***********EPISODE-16**************
Samara was leaning kiss her ….
Swara fumes in anger by his thz act and gave a tight slap to him
Swara:(anger) dare u touch me…… if sanskar comes to know tat ki u r trying to harm me ..he will surely kill u … so better be in ur limits
Samar touched his cheek where she slapped him …. he got furios and pulled her closer to him
Samar:(anger) how dare u slap me haa and wat did u say Sanskar haa (laughs sarcastically) U r sanskar will kill me hahahaha (stops) ..then i guess ur sanskar only bought u here ….hai na
Swara looks at him confusdely
Samar:do u know y sanskar bought u here (drags her and throws on the bed) coz i want to enjoy a night with u baby (touches her seductively)
Swara:(jerks in anger) just shut up …my sanskar can never do such cheap things ..he loves me a lot
Samar:oh is tat so … then y did he brought u here and (whisphers in her ears) y did he locked u in my room …
look around its my room baby ..
Swara looks at room and was shocked …
yes now the same questions where running in her mind
Swara:(tears) no my sanskar ..can’t do thz
Samar:(laughs evily) but ur sanskar did it baby …he left u here so tat i can have fun with u …so be a good and enjoy
“He left u here so tat i can have fun with u”
thz words were running in her mlnd she became numb …. he leans to kiss her yet again …. but thz time she dnt protest coz she was in shock like a statue ….don’t know wats happening with her ….is not tat she not bold enough to fight with thz bustard samar … she is bold … but now her condition was like a blank paper not understanding wat is happening with her ….sitting like statue ..
samar smriks and was abt to kiss her ..but
Tishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Thz sound made swara come to her sense ….she looked at the floor where samar ws laying with the blood ozing from the corner of his mouth ….she looked confused but later realised tat he got a solid punch from someone ….she look up to see the person who is reason for punch …….. and was suprised to see the person
his eyes were red … he wss fuming in anger
Swara:(whisphers) LAKSH
yup its laksh
he came forward …made samar stand
……and gave another punch …. he kicks him … was continuesly beating him black and blue …
in meantime …
Swara heared a door sound …she looks at the door …. and finds ragini who entered ..
Ragini:swara ….
Swara looks at ragini…. she gets teary eyes …runs and hugs her …. she was crying … yes crying …she wasn’t shedding tears only coz no one were there to give her a shoulder all thz time ….but now she got a shoulder to let her tears flow from her beautifull eyes ….ragini caress her hairs and consoles her
Ragini:swara see (cups her face) u r fine …plz don’t cry …
but she cries more by hugging ragini
here laksh was beating him nicely
Laksh:(anger) how… dare u blo*dy bustard (puches)
Samar:(hold his hand) hey laksh just stop it man …and y the hell r u beating me
Laksh:(holds his collor) wat were u doing with swara …(anger)
Samar:(acts innocently) swara …she (points to swara) wat i was doing with huh! infact she came here ..and u know wat she was saying ki she wanted be in physical realationship with me …. chi ..i ….
Tat is was for laksh he fumes in anger like hell . ……. punched him, kicked him, continuesly
Laksh:Don’t use ur cheap tricks on me (kicks) u bustard …
Samar:laksh i’m…
Laksh:just shut ur blo*dy mouth
saying thz he kicks his main point … such tat he falls unconsious
Laksh walk towards swara …turns her and was abt to slap her but…
Ragini:Laksh..
he stops ..fetchs his fist to control his anger
Laksh:swara wat were u doing here (shouts) answer me …… do u atleast know wat was going to happen with u haa …. wo tho acha howa ki ragini wasn’t feeling well so we had to return here …. and when i ws parking the car … we heared some noices from thz room …so i peeped from the window ….and wat i saw…(shakes his head in anger) …. how can u be so irresponsible swara … if we would hav’nt not came at the right time …. do u know wat would happen to u …… and bhai …. did u thought about bhai …huh! answer me damit
y r u here …at thz time …and where is bhai …(shouts) answer me swara…
hearing all thz she was crying more and more
Ragini:laksh stop it …. enough .. wat r u doing haa …is thz a right time ask all thz … look at her …. she is scared (to swara) swara come ….take some rest ..
ragini holds her wrist and was abt to walk …but swara doesn’t move ….ragini turns and looks at her ?ly
Swara:no ragu … not now … 1st let me answer him
Ragini:but swara…
Swara:(to laksh) so laksh wat did u say i don’t care abt ur bhai …and wat did u asked y i’m here at thz time right …
do u know who bought me here … it is ur bhai … yes coz ur bhai i’m here
Laksh:(confuse) wat …bhai …. but…
Swara:haan (tears) laksh …. Sanskar is behaving wierdly i…(tell everything)
Laksh:r u gone mad swara….. bhai can never do thz … u know right he loves u very much
Swara:(tears) yes laksh …my sanskar loves me very much…. but i don’t know laksh wats happening to him … something is wrong laksh…
Laksh:but swara .. . ……
Swara:(smiles sadly) u don’t trust me right
Laksh:no swara its not like tat … i trust u swara i know u won’t lie …. but i can’t belive tat ki my bhai can do such things …
Swara:even i can’t laksh …. do u think its easy to me to tell such things abt sanskar
…he is my love laksh …i love him very much ….(tears & falls on the floor) i love my sanskar …i…l…
Ragini also gets teary eyes seeing her sis
state ……she makes swara stand and wipes her tears ..
Ragini:(tear) swara plz don’t cry ..plz…. come take some rest … will talk abt thz later
saying thz she takes swara with her … laksh also follows them …
all thz was seen by a pair of eyes …
who was fuming in anger …
Person:(anger tone) how dare u laksh … how dare u will pay for it …. u will ….
the person dails a number …
person:hello ….listen (tells something)
Os:……
person:good…(cuts the call)
person:swara ….laksh 2mro will be a worse day of ur whole life …tick ..tok tick tok ..
(smriks evily)
here
ragini… makes swara sleep …… soon swara dozes off …she was caressing her hairs lovingly ..
laksh:(to ragini) wo …. i’m sorry ..
Ragini:(looks at laksh angrily) baas laksh ..just leav from here …
Laksh:but..
ragini turns her face angrily ..
laksh feels sad and leaves from there
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NEXT DAY
Swara:(to laksh) laksh plz drop me …. sanskar might be waiting for me …
Laksh looks at her in amazed
Swara:(smiles sadly) i know u r suprised …coz yesterday i told abt sanskar and now i want to go … to him …… its all LOVE laksh
which we can’t stop ……
Laksh:(smiles) hmm k come …
Ragini:but swara…
Swara:no ragu …plzz let me go
…..u r worried abt na …but don’t do so ..i’m fine ..
Ragini simply nodes
Swara;bye …ragu
Ragini:bye swara (hugs her)
soon both swara and laksh leaves from there
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Soon they reaches to S&S Manshion
Both swara and laksh enters the manshion …as they entered …they heard a clapping sound like someone was clapping ….
They wonders who is it … and looks at the direction only to find sanskar yes it was sanskar who was clapping ….
Swara & laksh :(confused ) Sanskar / bhai
He walks towards them and stops clapping .. …
Sanskar: so love birds r back haa
Laksh: (confused) wt r u talking bhai…
Sanskar:fact …u both r love birds right (points to them)
Swara:(clam tone) Sanskar i ….
Sanskar:oh wait …..u both enjoyed right
saying thz he takes swara hand and keeps it on laksh’s hand
Swara: Sanskar wt r u doing…
Laksh:bhai …..
Sanskar:enjoyed ur night with ur lover right (to swara) …
This was it for swara …she becane furious ….her eyes became red with anger the person whom she loved the most is saying such words …she never imagined thz never in her life …
Laksh stood shock ..he can’t belive his own ears .. wat he just listened tat too from his bhai’s mouth
Sanskar:had fun tog…….
before he could complete ..
Swara gave a tight slap to him she was boiling with anger …
Swara:wat rubbish r u talking ..haa …how can say such cheap things sanskar (anger)
Sanskar fumes in anger and twists her hand
Sanskar:(anger) how dare u slap me…how
dare u …(twist her hand more)
Swara:(winces in pain) aahhhhh
Laksh:bhai …wat r u doing …. leave her…
she is ur wife …pyaar hai……
Sanskar:(anger) she is my wife right .i can do anything with her …who the hell r u to stop me ..(twist her hand more & more)
Swara:(tears) aahhhh…..sanskar..
This was it for laksh he couldn’t take it more .. so he pushed sanskar .
he falls on the floor
Sanskar:(shouts in anger) LAKSH!!!
Tears roll down from laksh eyes.. hearing thz he was broken…
he stepped a back
Laksh:u r not my bhai no u r not (to swara)
he is not my bhai swara. ….. my bhai doesn’t call me by thz name …no matter how anger he is in …(tears)
Swara : tears …
Sanskar was abt to stand but he feels pain in his head … he holds his head in pain
Sanskar:aahhh….aahhh
swara and laksh:(looks at him in shock) Sanskar / bhai
Sanskar:aahhhhh
he holds his head in pain ..screams in pain and falls on the floor …
swara and laksh runs to him …they sits
Sanskar eyez was closed…
Swara:(tears) Sanskar .. Sanskar …open ur eyes plz sanskar (patts his cheeks)
Laksh:bhai…bhai. … kya howa…bhai
just then they hears a voice..
voice:Swara …
Swara and laksh turns and looks at the person who was looking at them in
shock and suprise
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Hmmmm waise guys all ur guess of laksh saving swara is right maanah padega u all r too intelligent ….
waise how was thz epi plz do comments or else katti tanu is katti with u k…
love u all take care …bye
41 Comments
Hii di it’s AWESOME..pls try to unwrap this suspense fast.LOVE U…???
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Hey tannuuuu aur kitna suspense rakogi yaar… Tell fast wt happens to my cute Sa sanku ko…. Agar kal subey tak nxt update nai diyana tho mey bi katti Hu tujse… Plz fast updates till sanku bcoms fine…. Keep writing… Keep smiling…. Good but heart crying episode….
Superb My Sis…It was amazing episode…Just loved it…But Why the hell Sanskar is behaving weird….Confusion hi Confusion hai Solution kuch pata nahi..
awsmmm..i think dat servent give any drug to sanky..or sanky hav any disease..multiple personality disorder
superb..what happend to sanky???why he behaving soo weirdly???
soo sad for swasan.
boring and crap
i m fed up with this plz fininsh this drama soon yar
it was just amazing and will be eagerly waiting for the next part……..
I knew it laksh will help her .it’s not nice yar.ilmean I can’t c swasan hurt n crying n sanskar ??????wt the he’ll .how can he sat like that abt swalak. Plz yar clear this MU .I hate that person who is playing with swasan life n sanskar health. ?????.will be waiting for next part.post asap. Plz.
Hahaha ur so funny yar.u will katti with me also??????.I will always comment on ur ff bcoz it’s my favourite ☺☺☺.
nice..continue soon..
This epi is awsome plzzz publish other epi soon
Interesting.. Update soon
aww… awesome… poor swara.. who is the person is it kaveri? what sanskar said is really unbelivable… how he said hurted swara and even lucky to… what will happen when sanskar comes to know how he said.. dont know… nice episode… last voice may be dolly aunty suresh or kaveri or rishi…aweosme update next part tdy itself.. update soon
tanu i am also kattie with you bcz ur nt updated since tdys now update next part soon and give update tdy only…. warna mein bhi kattie and i dont comment in ur next part…. update soon
now how will sanskar come to know what he did last night and what happend actually with him.. hopw swara tackle and how laksh help her… he hurted laksh also… and most imp sanskar hurted swara and he is reason for her tears… how he manofy swara.. and how react….
want swara to do distance from him bcz he hurted her…… but when he come to know he drop her in mm in that condition he will be guilty…
Awesome
amazing dear
Awesome…interesting… and pls update Wajah Tum Ho!!
Creepy hai yaar…… What happened to sanky????? Pls continue soon…….
Awesome…
So emotional chappy yaar…what happened to sanky…is he acting weird bcoz of any drugs…how could he say such cheap things abt his love n bro…that was too much..cant see swara suffering like this…even lucky is hurt…sab kuch theek kar dho jalthi….who’s that person who called swara…is that swara’s parents or rishi??…i thnk sanskar’s bua ji is planning everything… May be for taking revenge from swara for smita’s slap…also she may be having any plan get smita marry sanskar…. Stop this track soon…want swasan together…
Awsum..mast hai..plzz end this trck..cnt see My Sanskaar in this State..plzz ???plzzz..continue soon
Awesome…. Very nice…. Post soon
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Nice but what happened to sanku ?
aaahhh you cut it in the middle…
luv it feriha ty
your story is just killing haar superb, exellent, mindblowing may be my words r not enough to describe how much i love this ff but its Fabulous …. youuuu rOcK…!
Please end this track asap can’t see swasan like ????……….post the next part soon……..
your story is just killing yaar superb, excellent, mindblowing may be my words r not enough to describe how much i love this ff but its Fabulous …. youuuu rOcK…!
di till now iam a silent reader but u made me comment today &cming to the chappy..na… its really awsm ,emotional di feeling really bad for thrio.mst say di u r writing skill is awsm di keep writing di.bai tc
I love it Post soon and plzzz make their life hell who try to destroy sanskar life oh god I wish I could make their life hell
interesting and suspense filled loved it post asap
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hi i’m tanu thank u all guys but sorry i will not be able to post my ff for 1week coz my mobile broked
Hi friends and sisy’s thank u all for ur lovely comments and I known u r all waiting for next episode right mmmmm don’t worry I will post it soon still then take care bye love u all ??????????? ?????????
oh u post so short part..nd wats da reson behind sankys behaviour..??pls end dis suspense part soon..nd wat wl happn wen sanskar wl cum to knw how he bhaved with swalak…nd da epi was rlly superb…nd may b da person is bua..cant wait fr nxt..post soon dear
tanu update soon waiting for ur ff… hope ur mobile get working back.. please update soon its been 4days… please post ur ff soon…
pls update fast im waiting for ur ff……pls upload fast
I’m back????……. haye rabba ????? yeh kia hogaya Sanskar itna bara kand kese karsakta hai pehle to apni he biwi ko uss ??? Samar k pass chor kar agaya aur ab Swalak par itna ghatya ilzam lagaraha hai…….. Ek bar wo Kamina/Kamini caller mil Gaye na main uss ka munh tor k uski bak ko chapta banaon gi phir uski ankein nikal k gotian bana k kheelo gi phir pura ka pura munh theeki mirch main daal dungi????????maine bhi ESA he mehsoos kia tha Swasan ko is halat main dekh kar…… Main yahi karun gi Kunki mai ek Swasanian Hun aur Swasanians Logon ko chorte nahi hain Jo Swasan ko alag karne ki koshish karte hain?????…… Tanu Tu kia mujhse kutti hogi mai tujhe se kutti horahi hun???…….. itne din hogaye hain FF kiun nahi post ki……. kitna yaad karahe hain tujhe pata bhi hai……. plssssssss meri Maa post kar…….Dil nahi lag raha Tere bagair????????
when ur updating next part waiting