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SwaSan OS: The Left Vow (Teaser+Note)

PiyaliBy 28 Comments3 Mins Read

The whole crowd at the function was looking at her but she was looking towards him, deep into his eyes while his eyes were looking towards the one he was talking to.
Unknown to anyone , a drop of tear escaped her eye as she kept staring at him. She moved her face towards the other side.
He turned his eyes and while moving them around landed them on her. Her deep black eyes seemed to be silent yet saying a lot.
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“ Will you be my friend Miss Swara Gadodia….” Sanskar asked as he raised his hands for a handshake.
“ No….” She replied as she left him standing and moved forward , reaching a bit far she turned to look at him , he was confused. She smirked as she turned.
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His one “ No” made her life….
Her one “ No” Changed his life…
She loved him then , he didn’t…
He loves her now , but does she??
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Note : Hello friends , I have posted this glimpse just to let you all know that I know that I was supposed to post this OS before New Year but a sudden trip planned for 28th has changed my plans , so I won’t be able to post this story on New Year now but I promise to post it soon , , in the first week of January. Secondly , I would like to say that I realized that some people around seem to think my voting post as a “Game” or as a “Drama” or something to increase my comments , I am really sorry if you felt that way though it was not intended , I don’t even know why people thought and said that so Its a request from my side , please friends don’t praise me if you don’t find this OS worth praising , it would be better to get 0 comments with pride rather than getting many comments which people think as a tactic , I am sorry if I hurt anyone by any action of mine but being truthful , even I am hurt (Well , maybe thats the reason people call me sensitive) , I know no one actually said anything wrong but yet I felt hurt by some words so it would be better if you praise me only if you find it worth praising ,I won’t mind , thanks for reading this note .
Happy New Year In Advance to everyone reading….

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28 Comments

    • Piyali on

      Thanks alot dear…really beautiful DP……..Happy New Year in advance……….Love you…….be happy…….

    • Piyali on

      Thanks alot dear…Will try to update soon……..Happy New Year in advance……….Love you…….be happy…….

  3. mynalove on

    the teaser is amazing and very intriguing
    i am desparately waiting for this os but don’t write it in a hurry
    wish u a Happy New Year in advance

    and sorry if my comment on ur last post did hurt you
    i didn’t take this as a game or a drama

    • Piyali on

      Thanks a lot for the beautiful comment dear , thanks for understanding me……..dear you didn’t say anything , please don’t say sorry because then I feel like I hurt you….sorry……Happy New Year In Advance………Love you……..be happy……

  4. anurta on

    Finally u r going to write the os on swasan
    U can’t imagine how much hhhaaapppyyy……..I am
    Mmmuuuaaahhh love u………
    The teaser is jst superb duper loveable
    I’m waiting eagerly for ur os to be posted
    Post it soon but when u r free
    I guess u have a trip to visit any place if so then wish u happy and safe journey enjoy there
    And wish u happy happy happy happy……new year in advance…
    Waiting eagerly for ur os……?????????

    • Piyali on

      Awwwwwwwwwww , thanks for such a beautiful comment……..it really means a lot……thanks a lot dear , yup its a trip…….I’ll try to post it after coming back…..Happy Happy…….New Year in Advance……..Love you……be happy…..

    • Piyali on

      will try to post soon dear………….thanks a lot……..Happy New Year in advance………Love you……..be happy……

    • Piyali on

      will try to post soon dear………….thanks a lot……..Happy New Year in advance………Love you……..be happy……

    • Piyali on

      Thanks alot dear……will try to post soon…..Happy New Year in advance……….Love you…….be happy…….

  9. Abdul hafiz(Uma) on

    Aww,so sweet and interesting concept.. Plz continue dear..All the best for the further parts..I will love to read it..
    Take care
    Keep smiling?

  10. srusti on

    It was very interesting and update next part if u have time and don’t bother that words which hurt u and keep strong dear

  15. Blossom on

    Nice promo. It’s ok u can post the os afterwards when u get time coz spending time with family is also imp. In my opinion generally speaking ppl conduct polls/voting coz they r a bit confused abt characters or storyline. So it is like basically asking ppl their suggestions or opinion. I don’t think it as a drama or game coz in polls mostly v cmt or give suggestions regarding the characters. This is my pov. Don’t feel sad. Others also have their pov. U can’t satisfy every1. Okay so swasan won. No problem coz story is gud. Advance happy new year take care nd enjoy ur trip

  17. Shagun on

    Di don’t give attention to the the bashers at all…
    They r here only for bashing everybody so why wasting our precious time giving attention to them..
    Can’t wait to read further
    Save journey and Happy New Year