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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan – Saza (6)
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Swasan – Saza (6)

RajkumariBy RajkumariJune 4, 201712 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hello all DOSTO

HOW ARE YOU ALL

THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR AMAZING RESPOND, I HOPE IT INCREASE DAY BY DAY

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PREVIOUSLY: SWARA LEAVING KOLKATA, UTTRA CHANGING HER BEHAVIOR

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Sanskar head to his room after his convo with uttra, and close the door slowly pulling the covers…. His sad night rotten is getting started, he off his jacket and throw to floor on some corner going to his wardrobe, opening his shirt buttons, and the wardrobe to get his night shirt and by accident a veil full upon him.. swara veil…

paas aaye..
dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa huin
ek adhoori si hamaari kahaani rahi
aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
jaa mile.. jaa mile..
ishq sachcha wahi
jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

we came close,
yet the distances never reduced.
our story remained incomplete..
it is not necessary that the earth always
goes to meet sky..
the true love is the one that
does not get a destination..

rang thay, noor tha
jab kareeb tu tha
ek jannat sa tha, ye jahaan
waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
likh ke chhoD gaya tu kahaan

there were colors, there was light,
when you were near me.
this world was like heaven..
on the sand of time, you left
something like my name written..

hamari adhoori kahani..
hamari adhoori kahani..

our incomplete story,
our incomplete story..

He hugged veil to his chest, smelling the veil so deeply

khushbuon se teri yoon hi Takra gaye
chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye

I ran into your fragrances like that only..
see, walking, where have we come..

jannatein agar yaheen
tu dikhe kyon nahi
chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
intezaar tera sadiyon se kar raha
pyaasi baiThi hai kab se yahaan
hamari adhoori kahaani

if there are heavens here only,
why can’t I see you here..
the moon and the sun, everything is here only..
I have been waiting for you for centuries..
why is our incomplete story sitting here, thirsty..

Sanskar then spoke whisper to himself (even veil lost your smell, please come back and give me new one) a tear escaped his eye which he wiped softly and put veil inside again and move to fresh up.

When he came back, he dragged whiskey bottle he hide in his room, and swara picture from drawer, he pour his poison to cup and start to drink and drink… again and again remembering swara falling upon him and giving him chocolate, their engagement dance, her sudden cheek kiss…. All their sweet moments came to him. His eyes rain tears looking to her smiling face then remembering his angry face when he first broke with her wishing to go back in time and stop himself from that, her cries day laksh went missing, his hurting words to her… all this was tearing him apart and he kept crying and drinking like there is no tomorrow till he was knocked out black falling to the bed.

Shinny morning cast its lights on Maheshwary windows..But only to bring hurricane upon them….

Sanskar woke up on his ringing phone by strange number but he didn’t look and answer

Sanskar totally sleeping “Hello”

“Good morning bhai…”

“uttra.. Something happen?”

“I am gone bhai”

Sanskar still sleepy “what?”

“How weird you are bhai??! When swara bhabhi was angry for her sister state you punished her, when she took her family side you pashed her… hurt her, but when you take my side over her no problem right, you can hear she being insulted in her honor for us and speak nothing for me, that was ok right!”

The words startle Sanskar from his sleep and he sit with a jerk “uttra what you just say haan??”

“I am gone bhai.. I will search bhabhi, I will find her and I will bring her home… To her home, that’s my promise bhai… a Maheshwary promise and don’t bother hiding from family they must have known by now, don’t bother follow this phone, it would lead you nowhere… till I bring swara bhabhi, Farwell brother” by that uttra hanged the call

“uttra,,,,,,, utraaa,,,,, UTTRAAA UTTRAAAAAA”

Sanskar head flash back, same thing swara did before. He Call that number again and again but it was closed… he struggle to stand on his feet as alcohol had best of him last night, he battle his unsteady footsteps and dizziness and came out of room without even fresh up

“maaaa…. Badiii maaaaa”

“shuuush Sanskar” ram Prasad answered him coming from his mother’s room

“papa…. Vo… uttra..uttra”

Ram caught Sanskar collar angrily and drag him back to his room and put him under cold shower

“ahhhhhhh”

“Had you became so much unsteady not to only drink at home but also come to us with fully alcohol smell body ah”

Cold water done its effect on Sanskar head and make him awake “papa,,,uttra, she she…”

“We know, like swara she left a letter. Your mom faint and doctor with her now… we all are paying her stubborn to continue that cursed shadi”

Sanskar tears flow with the cold water, carrying his great pain, not only his princess gone but also his little pampered girl is gone, and she took the courage he hadn’t and went in search of swara. Sanskar fall along the wall to the ceramic floor

“Fresh up and come as a sensible Maheshwary, not a drunken loser” RP left after those words. Sanskar tears were flowing and flowing till he gather himself and stand with strong power.

On breakfast he promised DP to find uttra very soon as she can’t be so far… then he went to sujata in her room …

“Please Sanskar bring uttra back to me… please…”

“I promise you mom I will… that too very soon”

Sanskar had much power in his voice but he wasn’t even sure, he gave badi ma same promise 6 month ago and couldn’t bring laksh back home, how he will bring his own sister.

Leap of 4 months

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Soooo guys….

Uttra left behind her bhabhi to find her

What you think of her action?!

I ll be waiting for the comments…

Precap: Maheshwary lost son

Till then

Bye dosto

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    12 Comments

    1. Aashi on June 4, 2017 9:03 am

      way to go uttara,cheers
      update nxt part soon

    2. sri on June 4, 2017 10:08 am

      nice

    3. anu on June 4, 2017 11:08 am

      nyc but want to know exactly what happen to uttara? reveal it

    4. Rockleon on June 4, 2017 11:12 am

      Amazing!
      Update next part soon can’t be able to wait…. ..

    5. Kumu on June 4, 2017 12:33 pm

      Nice

    6. Rachna on June 4, 2017 1:50 pm

      Awsm

    7. a on June 4, 2017 8:11 pm

      nice

    8. niya on June 4, 2017 8:35 pm

      nice

    9. neha_01 on June 5, 2017 5:39 am

      nice

    10. sumayyah on June 5, 2017 10:02 am

      amazing
      waiting for the next
      do come soon dii
      uttara also left love you uttara
      love you to

    11. sumayyah on June 5, 2017 10:02 am

      amazing
      waiting for the next
      do come soon dii
      uttara also left love you uttara
      love you to

    12. shashi on June 6, 2017 1:26 am

      superb waiting for next epi

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