Close Menu
  • Submit Your Article
  • Featured
  • Activity
  • Members
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
  • Home
  • Contact Us
  • Submit Article
  • Activity
  • Register
  • Login
  • Members
  • Logout, {username}
Facebook X (Twitter) Instagram
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
  • Home
  • Featured
  • Spoilers
  • News
  • Reviews
  • Poll Zone
  • Fan Fiction
  • Episodic Analysis
  • Humour
Telly UpdatesTelly Updates
Home»Fan Fiction»SWASAN one shot: my love my life my sanskar…
Fan Fiction Swaragini

SWASAN one shot: my love my life my sanskar…

administratorBy administratorMarch 8, 201633 Comments6 Mins Read
Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Share
Facebook Twitter LinkedIn Pinterest Email

hey guys! kritika here…inspite of my exams i cant stop my thoughts…i will post movie world very soon..

presenting u swasan one shot:my love my life my sanskar…

SWARA’S POV

baby!(swara tells her love story to her new born baby girl)i know u are missing ur dad! but dear he too needed rest na! after all he was with us since 2 days…he didnt even had a
sound sleep…but dont worry today we are going home! thats y he went store to bring necessary things for us..aaa..kk…i wont bore u…insted i will tell u our love story..

b4 2 years,on march 8, I was admitted to a local hospital in mumbai after being diagnosed with dengue…. I was quite disappointed – my results were just four days away and I was being hospitalized for more than a week….i should have been celebrating after 4 days for my result..of course i a the topper..if not topper then atleast im a rank holder..

My mood took a 180 degree turn when I saw this handsome man walk towards me….. I was on my bed, burning hot with high fever, but still I was feeling good looking at him…. He actually was my doctor and had come for the daily checkup – lucky me! He checked my BP and pulse count, and the fact that this was going to be my everyday routine totally made me forget about dengue…. I was actually blushing, which he probably noticed, or maybe thought my cheeks were all red because of the high fever….i didnt forget to see his batch- sanskar maheshwari..awww what a name!

I would look forward to his routine round, every morning… No matter how dizzy, sleepy or ill I was, the fact that he was around would wake me up…. One day, it dawned on me that he was seeing me every day in those stupid hospital clothes and unkempt hair and I thought, “Oh boy, I look much better than this! You have to see me outside this hospital and all healthy…” I was going crazy for this guy….

One morning, he came for the regular round; I got up and sat feeling conscious of my hair and how I was looking… Surprisingly, that day he said, “Good morning”! And all I did was whisper back my greeting in a hoarse voice as I had a sore throat… He finished his daily routine of BP check and other file work and left. When he left, my mom asked me why I didn’t greet the doctor…. And I was like “Nooo…I did…my stupid voice ditched me!” Obviously, he also didn’t hear me, I felt so bad….

The next day I got up before it was time for his round, cleared my throat and was all prepared to talk to him…. But, sadly, he didn’t wish me nor didn’t he check my BP or pulse count. He did the file work and went… I kept cursing myself: “Look at what you have done!”

Every day I would try to start a conversation with him, but I couldn’t gather enough courage… And he never spoke to me after that day… All he did was a look at me once or twice and when I would catch him looking at me he would look away….

On my last day at the hospital, he came for the morning round and then just disappeared from the ward. I was having very mixed feelings – on the one hand I was happy to be my healthy self again, but at the same time I was feeling sad that I wouldn’t be able to see him again…. For a moment I wished I wouldn’t get discharged at all….

After all these days, the only thing I knew about him was his name…. It was time for me to leave, all the paperwork was done, and my eyes were searching for him…but there was no sign of him… At last, I left with a heavy lump in my heart and the thought that this was it, I would never ever see him again… But to my surprise, as I was walking away from the hospital premises I saw him coming towards me…

“Thank you God!” I kept whispering, and then my mom said, “You should thank your doctor…” If only she knew my situation! All I could manage was a smile at him… He smiled back…and my heart just melted…

However, I was not ready to let it go; I decided to take the next step and started looking for him on Facebook…Thank you, Mr Zuckerberg, for your awesome invention. Since he had rather unusual name, it didn’t take me too much time to find him. And there he was, I was even more delighted to know he was a marwadi; I have always found marwadi men interesting.

Friend request sent…! TADAAA!!

Guess what angel, within an hour he accepted my request… That night we chatted till 4 a.m., and within 12 days he proposed. Of course I said “Yes!”

It had been a year since we had been in a relationship…and he is such a gentleman and the perfect guy for me. Who would have ever thought that suffering from a disease like dengue would actually be a blessing in disguise?!

after a relationship of 1 year we married happily…n again after 1 year we are blessed with a cute angel like u…

SWARA’S POV ENDS..

“aww!” swara says…”ur dad”

“swara..swara..” sanskar pancs..”are u ok?is baby ok?do u want anything?”

“im ok sanskar”

“then y are u sitting?” sanskar asked..

“why only u have the right to sit mr. sanskar maheshwari..?”

“swara!!!”

swara grins..

“what were u doing till now?” asked curious sanskar..

“telling our angel our love story” replied swara..

“awww…did u tell her ur blushing during our 1st meet?” asked sanskar teasingly…

“u noticed that?hawww!”

(guys sanskar was sitting on the hospital bed opposite to swara)

sanskar laughs while swara beats him playfully..

then they both bursts out laughing…n our angel she smiles cutely n makes noise..

swara cutely kisses her daughter’s nose..while sanskar caresses her head..

“SARA” they both said together..

“and sanskar’s SA” says swara leaving the sentence incomplete for sanskar.

“swara’s RA” completes sanskar…

n they both side hug with their daughter SARA smiling in the middle of them…

#Kritika

Share. Facebook Twitter Pinterest LinkedIn Tumblr Email
Previous ArticleDIL DOSTI DUNIYADAARI (Episode 6)
Next Article ISHQ LOVE KAADHAL…..(intro)

33 Comments

  1. barbie on March 8, 2016 5:49 pm

    Sooooo swt…. nce name “sara”

    • Kritika on March 8, 2016 6:38 pm

      Tq barbie!!

  2. ridhima on March 8, 2016 5:51 pm

    awwww… so cute loved it and specially name of the angel…..

    • Kritika on March 8, 2016 6:39 pm

      Tq ridhima..im glad that u liked her name..

  3. divya on March 8, 2016 5:51 pm

    aww…awesome….such a cute love story…

    • kritika on March 8, 2016 7:03 pm

      tq divya!

  4. Nehavishnu on March 8, 2016 5:53 pm

    awww soo sweet !!!:-) nice update dr and even I have exams but can’t let go of our swasan even for some ime 😛

    • Kritika on March 8, 2016 6:40 pm

      Hey me too leaving swasan is impossible. Anyways ty nehavishnu..

  5. L Khan on March 8, 2016 5:54 pm

    Awesome

    • Kritika on March 8, 2016 6:40 pm

      Tq L KHAN!!

  6. meher on March 8, 2016 6:04 pm

    Aww itz so cute yr….i also want a doctor 😛

    • kritika on March 8, 2016 6:55 pm

      tq n me too…

  7. shabrin on March 8, 2016 6:14 pm

    It is sooooo cute….Sara name is nice

    • kritika on March 8, 2016 7:04 pm

      tq shabrin!

  8. Adaa on March 8, 2016 6:18 pm

    Soooo good…….

    • kritika on March 8, 2016 7:05 pm

      tq adaa..i loved ur name..

  9. Angel on March 8, 2016 6:29 pm

    Nice

    • kritika on March 8, 2016 7:05 pm

      tq angel!

  10. shanaya on March 8, 2016 6:34 pm

    Awwww awesome story

    • Kritika on March 8, 2016 6:40 pm

      Tq shanaya!

  11. nandu on March 8, 2016 6:50 pm

    cute storyyyyy ever

    • kritika on March 8, 2016 7:02 pm

      tq nandu!

  12. Bisha on March 8, 2016 7:06 pm

    A vrry happy love story..too cute ..like SARA… 😉

    • kritika on March 8, 2016 7:49 pm

      tq bisha!

  13. niti on March 8, 2016 7:07 pm

    aww..how sweet !!

    • kritika on March 8, 2016 7:49 pm

      tq niti!

  14. lisania on March 8, 2016 7:15 pm

    Wth is this ?? Whatever. !:(

    • kritika on March 8, 2016 7:51 pm

      see lisania..kisi ke bolne se kuch hota nahi hai ha! n if u cant comment anything good dont comment anything bad yr..sorry fr hurting u …this is ur pov n u have written that only.what to say now?

  15. soana on March 8, 2016 7:16 pm

    Lisania please ok…. Appreciate her efforts …. Because of people like u the world sucks!

  16. angel on March 8, 2016 8:24 pm

    AAWWWWW sooooooooooo cute story

  17. Anam on March 8, 2016 9:20 pm

    Awwww! What a cute n lovely love story.

  18. Kanak on March 9, 2016 12:11 am

    So cute …..

  19. Dhara on March 22, 2016 3:19 pm

    Awww so cute n lovely story

Sponsor
Latest Posts

Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance

November 29, 2025

Manpasand Ki Shaadi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Arohi Receives Love While Kanika Grows Jealous

November 29, 2025

Advocate Anjali Awasthi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Anjali Accused of Theft While Padma Goes Missing

November 29, 2025

Shiv Shakti (Colors) 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mahadev Stops Ravan and Declares His Second Test Failed

November 29, 2025

Advocate Anjali Awasthi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Kavya Misuses Mehek’s Jewelry

November 29, 2025
Sponsor
Latest Comments
  • Subha on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Anon on Mangal Lakshmi 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Mangal Is Disqualified, Then Given a Tough Second Chance
  • Anonymous on Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 27th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Intrigues and Secrets in Virani Family Wedding Plans
  • Yoni on Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai 22nd November 2025 Written Episode Update: Broken Circles
  • Enam on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Enam on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
  • Enam on Anupama 28th November 2025 Written Episode Update: Pari Defends Anupama and Video Evidence Released
  • Hina on Anupama 29th November 2025 Written Episode Update: A New Alliance and Uncovered Deceptions
© 2025 TellyUpdates - All Rights Reserved. Privacy Policy | Terms

Type above and press Enter to search. Press Esc to cancel.