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Swasan *Praising my baby girl*

AnsaBy AnsaOctober 17, 201861 Comments3 Mins Read
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“Swasan short shot”
*Praising my baby girl*
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“I’m home sweetie” he put his bag on sofa and loosened his tie tiringly, put his head on sofa and closed his eyes.
His eyes widened listening light weeping sounds from washroom.
“Shona baby are you there?”
He opened the door when weeping sounds changed into pure crying one
“Hey,hey?? Why my baby girl is crying” he stood beside her and she turned and surrendered herself in his warmth.
He protectively hugged her back and make her walk in between and once reaching near bed they sat down..
“Now tell me what makes you cry this much?”seeing her red puffy eyes his heart arched..
He tried to pull himself back from the hug but she nuzzled more in his neck.
He sighed sufferingly, and why he won’t suffer seeing tears in his Lil baby girl’s eyes is always a painful thing for him..
He caressed her hairs.
“she will feel better then I will ask” he thought
“Sanskar” she merely whispered if he would not have been sitting very close to her, he would have missed that..
“Jee Sanskar ki jaan” he was always a dotting husband how could he ever miss the chance to pamper her..
“Say na swara what happened” swara looked at him but her left hand was hiding her right cheek which makes sanskar confused
“What Happened to my baby girl why are you keeping your hand here” he tried to pull her hand but at her resistance he stopped and hugged her again
“You are scaring me jaan” he rubbed her shoulder repeatedly
She withdrew herself from the hug till how she will be like this she have to tell his husband who is tensed like anything.
Sanskar eyes softened seeing the reason behind this all.
“You were crying on this?” He smiled and caressed his right cheek
She hummed looking down not able to meet his eyes
“Few days left in my birthday and see this “not wanting pimple” is making my face so ugly” he pressed his lips on her forehead and pulled her in him
“You always look beautiful baby girl, this little pimple can’t make you ugly” he kissed her kunckles tightly
“But sanskar this is not looking good na I will also not look good in my birthday” she snuggled in him
“My baby girl always looks good, and she is not only beautiful by her outer beauty but she is also beautiful by her inner beauty” he slid her hair strands behind her ear
She blushed crimson red hearing him
“My baby girl’s heart is so pure that it reflects pure beauty on her face” he giggled seeing her blushing like a newly wedded girl
He cupped her left cheek and kissed her softly
“My baby girl is so beautiful” he dreamingly said on which she shyly hid herself in his embrace
He smiled brightly finally he did it he make her princess feel better, he love to say all these things, make her feel like a princess and why won’t he afterall she is his little baby girl<3
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Heya!! Done finally this was the thing which was revolving in my mind since morning and finally I penned it down.. A small ss on our beautiful couple❤

I hope u all will like this ☺

Ansa signing off!!

 

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    61 Comments

    1. Ash on October 17, 2018 11:55 pm

      How sweet ??? loved it ??

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 3:30 am

        Thanks a lot dear ❤

    2. Xyz on October 17, 2018 11:56 pm

      I am not able to like this?

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 3:32 am

        Oh!! have u reloaded your page again ? Sometimes it happenes with me too..

    3. Xyz on October 18, 2018 12:02 am

      Chalo chodo like ko I liked it this was something which I can read over and over ?

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 3:34 am

        Exactly dear leave like wike i got ur comment ?❤ thanks a lot Glad that u liked it ❤

    4. Muhammad Talha on October 18, 2018 12:03 am

      Ohhhhh! So So So Finally My Fav Writer is Back with Bang !! *Dayr Aye Per Durst Aye* 😉 how can someone bring soo much feelings in the story with such short material- only Ansa’s thing!! The skillful writer, such an tremendous story ? full of joy and cuteness ? Loved it ? reading it again and again and not getting bored, cuteness overloaded ? You surely got an brilliant future here if you just continue writing ?So pleash pleash publish the next one very soon ? Goodluck Dost Fron Yiur Greatest Fan ?

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 3:42 am

        Agaaaaaainnnnnn youuuu surprised me?
        Ohh!! Soo soo soo my friend is here with such a boasting comment ❤ ahahahahaha yeah right finally agaye humm dursat jagah ?
        Awww that’s soo sweet of u talha dear?
        You consider my writing like this that is so overwhelming?
        Your comments are always make my day ?
        Thanks a lot talha ☺
        Thankyou sooooooo much ?
        Your words are bliss to read trust me ❤
        Haye thanks again ❤
        Yeah sure I will whenever I will get time to write I will surely write ?
        My besti always encouraged me too write and publish so I will InShaAllah never stop writing ?
        Good luck you too ☺
        From your friend?
        Thanks agaaain ❤

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 3:44 am

        Your comments always make my day**

      • Muhammad Talha on October 18, 2018 3:30 pm

        Ahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahha ? yes yes came here to surprise you dost ? you deserve this my fav ? welcomeee welcomeee ansaa ? your stories are justtt amazing so everyone will appreciate ? yeahh In Sha Allah In Sha Allah just just never stop writing as your bestie wants ?

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 8:26 pm

        That’s so sweet of you sachi?
        Hehehehehe?
        Thankyou❤❤

    5. Randomgirl on October 18, 2018 12:05 am

      Nice ???

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 3:50 am

        Thankyou sooo much dear ??

    6. Angle on October 18, 2018 3:55 am

      Cutee yar I loved it & I felt it ?

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 8:07 pm

        Thanks Alot angel❤ m glad that u liked it?

    7. Sita on October 18, 2018 3:57 am

      Beautiful ?

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 8:08 pm

        Aww sita thanks dear?

    8. Sita on October 18, 2018 3:59 am

      Cutness overloaded? our baby swara and mature sanki ?

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 8:09 pm

        Hui Hui!! Jasay readers wasi story?
        Sach ma❤

    9. Sita on October 18, 2018 4:12 am

      Lovely ??

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 8:13 pm

        Itnay Saray comments? thanks alot yr?

    10. Medha on October 18, 2018 6:36 am

      Zoiiiiiiiii………..
      I was thinking Swara was hiding pregnancy test kit lol ? but PIMPLE ??? Sweet Hug ?… softy type story like you Rotadu ? loved it !!
      Come soon with a bang….. till than Good Luck ||

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 8:23 pm

        Hehehe thanks alot medhu❤❤
        Aahahahahhaha bohat shukriya ????
        Thanks dear❤

    11. Hanya farrukh on October 18, 2018 5:43 pm

      Amazing story??
      Loved it ❤❤

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 8:24 pm

        Hanyaaaaaaaaaa ??aaaahhhhhhhhhhh ?? thaanksss alot yaar❤❤❤??

    12. Anu on October 18, 2018 7:48 pm

      Oaaaa tuuuu rey kahan the? Ab agaai yaad swasan ki? I hope you remember me =_=
      Bari tw na Hui hogi but the thing you have written is something which we can read again and again anu ki jaan❤ I am happy I didn’t Miss this?
      Dil agya tha tujh pa pehli bari ma ab ek aur bar phr ansa tujh pa hi agya?

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 8:54 pm

        Anuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu?? uuuuuu here? I am not dreaming right? Aha waqai Ma u are here commenting on my ss *happyyyyyy me* can’t believe yr❤ aren’t u registered? Tum tw the na? Uf lots of questions I have to ask from u?
        Obviously how can I forget u?
        Ha ha ha so funny hogai hn mai bari?
        Aww shukriya any?
        Ahahhahaahahhahahaha Haye ehm ehm best-est joke ?
        Thanks yar seriously ❤ *happy tears❤

    13. Sanu on October 18, 2018 7:53 pm

      Cute and beautiful

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 8:55 pm

        Thanks sanu❤ glad u liked it?

    14. Anu on October 18, 2018 7:54 pm

      Forgot to tell I have imagined you in this after all yeh baby girl ap hi haai, I know you are still same cry baby? tou tell me saaf saaf kitna naia pimple aia ? I wil also console you like sanskar?

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 9:05 pm

        One more comment awwe? ahahhahahahaaahahahhahaahahahah uff anu uff hai tum pa??
        *me blushy blushy ?
        Ahaahahahahahha forehead pa tha? aha no need g ap bas register hojaain again????

    15. Anonymous on October 18, 2018 7:56 pm

      Enjoyed ? every girl wants this Dil khush Kar Diya <3

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 9:06 pm

        Thanks anonymous ?
        Aww❤ m glad u liked it?

    16. Swanshi on October 18, 2018 7:59 pm

      Amazing ❤

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 9:08 pm

        Thank you so much❤

    17. Rishi on October 18, 2018 8:00 pm

      Nice

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 9:08 pm

        Thanks rishi ?

    18. Rita on October 18, 2018 8:02 pm

      Nice

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 9:07 pm

        Thank u rita??

    19. *** on October 18, 2018 8:02 pm

      Good one

      • Ansa on October 18, 2018 9:06 pm

        Thanks dear?

    20. Priya on October 19, 2018 4:22 pm

      Very nice loved it to the core

      • Ansa on October 19, 2018 7:51 pm

        Thanks Alot Priya ❤

    21. Susi on October 19, 2018 5:00 pm

      Soo cute come up with new ss and ff’s such a perfect author you are you have to write more and more? write on adya (adi Zoya) also

      • Ansa on October 19, 2018 7:56 pm

        Awww shoo shweet of u Susi❤ Hehhehehe thanks alot I will surely try to write my new article on adya❤

    22. Simi on October 19, 2018 5:06 pm

      Can’t like your ss button is not coming ? Liked it keep writing more

      • Ansa on October 19, 2018 8:00 pm

        Simi dear I am also receiving soo many complains regarding it don’t worry tu ki taraf sey problem araha hai..
        Thanks a lot ?

    23. Swasanlover on October 19, 2018 5:10 pm

      Swasan?????
      How cute swara was crying for a pimple And how well he handled her?????
      Swasan again stole my heart just because of you we are able to feel that old magic again???
      Miss them so much???
      Ab likhi rahana ?
      Touched me ??

      • Ansa on October 19, 2018 8:06 pm

        Hannn na swasanlover cute tw hoga after all it’s our heavenly couple’s ss❤
        Aawww?
        Thanks dear❤
        Sure sure I will thanks again❤

    24. Diljheet on October 19, 2018 5:28 pm

      Nice ????

      • Ansa on October 19, 2018 8:07 pm

        Thank you?

    25. Raj on October 19, 2018 5:35 pm

      MaShaAllah Giil you rocked again so beautiful writing I want to get register for you write more :*

      • Ansa on October 19, 2018 8:10 pm

        Ma Sha Allah ?
        Sure hojao register?
        Thank you?

    26. Stayawayhaters on October 19, 2018 8:17 pm

      Cute??

      • Ansa on October 21, 2018 4:13 pm

        Thank you ❤

    27. Somiya thakur on October 19, 2018 8:30 pm

      @ansa your cover is so eyecatching and perfect to this ss✔so soft and cute lovely ss no tension no fighting just love I was so depressed, after reading your ss I am all smiling again thanks to you, only some people have this talent, talent to make happy, and you have maked me happy just by small writing and how lucky people must be who are connected with you 🙂
      Loved it
      Keep writing and making us happy 🙂
      Love from Somiya 🙂

      • Ansa on October 21, 2018 4:17 pm

        Aww thankyou somiya❤ that’s really a pleasure to listen dear❤ thanks a lot ❤ how sweet of you dear thank you sooo soo much❤
        Such a beautiful comment seriously❤
        Happy to know that you are again on “smiling track”
        Sure I will dear❤
        Keep smiling and laughing ❤
        God bless you ?
        Love from Ansa ☺

    28. fenil on October 21, 2018 12:49 pm

      awesome

      • Ansa on October 21, 2018 4:47 pm

        Thank you fenil

    29. Arohi piya on October 22, 2018 11:29 pm

      Amazing ??

      • Ansa on October 25, 2018 5:09 pm

        Thanks a lot dear❤

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