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Home»Fan Fiction»A SwaSan SS: Innocent Souls by Manasvi (Part 7)
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A SwaSan SS: Innocent Souls by Manasvi (Part 7)

MABy MAApril 29, 2017Updated:July 31, 201745 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys.. First of all sorry for being late+not replying to your comments.. Sorry!! I will reply soon?? Love you all.. And thnk you for liking my story and commenting.. And silent readers, thnk you to you also..? Do tell me if there is any mistake.. Love you all??
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Scene-1 continues from SwaHil conversation..
Nikhil: Yes.. My mom gave me a name “Nikhil”.. So call me that only..
Swara: Yes.. Yes.. Mr. Nikhil Mehrotara.. I know that..
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Scene-2
******Mumbai Police Station******
A jeep stopped in front of the police station.. A man stepped out from the jeep.. He went in and all the police officers present there stood up and saluted him.. He removed his glasses? and signed them to sit and work.. Two officers were following him.. He went in the cabin and sat on the chair.. The took off his cap and placed it on the table.. The table had a card named “AKASH SOMANI”.. The officers also left.. (imagine Zain Imam)
After that, Sanskar entered in the PS(Police Station).. All of the officers stood again and saluted him.. He looked at them and signed one from them to come near him.. The officer went near him..
Sanskar: Where is Sir??

Officer: Sir, he is in the cabin..
Sanskar: Ok.. You may do your work now..
The officer left..
Sanskar went in the room.. He saluted Akash..
Sanskar: (Saluting him) Jai Hind!! Sir..
Akash: Jai Hind!! (saluting him back)
Akash sat back.. Sanskar too took a chair.. He was about to sit when
Akash: Don’t sit until you are asked to..
Sanskar widened his eyes..
Sanskar: But.. (interrupted by Akash)

Akash: No.. If you don’t want to call me Bhai, hen face this.. How many times I told you not to call me sir.. Instead of that you can call me Bhai na?? Don’t you think me as your brother?? ??
Sanskar: It is nothing like that Bhai!!
Akash: Then call me Bhai only..
Akash hugged Sanskar.. Sanskar also hugged him back..

Akash: (while hugging him) you are my devil kiddo’s best friend.. So you will always be my brother..
Sanskar smiles hearing this.. They both parted the hug..
Akash: Sanskar see this file.. This case.. Try to solve it soon..
Sanskar: Hmm.. Ya..
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Scene-3:-
A dark room is shown.. A girl is standing there.. She says loudly, “I will take my revenge from you Mr… I will pakka take my revenge.. No one will be able to save you from me, from R.M.. Saying so she laughs loudly and evilly..”
Suddenly she feels that someone is pulling her ears.. She says, ”Sorry, Sorry Maa.. We were just doing fun.. Aah…aahh… It’s hurting Maa..” She sees a girl and a boy rolling on the floor due to laughing..??

Maa: Rabiaaaaaaaaaaaa!! You are getting too much naughty nowadays!! (pulling her ears more)
Rabia: I’m sorry na Maa!! Even I’m also R.M. na..
Maa: There is much difference between you and R.M..
Saying she leaves Rabia and goes from there.. Rabia was rubbing her ears and then went towards those two people who were rolling on the floor.. Rabia goes and pulls their ears with her both hands..
Both: Aahh…. Aahh.. Rabi.. Leave us..

Boy: Rabi leave me.. I’m elder than you..
Rabia: ??? elder.. Huh.. You didn’t even saved me from Maa..
Girl: Rabi.. You are tou like my sweet younger sis na.. How can you do this with me?? Leave my ear!!
Rabia: Huh.. (Leaves their ears) (with attitude) Jaao Maaf kiya.. (I forgave you!!)
Boy and girl: Love you so much Rabi..??

Rabia: Love you too Swara and Nik..?? (Chalega Rabu dii.. Mujhe thnk u nahi chahiye??)
Swara: Even I love you both a lot.. ??
Three of them hugged each other..
Hey guys, don’t get confused with their age.. Here is the information of their age..
Swara:- 22 years
Sanskar:- 23 years
Akash:- 24 years
Nikhil:- 22 years
Rabia:- 21 years

Scene-4:-
A man is standing at the edge of a cliff.. Blood is oozing from his arms, some corners of face, from the lips.. He is crying.. Another man is holding a gun in front of him.. His gun was pointed towards the man..
Man: Plzz leave me sir.. I’m really sorry.. I promise I will never so that again.. I’m sorry sir..
Another Man: No ways.. Do you really think like that I will forgive you..
Man: Sir, plz don’t do this.. My wife is suffering from cancer and my children.. Sir plz don’t do this..

Another man: (his eyes were getting bloodshot red) You should have thought about this before.. (shouts dangerously) No one can save you from me now.. (shouts loudly yet dangerously like a maniac) No one can save you from AKASH SOMANI… No one..
Saying this, he shoots the man not once but thrice mercilessly..
The person falls down from the cliff..
After that Akash calls someone..

On call:

Akash: Work should be done..
Precap: I’m thinking of SwaSan first meet.. What’s your opinion??
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Rabuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu diiiii!! How was your entry ??.. Haha.. I know you loved it.. ??
What I want to tell you is that I love you dherrrrrrrrrrrrrrr saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrraaaaaaaa????????

Thnk you for reading this part, everyone..!!!
Do pour your comments and let me know your reviews.. Criticism is always welcome.. I hope I’m not disappointing anyone from you..
Love you all..!!

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45 Comments

  1. rabia on April 29, 2017 11:43 pm

    Oooooooo mmmmmm ggggggg manaaaaaaaaaaaa (me doing halpy wala dance) seriouslly i loved this surprizeee muaaahhh love u dhairrrrrr saraaaa for thiss.. ???? i never thought that u will do thiss ??? thankuuu sooo muchh and epi was awesomeee ??? love u januuuu ???

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 7:46 pm

      Thnk you Rabu dii..
      Abhi toh bohut kuchh baaki hai?
      Love you too??

  2. a on April 30, 2017 12:08 am

    nice

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 7:47 pm

      Thnks..

  3. fenil on April 30, 2017 12:28 am

    Nice chppy
    hehe Rabia dii your entry is fantabulous made by Manasvi dii .

    Dear Rabia Dii , i m reader of your OS but not commenting Sorry for that.
    Can’t wait for next.

    • rabia on April 30, 2017 11:34 am

      Noo worries dear ???

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 7:50 pm

      Thnks Fenil bhai..
      And dont call me dii..
      Somu dii told me..

  4. Sus on April 30, 2017 12:43 am

    nyc

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 7:59 pm

      Thnks..

  5. Aarushi_99 on April 30, 2017 3:15 am

    Loveed it!!
    But ittu si confusion hai.. is Akash good or bad..??
    He is Swara’s brother and a police officer but in the last scene he was looking like a maniac villian..??
    Anyways, the chapter was superb!
    Update soon, take care!!??

    • Manasvi on April 30, 2017 1:53 pm

      Everything will unfold dheeere dheeeere???
      Thnk you..?

  6. Mickey on April 30, 2017 7:13 am

    Soooo finally..let me drink water..ufff..I read this part tooo..
    I will never be late as I have to read all parts in one gooo….
    Amazing!!! amazing!!! awesome!!???
    Manu kitni jaldi post karti hoo..???
    Ok bye…
    Waiting for next surprise…
    Take care
    Love you???????
    Stay blessed… keep smiling ????

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 8:01 pm

      Thnk you so much dii..??

  7. Tamil on April 30, 2017 9:40 am

    Awesome dear

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 8:02 pm

      Thnks dii..

  8. Anniya on April 30, 2017 10:10 am

    Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it’s simply amazing and API’s entry ????

    • rabia on April 30, 2017 11:34 am

      Bindass thi naa ?????

    • Anniya on April 30, 2017 6:17 pm

      Haha totally

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 8:03 pm

      Thnks Anni dii☺

  9. mica on April 30, 2017 10:34 am

    Manuuuuuuuuuuu… Rabia here? huh! let me pull her hair

    • rabia on April 30, 2017 11:33 am

      Micuuuuu i will pushh u in the gutter ???

    • Manasvi on April 30, 2017 11:57 am

      Dont worry Micu dii..
      I will save you from falling in the gutter??

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 8:05 pm

      Thnks Micu dii..

  10. anu on April 30, 2017 11:08 am

    awesome continue

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 8:05 pm

      Thnks anu..

  11. scooby on April 30, 2017 11:13 am

    Good ?

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 8:06 pm

      Thnks navi dii?

  12. Seebu_s on April 30, 2017 11:54 am

    awesome dear

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 10:39 pm

      Thnks dii.. ?

  13. swathi_ on April 30, 2017 12:46 pm

    pls continue

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 10:40 pm

      Thnks candy..

  14. veena on April 30, 2017 2:42 pm

    nice

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 10:43 pm

      Thnks dii.. ?

  15. Vanisha on April 30, 2017 5:15 pm

    Awesome dear

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 10:42 pm

      Thnks dii.. ?

  16. renu on April 30, 2017 10:16 pm

    nice

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 10:43 pm

      Thnks dii.. ?

  17. gayathri.visu on May 1, 2017 7:10 am

    Wow! Amazing…. Is Akash good or bad?? Update next part soon.

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 10:44 pm

      Thnks dii.. ?

  18. meera_s on May 1, 2017 1:25 pm

    nice

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 10:45 pm

      Thnks dii.. ?

  19. vyshu10 on May 1, 2017 5:58 pm

    superb

    • Manasvi on May 2, 2017 10:45 pm

      Thnks dii.. ?

  20. Arshaanya on May 4, 2017 12:14 am

    Manu akash is swaraz brother??
    I dun rmbr dats y askin…

  21. Neha-17 on May 10, 2017 1:16 am

    Great..post the next..I just loved this update..wow!

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