Guys here is first part of my ff……. Hope you like it….
India
Kolkata
9:00p.m
Gadodiya house
A man is coming home drunk….he knocks the door…. A lady opens the door……
Lady: Shekhar what is this??? How can you come home drunk….Don’t know what these Bengali’s had done with my son….
Shekhar: Maa….??No no Mrs parvati..if today I am a drunkard,a lonely person so the reason is you and your so called granddaughter Ragini….Not my shona or mishti…Now move I am sleepy…..
Lady: Ya ya those Bengali’s had always came between my ladoo’s happiness and you are favouring them…. don’t know when will you open your eyes……
Maheshwari house
Sanskar room
Sanskar (teary eyes):Where are you swara???Why are you giving me this much punishment…. I can’t bear it more please come back to me….
His thoughts are interupted by a voice…..
Voice: Papa what happened to you why are you crying??
Sanskar: No sparsh i am not crying….it’s just something went into my eyes……
Sparsh: K papa…But papa Can i ask you something???
Sanskar: Yes my son…..
Sparsh: Papa where is mumma???Why she’s not with us????You know i and Samar both miss her very much….
Sanskar: Don’t worry beta…she will come soon
Sparsh: Promise papa…
Sanskar: Promise beta…..
Bose house
Sharmishta: Hey Maa Durga!! Please protect my daughter against all evils…. Wherevrr she is keep her happy……. Saying this she sleeps….
New York
Morning
Singhaniya Mansion
Lady (shouts): Raksh,Atharva,Kiara,Emi…Where are you all??
Kids: We are here mumma/bua……
Swara: Come kids have your breakfast……You have to go to school also naa….
Kids: OK
After sometime….swara goes to a dark room… There are many pictures of maheshwari family members, gadodiya family members and sumi photo also….
Swara(crying): I miss you all very much… But I can’t forget what you have done with me….I hate you ragini and sanskar….You both were the one whom I loved and trusted alot bit you both …Whatever you have done with me you both….No no you all have to pay for that….Because swara Singhania is coming…..Then she caresses sumi PIC and says Maa Don’t worry gadodiya family has to pay for your every single tear…..and recalls the past……
Screen frezes on Swara’s determined face…..
This chapter is ended here…..Plz…Do comment and tell you like it or not….
Guys there is no negative character in my story……
Precap: Swara reach India… Swasumi meet..
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