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swasan ss ‘Doorie…Sahi Jaaye Naa…’ (chapter 12)

Hi guys serena here…with the next part..
PRESENT..
Kav_san marriage preparation was on full swing…everything was arranged by swara personally…only she knew how hard it was for her to do all these …afterall who would like to prepare mandap for her own husbands’s marriage..
Sanskaar was seeing it from upstairs..he was having tears in his eyes..today is his engagement

Sanskaar’s pov
Why swara…why u did this….wasnt my love enough for u…or i failed to love u fully….ok u dont trust kavya but didnt u trusted me that m only urs….I will never betray u…didnt u have this much beleif on me…that u tried ro kill that innocent girl.(innocent girl my foot?) not even this..u alao tried to kill bua…how can u do this…u knew that i love my bua moat…she is like a mother figure for me..
Sanskaar’s inner voice- but do u really think that swara could do something like this..
Sanskaar- firstly i doubted but how can i deny it when bua herself said this that u tried to kill both of them…how could u do this swara…how could u try to kill my mother like figure….how can u take someone’s life just for ur mere jealousy…how can u change so much swara.. Where is that swara who can never even think of harming someone..I loved u but what u did…I can’t deny that after this also I love u..(now in anger) but what u have done..after that u don’t deserve me n u have to bear the punishment but one truth is this also that u may forget the love between us but I can’t forget it…..though m not saying it but m feeling it that ab yeh DOORIE ……SAHI JAYE NA… I m missing u swara…i m missing my love …i m missing my wife…. I missing u badly swara but i cant forgive u n now u r not the part of my life I HATE U SWARA (saying this his eyes welled up with tears..he was watching swara from upstairs)

Downstairs..
Swara was doing all the prep. With heavy heart ..
Swara to worker- bhaiyaa keep those flowers there…no no kaka not like this , make the pair of blue n white curtains….kamla tai have u talked to the caterers, I don’t want any problem in function…
Swara was panicking n was moving here n there instructing workers .Meanwhile laksh came there….
Laksh-( holding swara’s from shoulder to control her from panicking) bhabhi bhabhi bhabhi..calm down..first of all plz eat something..u haven’t ate anything since morning….n u r continuously working ..u will become weak…n u na that doctor have told u to take proper meal n rest…
As soon as sanskaar heard about swara working without eating he got worried n when he heard about doctor he got more worried….he was about to ran to downstairs when suddenly he saw something which made him shocked ….n he got glued on his path..
A person is carrying swara in his arms…n swara is laughing n hitting him playfully..sanskaar went near to them n started to listen their talks but from a safe distance so that no one can see him…
Person- laksh swara will not agree like this..
Swara- kabeer….how r u her..
Inturepputed by kabeer as he lifted her in his arms
{guys u can imagine mishkant verma in place of kabeer}
((this is the part which sanskaar saw))
Swara- (scared n shout)- kabeeeeerrrrrr…what r u doing…put me down u idiot(beating him playfully) I will fall down…
Kabeer- (laughing) no way m not going to put u down…first u have to eat ur meal…then only I will think of putting u down…or else u have to be like this…op waise bhi madam, aap jaisi khubsoorat ladki ko uthaane me mujhe koi problem nhi h..(winks at her)
Swara- (scared n close her eyes) kabeer plz na..sweetu na..cutie na..plz put me down..or else I will fall down then what will happen to..
Kabeer-(interrupting) floor….
Swara-what??

Kabeer_( with fake concern or dramatically) oh god I forgot to think about floor….oh god if u will fall then what will happen to floor…no no I cant take risk…n just think if u will fall on this bechara floor, n if this bechara floor die then these maheshwaris will kill me…oh god I don’t wanna die soon…abhi toh meri girlfriend bhi nhi hai…abhi toh mujhe shaadi bhi karni hai..bacche bhi karne hai….pota poti ki shakal bhi dekhni hai…unke pets ki bhi shakal dekhni hai..
Both swalak made a weird face on his last line….
Kabeer- what??why u guys are looking at me like this….(fake scared) don’t tell me u r feeling like vomiting..(he immediately put swara down then looks at laksh suspiciously) wait wait wait..laksh I can think about swara…but why r u feeling to vomit…(making scared face) don’t tell me that u r PREGNANT..
Both laksh n swara widen their eyes..swara gave him unbelievable look whereas laksh gave him angry look..
Laksh- are u mad!!!! Abbey gadhe PREGNANT HONE KE LIYE SHAADI HONA BHI ZAROORI H..
Swara gave an unbelievable look to both..
Swara- (widing her eyes) ARE U BOTH INSANE..like seriously guys…(turning to laksh) laksh I can think of kabeer…but what had happened to u…now m having doubt on u both…(giving suspicious look) laksh , r u sure u r my devar… not devrani…n kabeer r u sure u r going to make girlfriend in future …not any boyfriend..
Both laksh n kabber gave n angry look to swara n swara laughs out loud n started to run n both kabeer n laksh started to chase her laughing with her…after some distance swara felt a sharp pain in her stomach..n seeing her trio laksh, kabeer n sanskaar got worried..
Swara-ahhhh..
Both laksh n kabeer ran towards her..sanskaar also ran but stopped at a distance seeing laksh n kabeer but still he was hell worried..
Laksh, sanskaar, kabeer- bhabhi/ swara/ shone
Laksh-(reaching near her n in concern n anger) bhabhi what happened…are u okay…how many times I have been warned u not to run like this….doctor has strictly prohibited u from doing these stunts..
Kabeer-(supporting laksh n mockingly) no no laksh…don’t tell anything to her…she is toh female akshay kumar na…she likes to do all this stunt…(now angry ) it was my mistake only… I shouldn’t have put her down

Saying this kabeer again took her in his arms…
swara-(got scared by sudden action) kabeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr put me down u idiot,,
laksh-(controlling his laugh) that’s right kabeer bhai…. bhabhi this is ur punishment..bhai take her to her room like this only..
then trio is that swara,kabeer,laksh moved to swara’s room whereas swara was hitting kabeer playfully n kabeer n laksh laughing loudly..
Sanskaar who was seeing this from far was burning in jealousy….he was not liking kabeer’s n swara’s closeness….his hand turned into fist n he was burning in anger…he angrily went to his room n there he saw his n swara’s wedding photo in which both r smiling from heart …he remembered his old days with her..
DOORIE…DOORIE…..DOORIE…
SAHI JAAYE NAA……
SAHI JAYE NAAA…
In swara’s room
Kabeer n laksh dropped swara in her room n went to do some work..swara was smiling on their antics..she looked towards her side table for water…suddenly her eyes fell on sanskaar’s pic which was placed on her side table…she ttok that pic n caress it lovingly….
DOORIE…DOORIE…DOORIE….
SAHI JAAYE NAA…
SAHI JAAYE NAA..
Sanskaar remembers his romance with swara…how he used to tease her..
KHAMOSHIYAAN YE.. SEH NA SAKUU…
AWAAZ DE KE MUJHE TU..DEJA SUKUN..
Swara remembered sanskaar’s kitchen romance..
KHAMOSHIYAAN YE.. SEH NA SAKUU…
AWAAZ DE KE MUJHE TU..DEJA SUKUN..
Both remembered there happy times together..
DOORIE…DOORIE…
SAHI JAAYE NAA…
SAHI JAAYE NAA..
ADHOORA HUN MAIN AB ..TERE BINA…
ADHOORA MERI ZINDGAANI REH JAAYEGI..
DOORIE…DOORIE…
SAHI JAAYE NAA…
SAHI JAAYE NAA..

Sanskaar remembered swara’s betrayal n swara remembered sanskaar’s lack of trust n his slap..both get sad…both of their eyes got filled with tears
Swasan imagines each other beside themselves…sanskaar held swara’s hand n kissed her palms affectionaly then he reached to her forehead to kiss her..whereas swara hugged sanskaar tightly not letting him go..she went to his forehead to kiss him but as soon as both tried to kiss each other…their shadows got disappear n then the reality hits them that they were imagining..
HAR RAAH ME TU..AAYE NAZAR..
KATTA NHI AB AKELE TANHA SAFAR…
HAR RAAH ME TU..AAYE NAZAR..
KATTA NHI AB AKELE TANHA SAFAR…
DOORIE…DOORIE…
SAHI JAAYE NAA…
SAHI JAAYE NAA..
SAHI JAAYE NAA…

Swara- (crying) sanskaar ab yeh DOORIE..
Snskaar-(also crying) ….SAHI JAAYE NA…
Both sat on floor crying bitterly..
PRECAP- LOTS OF FUN ( DON’T MISS)
HEY EVERYONE…HOW R U…I KNOW M VERYYYYYYY LATE..BUT U KNOW NA 15 AUGUST PREPARATION N ALL…N YUP GUYS…SEE HOW STUPID I M…I SHOULD WISH U ALL FIRST…
SO….
HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY TO ALL OF U…
BE FREE,BE INDEPENDENT N BE SUPER DUPER HAPPY…

Serena

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