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Swasan Silent Love Story – OS

IsabelBy IsabelJune 20, 2016108 Comments9 Mins Read
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Hi, umm this is my first ff, I hope it’s good and you all like it.. Pardon me for the mistakes and this is based on third person’s
p.o.v

Sanskar Maheshwari is a 23yr old man who is our Hero, he is brother of Laksh
Swara Gadodia is a 20yr old middle class girl, Heroine, Ragini’s younger sister, Laksh’s bestie and she loves her family more than her own self
Laksh Maheshwari is a 20yr old play boy who is Sankar’s brother and Swara’s bestie
Ragini Gadodia is 23yr old, who reads Swara easily

A girl is shown wearing long light pink skirt with striped black and white long sleeved t-shirt in open hair, she looks simply beautiful. And a boy beside her in casuals is arguing with her.
Girl: Laksh, I can’t do it
(The boy is of course our handsome Laksh)
Laksh: Swara, if you’re my bestie, trust me and do it
(The girl is our beautiful and simple heroine Swara)
Swara: listen Lucky, I’m scared, and I’m not doing it ever, please try and understand
Laksh: (now really annoyed) Swara, you are loving my bro for more than 3 yrs and you are afraid just to send a ‘’Hi’’ through phone, you are silly. I’m asking you to send a ‘’Hi’’ so that you can be friends, for how many days, no years are you going to love him silently?
Swara: (feeling exhausted and defeated) Ok, fine, just for your words, I’ll try my level best and send a ‘’Hi”, if anything goes wrong, I swear I’ll kill you and it’s time for me to go home so bye
Laksh: (smiling, feeling happy) Wow, that’s great, you’re not just trying, YOU ARE sending a ‘’Hi’’ for sure, bye, see you tomorrow
Ending this argument Laksh left and Swara was too leaving for home.

At Swara’s place
As soon as Swara reached home, she freshened up, had her dinner, helped Ragini in chores and finally went to her room. She thought for herself ‘’Ok Swara, it’s just a Hi; a try is still worth, 1.youll become friends or 2. He’ll ignore you. Simple, send a Hi’’ She took her phone, opened watsapp and saw his profile picture,
Swara to herself: Oh God!! Why should he be so damn handsome to make me feel dizzy, ok now send a ‘’Hi’’
She opened Sanskar’s chat, it was empty (as they never spoke to each other), she typed a ‘’Hi’’ and was about to send but got nervous and somehow she managed to hope and have faith in God and she sent it. (Sanskar was online) Swara was hell nervous and scared, she felt like she could faint any minute now, as she was looking at the screen and hoping for something rather than nothing, there was a reply: ‘’Hi, may I know who is this?’’, Swara was so happy but stood like a frozen statue (she never express her happiness outwards like most of the people), she soon came to reality when she saw another message from Sanskar: ‘’..?’’, Swara’s fear vanished quickly and she sent ‘’I am Swara’’ without thinking, she immediately regretted it, but there was a reply again: ‘’oh, Lucky’s bestie, so anything important’’ Swara hesitantly and nervously typed ‘’Yea, nothing important, just wanna be friends if that’s ok with you’’ she was wondering whether to send or not, she somehow sent it without realizing again and soon hit her head by the phone slightly while biting her lower lip (she does that when she’s nervous), there was a reply,
Sanskar: ‘’hmm’’
Swara: ‘’Is that a yes or ..?’’
Sanskar: ‘’ A yes”
And they started texting each other, became friends soon. As days passed by, they grew more closer friends.

Finally one day,
Sanskar: ‘’Swara, wanna say you something’’
Swara: ‘’Sure, what’s it’’
Sanskar: ‘’Umm, actually, my parents are planning to marry me to a girl I love, a girl whom I love since 15yrs old, I know it’s funny but I just wanna share this with you’’
Swara was hell shocked, teary eyed and completely shattered but she managed to send ‘’Oh, well, that’s a good news, I’ve some work left to do so bye, text you later’’ she ended the conversation and cried until she dozed off to sleep, silent tears were flowing from her closed eyes even when she was asleep. It’s been almost a week now, Swara hasn’t spoke much lately to anyone and mostly she avoided Sanskar, she locked herself in her room and all she did was cry, she was so broken more than anyone could imagine.
Right now, Swara heard a knock on her door and it was
Ragini pleading: Swara, please open the door, Swara I’m begging you.
Ragini was practically crying. Swara felt bad to make her beloved sister cry and she opened the door, as soon as Ragini saw Swara she went almost numb, and suddenly pulled Swara into a comfortable warm hug.
Ragini: Swara, what have you done to yourself, you look weak, and lifeless, Swara what’s happening?
Swara: Di, it’s nothing, just a friendship breakup with Riya, a new friend, you know friendship breakups hurts
Swara lied while silent tears escaped her eyes.
Ragini: Swara, I know you are lying, you are really bad at lying, but it’s okay, just hope and have faith in God, whatever it is making my cute little sister cry will be aright eventually, I promise
Suddenly Ragini broke the hug, and smiled at Swara, while Swara was confused
Ragini: I’ve got happy news for you, you’ve got marriage proposal from the love of your life (Ragini knows about Swara’s silent love towards Sanskar)
Swara shocked and confused: Di, stop kidding!
Seeing Ragini’s face: what are you saying, it can’t be possible, no ways
Few days passed and Swasan’s marriage got fixed but Swara was upset, she didn’t want to marry Sanskar as she knows she’ll ruin his happiness because Sanskar already loves a girl, she agreed for marriage as she can’t destroy the happiness her family felt.
Few days before marriage
Maheshwari’s has invited the Gadodias for dinner. Swara, Sanskar, Laksh, Ragini along with all the youngsters are having dinner separately. Laksh was cracking jokes, everyone was laughing and eating, except Swara, she looked down at her plate, not showing her face to anyone, and drawing patterns on her plate by fork but not eating or laughing, she was sad and teary eyed thinking about something, a tear slipped her eye to her right hand, Swara still looking down, excused herself and went away to balcony, she was silently crying in the balcony (the balcony is out of everyone’s sight) suddenly while crying, she felt a hand on her shoulder, she soon wiped her tears and turned, she was shocked, scared and trembling for no reasons
Swara stammering: Sanskar?
Sanskar: Are you okay?
Swara put on a fake smile: Yea, I’m okay, whatsupp?

Sanskar pulling Swara into a hug by her waist and shocking her more: I know you’re not okay, stop hiding from me, why are you upset? And moreover why are you avoiding me? What happened?
Swara hearing this burst into tears and was crying (not loudly)
Swara: I’m sorry, I’m really sorry, this shouldn’t happen, we’re getting married very soon when you love a girl from a long time, because of me you can’t live with the girl you love, but trust me, I want your happiness, I agreed for this marriage for my family sake but I never want to ruin your life, I’m such a mean person
Swara was saying all these while crying, Sanskar hugged her tighter hearing this and comforted her: ssh, everything’s alright, you are not mean, everything’s okay
Now Sanskar broke the hug and cupped her face, wiped her tears,made her look at him
Sanskar: Swara, I love you
Swara was shocked like nothing and said sarcastically: Don’t lie; I know you love her since a long time, you yourself told.
Sanskar: and say me who’s that girl
Swara was out of words as she never asked him the girl’s name, she stayed silent
Sanskar: Dumbo, I’ve loved you since long time not any other girl, it’s you idiot, you are the girl I love, my girl
Saying this he hugged her again and was caressing her hair, Swara stood numb and frozen,
Swara: No, it can’t be, you are lying, you don’t like me and I know it, you don’t have to lie because I accept the truth.
Sanskar: My dumbo, I’ve loved you from the very first time you came here with lucky to study, I’ve loved you every second from then, you never know that I’ve had and I still love you, one and only you, I swear I love you Swara, now please don’t cry and be upset, I hate it

Saying this he broke the hug and kissed her forehead, Swara was looking straight into his eyes and can see the truth in his eyes, so this time she believed him. After a while,
Swara: I like you too
Sanskar: Whaat? You don’t love me, you just only like me?
Swara smiling: If I love someone or something a lot more than my own self, I say I like it.
Sanskar: I know Meri Jaan, I was just teasing
Swara: First dumbo, then idiot, then my girl and now Meri Jaan. Hooo!!
Sanskar just pulled her by waist and hugged her, Swara hugged him back, and both were happy and feeling comfortable, feeling home in each other’s arms. After a few days they got married and lived Happily Ever After..
Hey, I know this is not good, I never write stories, I only read them but I love to write, so just gave it a try, a try is still worth, please please please, comment something, anything, good or bad, it’s ok, I just want to know how it is, so please comment, and finally sorry for wasting your time by this so not good story..
Bye, Luv u all, Tc

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    108 Comments

    1. Shagun on June 20, 2016 5:44 pm

      Awesome

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:22 am

        Thank you

    2. aaa on June 20, 2016 5:50 pm

      awww this is so cute!

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:23 am

        Thank you

    3. pari on June 20, 2016 5:50 pm

      awwwwww this was cute :)and yeah well written

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:24 am

        Thanks

    4. Nita D on June 20, 2016 5:51 pm

      Very sweet love story ??

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:24 am

        I didn’t think so but anyways thanks a lot

    5. MADHU on June 20, 2016 5:51 pm

      Its superb u should write more???

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:25 am

        Thanks, maybe I’ll try

    6. Sri varsha on June 20, 2016 5:52 pm

      Though it is a small one.. It is nice.. I really liked it ?.And yes continue writing bcz it improves your skill.The storyline was good but it would have been very nice if u can make the story longer as per my opinion. We would really love to read it. And yes come up with more stories bcz I feel that you have good taste and ideas. All the best ?

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:26 am

        Thank you so much, next time I write anything, I’ll make sure its long

    7. Lucky on June 20, 2016 5:56 pm

      NICE

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:26 am

        Thank you

    8. Anjali30 on June 20, 2016 5:58 pm

      Really cuteee!!!! ???

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:27 am

        Thank you so much, I never thought I’d get comments from writers

    9. Swetha on June 20, 2016 5:58 pm

      Awesome

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:27 am

        Thank you

    10. Manolove on June 20, 2016 6:04 pm

      Really nice no one can say bad…u did justice to Ur story.. On the first day itself no one can be Shakespeare… It was a good try…

      Best wishes waiting for more on the way friend….

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:28 am

        Thank you so much, yeah you are right, On the first day itself no one can be Shakespeare

    11. Sree_deeksha on June 20, 2016 6:04 pm

      It is awsome ….isabel

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:33 am

        Thanks

    12. bresh on June 20, 2016 6:12 pm

      awesome…really cute

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:33 am

        Thanks

    13. Aami on June 20, 2016 6:21 pm

      hy isabel soooo sweeeeeeeet lve stry…. i really lvd it…… simple n cute stry….

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:30 am

        I am glad you liked it, thank you so much

    14. sherin on June 20, 2016 6:24 pm

      Loved it very much

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:32 am

        Glad you liked it, thanks

    15. shruthis on June 20, 2016 6:29 pm

      awesome dear…i loved it 🙂

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:34 am

        thank you, glad you liked it

    16. A.K on June 20, 2016 6:34 pm

      Liked it very much ??
      Last swasan part was so amazing!

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:34 am

        Thank you, glad you liked it

    17. im_Sana on June 20, 2016 6:42 pm

      it was great

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:35 am

        Thanks

    18. RUPA on June 20, 2016 6:48 pm

      Nice….

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:35 am

        Thanks

    19. Sree on June 20, 2016 7:00 pm

      Its very nice dear. So sweet os. Keep writing?

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:36 am

        Thanks a lot

    20. SHAN on June 20, 2016 7:10 pm

      its awesome….so cute

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:37 am

        Thank you

    21. tani on June 20, 2016 7:11 pm

      hahahah….it’s so cute

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:38 am

        Thanks

    22. vyshu on June 20, 2016 7:29 pm

      awesome….cute

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:38 am

        Thanks a lot

    23. mou on June 20, 2016 7:40 pm

      superb

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:39 am

        Thank you

    24. Abdul hafiz(uma). on June 20, 2016 7:44 pm

      Awsm.

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:39 am

        Thanks

    25. Shona/Laado on June 20, 2016 8:10 pm

      so sweet really

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:40 am

        Thanks a lot

    26. Afra on June 20, 2016 8:12 pm

      Nice

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:41 am

        Thank you

    27. Shifa on June 20, 2016 8:13 pm

      Nice

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:41 am

        Thanks

    28. Rosey on June 20, 2016 8:19 pm

      Nice attempt

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:42 am

        Thanks a lot

    29. Vb on June 20, 2016 8:23 pm

      Aww it was a cute one .

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:42 am

        Thank you so much, I really thought it was definitely not cute

    30. Bhargavi on June 20, 2016 9:12 pm

      Awesome

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:43 am

        Thanks

    31. Anu Ann on June 20, 2016 9:23 pm

      Too cute love story

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:43 am

        Thank you

    32. pari on June 20, 2016 9:23 pm

      vw yaar..it ws simple nd awsm…sooo cute stry…..lvd it very much….plz write more os….

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:43 am

        Thanks, glad you liked it, will try to write more

    33. Vaikha on June 20, 2016 9:32 pm

      Ohooo.. That was sooo cute.. I wished if it lasted for long… But need to say u had done an amazing job.. Loved it..

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:45 am

        Thank you so much, glad you liked it

    34. Soujanya on June 20, 2016 9:34 pm

      Awesome

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:45 am

        Thanks

    35. Divyanshri on June 20, 2016 9:40 pm

      such a sweet story……. awesome

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:46 am

        Sweet? I didn’t think so, Thanks a lot

    36. kumu on June 20, 2016 10:23 pm

      sweet..

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:46 am

        thanks

    37. divya on June 21, 2016 12:26 am

      oh wow it was cute and sweet loved it do write more

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:47 am

        Thanks you

    38. anamika on June 21, 2016 12:28 am

      it was really really cute, the way u describe everything was really fab. hope u write more.

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:48 am

        Thanks a lot

    39. me on June 21, 2016 12:30 am

      ur os was really nice. it was something different. plus do write more waiting for some more os by u.

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:49 am

        Thanks, will try to write more

    40. laila on June 21, 2016 12:32 am

      i really like that “hooo” really addicting word. about the os it was really nice and sweet.loved it

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:49 am

        Thanks, glad you liked it

    41. Ameera on June 21, 2016 12:34 am

      OMG this was cute awesome fantastic fabulous amazing and nice. it was so nice. u shud write more. waiting for more loads of love and hugs to u. love u

      • Ameera on June 21, 2016 12:35 am

        sorry got the icon wrong. still loved it

      • Ameera on June 21, 2016 4:22 am

        hey it was a really awesome os. short and sweet but not that short really but i really loved it the story line was good and it was really good.
        i know u are not much of story writer but a very good song writer and i wanna say that keep writing new stories, i know u have so many ideas, u shud really write them and post them.
        dont decide the story is not good by yourself but show it to others and ask their views.
        see u said this story was not that good but see the comments uve got?
        anyways wanna say it was good and hope and wish u write more.
        plus loads and loads of hugs to u and love u alot. keep smiling. AND keep reading my ff! love u 😉 🙂 😛

      • Ameera on June 21, 2016 4:24 am

        hey it was a really awesome os. short and sweet but not that short really but i really loved it the story line was good and it was really good.
        i know u are not much of story writer but a very good song writer and i wanna say that keep writing new stories, i know u have so many ideas, u shud really write them and post them.
        dont decide the story is not good by yourself but show it to others and ask their views.
        see u said this story was not that good but see the comments uve got?
        anyways wanna say it was good and hope and wish u write more.
        plus loads and loads of hugs to u and love u alot. keep smiling. AND keep reading my ff! love u 😉 🙂 :-P:-D<3<3<3
        i know its a long comment but DO READ IT.

      • Ameera on June 21, 2016 4:25 am

        and u write better stories than me:-/:-[ any ways leave it.
        😉 🙂 :-P:-D<3<3<3
        i know its a long comment but DO READ IT.

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:53 am

        crazy you, I’m dying 🙁 here to read ur ff, but u write way lot more good than me, write an os and post it, lets see who is good, it’s definitely u, i am really happy you liked it, post ur ff asap, keep smiling u too 🙂

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 2:53 pm

        hey, waiting for ur ff, pls post it asap, pls pls pls pls

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:50 am

        Thank you

    42. shruti on June 21, 2016 12:45 am

      loved it amazing

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:55 am

        Thanks, glad you liked it

    43. sara on June 21, 2016 1:28 am

      It was cute. Ur os is really nice and unique. Loved it i wish u write more

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:55 am

        thanks sara

    44. divyani on June 21, 2016 4:15 am

      hey isabel who said its not gud its awesome and really i agree with laila the word hoo is really addicting, i am also going to use it if u dont.mind but wer did u get it?
      anyways the os was not too short but it was short and it was really cute and loved the last part and ur os was u know like somewhat different.
      the story line was also good and u shud try writing more stories.
      sorry for the long comment haope u take time to read it.

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 10:59 am

        Hooo is of course an addicting word, one of my friend used to use that word and i like it, so i added it to this os, thank you so much, I’m glad you liked it and of course i would read yours or anyone’s comment, no matter its long or short, I’m sorry for a long reply

    45. tvisha on June 21, 2016 10:42 am

      it was a marvelous OS keep writing OS’s awesome work keep it up!!!

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 11:30 am

        Thanks

    46. shiksha on June 21, 2016 11:13 am

      It’s so good you know.continue writing,plz.

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 11:29 am

        Thanks a lot

    47. mahjabeen on June 21, 2016 12:17 pm

      It was afantastic. I rlly liked it. Keep going on..

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 12:57 pm

        Thank you, glad you liked it, 🙂

    48. Beba on June 21, 2016 1:12 pm

      its amzing dear….. a story that left a smile on ur face……. make u believe in happy ending.. 🙂 🙂 🙂

      • Isabel on June 21, 2016 1:41 pm

        Thank you so much

    49. Sarah fareed on June 22, 2016 6:32 pm

      Awesome story dude..??

      • Isabel on June 22, 2016 8:14 pm

        Oh thank you, thank you, thank you so much, I’m so happy that you commented, I’m at cloud nine.. Miss u soo soooo much, pls try and let’s meet.. Keep smiling.. 🙂

    50. Ifra on June 27, 2016 10:26 pm

      Its fantastic . Keep writing… need more

      • Isabel on June 28, 2016 9:13 pm

        Thank you

    51. Nisha_Anu on June 30, 2016 3:13 pm

      Owie! So cute ??
      At first I thought it was going to be a sad one. ? ? ?
      But after reading this I couldn’t help but smile like an idiot.
      Swasan ❤❤❤
      And your writing❤❤❤
      My sister is so talented. ???
      Write another one soon. Sorry for reading this late. I didnt visit the ff page since eternity. I would’ve surely missed it had it not been your PM. Chaloo!! Bye!! I’ve to study bio ??

      • Isabel on June 30, 2016 3:26 pm

        Thank you so much for taking your time and reading, I can never be more happier.. Luv u

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