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Home»Fan Fiction»swasan: we are perfect for each other (S2) PROLOGUE
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swasan: we are perfect for each other (S2) PROLOGUE

KritikaBy KritikaOctober 26, 2016Updated:October 26, 201631 Comments2 Mins Read
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Hey!! Its kritika here, back after four months. Some of you might remember me, for some of you I may be new. So actually I wrote a short story named “we are perfect for each other”. I have an awesome concept for its season 2, definitely not continuation though, but all I need is a good response. If I don’t get so, I will end it in the next episode..! it is not necessary to read season 1.
here goes a glimpse of the story!
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We were friends, then a couple, then a married couple, then 2 bodies but one soul. Today, we are just beside each other but I cannot see you, I cannot feel you, I cannot talk to you. My dear, I cannot respond you. It feels horrible.
I can hear you, love. Speak, speak. Take care of him, never let him feel alone. I know I am a very bad person. I cannot play any role in my life than living like a dead.

I never did that, sanskar! I know you believe me. But I am just hurting you now. You are crying because of me. Just me! Why do not you kill me god!

I am feeling something wet on my chest. Its him , oh god!

He is crying, with our seed in his arms. I have always been with him. To love him, to tease him, to console him, to make him happy! But today I cannot even see him.
just go home sanskar! Its hurting me. Go from here with our seed. Its piercing my whole body. My head aches! Aah..! I cannot say anything. It seems my vocal chords have died. I cant move a single part of my body.
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A/N
how is it? is it too bad? i am writing after 4 months!
ahh, if i will be happy with response, part 1 will be posted on 1 november. a special reason for that 😉
#comment_please
#kritika

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    31 Comments

    1. vyshu10 on October 26, 2016 11:24 pm

      superb…painful

      • Kritika on October 27, 2016 10:26 pm

        Thank u dear

    2. kiran38 on October 26, 2016 11:31 pm

      Nyc

      • Kritika on October 27, 2016 10:28 pm

        Ty

    3. Alia on October 26, 2016 11:37 pm

      Very nice

      • Kritika on October 27, 2016 10:29 pm

        Thanks dear

    4. Arshaanya on October 26, 2016 11:44 pm

      Superb…
      Continue soon

      • Kritika on October 27, 2016 10:30 pm

        Tysm

    5. S on October 26, 2016 11:48 pm

      Nice..plz continue..tc..☺

      • Kritika on October 27, 2016 10:31 pm

        Tysm sweetie!!! U too tc

    6. pikachu on October 26, 2016 11:50 pm

      Next part jaldi nikal

    7. pikachu on October 26, 2016 11:51 pm

      Next part jaldi post kario. … Madam ji

      • Kritika on October 27, 2016 10:32 pm

        Sure piku!!! N thank u for your comment!!! U too post ur ff soon

    8. Priya on October 27, 2016 12:05 am

      Nice continue

      • Kritika on October 27, 2016 10:32 pm

        Ty priya

    9. Meher on October 27, 2016 12:45 am

      Swara is in coma???

      • Kritika on October 27, 2016 10:34 pm

        Meher mumma!! Log ffs mein coma se wapas ane ke liye hi jate hai!??

    10. khushiii on October 27, 2016 6:56 am

      You’re backkk yay iy’s amazing continue soon

      • Kritika on October 27, 2016 10:37 pm

        Thank you soooooooo much dear

    11. Soujanya on October 27, 2016 9:02 am

      Nice

      • Kritika on October 30, 2016 2:55 pm

        Ty

    12. Jyotii on October 27, 2016 11:04 am

      The words used are so touchy!!! Swara coma mein hai kya??????? M excited to read d next part!!! 🙂
      Ita good re!!! ???
      Luv u chotu???

      • Kritika on October 30, 2016 2:55 pm

        Thank uuuu tii dii..
        Love u too??

    13. Nive.. on October 27, 2016 3:40 pm

      welcome back dr… do continue… it’s nice..☺☺

      • Kritika on October 30, 2016 2:56 pm

        Tysm soo much nive dear!!

    14. dharani on October 27, 2016 7:15 pm

      nice continue soon

      • Kritika on October 30, 2016 2:57 pm

        Thanks dharani

    15. KrsytleS on October 27, 2016 8:24 pm

      Nice

    16. Tweetypankaj on October 27, 2016 9:00 pm

      Awesome

    17. tani on October 27, 2016 10:46 pm

      Wonderful

    18. Mahjabeen on October 27, 2016 10:46 pm

      Awesome dear

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