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SWASAN VIVAH:ATOOT RISHTA(EPISODE 2)

THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS GUYS……….
************NEXT MORNING**************
A beautiul house is shown and an old man is seen busy with lota of books and is looking all confused…….
Man:Hey ramji…………I again got stuck with the accounts …..now only one person can help me..
Just as he was about to call out another middle aged man came and closed his mouth…..
Man2:Arrey Munimji…….(Yes the first man is Munimji….. I hope u remember him as I had introduced him in the intro)What r u doing ?????U know she is in the temple and doesn’t like being disturbed…….
Munim: Sorry Maalik…….I forgot …….(Yes the man2 is Ram Bose)
Just then they hear a melodious voice of a girl from the temple ……..She is singing a bhajan and her devotion can be cleared made out from her voice……….hearing her everyone listening get engrossed in her beautiful voice……..
Both Ram and Munimji start walking to the temple…….
There they see two girls with their back facing them and one is doing the aarti and singing while other is accompanying her……..
Main aarti teri gaaon, ooo keshav kunj bihari………….
Main aarti teri gaaon, ooo keshav kunj bihari…………..
Main nit nit sheesh navau, ooo mohan krishna murari………..
Main nit nit sheesh navau, ooo mohan krishna murari………..
She turns around and goes near Ram and gives him aarti and takes his blessings and feeds him prasad with her hands….
Hai teri chavi anokhi ,aisi na duji dekhi………
Hai teri chavi anokhi ,aisi na duji dekhi………
Tujh sa na sundar koi, ooo more mukut dhari……
Tujh sa na sundar koi, ooo more mukut dhari……
Main aarti teri gaaon, ooo keshav kunj bihari………….
Then she goes near Munimji and gives him aarti and prasad and takes his blessings…..
Jo aaye sharan tihari vipada mit jaaye saari……..
Jo aaye sharan tihari vipada mit jaaye saari……..
Hum sab par kirpa rakhna, ooo jagat ke palanhaari…….
Hum sab par kirpa rakhna, ooo jagat ke palanhaari…….
Main aarti teri gaaon, ooo keshav kunj bihari………….
Main nit nit sheesh navau, ooo mohan krishna murari………..
Main aarti teri gaaon, ooo keshav kunj bihari………….
Then she comes to the other girl and feeds her the prasad and then kisses her forehead…….
Ram:(to the other girl)Chutki(Neeti) where is ur mom??????
(Yeah the other girl is our cute Neeti)
Neeti:Offo papa….. U know na that she won’t come down and I still don’t understand the reason …..why she behaves so rude with jiji……
Hearing this the girl’s eyes become moist and on seeing this Munimji tries to distract her……
Munim:Offo Maalik…….now stop this discussion and Shona beta ur Munim kaka really needs ur help …….pls help me with the accounts……(with a pout)
(All ur guesses were right …..The girl singing was our own Swara)
Swara:(smiles seeing his face)Don’t worry kaka…….Why fear when ur Shona is here and come lets go and fight with the accounts and I know that till now u would have messed up all the papers and booklets………
Seeing this Ram and Neeti burst out laughing…….
Neeti:Look kaka …..my jiji knows so much about u and ur habits……(in a dramatic tone)Itne bade ho gaye ho aur aapko accounts mein itni problem ho rahi hai………..[u have grown up and still ur having problems with accounts]
Munim:(holding Neeti’s ear)Look Shona who’s talking……the one who still struggles with simple maths is taunting me……….
Neeti:(dramatic)Aahhhh…..papa………jiji……pls save me………kaka…..pls leave me and I’m sorry…
Ram:(smiles at their behaviour)Sorry….chutki its the matter b/w u and ur kaka……I can’t interfere…..(looks at Swara)….Come Shona lets go……..let this tom and jerry pair be here only…
Swara:Ur right chacha ji…….They always fight and when we try to resolve they team up and then we have to bear the consequences………
Saying this both left the duo (Neeti n Munimji)to continue their tom n jerry fight……..
As soon as they left again Neeti started her drama…..
Neeti:(Fake cry)Aaaooowwww……….kaka pls na…….its really paining ……..sorry na…… U know na ki I like teasing u and now also I was teasing u but U took it seriously and holding holding my ears …..pls ……..
Seeing her cry (Actally faking)Munimji felt bad and left her ear and apologised…
Munim:(leaving her ear)Sorry Chutki……. Even I was just joking but………..
Neeti:(walks a bit and then turns to Munimji)Offo……. kaka u should have been used to my antics but as always u again failed to understand my plan ……….. Look my fake tears did their work and u left me………..
Munim:(realised that he was made fool)Chutki……….u r dead today……..U r becoming naughty day by day…….. If u continue this than I tell ur papa and ask him to fix ur marriage before Shona’s and tell tata bye bye to u …..then I’ll see whom u’ll trouble in ur in laws house……
Hearing this Neeti shows her tongue to Munimji and runs from there………
Neeti:Don’t worry kaka……….. Main aapki vetal hoon and vetal apne vikram ko chodkar kahin nahi jaata ……toh main bhi nahi jaaungi…..(and runs from there before she is again caught) [I’m ur vetal and how can vetal stay away from vikram….so I’m not going to leave u….]
Hearing this Munimji smiles and there while running Neeti bumps into a lady and the lady gets totally drenched in the flour which she was carrying ……. And seeing the person in such a state Neeti bursted out laughing make the person more angry……….
Neeti:(still laughing)Maa…… wow………..Now u look more beautiful in this way……
Yes the lady is Neeti’s mother Janki Bose.
Hearing this the lady gets more angry and holds Neeti’s ear and starts scolding her.
Janki:Chutki…..U are a kid or what??????The more I tell u to behave, the more u misbehave …… And tell me why u always do what u r told not to do????????
She keeps scolding Neeti while Neeti keeps changing her facial expressions and makes Janki more angry…… and she scolds her more and after finding no way out Neeti quietly escapes from there and runs to her room ……

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