Rizna on September 9, 2016 2:24 pm

      Awesome

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:22 pm

        thanks dear… 🙂 🙂

    21. Sethooty on September 9, 2016 2:33 pm

      Hey…nive….you included janmashtami…and Shekhar, Dadi also…previous epi…loved it yaar…..first I thought sanskar will be radha…haha…but Dadi saved him from naughty sisters haha….I didn’t expect this much fun in last chapter….wow..swara in saree…slowly slowly sanskar developing some feelings towards her as a wife….
      And today’s epi….haha arjun and sanky meeting… Wat a coincidence… If arjun fell in love with her..? Omg…poor swara may be arjun is now angry with her….
      ……???????
      Short but sweet…chapter

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:27 pm

        hey sethu busy eh…? thanks dr .. 🙂 🙂 sanky in radha attire just imagine how horrible he is, so oly dadi saved him… ha ha ha…do you really want to brk arjun heart…? 😉 😉

      • Sethooty on September 9, 2016 9:26 pm

        Actually arjun is so cute you portrayed his character very well…next door boy.I don’t want to break his heart…..I think our sanky baba may misunderstand thier friendship haha….hopefully looking forward… Haha…
        Chocolate OS I think you and navi…both of u chocolate diggers…???

      • Sethooty on September 9, 2016 9:39 pm

        Wen I read that part …I just imagine him in rsdha attire haha……
        Nive try to upload this story in wattpad also…I created an account there…read few one shots…..

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:29 pm

        Sethu wen u r free read my OS- http://www.tellyupdates.com/chocolate-swasan-os/

      • Sethooty on September 9, 2016 9:23 pm

        What u wrote…OS. Will read…dr

      • Nive.. on September 15, 2016 11:14 am

        he he he… yeah dear… I’m choco lover… will try to create account in wattpad.. 🙂 🙂

    22. vyshu10 on September 9, 2016 3:28 pm

      awesome….plz upload soon. Want to read more swasan scenes

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:28 pm

        thanks vyshu… yep sure will gv more swasan scene… 😀 😀

    23. Simin on September 9, 2016 3:54 pm

      Its really good but plz give big ones next time

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:30 pm

        thanks dr… will try to gv big one frm nxt tym… 😀 😀

    24. xavia on September 9, 2016 3:56 pm

      Hey nice epi….bt plz post regularly….

      • Nive.. on September 9, 2016 4:31 pm

        thanks dear… 🙂 🙂 will try to be regular… but nt sure… sorry 🙂 🙂

    25. Swapna on September 9, 2016 6:58 pm

      Beautifully written !!!Plz do update more often. …Can’t get enough of swasan & wanting more :))))

      • Nive.. on September 15, 2016 11:11 am

        Thanks dr,,, 🙂 🙂

    26. mumpi on September 9, 2016 11:09 pm

      waited for u soo long…. i love ur ff.. nice one epi. sanky remembering his kiddo yup…:-) plz post nxt ASAP

      • Nive.. on September 15, 2016 11:11 am

        Thanks dr,,, 🙂 🙂

    27. cutiie on September 12, 2016 12:03 pm

      nice
      wen u will post next part?

      • Nive.. on September 15, 2016 11:13 am

        already posted yaar… below there is pingback for next epi… thank you.. 🙂 🙂

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