SwaSan TS..Our Little Cupid..!..Part 1..by Kakali

Hiloooo Ev1. Here m presenting a TS. This idea has been doing dhina dhin dha in my mind from many days. Finally after gathering my all courage up, today thought to pen down it. Asking sorry in advance please pardon me if it’s not good enough to read. “Sorry for my grammatical mistakes and spelling errors”.

Now let’s move inside the story,

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Here we go,

A room was shown where a beautiful girl was snoring hugging the pillow tightly. Her face is shining in the sun rays and the billion dollar smile was kinda cheery on the cake.

After half an hour a middle aged man around 27-28 years old entered in the room silently. It seems like he was a thief and came for robbery. He moved towards the bed taking baby steps. His eyes twinkled seeing the girl sleeping soo beautifully with smile on her face.

Shrugging the all thoughts aside he concentrated to his works and slowly opened the drawer. “Papa! Stealing is a bad habit.” The sleeping beauty said in her sleep.

The man bited his tongue and turned around where he found the girl was standing on the bed keeping her both hands on waist. He passed a very sheepish smile showing all the 32(battisi).

“Areey, I was not stealing, main toh baas aiseee hi!” He said after getting a glare from that girl.

“Papa! Don’t lie. I know you was trying to steal my chocos.huh!” The girl said still glaring at him.

“Hufff! Chori pakdi gayi! Ammu, sorry beta! I was toh just”. The boy said with a sad face while the girl giggled.

He set in front of her with a sad face. Seeing his cute sa pout the girl show him a big DMS “Papa! Ye wala chahiye?”

No sooner he saw the choco he snatched it from her hand “Waa! Where you kept it? Huh! I was searching for this only.!” He was about to take a bite while realized what he said.

“Toh! I was right, you came here to steal my chocos”. The girl said “Like always”, rolling her eyes.!

After a pause both burst out into a great laughter. “Papa you are too much! You are more kiddo than me”. She said hugging her papa with a board smile.

“And my Ammmuuu knows me soo well”. He said kissing her cheek.

“Yooo, because m papa’s girl na”. She also said pecking his both cheeks.

To disturb the beautiful father-daughter moment someone knocked at the door “Sanskar beta! Ammu beta! Breakfast is ready!” One of a servants said.

“Toh princess Ammaya! Let’s get ready. Yummy yummy breakfast is waiting for us!” He said gulping his saliva.

“Bhukkad Maheswari!” Ammu chuckled watching her papa’s cute antics.

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After Half An Hour.

Both were descending steps. Ammaya was tightly holding Sanskar’s hand.

“Papa! Umm! You have cooked Gajar ka halwa naa? Yeiii! I knew it!” Ammaya jumped in happiness.

“Waa! My princess is soo smart!” He said with a wide grin.

“Of course! After all I’m papa’s girl.!” She said proudly.

Sanskar made her sit in his lap and feed her breakfast. “So how is it my princess?”

Ammaya acted like thinking,tapping her finger on nose tip “You are the best papa in this world”. She said pecking his cheeks once again.

“Awww! What a beautiful scene! Thank God I’m not late!!” Someone interrupted them from back.

“Aa geyi chudail aunty!” Ammaya whisperd near his ear making him chuckle.

“Good morning Sanskar! Good morning Ammu!” The girl wished them when she got a glare in return from Sanskar”I mean to say Ammaya!”

“That’s better Kavya!” Sanskar said wiping Ammaya’s face.

Kavya hurriedly went towards Ammaya” Today you are looking so cute baby! Just like a princess!”

“Chudail aunty,(Kavya widened her eyes) sorry I mean Kavya aunty, I always look cute and yoo because I’m papa’s princess!” Ammaya said sticking her tongue out.

Kavya murmured “Devil girl!”.

“Did you say something?” Sanskar asked eying her.

“Noo! No! Nothing.” Kavya stammered.

“Papa! Chalo now! We are getting late.” Ammaya said pulling him with her.

“Ha! Haa! Abhi ayii.” He said picking her up.

“Where are you both going?” Kavya asked not getting anything.

“We are going for fishing! Are you interested? Noo na! Weiii! I knew it.! Good bye Kavya aunty.” Ammaya said biding her bye.

Kavya made faces stamping her foot “This girl is chaitan ki khala, I don’t think I’m going to get Sanskar like this.” Her mind screamed.

“Papa! This chudail aunty irritates me a lot. I don’t like her at all.” Ammaya said while Sanskar adjusted her seat belt.

“And I don’t like anything which my princess doesn’t like.” Sanskar said passing a warm smile.

Ammaya smiled widely.

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@ Hospital.

“Doctor, any progress! I mean..!” Sanskar asked with a tensed face but was cut off by Doctor.

“Don’t worry Mr. Maheswari! Ammaya is progressing and after the operation she will get her eye sight back! Trust us. We are trying our best.” Doctor Das said with a setisfactionary smile checking Ammaya.

“Thank you soo much doctor!” Sanskar smiled with tears.

“Princess you will be fine soon!” He said caressing her hairs.

“I know papa! I will be soon able to watch you and mama’s photo. Waaa she might be beautiful na?” Ammaya said dreamingly.

Sanskar’s smile faded instantly,making his face pale “Let’s go princess”. His voice was stern this time and Ammaya could easily recognize.

“I’m sorry papa!” She said bowing her head down.

Sanskar looked at his princess who was keeping a cute pout. He couldn’t be angry on her for more time. She was too adorable to handle. “Hmm! I will forgive you if you give me a panipuri treat. Otherwise soch lo”. He said trying to lightened the moment.

“Hufff! kinni badi saza hai.(What a big punishment!). But anything for you.” She said dramatically.

“Dramebazz”. He said with smile.

“Thank for the compliment, after all m papa’s girl”. Both giggled on this statement.

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@ Panipuri Stall.

“Princess this phuskas are tasty na? Yummm!” Sanskar said gulping one Panipuri.

“Yummm papa this are so tasty”. Ammaya said but suddenly she started to cough.

“Ammmu, are you okk beta?” Sanskar panicked seeing his daughter coughing badly.

“Papa! Pani!” She said in between her coughs.

“Wait! Wait! Main abhi lata huu. Princess stay here I will bring the water bottle”. He said making a way towards his car which was parked a little far.

Ammaya was badly coughing, meanwhile a girl came to the same stall “Bhaiyaa! Thikhi wali dena”. She said checking her purse but suddenly saw Ammaya. Her heart pained seeing the cute girl coughing.

“Beta! Drink this water.!” She said handing over the bottle.

Ammaya tried to take the bottle but she was not being able to do so.

The girl made her drink water somehow”Beta are you okk now?” She said caressing her back.

Don’t know what happened to Ammaya, suddenly she started to touch the girl’s face with her small palms “Mumma!” Ammaya said snatching the breath of that girl.

Ammaya hugged her tight while the girl was left startled. She was still in shock not getting what to do.

Sanskar came running towards them and he took a sigh of relief seeing his daughter all fine but “who is that girl? Why Ammu is hugging her?” His mind asked those questions.

Shrugging them all aside he called out Ammaya “Princess”. Ammaya didn’t even look at him for once and was busy hugging that girl. She is literally weeping.

Sanskar was shocked because for the first time Ammaya didn’t respond him that to for a unknown girl. Urghh.

Her weeping sound stopped and the girl could feel the whole body weight on her, confirming that Ammaya fainted.

“Princess! Ammu! Oh God. What you have done with her? Haa! Look at her, she…….!!” He couldn’t complete and picked up Ammaya from the girl’s arm. Sanskar was angry on that girl, and his harsh words bring back the girl to reality.

“Whatt! What do you mean by what I have done? I just made her drink water. She was coughing.” The girl said angrily. “Let me see her! She might be fainted due to stress!” She tried to touch Ammaya but Sanskar was also adamant. “Stay away from her! I can handle”. He said and left her shocked.

Her eyes were moist showing some deep pain ” I miss you Anjuuu”. She whispered wiping her tears away.

“Arey, Swara how much time you will take yarrr!” Someone asked her from behind.

Swara turned around and looked at thw source of sound “Just a minute Ragini!” Swara said paying the vendor and looked at the direction from where Sanskar & Ammaya left.

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@ Maheswari Mansion.

Sanskar was trying to make Ammaya sleep but she was continuously calling her Mom.” I need Mumma! Please take me to her. I need Mumma!” She was crying with hiccups.

“Papa! I need Mumma! Please bring her to me.” She said still sobbing in his embrace.

“Don’t cry princess! Mom will come soon. Please don’t cry!” Sanskar said while wiping his own tears which were almost ready to flow from his eyes.

“Now sleep my princess.! You are good girl na.! Sleep!” Sanskar somehow made her sleep. He kissed her forehead with lot’s of love. His heart pained seeing the tear marks on her cute and chubby cheeks. “I’m so sorry princess for lieing you. But I don’t have any other option. You mom will never come back. She has gone far away from us, from where there is no return.! I’m sorry”. He cried watching his princess so pale.

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@ Study room.

Sanskar was staring a photo frame. He closed his eyes remembering something………………………..!!

To be continued..

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INTRODUCTION.

Sanskar Maheswari- A 28 years old man. One of the business men of Kolkata. He is a quiet funny and lovable person but only for his one and only daughter AMMAYA MAHESWARI. She is his breath. His whole life depends on her. For the rest of people he is a simple man who is having attitude, arrogance etc etc. He is possessive towards his daughter for some reason. His wife is no more.

Ammaya Maheswari- A 4 years old little fairy with full of naughtiness. Papa’s girl, loves her papa more than anything in this world. For some reason she lost her eye sight 3 years back but still she is full of life, doesn’t care much about her weakness as her superhero her papa is always with her. “I’m papa’s girl”<<—- This is her logo.

Kavya Singhania- Admirer of Sanskar as well as his wealth. Wants to marry him showing that she loves Ammaya and can give her mother's love. But Ammaya is least interested. Ammaya is more comfortable calling her CHUDAIL AUNTY(*As a chudail u all can imagine anyone. I'm imagining someone who is appropriate for chudail name. And my SwaSan lovers know that so well.)more than Kavya aunty. Sanskar never gave a damn to her as his all-time priority was his only princess! So Kavya was also fed up. (*Urghh let me push her to dry pond).

Ragini Bose- A 24 years old simple,cute Bengali girl. Swara's sister, married to Laksh Bose.

Swara Bose- A 25 years old simple Bengali girl. Having a past who still follows her as nightmares. She tries to enjoy her life till as far as she can. Believes in God "Faith is the strength,by which shattered world shall emerge into the light".

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The rest bio data will be revealed with time.!

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Waaa,finally I'm done with the intro and 1st part.! This is a very simple story and To be frank,m soo nervous. Dunno why?.! Hope it was good enough to read. Oh haa shall I continue? Gimme ur feedback.

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My Wattpad ID-Kakali_SSC.

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Thnk u sooo much for reading..!!
God bless you all.<3<3..!!

120 Comments
  1. Interesting.. Amaya is cute kid..

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Siyaaaaaa..!! Yooo, she is adorably cute..!! ;-*

  2. Mahisha

    wah! i guessed it correctly
    coming to the chapter its superb
    u chudail aunty stay away!!!!!
    post next part soon di

    1. Kakali

      Mahiiiiiii, waaaa you know me soo well..!! Thnk u sooo much dear.!! Chudail aunty stay away*giggle..!!
      Will post soon Siso..!! TC..!! ;-*

  3. Rockleon

    WowwwW amazing!!!

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Leonnnnn..!! ;-*

  4. Meera_s

    Awesome dear…loved sanskar and ammaya’s bonding…pls continue soon

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soooo much Meeraaaaaa.!! I’m glad you loved it..!! Will continue soon dear..!! ;-*

  5. Raina

    kkkaaaakkkkkkkkkkuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aww!!!!!!! the story is adorable dear! i was kinda shocked reading the author name. i didn’t expect that it was you! but really sooooooo good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    1. Raina

      yes! yes! i am very much crazy who didn’t even read the full title

    2. MAHIRA

      i did the same, it’s the cover of the FF with a beautifl little girl and Sanskar and Swasan as 1st part of titlle which got my attention *silly me*

    3. Kakali

      Rainaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, your comment almost shocked me to the eternity..!! Urghhh you didn’t expect me?huh! *wipe my tears..!!
      I can understand as you are reading my work for the 1st time..!!
      Thnk u sooo much dear..!!
      No, you aren’t crazy, actually I made some changes in the tittle..!! That’s why!! 😀 ;-*

  6. Seebu_s

    Kaku????what a cute story…i’m in love with ammaya?my cutepie??and i know whom u r imagining as chudali?very gud choice?and now coming to story…loved sanskar and ammaya’s bonding ..i’m really eager to know who is that girl in photo?*peeping my head but unfortunately my head got hit by wall* and why ammaya hugged swara?how will show swasan love story…so many things to reveal…pls post as soon as possible?orelse chudali will come to u n eat u?take care?

    1. Kakali

      Sebuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Di, thnk u sooo much..!! Yooo, u know who is actually chudail here..Waaa I hate chudail.!So it’s better if I start to write asap..!! What’s say..!! *hug..!! ;-*

  7. AnuAnn

    Awesome dear

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Anuuuuuuu..!! ;-*

  8. Rachna

    Awsm Dr… Update soon next part

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Rachuuuuuu..!! I will post soon dear..!! ;-*

  9. Phoniex

    when you wrote this dear 🙂

    1. Kakali

      Riaaaaaaaaa, I laughed reading your comment.. 😀 I wrote it yesterday itself dear..!! Thnk u sooo much..!! ;-*

  10. Nive

    Kaku Di!!!!!!!! ?bahutt accha meri didi….
    Tumara ff bahut sundar he…..with itna sundar characters……tum mera Pyaar meri Pyaari behan… ?????haha didi how was my hindi??? Bahutt accha ha na..tumari Pyaari behan signing off with so much Pyaar…….????

    ——-by my dil?????

    1. Kakali

      Nivuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu,thnk u soooo much for your special words dear.! It means a lot. waaa u know Hindi also?*hug.
      Hahhhaha it’s too cute, n u said soo well..!! TC my pyari behen..! ;-*

  11. Rosey

    It’s looking interesting and Ammya is so cute yaar but where is Swara and I love both daughter papa bonding
    And yes post A Dream sooner

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Roseyyyyy..!!,Swara will make her official entry in next part :D.
      Will post soon dear & A Dream also.! You have missed last episode.! Read that one first..!! ;-*

  12. Sweeta

    Awww???Awesome dear…….
    Sooo cute nd sweet story ????

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Sweetaaaa…!! ;-*

  13. Nice dear update soon

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Priyaaaaaaa..!! Next one is Iin the way..!! ;-*

  14. Simin

    Ohooo my kaku is back to action haaa
    Loved it completely
    Chudail har jagah aa jaati hai huhhhh

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Simmmuuuuuuu..!! Chudail ki kaami toh hai neei SwaSan lovers ki zindagi main.!?;-*

  15. IME

    Awesome dii
    It’s super amazing
    Loved it
    Waise remember me??
    I am Don
    Do u remember me??

    1. Kakali

      Ishiiiiiiii, my little don! How can I even dare to forget you? haa? Nei! Never..!! *hug..!!
      Thnk u soooo much Ishiiii..!! Love u choti..!! ;-*

  16. Divyanshri

    this was truly a surprise diiiiii….. awesome story….

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Divyuuuuuuuu..!! ;-*

  17. Nagamanasa

    Kakuuu intersting concept dear…continue soon..

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Manuuuuuuuuu Dii..!! ;-*

  18. Wow loved it

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Romaisaaaaaaa..!! ;-*

  19. Love_forever

    Kakali di!!
    Where are you nowadays*pout pout
    U know I mishhd u sooo much!!
    And haan..plsh post this part soon haan!!
    Love you!❤

    1. Kakali

      Ladoooooooooo,*hug..!!
      I was here only with ev1 Ishuuuuu..!! Duno where u was.! Missed you too..!! Love u toooo Ladoo..!!
      Thnk u sooo much, will post soon..! ;-*

  20. kakali awesome story loveing it amaya is to cute update next part soon cant wait to read further parts..

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Anuuuuuuu..!! Heheh! Next one is already updated dear,you can read..!! ;-*

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