Hello every1 …. Wish u a very happy Navmi, Dussehra and Moharram ….
And pls don’t bash me without reading the whole story that it has some similarity with other ff …. I already told that it is not same … And coming to love triangle that is quite a common topic I guess ….. Yeah i agree it was in another ff too but the idea of adaptation is different…. Have patience then u will find that I m using concept of love triangle indifferently ….
So let’s start with the next chapter ….
Previous episode: Here
All episodes:Here
Recap: Sanskar’s pov
Sanskar was thinking abt how a single day changed everything …
Sanskar and Swara loved each other however they never had any proper confession or proposal but they as well as everyone else knew that what they meant for each other ….
Everything was going well their friendship gradually blossomed in the fruitful flower of love ….
One day Dhruv entered their lives …. Dhruv was a very sensitive person he had no parents, he lived with his maternal uncle n aunt …. They were not having their own kids so they loved him a lot….
But absence of parents can’t b fulfilled …. He became quite sensitive or he was not that so strong to bear ups and downs of life …..
Dhruv was Sanskar’s friend since pg …. So Sanskar very well knew his nature ….
Sanskar was very caring towards him ….
In tenth standard he joined Swasan’s school as it was a well known school of the city ….
Writers view –
He was a bit attracted towards Swara …. Everyone else knew abt Swasan’s love for eo but Dhruv thought that they r just friends …. He started falling for her according to him but it was not love just a mere attraction which gradually became strong with the flow if time ….
On the other hand SWASAN’s love for each other became more strong with every passing second …. They both were mature… There were no silly fights between them on terms of jealousy ….. ( I hope you are getting my point…I mean…. They fought but just for fun. )
Now they were in 12th standard …… Their final examinations were coming near …. A week ago Farewell party …. All friends i.e Kunal, Megha, Ipshita, Dhruv, Swara, Sanskar nd Abhi (sorry if someone is missing but I don’t remember any other person …. U just think Swasan :s group)
decided to go out for a small party they all went for a day out in city and in evening they arrived at a restaurant …..
All were very happy and some where sad as now they will get separated as everyone has their own subjects …. But they decided to enjoy their last school days …..
Here Dhruv had planed something else for this evening ….
Hehe now beginning of teaser…. So I think my intelligent readers must have guessed wat m gonna write ….
*FLASHBACK STARTS*
All were having good inside when Dhruv called Swara outside in hotel’s garden …. Swara thought he might want to talk something so she followed him …
5minutes passed Sanskar thought wat is taking Swara so much tym to come back …. He was busy thinking when Kunal by mistake split his glass of juice and some of it got splashed on Sanskar
Kunal: Ohhh …. Sry Sanskar I was just holding it and by mistake it got spilt …
Sanskar: it’s oky yar … U guys carry on m just coming in a minute ….
Sanskar stood up and asked a waiter the way to washroom ….
He was going when the sight in front of him shocked him …. He just got fixed at his place not able to react ….
Sanskar’s POV
I just got shocked when I saw Dhruv kneeling down before Swara as if he was going to propose her ….
I just wanted it to b my imagination But it was all real
Dhruv was proposing Swara
Dhruv: Swara I love u from the day I joined this school …. I know m doing this so suddenly …. But I want u in my life but not by any force. ….
(Swara was standing numb she was not able to react ….. )
Dhruv : I love u Swara… I really do … I can’t stay without u …. Will u accept me
(Listen guys this is all wat Sanskar is hearing
Pls don’t get confused )
I was not able to listen further so I just left the place without anyone’s notice … Tears were forming in my eyes ….
I locked my self in washroom to calm myself which was nearly impossible r8 now ….
************ *To be Continued* *********
Sry for late update guys but was busy with lot many things…. This was the fourteenth episode …. Hope u liked it waise I have started a new ss with Tvisha … – Kaun tujhe …. Do read it if u get tym ….
135 Comments
Awsm one…
Sry if I have not cmnted on pervious one.
Now a days I am becoming irresponsible…
If I had cmnted then give me back my sry.
Thnkew so much Anniya dii … Don’t b sorry cause u commented on previous episode. … Aur sorry toh main nhi doongi …. Cause Maine liya hi nhi tha…
Wow loved it plz don’t seperate Swasan ❤️❤️??
Thnkew dr? …. Sorry I can’t grant ur wish ….. Cause till now they r never united … From the begining they r separated …. Hehe sry was just kidding …
Wow it’s nice part N I loved it idea it’s kinda love triangle but something different N I understood one thing in this sanky misunderstood swara without watching whole scene over there N waiting 4 next update ?
Thnkew Bhavana … Glad u liked it … Keep reading Dr a lot is waiting to b discovered …. Hope ur guesses go correct ….
Hmm…??
nice..
Thnkew dr?
Cutieee !!! after reading d word love triangle… i had a sudden urge to eat BINGO MAD ANGLE… huhuhuhu*watery mouth…
Loved d chappy dear… it’s just a start … u have to give us more n more n more… okkk…
Thnk u… ;-*
Hahaha …. Kakali dii next tym make sure u begin reading my post with all kinds of eatables assembled near u …. M seriously laughing ….. Waise even I want to eat it … Lol … Please mere saath bhi share krna … And Thnkew so much for ur cute comment
huhhhh !!! all kind of eatable things??
like really ??
but kuch aur hoo na hoo mere nails hamesha mera sath dete hai… whenever n wherever u want just cheww dem… huhuhuhu…
awwww !!! i’ll also share with u.. aftetall u r my cutiee naa…*pulling ur cheeks… ;-*
Hehe keep biting ur nails dii … Thnkew for sharing …. Ummm it was yummy *licking mymy fingers* …..
Pata hai mere cheeks chubby nhi hain … But you knowknow meri bestie ke hain and I always pull her cheeks
Haan Di poocho …. Wat happenedhappened?
Happened #
Awesome dr….. Loved it…. sanskar is very impatient without hearing anything he went…..
Thnkew SHAN Di. .. ??? and a big thnk u cause of u only I was able to post Kaun Tujhe …. God knows at that tym my mind was not working …
Sanskar dont u know meaning of word patience.Have some patience and listen completely rather than assuming things on your own.
Awwww …. Simin u shud teach him in my ff he is really Duffer ?? …. Impatient fellow
No words.. I loved it Shreeyu. Bt y sanky heard half convo? Very bad.. eagerly waiting for next. Post soon dear..
Thnkew Swarmayi …. Happy ending jaldi post Karna …. I started reading today only nd got a 100 volt wala shock … Hehe ? Keep reading
Nyc bt shreeyu in starting u said d reason is dffrnt wen i told u abt dat ff…
Bt u gave d same reason n in party sanky slapped her n blmd thinking dhruv taking her name bt he was taking other girls name… dis alrdy i ve told u bt u said no d reason is dffrnt..
bt lets c how u’l show it dffrntly…?
Sry Arshaanya I didn’t got ur point … But whatever I got is that u r asking abt the similarity … r8 ?
Oky den sorry for disappointing u Dr but as I said there will b a love triangle but the way of presenting it would b different …. I truly agree with ur perspective …. Actually the slapping scene created all this mess … Don’t know y I wrote that but now I can’t emit or change it …. So all I can say is keep reading I’ll surely show u something different …
Actually I like this quality of urs u always talk to the point other than beating round the bush … Thnkew so much dr …. For creating a awareness in me when I m getting off track …love u loads dr
Ya luking forward to ur ff…
N sorry if u ve ever hurt u…
Love u too ??
Are Arshaanya u didn’t hurt me … Chalo now leave this topic
nice yar 🙂
Thnkew Rabi … Ab I’ll call Rabi … Hope y don’t mind
Thnkew Rabi … Ab I’ll call Rabi … Hope you don’t mind
Loved it shreeyu…..!!!!!!! Awesome…..!!!!!! Now clear this mu fast and unite them….!!!!!!!
Thnkew Deeksha … Sure will do it soon
Nice
Thnkew dr?
Nice
Thnk u Dr
Amazing.. its incredible
Thnkew Tvisha ? …. Lov u dr
Nice
Thnk u Dr
Awesome
Thnkew dr?
Dont worry shreeyu we all will teach him a good lesson for troubling our shona
Sure Simin … First u have to teach him a lesson in my dream I mean Kakali Di’s ff
Di I’m katti with u..u aren’t giving me summary only
Are shrinju …. I told u na m busy. .. Chalo koi nhi kal de doongi pakka … Oky but do remind me if I forget
Ye lo Yaad di la diya ??summary
So here is yr summary sweety … Bahut jyada short hai
I don’t know tumne kahan tak pdha but m telling from award function .. Oky?
So in award function or business party … Swara met with Aditya singhania … Then they danced after that Swasan conversation where Sanskar apologized to Swara for slapping her but again said that in such a way that it again hurted Swara …. Swara called him a stranger and many more things after that Swara went outside where she met Kunal he consoled her … Fir party khatam ho gyi …. Nhi wait utte beech Laksh became suspicious on Swasan … He interogated them … Fir Sanskar’s POV in last Episode and now this one ….
Chalo I was hardly able to write this …. And ask me if any queries ..
awesome… bt clear d misunderstanding plz… waiting for nxt update
Thnkew Dr … Will do it soon
Now what will Sanskar dooooooooo plz dnt make him to sacrifice 🙁
Hehe mirna … It already happened dear … It is a flash back … Sry for disappointing u … Keep reading
Awesome dear…loved it??
Nd i thnk may b aftr seeing to dhruv proposing swara he thought to sacrifice his love coz as u said dhruv is not hvng his parents..soo
Well u continue soonn..ergly waitng fr da nxt part
Love u????
Yaa correct. .. Thnkew dr?
Ya i hope kakali will put something in which i set his brains right
Yaa? let’s c what happens
Hai shreeyu Di now only I finished reading the FF from the 1st episode. Nice FF like the plot very much and please don’t separate swasan
Thnkew so much Mariyajab …
Hey dear you’re the author of one FF na, I’m so sorry I forgot the name. Pls tell me
SWASAN FF I Hate u & I Hate Myself Because I Still Love U
please do read
Hey I loved that FF & I have commented also..
N pls read read my ff “tujhse hi” n “kismat connection”
Fab chappy
Thnkew dr?
nice
Thnkew dr?
bachu…this is cheating…..aise kaise rokh di? aage kya hua?
Hehe …. Woh toh Di aapko …. Next update mein pata chal jayega
Shreyuuu !!!!!!
Kya hua ?
Shreyuu !!! plzzz don’t mind haa … i wanted too ask u a question from many days … but couldn’t.. still thinking,,u will not break ur ties with me na?? i mean if u feel hurt … will u answer me ? i talk wid u as a sister in a funny way .. but now jokes apart i really wanna ask my question? can i ask u?
Hmmmmm !!! wooo .. wooo actually … wooo u’ll not get angry na?
okkkkkk*taking deep breath
From where u belong? i mean ftom which city??*yeeeiii finally i asked….huffffff !!!!
i don’t knw…wt u talked but you 2 have definitely raised curiousity in me
Kakali Di for such a small thing y would I get angry …. U seriously raised NY heartbeat …. Chalo that u have to guess from where I belong …. Ummmm ya m dropping a hint ….
1) from city of ____
Let’s check ur Gk
2) The city from where Yamuna Express Way starts for Greater Noida
Chalo jldi socho
Waaaa !!! Cutiee !! GK is my fav subject… i always got 100 out of 100 in this sub… n my teachers r also proud of me..they advice me to learn more..
N ummmm i know from which city u belong..it’s soo easy .. isme GK jaisi koi baat hi nahi.. yeh mere bayee hath ke index finger ka kaam hai… now enough of my paak paak..
1-The city of love..
2- it’s obviously PARIS to my HOME TOWN..
see i know everything…
Shreeyu didi…mene..I have seen taj mahal??..I’ve seen it
Vyshu Di , Kakali Di KO aapka hi comment mila tha …. Mere se discussion krne ke liye …. Enjoy so many replies to ur comment …. And I hope u understood the matter … If not let me explain …
Kakali Di wanted to ask a question from me that from which city I belong but she was hesistating …. Samjhin aapaap?
ha samjhagayi
*samjhi….toh tum agra se ho?
Anyway … jokes apart u r from Up,Agra…
rit?
Haan par yeh Kakali Di ne kya bola … M quite confused mujhe Paris kahan pahuncha diya … Waise aap kahan se ho u told mdme Tue state I guess … But now I forgot
Sry for typing errors actually is site par comment krne ke tym I don’t know how spelling mistakes ho jati hain … Mdme tue- me the ###
huuaahhh haaa haaa hhaaaa !!! now it’s my turn…
so let’s check ur GK..
m from——-
leeme give u hint …
1>Where Maa Kamakhya temple is sitiated—–
2>Where India’s small island is Situated ——
3>Main water source i mean main river is Brahma’s son Brahmaputra——
Hufffff !!! now it’s enough… tell me from where i belong…!!!!
Not so sure but may b east … Cause of Brahmaputra river … And after searching abt the temple on Google baba? I got Guwhati as answer …. Is it correct ?
Aur Kakali Di aapne mujhe Paris kahan pahuncha diya …. Ur answer is wrong….. Ummmm 0 marks for gk …. ???
acha….gk ke students…..i m from city of destiny.
Kakali…..aap guwhati se ho? Par small island is making me confused
Yes from Agra
shreeyu….i think kakali meant paris (city of love) of india
Yeahhh !!! dear m from Assam,,Guwahati….
i was just joking… whyyyy ?? whats wrong in Paris?
u should thank me .. huhhhhh !!!*don’t talk to me…
Yeah Vyshu m from Guwahati…
n small island means … there is a temple UMANANDA which is situated in between Brahmaputra river … it’s called be smallest island here or may b India…. soo i said like that …
N world’s biggest Island MAJULI is also here in Assam… huhuhuhu…
R u from Visakhapattanam dear??
Oh city of destiny is Visakhapatnam may b … M I r8 ….
Aur kaku Di now what happened to u … We will talk with u … Hehe
Achha Agra city of love Han correct Vyshu Di … But mostly it is citycity of taj …. Achha kisi nene Taj Mahal dekha hai kya ?
And do avoid my spelling mistakes or jab nhi koi word do bar ho .m. Actually automatically do bar ho jata hai I don’t know
Mene..I’ve seen taj mahal??
yup…i m frm visakhapatnam. City of love bulate hai..kyun ki taj is a symbol of love. I didn’t visit agra till now bt soon will
Han shrinjal I know that u have visited Taj Mahal… U told me remember?
Naaahhh !!! i didn’t … but soon gonna visit … *after retairing from my job…
*pinky promise to mtself
Which job Di ? ?
Buddhu !!!
i mean nw m 17.. after retaining means almost 15 years later…
Hmmmm matlabbbbbbb………. ….. ….. ….b…b… … … b… b… Tumhari Shaddi mai*bhagoooooooo
Awwww …. Chalo m indeed buddhu….
Ek minute wat you said meri shaadi mein Achha Didi meri shaadi krane mein kyon lag gyingyin * Running behind u … Us se pehle toh aapki hogi …. Ummmm ohhh now I got it u r so eager to get married …. Achha abhi 17 ke ho 18 hote hi kr loge ….
Achha don’t forget to invite me … Waise nhi bhi Karo toh just tell me I’ll automatically come without invitation …. * Ab toh pakke se bhaaagooo Kakali Di is catching me
Wahhhhh re wahhhhh !!! today’s generation ,,,*shooking head..
meri bhi maatii maari gayi thi jo tumse ye sab baat ki… bekar mei thakwa diya huhhhh !!!
chaloo koi nai jii thoda sa wait hii loose ho jayegaa…* smart brain.
Anyway i’ll miss u Cutiee !!!
Haha Achha hi main nayi generation hoon than wat u r …. Aap kya 19th century ki ho … Huh?
Waise m not much younger than u toh we r kinda of same generation …. Waise aapko admission kitne years(age) mein hua tha??? Cause u r 17 nd u have completed school also
?❔❔❔??
Shreyuuu !! it’s been 2 years i have completed School…
nw m a Higher Secondary 2nd year student..
n about admission… what did u say? i didn’t understand… *confuse
Are don’t get confuse woh I was asking that have u completed ur 12th standard but now I got it … And coming to admission one I thought that u have completed ur 12th so asked that at wat age u got admission … As u r just seventeen and u have completed ur boards. (12)
Dont worry shreeyu hum sab bullet proof jackets pehen ke kakali ki wedding attend karenge hehehehe
Haaaa !!! haaaa !! Simin tum bhi ekk hi khet ki muuli hoo… huhhh !!!
Anyway Simin can i ask u 2 questions…
1>what r u doing in study?
2>From where you belong?
If wannna answer … then say…
if not … then also say.. *pagal
Haha Simin kaku ki shaadi mein bullet proof jackets aisa kyon?
Loved it… Bohot sara
Awwww thnkew soumya dii .. Achha next part kab post karoge …. M waiting * Pout …
Achha ek baat baataun Kakali Di is getting married …. Hehe ?????