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swasan raglak….a tale of pure love….chap 3

Hello frnds… Thx fr ur support… hope so u r liking the plot…plz guyz support me through comments… Ur comments are motivation for me…so silent readers plz comment… Here i go
Recap
Sanskar got hit…Ragini treats him…swaragini past slight revealation…raglak meeting…

Chap
Laksh was staring at sleeping sanskar through hospital window…he is seeing his beloved brother after 2 long years…whatever sanskar was for outer world…is completely oppisite for lucky…yes sanskar was a cold hearted arrogant spoiled brat for outer world… But for lucky ap n dp…sanskar was a caring and obedient son…specially for laksh…he was not only an elder brother but a buddy…a mate… A guide…a fatherly figure…. It seems like a story book had been opened in front of laksh….a page from that story book came in front of his eyes…he saw sanskar… He saw himself… When sanskar was 16.. Laksh was14… He saw ap…he saw dp…
Dp: laksh.. U knw na that u ve broken ur school laws…who told u to hit the teacher…
Sanskar: papa..he has not done anything… Actually it was me…
Dp: shut up sanskar… U ll spoil him…laksh ur punishment is…u ll not get dessert today..ma has made ur fav kheer…u ll not get that…
At night when lucky was sleeping… Sanskar woke him up…
Sanskar: lucky… Kheer…
Laksh: but how bhaiya…
Sanskar: this is from my part…u take it..u like it na.
Laksh: thx bhaiya….
Laksh came out of flashback… He again saw sanskar…
Laksh: bhai… Y…u ve done wrong… Y bhai.. Y…
Tears started to well up in his eyes..He took out a letter from his pocket…

Hey lucky…
I know u r angry wid me..not only u..but ma..papa…whole family… I know i ve done wrong… But… M sorry… I ve no excuse this time…m going… Always be happy… Dont try to find me…
Urs
Sanky..

A tear fell down where sanky was written… Suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder… It was ragini…
Laksh: ragu…
Ragini: u miss ur bro na..
Laksh: yupps.. But now when he has returned.. I dont know whether to accept him or…
Ragini: u ve to accept him…he is ur bro…i can feel ur pain…but when destiny has given you chance…y… Y r u nt accepting it..
Laksh looks at her face…
Laksh: but whatever he has done…
Ragini: was not right…but he is ur bro…only u can bring him to right path…so that..whatever happened with my di…
She breaks down…. Laksh gives him a tight hug…
Laksh: m sorry ragini… I deserted u when u needed me the most….
Ragini: i dont have ny prb…jst be wid me..i ve clld uncle and aunty…
Laksh: will they accept bro…
Ragini: its my duty to convince them…

@night
Ragini: uncle plz try to…
Dp: no ragini… Sanskar has done a sin…he has done a crime…we ll never accept him…
Ragini: uncle plz….
Dp: no…never..he ll never enter my house…
ap: yes ragu..he is correct… If he was our son…then swara was our daughter too…and…no..never in life…
Ragini: aunty u remember.. Swara di always used to say one thing…we cant leave our nature…today she is not there to convince u all…but.. Her love is here…so plz…for her sake….

Dp suddenly stops…he pats ragini’s head…
Dp: ur heart is very big ragini…
Ragini: i just respect whatever di had taught me…

Next day…
Sanskar wakes up…he sees himself in hospital… He stares at the roof…he then shifts his gaze to sofa set…he sees laksh…
Sanskar: lucky…
Laksh wakes up…
Laksh: bhai… U r fine…u r fine…thank god…
Laksh hugs sanskar… Sanskar too hugs him back…
Laksh: bhai.. U get well soon ok..then we will go home…
Sanskar: lucky… Y u saved me..y u saved me…i must have died…m not able to see myself… M nt able to bear my gaze…plz let me die…
Laksh: no bhai.. Dont say…
Sanskar : yes..ma papa…i ve made them fall in world eye..i m the reason for misery… I m the reason of kavita’s death…i m the reason of Everything…

Laksh hugs him…ap and dp too come…
Ap: beta..u ve realised ur mistake… Its enough..
Dp: if anyone realise his mistake then his sins are reduced… U had done wrong but more wrong was…u ran from the situation… Now come back and face the situation…
Sanskar hugs ap and cries…
Ragini sees them fRom a distance…
Sanskar sees her…ragini eyes get filled with hatred…
Ragini: uncle aunty… If u all dont.mind..can u all wait outside.. I ve to do check up of patient…
Ap nods..they all go outside…
Ragini: laksh..plz u dont go anywhere… I ll need ur help…
Laksh nods…
SAnska: did u saved me…
Ragini gives no replt…and continues check up…
Sanskar: plz answer me ragu…
Ragini: my name is dr ragini gadodiya mr maheshwari… Ok…
Sanskar gets shocked… But he was prepared for this…he looks at laksh… As if asking for the answer… Laksh nods…
Sanskar: y d u save me..better let me die…
Ragini: laksh..plz help him to sit…
Laksh makes sanskar sit….
Ragini continues her checkup…
Sanskar: reply me…plz…
Ragini: this is hospital mt maheshwari… If u ve any query regarding medicine then plz ask…otherwise we doctors dont make personal relationships with any patient… Sorry… UR check up is over…u can take rest…
Ragini is about to Go…but suddenLy sanskar calls her again…
Sanskar: ragu…plz… R u still angry wid me…
Ragini turns in anger…her eyes became red with anger….
Ragini: angry…with what right i must be angry…it was not ur fault… It was my didi ‘s fault to trust u…it was her fault to accept u wholeheartedly…. It was her fault to see dreams… It was her fault to be innocent… It was her fault to….to love u from the bottom of her heart… It was she who was wrong…not you…not you…you were always right..di was wrong…she was wrong…She was..she….
Ragini felt dizzy…. Laksh holds her in the nich of tym….
Laksh: bhai better u just not ask her anything…
Sanskar: bbut..swara….she is fine na…
Laksh: i ll tell u everything… U take rest…
Sanskar feels dizzy… He sleeps…

Laksh takes Ragini to her cabin…he makes her sit on the chair…
Ragini is slightly unconscious…. Laksh makes her drink water….ragini wakes up…

Ragini: sry laksh… I should nOt have…
Laksh: u ve done no wrong ragu…ur anger is right..
Ragini cries…. Laksh consoles her…

Precap
Sanskar gets fine…he keeps asking for swara…raglak engagement announcements…

So guys..hwz it

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