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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan: A trip that changed my life OS
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Swasan: A trip that changed my life OS

shanayasharmaBy shanayasharmaJuly 2, 201645 Comments11 Mins Read
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Hey guys it’s me shanaya… Back with another os just for u..???

SWARA’S POV:
It is a wonderful day. Standing at the foothills of the himalayas with ur college mates after graduation is just awesome. I am here in shimla with the best batch of friends and my beloved sister ragini.. ?..everyone was busy in clicking selfies… Though I wasn’t interested… But I observed a pair of eyes staring at me…
Wait!!!!
Isn’t

That SANSKAR???
Let me introduce him to u…
He is the most hottest boy in the college and he is very good looking…
I had a crush on him from day one… And he had a crush on me too…all I could say was hi to him on the first day of college but we soon came out the awkwardness and started talking to each other but after a year people started teasing us and things got awkward again….and ever since I have not spoken a word….
And he was here staring at me….
We reached the hotel and ragini and her boyfriend Laksh went to check in…
Everyone were in pairs…. Except a few girls who got into one room….so it was only me and sanskar left out… We decided to take two rooms each….
10 mins later….
Laksh and ragini came back with a wierd expression…
I:what’s wrong??? Why do u look as if u saw some ghost at the reception???
Ragini: its worse than that… Actually….
I: Yeah what??? Tell fast…
Ragini: Actually all the rooms are full… There is only one room and that too a….
I: a what???
Ragini: a honeymoon suite…and the people on whose name the room is booked only they have to stay in the room according to the rules…. So u and…
Sanskar and me shout together: me and her/him???? NEVER…
Ragini and Laksh in unison: It’s just for two days….
I say fine with a grumpy face and so does sanskar….
In the restaurant me and sanskar couldn’t eat…
Laksh: y r u nervous??? It isn’t ur first night or something…
I and sanskar together scream at him.: SHUT UP !!!
At last the moment comes when everyone retires for the day…
We both drag ourselves to the room…. We reach the door and open the door… We remove our shoes and place our luggage near the door… We look into each others face and break into a run….
I climb into the bed while he stares at me…
Sanskar ‘s POV :
I look at her and see her jumping on the bed decorated with rose petals
I: hey… I want to sleep on the bed!!!!
Swara: no no no…I am going to sleep on the bed… U sleep on the couch… Go…
I: u sleep on the couch…. I’ll sleep on the bed…
Swara: I came first… Finders keeper s….
She says and smirks….
I sigh in defeat but decide to give it a last shot….
I: let’s decide by rock paper scissors…
She immediately agrees…
The game starts and I…..
LOSE…..
She does a small victory dance…..
I smile at her cuteness….
She was the perfect girl for me… She was MY GIRL!!!!
She takes her night clothes and goes to the washroom to change… While I order a sandwich for myself…
10 mins later…
There was a knock at the door and I went to take my sandwich from the waiter… Just then swara came out with her night pajamas…. She was looking like an angel…. The waiter coughed to bring me into reality….
Waiter: sir ur wife is beautiful….
Me: wife no she is not my wife….
Waiter: then ur fiancé???
Me: no
Waiter: then ur gf???
Me: no no no and better keep ur work to urself….
And I slam the door on his face…
I look at swara who was smiling at me…
I walk and sit on the bed while she frowns…
Swara: hey I am supposed to sleep there…
Me: That’s just for sleeping… Let me at least eat peacefully…
Swara: Ok…let’s watch TV…
Me: Kk

Swara’s POV :
I switch on the TV and to my utter shock the song ang laga de re plays with video… Me and sanky look at each other in pure shock…
I immediately change the channel and song after song is romantic…
I switch off the tv in anger while sanky calls the Reception and complains… That said they can’t do anything…..
So we end up lying in the bed…. Suddenly he pops up with an idea…
Sanskar: how about playing truth or dare???
I: good idea… Let’s start….
Sanskar: but with a twist… If u don’t complete the date then u strip…. Or if u don’t want to say the truth u have to strip agree???
I:what???? No!!!!
Sanskar: getting scared that u will lose Haan???
I: no…. Kk let’s start…
Third person’s POV :
The game starts…
Sw: its my chance…. Ok choose truth or dare???
Sa: truth…
Sw: scared to take my date Haan?? Kk leave… My question is “do u love any girl?? ”
Sa: yes….
Swara s eyes start to tear up but she controls herself… She turns the bottle… And it lands on her..
Sa: haha my chance choose truth or dare???
Sw: I choose dare..
Sa: Ok then kiss me on the lips right now…
she was taken aback but slowly removed her jacket.
( what u guys thought?)
They continue playing and at one point removes his shirt. Swara keeps staring at his perfectly toned abs…
He catches her staring…

Sa: staring is bad…
Sw: I wasn’t staring Ok??
[10:42pm, 01/07/2016] Ritika……: Swara s POV:
Ok he catches me staring at him and I refuse…
We decided to sleep and he goes to sleep on the couch…
After around an hour I saw him shivering from top to bottom…. I felt bad for him and walked to him…
I: go and sleep in the bed. U look cold…
Sa: Wat abt u???
I: I’ll manage…
He walked to the bed and got into the comforter… Whereas I slept on the cold couch…
After an hour I felt a tap on my shoulder… U guys he realised I was shivering like he’ll….he told me to sleep with him in the bed… I was about to protest…
But he crashed his lips on mine….
It was the most heavenly feeling for me… Our lips moved in perfect sync… And I was enjoying it… The kids was passionate and long… At last we withdrew ourselves to breathe… He looked into my eyes and spoke…
Sanskar: swara I have always had a crush on u from a very long time… But today spending this might with u had made me realise my feelings…. I really am very bad at proposing… Since I have not proposed anyone… ? so let me be direct…. I LOVE You swara will u be my girl???
I spoke…
I: no…
He looked shocked…
Sanskar :I am sorry… If u don’t feel comfortable I’ll sleep somewhere else..
I keep a finger on his lips and speak…
I: I don’t want to be ur girl but I want u to be my man…
I give the most sweetest smile to him… While he pulls me into a bone crushing hug…we cuddle and sleep together….
Next day:
Sunlight disturbed my eyes and I woke up to find mysel in sanskars arms and people looking at us as I’d they felt that something impossible had happenend…. I get up and my sister pulls me into a hug….
Ragini: I am so happy this is happening….
I smile and wake him up… He wants up and is shocked to find all our college mates surrounding the bed and he starts blushing…
God!!! He looks so cute…
We got ready and visited various places of interest… At the end of the day… We went to a road side dhaba… Only me and him as the rest of them went back to the hotel…
I saw some goons staring at me…. They rise from their seat and came towards me… Sanky stood up to protect me… He fought violently with them…. One of them was about to attack him from the back…. I put myself forward to protect my man…. And everything went blank…

Sanskar s POV:
I turned around and saw that the hon had stabbed swara and he ran away… I took her into my arms to the hospital…. I called ragini and informed her about shona….
Everyone reached there and ragini burst out crying…Laksh consoled her while I consoled myself…
The doctor came out and said she was fine and the cut was not deep…
I rush in and kissed her forehead and she smiles weakly….
A week passed by and she was alright… Everyone went back only me, swara, ragini and Laksh stayed back for swara to get Alright…we informed her parents and told that we will handle it… So they didn’t come… Laksh was my own brother so we made a reason that we brothers wanted to spend time together….
I reached the room to find it in a mess…
Third person’s POV :
Sanky reached the room to find out messy… He saw swara curled up into the corner crying… He went to her and hugged her… She pushed him back and said ‘ get the he’ll out of my life ‘… He looked shocked… And asked her what happened… She behaved rudely with him and he lost his patience…
Sa: what’s ur problem??? U want me to get out of ur life na??? Y don’t u get out yourself…
Sw: y u r scared to leave???
Sa:enough
He drags swara and pushes her out of the door… She hits the stabbed area to a cabinet and she hisses in pain…. He melts a bit but composes himself and shuts the door….
She pulls herself on her feet with a lot of difficulty and reaches ragini s room… She knocks and as ragini opens the door she falls unconscious….
Ragini and Laksh call the doctor to dress the wound…
The doctor says that she should be kept away from any more harm as this time she can go into coma…that night… Swara slowly gets up and goes from the place with her luggage…
[11:04pm, 01/07/2016] Ritika……: Sanskar s POV:
How can she say it’s over??? Just like that without my mistake…. I know I treated her very badly… But I can’t control my anger…

I hear a mobile ringing and pick it up…. I immediately recognise it but I don’t soak it was Kavitha my sis uttara s friend who is obsessed with me… I hear her talk
Kavitha: swara good job u left my sanky now he is safe and in my hands…. I did a really good job by threatening u to leave sanskar or I’ll kill him and to save him u left ur love….how sad… But now sanky is mine…. The other day I sent the goons to finish u but u got saved… But now ur sanky is not with u…hahaha!!!
I scream at her ?
U idiotic lady how dare u do that to my swara… How dare u separate us both… Now see what I will do to u!!!
Kavitha: no sanskar listen to me….
I: there is nothing left to listen bye…
I rush to meet swara and I watch her standing at the bus stop to catch the bus to Delhi… I walk to her and she doesn’t notice me… And she was crying very badly… I call out her name and she turns…
I: u left me for a crazy girl??? But I won’t leave u coz I am crazy for u!!!!
She runs to me and his me tightly and cries…
I am sorry sanky…I won’t do it again… I am really sorry…. She cries…I kiss her forehead and take her back to the hotel…. We all leave to Delhi the next morning… I take swara home and tell my parents I want to marry her… My parents agreed instantly as they knew swara from long as she and ragini used to come to talk to Laksh….and swara s parents agree too…
We got married and that day night swara told me…
Sw: u r my life and I never knew love existed until u came…..
Third person’s POV :
After 5 years….
“swara..where r u??? I am getting late for office… ”
Sanskar screams….
” I am here and will u do me a favour… ” asks swara panting for breath as she came running….
“drop tara at school na…I have to go to the boutique….”
“Ok….tara!!!! Baby come fast “screams sanskar….
“papa come let’s go” replies a cute little girl who is swasan s daughter….
Family shares a group hug and sanskar hugs both his angels …
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So guys long time na??? I didn’t post… But here is this story…. I know this is not great but bear it for this time…. I love u guys?? ??????
And please do comment…. It means a lot to me….???

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    45 Comments

    1. Ameera on July 2, 2016 1:05 am

      Who is ritika? Its awesome

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 6:49 am

        Thanks ameera….I don’t know how my sisters name appeared in the middle…. Oh gosh I am gonna so kill her….lots of love… Tc

    2. kaynat khan on July 2, 2016 2:53 am

      it was awesome

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 6:51 am

        Thank u so much….. Lots of love

    3. Rizna on July 2, 2016 4:16 am

      Interesting and awesome

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 6:52 am

        Hey rizna thanks for the comment lots of love…

    4. Rosey on July 2, 2016 4:53 am

      Sweet n lovely

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 6:53 am

        Hey rosey…thanks for the comment… Lots of love…

    5. shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 6:56 am

      Guys I am extremely sorry for that date and time and that ritika thing there…. Actually I wrote the whole os in WhatsApp and copied it to clipboard and pasted it here….unfortunately I wrote it in my sis s mobile since my mobile s battery was down and so this mistake….. I am extremely sorry guys….

    6. tamanna on July 2, 2016 7:21 am

      Nice…

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 8:36 pm

        Thank u tamanna…. Lots of love

    7. Nita D on July 2, 2016 8:16 am

      Its awesome….

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 8:37 pm

        Hey nita thanks for the comment… Lots of love

    8. SHAN on July 2, 2016 8:32 am

      Its awesome….. No need of sry dr… its natural….. Shanaya u wrote 2 ffs right pls dr continue it….. I forgot its name….. But seriously i waited a long for that ffs….. I love ur ffs… pls update it dr…..

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 8:38 pm

        Hey shan thanks a lot but I have not written any ff s… It might be some other shanaya…. Anyway lots of love

    9. chandu on July 2, 2016 9:04 am

      awesome!!!

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 8:39 pm

        Hey chandu thanks a lot….lots of love…

    10. Sree on July 2, 2016 9:51 am

      Awesome os. It was veryyyy sweet. ???

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 8:40 pm

        Hey sree!!!!! How are u????thanks a lot for the comment… Lots of love

      • Sree on July 2, 2016 10:30 pm

        I am fine dear. How r u???

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 10:51 pm

        I am fine…. The thing is school is getting more and more hectic…

      • Sree on July 2, 2016 10:52 pm

        Same here?. Btw which std r u in??
        Am 11th

      • shanayasharma on July 3, 2016 1:19 pm

        I am in 10th… 😉

    11. Pramudi on July 2, 2016 10:27 am

      Awesome os shanaya… This is great. ?
      Loved it a lot.

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 8:42 pm

        Hey pramudi…. Thanks a lot dr…. Glad u liked it…. Lots of love

    12. Laddoo on July 2, 2016 10:36 am

      Amazing ya….too good….

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 8:48 pm

        Hey laddoo… Thanks for the comment yaar…. Lots of love

    13. Aanya on July 2, 2016 10:53 am

      Awesome and loved it…..?

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 8:50 pm

        Thank u aanya…. Lots of love

    14. deeksha on July 2, 2016 11:32 am

      Nice dear….

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 8:50 pm

        Thanks deeksha…. Lots of love….

    15. Shagun on July 2, 2016 12:41 pm

      Awesome

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 8:52 pm

        Hey shagun….thanks…. Lots of love

    16. HeVa on July 2, 2016 12:41 pm

      Amazing dear….the way of propoding to swara is best….

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 8:54 pm

        Hey heva thanks for the comment…. I am so glad u liked it….

    17. AnuAnn on July 2, 2016 12:45 pm

      Nice dear

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 9:01 pm

        Thank u anuann… Lots of love

    18. RUPA on July 2, 2016 2:12 pm

      Aswm

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 9:02 pm

        Thanks Rupa….lots of love

    19. Soujanya on July 2, 2016 2:33 pm

      awesome………

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 9:03 pm

        Hey soujanya…. Thanks a lot…. Lots of love

    20. tani on July 2, 2016 3:16 pm

      very cute story

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 9:04 pm

        Hey tani thanks a lot…. Lots of love

    21. s on July 2, 2016 5:00 pm

      nyc

      • shanayasharma on July 2, 2016 10:52 pm

        Thanks a lot…. Lots of love

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