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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan Patch-up (2nd/Last part)
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Swasan Patch-up (2nd/Last part)

MickeyMouseBy MickeyMouseOctober 31, 201621 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hey guys… I’ve came with the next part or I should say last part… I didn’t wanted to stretch the story as I’m not the writer of our serials?… So I hope you like it and criticism is welcome… And do appreciate if you like…
So let’s start…

Scene1
Baadi…

Ragini and Nikhil made a plan to reunite swasan…

Swara comes to baadi from market… She starts to explain Ragini about decorations in mehandi and sangeet functions…
But Ragini’s mind is roaming somewhere else…

Swara: Ragini, are you listening to me or not?

Ragini: (absentmindedly) No… (Realises) Yes Swara I’m listening…

Swara: *with a pout* No you’re not listening anything… Here I’m explaining you all the details but no.. you don’t want to listen only… What can I do for you Madam??

Ragini: Swara.. can you do me a favour?

Swara: Yeah Ragini.. ask na.. you don’t need to be so formal…

Ragini: Swara please don’t give yourself and Sanskar punishment because of Laksh… We don’t know when he’ll return… But whenever he’ll, he would not want you two to be separated because of him… Maybe he’ll feel himself guilty about you two… And I will not be able to see him broken… Please Swara…

Swara: *breakdowns and cries* Ragini, I also don’t want to stay away from him any more… But Sanskar will not forgive me… I know I made mistake… He wasn’t fully responsible for Laksh’s missing… Yes, he’s responsible for that, but it wasn’t all his fault… I should have given him a chance… But now I don’t know whether he’ll give me a chance or not… I have seen only rage in his eyes for me… I don’t know if he loves me or not now..??

Ragini: Swara, love is not conditional… It doesn’t fades away like that… Love is eternal… I know you both love eachother but your egos don’t allow you to clash… Whatever if you want I have a plan for bringing you two back together…

Swara: Ragini but…

Ragini: please Swara… Trust me…

Swara: Ohk…

Scene2
Swasan room…

Sanskar is very happy today… As he heard her ‘I love you’ (though indirectly) after 6 long months… Everyone at MM is amazed to see him this happy…
He takes their photo in hand and talks with the pic… I love you Swara… But you didn’t do fair with me… I miss you so much… Please come back… I’ll not give you any punishment… I’m craving for your lovely talks… Your comfort… And everything related to you… I don’t remember taking my vitamins… I’m incomplete without you Swara… Please come back soon…

Scene 3
Next day morning… 7AM

Nikhil: Wake up Swara… Let’s go for jogging

Swara: I want to sleep… Go away…

Nikhil: Ohk.. so as per our plan Sanskar will be in garden in 15 min… And Madam wants to sleep… Ohk then… I’m also going to sleep…

Swara: Wait Nikhil… I totally forgot about that… I’ll be ready in 5 min…

Nikhil: Ohk.. come fast…

Scene 4
Garden… 7:30AM

Sanskar is jogging while thinking of his lady love… A smile is plastered on his face… Then he sees Swara in jogging suit coming in garden…

Sanskar: stop it Sanskar… You’re seeing her everywhere… *Smiles*

But then he saw Nikhil behind her… His eyes becomes red with anger and jealousy… And understand that it’s not his dream… He sees them from a distance…

Whereas on the other side, they’ve seen Sanskar hiding behind the bushes… Swara is still confused… Her heart says he loves her… While mind says the opposite… So she’s bit tensed… Nikhil holds her hand to calm her down.. and by seeing this Sanskar’s blood is boiling…

They’re jogging besides eachother while talking and laughing… and Sanskar can’t see her laugh like that with anyone except him… Their main motive is to make him so jealous that he’ll lose his patience and will take Swara away…
Nikhil holds Swara’s hand while jogging… And sees her with so much love that she is not able to bear his gaze and sees down…

Nikhil: (loud so as to make Sanskar hear) Swara, I’m telling you… Sanskar doesn’t love you now… You better get out of his thoughts… Tell me, if he loves you then why did he said that he’ll separate your name from his?

Swara: I don’t know… Maybe you’re right… Maybe he doesn’t -L-l-l-o-v-e- me now *sobbing*…

That was it for Sanskar… He can bear everything but not the blame that He doesn’t love her… And from the mouth of that person whom he loves the most… He comes out of the bushes and comes running behind Swara… He holds her elbow and makes her turn towards him…

Sanskar: What do you think of yourself Mrs. Maheshwari??? Say whatever you want to me… But don’t point a finger to my LOVE… do you get that?? Yes, that’s right that I’m angry on you… But that didn’t gave you any right to blame my love.. do you get that?? Tell me damn it…

Swara: (Happy tears) Sanskar… You don’t know how much I wanted to hear that… My heart can’t ever doubt on your love Sanskar… Never… I love you Sanskar…

She hugs him tightly…. So that even air can’t pass through them… The craving she had for him for the last 6 months.. for his love… for his touch… has been fulfilled…
He reciprocates the hug… By holding her so tight that they can hear eachothers heart beats… By not letting her go anywhere… By melting her in his arms…
Finally he spoke…
Sanskar: I love you too Swara…

Ragini and Nikhil are standing far away.. smiling… watching this Adorable couple and hoping that everything will be alright soon now…

THE END…

Sorry guys for torturing you with this boring story… And thanks for your support…

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MickeyMouse

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    21 Comments

    1. mica on October 31, 2016 6:54 am

      uugghhh.. i’m waiting that momeentt..aaarrgghhhhhh

    2. Purvi on October 31, 2016 7:59 am

      Awesome……

    3. myna on October 31, 2016 8:10 am

      it was truly amazing i loved it
      pls pls do write more will be waiting

    4. Manasvi on October 31, 2016 8:15 am

      Nice one..

      • MickeyMouse on October 31, 2016 11:33 am

        I didn’t intended to make Nikhil villain… He was supposed to be a supporting character?

    5. Simin on October 31, 2016 8:20 am

      Awww thats really sweet

    6. mou(swasan lover) on October 31, 2016 8:35 am

      superb

    7. pooja26 on October 31, 2016 8:36 am

      aww ….. 😉 😉
      swasan forever…….

    8. Adi on October 31, 2016 10:58 am

      oh thats so cute

    9. rabia on October 31, 2016 10:59 am

      Awesome ??

    10. MickeyMouse on October 31, 2016 11:34 am

      Thank you so much for liking it??

    11. kiana on October 31, 2016 11:41 am

      Very nice but I thought that lucky will come back

    12. Soujanya on October 31, 2016 11:52 am

      Nice

    13. IQRA222 on October 31, 2016 1:02 pm

      superb
      wish it would come in real

    14. s on October 31, 2016 1:41 pm

      nice..

    15. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on October 31, 2016 2:55 pm

      Outstanding dear..Loved it..keep writing like this..
      Take care
      Keep smiling?

    16. Alia on October 31, 2016 10:51 pm

      So cute..loved it

    17. Mahjabeen on October 31, 2016 11:40 pm

      Wow awesome endig dear….ahhh m craving fr my swasan sweet moments in real scene…hope it comes soon..

    18. MickeyMouse on November 1, 2016 12:27 am

      Thank you for liking it??

    19. vyshu10 on November 1, 2016 2:34 pm

      superb

    20. tani on November 3, 2016 9:13 am

      Beautiful

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