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Swasan- An Unbreakable Alliance ( few Shots) shot 6

First of thank u to all of u fr the great response on my os……. I m nt mentioning any one because i don’t want to miss anyone….. But really thank u so much……….nw let’s go to the shot ……..it is a small one guys…….

As u all knw sanlakrag has decided something…….as they have planned next day Maheswaris reach gaddodia mansion to talk about swasan

Shekhar- welcome dp ji….welcome

Shekhar nd dp hugs each other…… Sanskar came nd takes blessings from mr.nd mrs.gaddodia…..

Ap- sumi….where is swara….

Sumi- she is in her room….i will call her

Sumi ask Ragini to bring swara…….swara comes nd takes blessings from dp,ap nd sujata nd sits beside ap

Dp- shekhar we have come here to talk about their marriage…. Sanskar is rready……nd i knw swara also likes sanskar ……m i right shekhar

Shekar- yesss …..yesss

Swara gets shocked by hearing about ” their marriage ” on the other hand sanlakrag were smiling seeing swara……because she is seeing everyone with wide open eyes….nd open mouth…..

Sumi- sanskar….. Why r u standing there?? Come sit with swara ….don’t be shy

Sanskar- no…no aunty…i m okkk

Sumi- call me maaa….nd its nt okkk….come…

Sanskar like a good boy goes nd sits with swara…..nd….closes her mouth by saying” close ur mouth jjaan, here r many fly……
Swara gets shocked by sanskars behavior nd open her eyes more widely which brings a big smile On sanskar face………

Dp- pandit ji…..we can’t wait ….please tell us a good mauhrat

Pandit- there is a very good maurat of marriage after one month….

Shekar- nd engagement…

Pandit ji- after 2 days….

Swara Shout’s in shock- what 2 days.. .

Sumi- swara…..what happen ahy r u shouting

swara- nothing mom( nd sits back)

Sumi- congrats ap ji

Ap- u to sumi ji

Swara in shock nd anger went to her room.. Sanlakrag were enjoying her state( hwww hw bad they r)

Ragini- I should go nd check her( nd goes fr there)

Ragini goes to swara’s room nd sees our angry swara is walking here nd there in the room……..throwing everything…… Murmuring something….

Swara- what is this…..kya haal bana diya hai tumne kamre ka( what u have done with this room) nd why u come here….ur in laws r going come with me…

Swara-( holds ragini)ragu,what is this how he can marry me?

Ragini-(iinterrupts) why ?? Why he can’t marry u???

Swara- he can marry me…..but….i can’t

Ragini- okkk….why u can’t marry him

Swara( innocently) dream boy

Ragini-( irritated) swara. …enough of this dream boy…….sanskar is a nice boy….forgot about this dream boy…

Swara- ( teasingly) ragu……sanskar is a nice boy

Ragini- yesss

Swara- okkk……( nd runs from there shouting mom…mom)

Ragini- swara….wait…. What hhappen

Swara- ( teasingly) ragu…u like sanskar na..,..

Ragini- yesss…..he is a gentleman

Swara- yess gentleman ( while making faces) ragu( teasingly) i m going to tell ma u like sanskar….. So….that she can fix ur marriage with him

Ragini- what…..swara..wait….i will kill u today

swara is running …….behind him Ragini is running nd bang….swara bumped with someone….. She was about to fall when two small arms held him………swara has closed her eyes due to fear……but ghe person who was holding him…….continuously keep staring him lovingly…… Swara open her eyes nd sees sanskar was holding him from waist….tightly…. They share a cute lovely eye lock which is disturbed by ragini( kabbab mein haddi)

Ragini- ahem….ahem……what u both r doing

Swasan compose themselves

Sanskar- woh…..bade papa forgots his phone…..i just came to take it…..

Ragini- swara…..r u okkk!!!

Swara who was standing besides sanskar…… Bending her eyes down- yess ragu….i stumbled…… Sanskar save me from falling

Ragini- okkkkk……but now u can leave ssanskar’s hand

Swara held sanskar’s hand when she was falling……swara immediately leave his hand

Sanskar smiles at him…..nd bids bye to them

SSwara- sanskar… Wait…i have to talk to u

Ragini-( teasingly) swara……let him go na…..tum baad mein bhi romance kar sakti ho

Swara gave him a death glare nd takes sanskar to the garden…… Nd glares him angrily

Sanskar- what???why r u looking at me like this

SSwara- u don’t knw……why u say yes fr this marriage???

Sanskar- hmmmm…….look

Swara-( interrupt’s) no….first listen to me… .i rejected u….nd…u…u accept me….why….look i m nt interested in u…….what u want haan….why r u doing this marriage????…..i knw i m beautiful………intelligent….. So…..

Sanskar-( interrupt him) look miss swara gaddodia…i m nt interested in uu…..i don’t want anything. ……..my parents likes u…..they want this marriage…. Nd i can’t hurt them………

So let me clear u…..i don’t like u….i m nt interested in u……..i don’t want to marry u……..what u think u r……..look at urself…….u r nt so beautiful…… What u think urself…..angle…..huuuu….u looks like a lizard……

Sanskar goes from there……. Swara gets shocked by his answer

swara-( in anger) hw dare he. …..he is nt interested in me…….he don’t like swara gaddodia……he dumbo…..call me lizard…. How can he…..jis ladki ke piche pura college para tha use isne lizard bola………nw see mr.sanskar maheswari……u will see real me

Recap- swara’s bold avtar…….

A small msg to all of u regarding my os….

Thank u to all u…..who liked it nd supported me………nd thank u to all of them also…..who didn’t liked it…..fr telling me ur views about it……………

Nw main thing. ……..someone has said hw a girl can be so characterless to love her own rapist……….

Its true no one can love her rapist……but it is true….yes it is true…. ….i will tell u hw but first of let me clear….. Swara never forgive him………usne bus uska pure heart dekha…..usne dekha ki usne yeh mistake apne senses mein nahi ki thi uski mistake maafi ke layak nahi hai …..par uski yeh mistake usse characterless nahi bana deti…………

Nw someone has also said………maine rape victim ka mazak bana diya…….no….maine nahi banaya……bana bhi nahi sakti………

U all has said…..i can’t understand how a rape victim feels……..i can feel it…..why…..tell u later…….

But before it….i just want to say i dont feel bad after reading ur comments….. I m nt hurt if u don’t like the story…….i m hurt…because hw can u say that…… maine rape victim ka mazak bana diya……..mein ek ladki ho kar aisa kaise kar sakti huin……apne bolne se pehle socha……….it hurts me most……

Hw can u say that its nt true…..a girl can’t marry her rapist……fr ur kind information a girl can marry a rapist according to law…..if here is a lawyer she can tell u…….if nt then take this small information………….. According to our law…….
Ek rrapist……agar…uski pehli mistake…… Ho ya…….usne mistake unintentionally ki ho toh use saza ke taur par do choices di jati hai…..first…..jail fine nd death…….second he have to marry that girl…………

Bt its nt the topic…….the topic is…..is it true or not…….its true…….huuuu……..my frnd married to his rapist……nw please don’t start…. Bashing my frnd i can’t tolerate it………..u all r saying i don’t know hw a rape victim feel…..i feel it the most….. i have seen her crying……i have seen her wounds….when she screams at night……when someone touches him how she scream i knw…………

She was rapped…. Only her parents nd few people knws about this……my parents don’t knw about this…….
she doesn’t fell fr my jiju…..i say him jiju nd proudly…… Why…..kunki woh sudhar gaye unhone mistake unintentionally……drunken state mein…..apne frnds ke baaton mein aakar ki but he rectify it……he come to my frnds house nd tell everything to her parents…… He was ready to go jail also…….but after seeing him….my frnds parents decided to end this matter ………they don’t forgive him………my frnd nd her parents took 6 month’s…….to knw him……to knw his goodness……….. Nd then they decided to marry both of them….

My frnd never forgive him fr his deeds……..but accepted hhim as his husband…….. Nw she has forgiven him……u all must be thinking why…..because nw they r blessed with a 1 year old cute princess…….. When she was born my jiju was crying bitterly………woh bus yahi keh rahe they maine kitna galat kiya iska ahsaas apni beti ko god mein lekar ho raha hai…….agar iske saath aisa kuch ho toh main mar jaunga…….unhone meri frnd ke parents se fir se maafi mangi……..

Ap logo mein se koi rapist se mila hai nahi na …..main mili huin…..milti huin….apne jijj se…..unke ghar jati huin…..unse miti huin….
SSocho mujhe kaisa lagta hoga yeh jante huye yeh wahi insaan hai jisne meri frnd ka rape kiya……dar lagta tha pehle…..kahi yeh mere saath kuch kar na de…..par dheere dheere samajh mein aa gya……..he is nt bad the situation was bad……..

Yeh toh ek example hai i can give thousands……… I m a researchers by hobby nt by profession……….school time se different topics par research karti huin …….after this incident…….i feel so restless…..why my frnd nd her parents frgive him……maine rape cases aur rapist par research ki apne bhaiya ke saath milkar…..after lots of research mujhe pata chala….50% cases mein rapist crime unintentionally karte hai……..unki situation unhe criminal…. Rapist banati hai….they r nt born criminal…………jab hamara law unhe maaf kar sakta hai toh swara kyun nahi……….

Maine toh os isi concept se likha ttha……..that a criminal also deserve a chance to rectify his mistake………i just want to say this……..

Rabia apii…main aapko farewell gift dena chahti thi….bt i just….. Look i ruined it……mere ek bhaiya they wo hamesha mujhse kehte the social or religious topic par kabhi baat mat karna……they will hurt u back……mein unki yeh baat bhul gayi thi…………

I m sry fr all this…………ignore this msg…………

Aliya123

Dream what u want to dream,go where u want to go,be what u want to be.Because u have only one life and only one chance to do all the thinks u want to do

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