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Home»Fan Fiction»A SwaSan SS: Innocent Souls by Manasvi (Part 1)
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A SwaSan SS: Innocent Souls by Manasvi (Part 1)

MABy MAApril 13, 2017Updated:July 31, 201744 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey guys.. How are you all??
I’m back!!!
So as I was having my exams, I’m having tomorrow also.. I didn’t completed my ffs.. So I’m starting a new ss “Innocent souls”.. I hope to see the same response I got for my other incomplete works!!

So here we go with the introductory episode.. It will only show their info and their background..
A big villa is shown.. So lets peep in the villa.. Its written “Maheshwari Villa”.. A big hall is shown.. A lady is serving the food at the dining table.. A man in his mid fifties and a man in his mid twenties were eating.. Just then the lady says, “Laksh, where is Sanskar??”
Laksh: I guess he is sleeping till now, mom!!
Sujata: Hee mara khatu shyam!! Yeh chore ko mai kaai Karun!! (oh my god!! What should I do with this boy!!)
Laksh: Wait mom… Lemme wake him up!!
Saying this Laksh went upstairs..
He opened the room door.. The room was a tidy one with sky blue walls and MSD’s posters.. There was a bed on which someone was sleeping covering himself fully, even the face!!!
Laksh went near to the bed and smirked.. He took the jug kept there and SPLASH!!!
(But wait wait.. Why is Laksh wet??)
Laksh was all wet, because someone from behind emptied the whole bucket on him!!!??
The boy: ??Someone was thinking to wake me up??
Laksh: ? Sanskar this isn’t done na.. I’m your big bro.. I was worrying for you.. I thought its your first day and you should be ready.. So I came to wake u up..
Sanskar: Hmm.. Is it?? (sarcastically)
Laksh: Okay.. Okay.. But lemme see you.. You are looking handsome huh.. Girls are gonna drool over you..
Sanskar: I know that bro?
Sanskar was wearing a white shirt.. A red blazer and a red formal pant.. And a red tie too..
They both went down.. Sanskar hugged Sujata and then his father..
Sanskar: So peeps.. I m going.. Bye..
Sujata: Eat something in canteen.. And concentrate on your… (interrupted by Sanskar)
Sanskar: (Folding his hands) okay okay mom.. Lemme go first..
Sujata: K.. Bye..
Scene shifts to some other mansion:
(as u all know I love peeping at others mansion, let us peep in together?)
It was “Somani Mansion”.. The mansion was a beautiful one with a big lawn around it..
A couple were sitting downstairs.. They were chatting when a girl encircled her hands around the man’s neck..
The man: Good morning Shona.. Ready huh??
Shona aka Swara: Yeah dad..
The woman: Even I m here..
Swara: Ohh mom.. Good morning..
The woman: He got a hug and me?? ??
Swara hugs her and says: Ohh mom.. You are the sweetest mom in the world!!
The woman: Thats so sweet of you!! And yeah, eat something in the canteen okay..
Swara: Okay mom..
Swara was wearing a white shirt, a navy blue blazer and a formal navy blue pant beneath it.. She was wearing a navy blue tie too.. Her hairs were tied up in a high pony tail..
She took her bag and went with his father..
Character sketch :-
The Maheshwaris’
Sanskar Maheshwari: A sweet, charming, handsome boy? a happy go lucky boy..
Laksh Maheshwari: Big bro of Sanskar..☺ love him a lot.. Sanskar’s best frnd☺
Sujata & Ram Prasad Maheshwari: SanLak’s parents…
The Somanis’
Swara Somani: A cute girl.. She is a reserved type person whenever outside..
Shekhar & Janki Somani: Swara’s parents..
**Somani in other word are Maheshwaris only.. I mean they also belong to the Maheshwari society**
So howz it??
Do comment.. And lemme know your reviews..

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44 Comments

  1. a on April 14, 2017 12:02 am

    nice..

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 8:44 am

      Thanks dear☺☺

  2. Vanisha on April 14, 2017 12:02 am

    Nice…continue soon

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 8:51 am

      Thnks Vanisha dii☺

  3. Sus on April 14, 2017 12:31 am

    Nyc dear

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 8:52 am

      Thnks dear☺

  4. Shiksha on April 14, 2017 12:48 am

    Interesting.. Continue.. Also try to continue other ff,if it’s possible.. How was ur exams…

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 8:49 am

      Thnks dii…
      My exams will end on 18..
      I will surely post after that!!
      And about my previous ff, I literally messed it up.. So i will start it with a new and different start taking the same concept.. A new version type☺

    • Shiksha on April 15, 2017 10:47 am

      OK dr

  5. rabia on April 14, 2017 3:10 am

    Arreyyy wahhh mana januu aiii i willl surely tell ayyan ???? andd peeping is a bad habit mana ??? andd introo was good ?? postt soon anddd i think your previous story is also remaining naa? ??? isko bhi pura karo kaaam choorrr ???

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 8:55 am

      Yeah yeah tell my bf that I m back!! So that I can hug him!!?? and Rabu dii.. Why were you peeping with me in the mansion??? and thnks.. I will post after 18 of april.. As my exams will finish on that day only.. Aur mein kaamchor nahi hun dii?

    • rabia on April 14, 2017 9:07 am

      Arrey nazar rakhni parti hay na choti behn per k kr kiya rahe hay ???? andd kaamchor tou mai nay waisay he bola tha ???

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 10:15 pm

      ??Shabash dii.. Mujhpe achhi tarah se nazar rakho.. Ho sake toh ekk do choco bhi de do..?
      Aur kaamchor toh mein bachpan se hun.. Bas aapko aaj pata chala?

  6. Soujanya on April 14, 2017 7:51 am

    Nice…

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 10:17 pm

      Thnks Soujanya..

  7. IME on April 14, 2017 9:37 am

    AWESOME MANUUUUU
    mast che
    jakas che yrr
    pn phelene no ts to complete kar
    “Thnks ishu dii..
    Ane hun jaldi post kari daish..
    Iss duniya mein suspense naam ki bhi koi cheez koti hai dosto!!!
    I guess you remember??
    Bye..”
    Aa kidu hatu pan amna sudhi post nathi karu huh
    jaldi post ke
    love you
    take care
    byee

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 10:18 pm

      Thnks ishu dii..
      Ane tamne haju sudhi e ts yaad chhe??

    • IME on April 15, 2017 9:14 am

      haaa aa pan koi puchvani vaat che
      a ts complete kr samji
      nai to Don ………………………

  8. anu on April 14, 2017 10:00 am

    awesome update soon

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 10:19 pm

      Thnks dear☺

  9. Stg on April 14, 2017 10:02 am

    awesome ☺ and post ur other FF too.

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 10:20 pm

      Thnks dear..
      Will try to☺

  10. scooby on April 14, 2017 11:34 am

    Good ??

    • Nive on April 14, 2017 2:29 pm

      Hi thala,akka,sisy,navi,scooty,pangu?
      How are you???

    • scooby on April 15, 2017 5:32 pm

      Hey cuti????
      Wr have u gone????
      Hw ru??

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 10:20 pm

      Thnks dii☺

  11. kat on April 14, 2017 11:38 am

    awesome dear☺

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 10:21 pm

      Thnks

  12. SNY on April 14, 2017 1:44 pm

    Awesome dr…….

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 10:21 pm

      Thnks dii☺

  13. Saeedah on April 14, 2017 1:51 pm

    Awwwwwww
    I loved it.
    So interesting, continue soon if possible.
    🙂

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 10:22 pm

      Thnk u so much..
      I will continue after 18 april..

  14. Nive on April 14, 2017 2:25 pm

    Hey manasvi how are you??? Seriously it was fabulous little sister… I am waiting…… For next episode and till then bye..??????
    — varun fan as like you ???

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 10:23 pm

      Didu!!! I m fine..
      Howz you??
      Thnks a ton..
      Bye?

  15. gayathri.visu on April 14, 2017 2:45 pm

    Interesting… Plz continue…

    • Manasvi on April 14, 2017 10:24 pm

      Thnks dii..☺

  16. Mickey on April 15, 2017 5:13 pm

    Superb!!!!!!!??manu my sweetie it’s awesome….
    Loved it?? and love you too??
    Post next part soon…
    Take care sweetie ?

    • Manasvi on April 15, 2017 7:20 pm

      Aww!! Thnks..
      Love you <3..?

  17. vyshu10 on April 16, 2017 6:28 pm

    nice…welcome back manu

    • Manasvi on April 17, 2017 10:16 am

      thnks didu 🙂

  18. ritu on April 19, 2017 10:54 am

    awesome…just now read…loved it

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 12:52 pm

      Thnks ritu.. 🙂

  19. Shrinjal on April 19, 2017 1:21 pm

    Awesome.. ???

    • Manasvi on April 19, 2017 1:58 pm

      Thnk u soo much Shri..
      Love u :-*

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