SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I
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Swasan pregnancy – Samar is born
CHAPTER 63
6 MONTHS LATER
Swara : Come on baby, Tell Mumma… Mum…ma…mum…ma… My sweety pie! Tell na Samar. Mumma!
Sanskaar entered the bedroom, but stopped at the doorway as he saw his two most favourite people playing with each other. In the few short months that Sanskaar had known Samar, He was shocked at how Samar had entered his heart.
Every cry, Every toy, Every tantrum and every smile of his was etched into his heart. Three months ago, When Samar had severe stomach ache, Sanskaar had lost an entire week’s of sleep. He had wondered at that time if it would be the same way every time Samar fell ill. Or if he hurt himself. And if they had more children, How it would feel.
He looked at Swara now. She was such a natural mother. His lips softened to a smile as he looked at her disheveled appearance. She was wearing a T-shirt that he had bought for her which said BEST MOM EVER. She loved that shirt and wore it every 3 days. He saw her smile and laugh as Samar gabbled off in baby talk.
Sanskaar felt proud. Though he was only 6 months old, Samar was very smart. He had learnt to turn over and crawl by the time he was 4 months old. Soon after, he learnt how to high-five and give a fist pump, not to mention peek-a-boo. Yes, his son was very smart.
It only made the latest challenge more interesting. Just 4 days ago, he had challenged Swara by telling that Samar would tell papa first before Mumma. Swara had gladly accepted the challenge and seemed like she was in full preparation for it.
Swara’s voice caught him off-guard.
Swara (smiling at Sanskaar) : Do you think you’ll ever just come inside? Everyday you come and stand there at the door looking at the two of us. Why?
Sanskaar (smiling sheepishly) : I don’t mean to do that on purpose. (setting his briefcase down and walking towards the baby and Swara) I come inside all set to go in but then there you are, my love and my son, having fun together. You make such a perfect picture that I feel bad to come and disturb you.
Swara laughed and got off the bed. She placed two pillows on either side of Samar to protect him and then walked towards Sanskaar. She accepted his kiss on the cheek, then began removing his tie.
Swara (softly, tugging on the tie) : You know, Mr Maheshwari, the scene you see everyday isn’t a perfect picture. Do you want to know why? Because you are not there.
Sanskaar (placing his arms on Swara’s shoulders) : Because I am not there?
Swara (nodding) : Without Sanskaar, Swara isn’t complete. We are Mr Maheshwari and I… How can baby and I be complete without you? Sanskaar should be there, Papa should be there… Only then are we perfect.
Sanskaar (softly) : You know… I think there was a reason we were supposed to not like each other when we first met. I think there was a reason we struggled so much to finally be together.
Swara (placing her head on his chest) : Really? Why’s that?
Sanskaar : Maybe if we had found each other easily, we wouldn’t have paid much attention to every moment, every second that we are together and apart. We wouldn’t value our relationship so much.
Swara (sighing contentedly) : I love you Sanskaar.
Sanskaar (smiling and cradling his wife’s face) : I love you too, my Shona!
She brought him a glass of water as he changed into house clothes and played with Samar.
Sanskaar : Vaise, Swara… You are cheating.
Swara (surprised) : Me? How?
Sanskaar : You are teaching your son to tell Mumma? That’s cheating.
Swara (laughing) : How is it cheating?
Sanskaar : You get to spend the whole day with him all day every day. I don’t. If you teach him the full day, obviously he’ll tell Mumma first. Cheater cock! Jao.. I don’t want to talk to you.
He pouted as Swara watched him amused. He was surprised when she hugged him instead of retorting to his comment.
Swara (sadly) : My maternity leave ends tomorrow. How am I supposed to leave my baby here and go for work? I’ve never left him for a long time. (looking at Sanskaar’s face with anxiety) I’m scared. I don’t want to go.
Sanskaar (hugging her tightly) : Don’t worry. It’ll be hard. But I know my Swara. She’s very sensible and strong. She will go to work day after and once she comes back, will be with Samar. Samar won’t feel bad. He knows his Mumma has to work. He’ll be a good boy. Isn’t that right, My brave boy?
Samar (smiling) : Goo…..
Swara and Sanskaar laughed. Sanskaar picked him up from the bed.
Sanskaar : That’s right… Good boy.. That’s what you are. Good boy Samar. My strong son.
Swara smiled. She mouthed ” I LOVE YOU ” to him and he stared at her with a delighted grin. Samar, growing tired of being ignored by his parents let out a loud wail and then began babbling.
Samar : Goo gaa.. glooo kala… eeeeee
Swara laughed. She looked at Sanskaar and they nodded.
Swara and Sanskaar (each kissing one of Samar’s cheeks) : We love you, Samar.
Samar smiled, let out a loud cackle and clapped his hands.
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A MONTH LATER
Swara (rolling her eyes) : Laksh! Calm down. She’ll be here soon.
Laksh (glaring at her) : What do you mean calm down? Her flight was supposed to land three hours ago. Which it did… It does not take three hours to come home.
Sakshi (eating some biscuits that Adarsh was forcing her to eat) : Laksh! Sit down. You’ll give me my morning sickness in the afternoon. God, Swara…How on Earth did you survive 9 months? Morning sickness is so annoying.
Swara looked at Samar who was in Uttara’s arms sleeping.
Swara (fondly) : It’s such a magical time. Just enjoy it Sakshi.
Laksh (abruptly) : Swara! Call her again.
Swara (hiding a smile) : Sure.. Wait.
She dialled Saanvi’s number but only got a switched off message. She frowned. Though it was funny and delightful to see Laksh so worried for Saanvi, it still had been three hours since she landed. Where was she?
Laksh frowned. Where was Saanvi? How could she make him worry like this? Didn’t she know how worried he’d be?
He thought back to three months ago when she had knocked on the door to his room.
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Saanvi : Laksh! Can I enter?
Laksh : Sure Saanvi! Come in. Do you have to tell me something?
Saanvi (walking in hesitantly) : Umm.. Yes. I just came to tell bye.
Laksh (surprised) : Bye? Why? Are you going somewhere?
Saanvi (nodding) : I’ve stayed here more than a year. It’s not really right. Papa is alone at home. I think I should go to him.
Laksh : But why… suddenly? Why do you want to go?
Saanvi (smiling) : I told you na.. Papa is alone and he’s missing me. Don’t worry… I’ll come back in some time.
Laksh : A week or so?
Saanvi : I’m not quite sure. Why don’t I tell you later?
He nodded reluctantly. Saanvi turned to go outside, but then looked back at him.
Saanvi : I’ll miss you a lot. Bye Laksh.
Laksh (sadly) : I’ll miss you too. Come back soon.
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Laksh thought of that conversation now. Saanvi had left him for three whole months. She had left for Mumbai and Laksh was stunned at how much he missed her.
He missed her witty repartee, her help with his editing. He missed the way she scolded him for being such a dramaqueen everytime. He missed his outings to the park only because Saanvi dragged him there. A few months ago, When he wanted to propose to her, He had had no idea what she meant to him. But today, he was scared at how much she meant to him.
She hadn’t done anything. She was normal as always. Helping the mothers a little, doing the editing, talking with Swara. But somehow, She had slowly grown closer to Laksh. He thought of them as friends, but he knew that the fear about where she was now was not due to mere friendship.
Saanvi had entered into his life like a whirlpool with her confession and all, yet she had mellowed down so much that she put aside her own feelings and became friends with him, not asking for anything else.
Laksh (thinking) : I need Saanvi in my life. Where are you?
Swara : Laksh!
Laksh looked at Swara blankly.
Laksh : Yes?
Swara : Why do you care if Saanvi is here or not?
Laksh stiffened. He looked around but Swara had been quiet enough so that only he heard the question.
Laksh : Because she’s my friend.
Swara (laughing) : For an author who writes about romance in his mysteries, you’re pretty clueless.
Laksh (scowling) : I’m not. I…
Saanvi (entering the house with many bags) : Hello Swara! Hey Sakshi, Adarsh, Uttara, my darling Samar…. (looking at Laksh) Hey!
Laksh (dazed) : Hey!
Laksh looked at Saanvi with a sort of longing in his eyes. He had not seen her face to face for three months and now.. Seeing her now made him feel warm all over and light. He frowned as he saw how late she was.
Laksh (demanding) : WHERE WERE YOU?
Saanvi (surprised) : I’m sorry?
Laksh : Your flight landed three hours ago. Where were you all this while? DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW WORRIED WE ALL WERE?
His last outburst woke up Samar who began crying. Swara took him in her arms and watched the conversation as she rocked him back to sleep.
Saanvi (exasperated) : I just got a bit side tracked. Why are you so angry with me?
LAksh : Angry? Who’s angry? Now being concerned for someone is called being angry. Great!
Saanvi : Laksh! That’s enough. None of the others are snapping at me. Only you are.
Laksh : Well, YOU DIDN’T LEAVE THEM THE WAY YOU DID ME!
Saanvi stood stunned. Whatever she had expected Laksh to tell, That wasn’t it.
Saanvi (quietly) : What do you mean?
Laksh : 3 MONTHS? YOU GO FOR 3 WHOLE MONTHS AND YOU SPOKE TO EVERYONE HERE EXCEPT FOR ME… HOW IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MAKE ME FEEL? DON’T YOU CARE?
Saanvi : CARE? WHY DO YOU CARE LAKSH? WHY DO YOU CARE IF I’M LATE? WHY DO YOU CARE THAT I NEVER SPOKE TO YOU IN THESE MONTHS? WHY DO YOU CARE ABOUT THE FACT THAT I WANTED TO, EVERY SINGLE MINUTE OF EVERY SINGLE DAY? WHY DO YOU CARE ABOUT ME?
Laksh : Why do I care about you? BECAUSE I FREAKING LOVE YOU..
The others who were watching this exchange smiled happily. Finally, After almost 2 years, Saanvi was getting her wish.
Swara : YESSSS! (Samar waked up again and Swara murmurs softly) Oh shit…. Sorry beta! Go to sleep.. Go to sleep.
Saanvi (with tears in her eyes) : Don’t make jokes like this. It’s really cruel.
Laksh : Joke? This is not a joke, Saanvi. I didn’t realise it until I said it. But I do.. I do love you. I don’t know when I started.. I don’t know how it started. But I do love you.
Saanvi : And Ragini?
Laksh : I did love her. A part of me mat never stop. But that part is so insignificant compared to the rest of my which wants you. I will not compare between the two of you, but what I felt for her is not what i feel for you. I need you.. I need you like I never needed anyone else. I want you the way no one can ever want you. I love you Saanvi, I swear.
Sanvi : O, Swear not by the moon, that inconstant moon, that monthly changes in her circled orb, lest that thy love prove likewise variable.
Laksh (with a soft smile) : Romeo and Juliet! Alright, Tell me what I should swear by?
Saanvi (walking towards Laksh) : Do not swear at all; Or, if thou wilt, swear by thy gracious self, which is the God of my idolatry,and i’ll believe you.
Laksh (disbelievingly) : You believe me?
Saanvi (nodded with tears in her eyes) : I do. I can see the look I’ve been waiting to see for such a long time in your eyes. I can see the tenderness, the… I love you so much Laksh!
Laksh (throwing his arms around her) : I love you too Saanvi. I love you too.
Sanskaar came from his study, papers in his hand. Seeing everyone watching Laksh and Saanvi together, he grew puzzled.
Sanskaar : What’s going on?
Swara (looking at her husband happily) : Baby, I do believe we’re about to have another wedding.
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5 YEARS LATER
Samar : Papa! Papa! Story.. Story!
Sanskaar ( smiling at his son who was tugging his hand) : Samar! Wait beta.. I have a little work. Why don’t you ask Mumma?
Samar : Mumma’s sleeping. She’s very tired because of Sahir.
Sanskaar sighed. Their second son Sahir was born only a month ago and they were learning that though raising one son was tough, raising two was even harder.
Though everyone helped take care of one another, the younger crowd were too many. Samar, Sahir, Adarsh and Sakshi’s daughter Antara, Ragini and Karan’s son Rishi and Laksh and Saanvi’s daughter Avni… All of them were born within successive years and now, the Maheshwari parivaar was bigger than ever.
Samar : Papa… Papa!
Sanskaar (keeping his papers on the table and picking up Samar) : Haan beta! Come.. I’ll tell you a story. Where’s everyone else?
Samar (shaking his head) : They didn’t want to listen.
Sanskaar (laughing) : Okay then… Let’s have some Papa-beta time.
Keeping Samar on his lap, Sanskaar opened his mouth to tell his story. But Samar interrupted him before he could open his mouth.
Samar : Papa! Today I asked Mumma to give 100 Rs to Shyamu Kaka.
Sanskaar (surprised) : Our gardener? Why?
Samar : I wanted to give him Sahir and the hundred rupees. Sahir’s no fun. He doesn’t even play with me. He’s too small.
Sanskaar smiled at his son.
Sanskaar : Do you know you were just as small before? You were as small as baby Sahir.
Samar (shaking his head) : No. I’m a big strong boy. I’m the eldest.
Sanskaar : That’s right. You are the eldest. You are a big strong boy. Which is why you’re supposed to be extra careful with your decisions. You need to think about your younger siblings : Antara, Avni, Rishi and Sahir.
Samar : Huh?
Sanskaar laughed.
Sanskaar : When I was small like you, My Bade papa told me a story. Do you want to hear it?
Samar : YES! Story! Yayyy….
Sanskaar : There was a father who had 4 children. The children kept fighting with each other and never played together.
Samar (horrified) : They never played?
Sanskaar (nodding) : They never played. Only fought and fought and fought. Their papa was very tired of this. So he went and brought 10 sticks which he tied together.
Samar (fascinated) : Then?
Sanskaar : He gave this bundle to the eldest child and asked him to break it. The eldest one tried. He bent it this way, then that way. Ugghhh..Come on, He cried out. Finally, he told no, he couldn’t do it and gave it to the next one. What do you think, Could he do it?
Samar (shouting) : NO!
Sanskaar : Exactly. He couldn’t do it. Nor could the third child or fourth. Everyone lost. Then their Papa took off the string that kept the sticks together. Now he handed each of them one stick and told them to break it. This time all the children managed to.
Samar : That’s good na?
Sanskaar (shaking his head) : Even they were very happy that they managed to break it. But their Papa told them… When the sticks were together, not one of you managed to cause them harm. They were strong and united. But once they became separate, they broke easily. Remember, the same can apply to you children. Stay together, grow together, play together, respect one another. The eldest show your younger siblings what is right and wrong. Be generous and devoted to them but at the same time, make sure they don’t go into the wrong hands. The younger kids, respect your elders. Believe that they know everything and will always protect you. The children heard their father’s words and became united.
Sanskaar frowned a little. Had he touched too serious a topic for a 5 year old? Would Samar even understand? Samar had always been a perceptive young kid, full of questions and really really smart. But maybe this was too much?
Samar (seriously) : Papa?
Sanskaar : Haan?
Samar : I will always take care of my sisters and brothers. Antu, Avni, Rishi and Sahir. I will always protect them. I am the eldest. I will be friends with them always. Then one day, I’ll tell my babies this story just like Bade Papa told you.
Sanskaar (hugging Samar) : Sounds like a plan, Champ!! I’m so proud of you. Now, Come on. It’s time for bed. Come on.
He sat in the chair as he rocked his son back to sleep. Once Samar fell asleep, Swara entered.
Swara (softly) : That was a beautiful story.
Sanskaar : You heard that? I thought you were sleeping.
Swara : I was. But then Samar never came to bed, so I came to check. (ruffling her sleeping son’s hair) You never told me this story.
Sanskaar : why didn’t you come inside?
Swara (smiling) : It was a father-son moment. I couldn’t come in between this.
Sanskaar : Every moment needs you. I need you. Bade papa was and will always be my inspiration. But you are my strength.
Swara (kissing him softly) : And you, mine.
Sanskaar : 6 years and counting…. Here’s to forever, Mrs Maheshwari!
Swara : We will be together forever and more. As as long it’s Mr Maheshwari and I….
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PRECAP : EPILOGUE 1
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I’m not really sure how to end this ff…. it means so much to me.
MMAI began simple enough, but soon grew into something that’s close to my heart. I’ve spent almost an entire year on this story and will miss writing it terribly.
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It’s not just the story… Each and every character meant soo much to me. The Laksh’s love story was never part of my plan.. it was purely an impulsive move at that time.. But I got to write a character like Saanvi for that… There’s just too much to tell about this story and i have no idea how to thank you all…
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i will save my thanksgiving speech for the epilogues…
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BUT I DO HAVE A REQUEST… PLEASE SILENT READERS, IF YOU GUYS ARE STILL THERE, PLEASE DO ME A FAVOUR AND COMMENT YOUR FAVOURITE MOMENT IN MMAI…. JUST A REQUEST FOR THIS LAST CHAPTER…
AND MY REGULAR COMMENTERS, PLEASE COMMENT YOUR FAVOURITE MOMENT IN MMAI AS WELL….
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THANK YOU EVERYONE… THANK YOU FOR BEARING MMAI AND ME..
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197 Comments
still can’t believe MMAI is ending… love this story… picking one best moment from this story will be unjustified… i was literally thinking y cant they plot this types of story on TV
Thnxxx Jaya 😀 😀
Not being able to choose an episode makes ur comment even more spl… TYSM!!!!!
TV?? I guess probably bcos they can’t drag it for long then 😛 😛
haha
I always loved this story…all good things have to end….plz do write new ff
Thnxxx soo much Anita 😀 😀
Glad you loved MMAi!!!! <3 <3
I have started a new ff… IT's called She's not for me
I will be continuing my other ff as well 😀 😀
Soooo good
Thnxxxx Simin 😀 😀
I cannot come up with one favourite moment man there are too many. It was a nice experience reading this story and still feel like need to keep reading. My hearty wishes for you.
Sunkar!!! It’s been ages since I saw you 😀 😀
How’ve you been?? 🙂 🙂
Thnxxx soo much 😀 😀
I’m grateful for ur words <3 <3
Awe
Thnxxx Tamil 😀 😀
Amazing as always
Thnxxx Daljeet for always being there… 😀 😀 <3
Awesome
Thnxxx once again… IT’s been a long time since i saw you… How are you?? 😀 😀
Fine dear
Hw r u
I’m fine too 😀 😀
Anjuuuuuuuuuu.. sorry today i can’t comment.. !! i can’t bear such blissful ending.. !! m crying.. !! it’s soo adorable … n damn emotional to handle.. !! i have no words to express my sentiments right away, though willl say “I LOVE MY SWASAN N THE WRITER”..
Thnk u.. ;-*
Kaksssss <3 <3
Don't cry babyy…. just as we remember Swasan everyday, we'll remember mmai toooo…. <3 <3
LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH!!! <3 :* :* :*
Tysm for being a part of mmai and supporting me <3
Btw I answered ur qn in the prev chappie… I'm 19 yrs old 😀 😀
My bubbly Kakks… LOVE YOU!!!
LOVE U TOOO ANJUUUUUUU*hug…
yup I will always miss MMAI as i miss MY SwaSan..
haaa i just checked ur reply..actually i didn’t comment from account na,soo notification nehi mila..
uhhh. u r 19… goshhhh u r seriously too old.. 2 years elder than me.. 😛 :O…
I have a msg from CHANUUU,,,,
She is missing u soooo much..!! ;-*
You do??? Pls tell her i miss her toooo… I replied to her in wattpad… pls ask her to see it… <3 <3
Too old?? 😛 😛
Haha.. in a good way? Or a bad way??
Awesome… Miss these story a lot…..?
Thnxxx soujanya 😀 😀
will miss writing it!! 🙁 🙂
Every moment of this story is my favorite I can’t describe in word its a amazing story u know when u r irregular how much I miss this story swasan was so smooth n pleasant???????? i love it I can’t take one as my fav ?????? but holi moments was most awesome for me cause from holis moment part I started reading this story once again want to say that I love the story line ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ come back with another story like this love it ???n love u too for giving us such a beautiful story dear?????
Awww… Thnxxx Tanuja 😀 😀
Partly one of the reasons why I wanted to finish this… MMAI means a lot and I don’t want to be irregular with it again… Once collstarts, I won’t be able to do it justice.. which is why i wanted to finish it noe…
LOVE you for saying it’s one of ur faveee…. <3 <3
Thnxxx soo much for ur word…
LOVE you tooooooooo
Come back with another story ???????? dearie
Its just amazing storyline anjali….I have read each and every part of it and every time with increased love for these character…Mr.Meheshwari and I has been a imp story for this year…
N this definetely tought to be pateint for the things you love…. sometimes i was so angry on u for taking so much time to post next update…but then when i read d part i forget all d anger…
Thnxxx Beba 😀 😀
Aww… so sweet of you…
ik I’ve been very irregular… but hopefully managed to make up for it these past few days.. <3 <3
Thnxxx for being a part of mmai always <3 <3
yupp u have make up for dat….
🙂 🙂 🙂
haha.. Thnxx 😀
Wow… Di that was amazing… And m sorry I couldn’t comment on last one as I saw it just now I mean through the link u gave… Abd shud day ur ff was wonderful… Enjoyed reading it a lot .. Although I started reading it late and had to read almost half of ur ff in one go… But still this journey was so different… Nd m really a big fan of ur writings ….. ??? and do tell a single moment out of this magnificent journey would not work so m saying I loved each n every moment of ur ff
Thnxxxx Shreeyu!!
Pls don’t tell sorry and all… The fact that u read it is more than enough… <3 <3
Glad you loved mmai <3 <3 <3
aww… TYSM!!! That's very niceee of you….Ur comment makes mmai allthe more spl <3 <3
Hehe that’s really sweet of u Di… M also writing few things I’ll b glad if u could read and tell ur reviews☺
SUREE!!!!
Pls give link or tell the name 😀 😀
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/4171/?profiletab=posts
Here u go with the link this of my TU profile so u will all my works here ?
Please give a princess to sanskar
Thnxxx Sagarika 😀 😀
Will surely give <3
A wonderful story and a wonderful writer
Aww… thnnxxx Praju 😀 😀
So nice of you!!! <3
Nyc
Thnxx Sus 😀 😀
Amazing update… will miss this story alot… its very different form other stories… waiting for the epilogues… pls post next update soon…
Thnxxx So much Dharshaini 😀 😀
I love ur name <3 <3
Glad you like MMAI 😀 😀
I don’t know if you had remembered me or not! I don’t know I had just landed over here after a long time….and what I saw was last chapter of yours! Truly after reading the previous parts and this.. It was beautiful ! From initial episode reading this story and talking to you was amazing my favourite part was the one when sanskaar was going to propose Ragini but Swara came in between… Their kisses romancing each other…it was just wow!! Truly you are commendable writer….hope to see yours more stories soon!!
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AASHIIIIIII!!!!!!
How are you??? OFC I REMEMBER YOU!!!
Do you even have to ask??
I can’t believe ur back <3 <3 <3
YAYYY!!! you gonna disappear again?? Pls don't!!!
Thnxxxxx soo much Aashi 😀 😀 <3 <3
Awesome dear
Thnxxx Febi 😀 😀
the most favorite moment.. when swara gave Sanskar painting of him and his bade papa
that’s it… goosshh it’s soo touchy
Aww.. Mica… I love that moment too…
Thnxxxx….
Love you sooo much for always being there <3 <3 <3
Hi Anjali, I read your story first in wattpad and then started following it in tellyupdates. I read most of the chapters in a single go. It is one of the finest stories that I have read and I have read quite a few. Your characterisations and dialogues are magnificent.
You have made me look at Sanskar and Swara in an entirely new light.
I had neglected my family and my work for two full days when I read the story from the beginning upto the 4th chapter at one go. The story was too good for me to put my phone down and go to the kitchen. Believe me when I say we ordered dinner outside two consecutive days as I refused to stop reading.
I am feeling bad to see the story end. Please write a lengthy epilogue. Hope you come up with new stories.
Sorry. Its 48th chapter not 4th chapter
WOAHH!!!
2 days srsly?? 😮 😮 😮
Tell ur family sorry from my side <3 🙂 🙂
But.. Srsly… Thnxxxx soo much <3 <3
Ur comment really touched my heart!! <3 <3 😀 😀
I will always treasure it 😀 😀 😀
Thnxxxx once again <3 <3
I am already writing another story 😀 🙂 🙂
Anju it’s beautiful 🙂 I liked the way Laksh out bursted, the way Saanvi confronted him. And the challenge between SwaSan are never ending 🙂
Thnxxxx Dhara dii… Glad you liked it!!! 😀 😀
Love you!!!!
i so love this FF… will miss not seeing Mr. Maheshwari and Mrs. Maheshwari
Thnxxx Kavita 😀 😀
Glad you love mmai <3 <3
its a wonderful story.
Thnxx soomuch Stephy 😀 😀
I m a silent reader and how can u ask us to pick one best moment when u know we can’t.Best wishes to u .Come soon wid another ff soonest
Thnxxx Mayra for coming up and speaking… Means a lot to me 😀 😀
Aww… so nice of you to tell that!!
I’m already writing another ff…. it’s called She’s not for me 😀
want season 2 of this.Can u plzzzz
ummm… Idk if i’ll be able to continue this same story since I’ve used leaps and all… But if I ever get an idea again.. I’ll def think and write 🙂 🙂
Very unique story…. I loved each n every moment of dis ff…. n very happy for laksh n saanvi,both r destined to be together…… u r too good…. Excellent work
Thnxxx soo much Tani 😀 😀
You’ve always supported me 🙂 🙂
Love you!!!!
Aaaww wat a wonderful journey v hd wid u n ur story…
Totally njyd it…sanskar n samaz father son moment n d story he shared was lovely…its one of favt ff i ve ever read…thanx for sharing it wid us…it wud b dffclt n injustice to d story if i ve to pick one fvrt moment coz its full of beautiful moments rite from d start till d end n its dffclt to pick any one… keep writng m sharing beautiful stories wid us..
Wil w8 for epilogue
Thnxxxx soo much Arshaanya 😀 😀
You’ve supported me sooo much… really… I thank you for that!!! 🙂 🙂
And sooo nice of you to tell that.. Makes it all the more special <3 <3 <3
Love you!!! 😀 😀
???????????????????????????????????? Loved it. Miles/Sahir also born??
Its been dear to me too. I ll also save my farewell till d epilogue.
I ve Gregory’s still to read. I will finish it after my exams….and yes i want other books too….email me when u r free
YESSS!! Miles also born 😀 😀
Thnxxx soo much Vyshu 🙂 🙂
Did you get the books??
I sent them today….
Will post the epilogue soon 😀 😀
All the best for exams <3 <3
Yes i ve got them…thank u sweetie. Just checked…Love u Anju??
I couldn’t believe it’s ending…. No more waiting for this story when everytime scrolling to see whether got MMI updates or no….. Will miss it a lot….. There is lot of scenes I love couldn’t pin point which one exactly the best……For me everything is the best….. But I like swasan knock jokes before wedding and their game time….. Today’s part was awesome….. Especially Laksh love declaration toward Saanvi….. Keep writing dear and please back with another ff…… ???
Thnxxx Rina 😀 😀
I like their nok-jhoks too…
Love youu!!!.. I will write if u write.. Are you writing any more ffs???
Hope to see you moreee
<3<3
Are u on fb btw??
Welcome dear….. Yes i’m a writer my life’s miracles and just recently end it….. I already back with another ff in the name of AVIKA…..Just updated the intro….. Yes I’m in fb and wattpad too….. R u in fb too? So I can add u…
Anji it was a pure bliss!
Best part was when Samar wanted to give Sahir to shymu kaka, with 100 rs ??
This ff was soo damn good. I had started reading this after reading your name in so many ff analysis… And I decided to read it, the first chappy which I had read was when Sanskar wanted to propose Ragini.
Highlights
– holi
– swara’s fear of rain
– confession
– sanskar finally stopped believingto die
– marriage
-papad rasam in Marriage
– Swara’s delivery ?
-laksh’s confession
– samar’s wish to give away Sahir ?????
Now I’m waiting for (you know that) please give longgggg epilogue plus trouble Sanskar more n more in that ???
Meher love Anji ?
MEHER SWEETIEEEE!!! My sautan… And frankly the person I talk to mosttttt….
I still remember thinking that you were years older than me and wondering how on Earth I’m supposed to talk to you…
I first heard from Anu and others about you.. Ob i had seen your work.. But didn’t think of reading thhem until later…
just imagine.. We neve used to speak and now.. we talk soo much that I can’t imagine life without you…
I’m soo happy you read mmai <3 <3
Haha… Samar's wish 😛 😛 Worse than Sparsh telling mumma ate baby?? 😛 😛 😛
ANJALIII LOVE MEHER MORE THAN MEHER LOVE ANJI 😛 😀 😀 :* :* :* :*
I'll post epilogue if you post kit2 and fl 🙂 🙂
Lol, even I thought that you are tooooooo elder to me, and yes you are elder to me not matters of its 15 days only ??
I didn’t read your chappies cz of your good vocab, ???
Yayyyy!! Even I can’t imaginy life without you, all those stupidity which we did being a virtual family was unforgettable for me.
You can’t compare these two devils?
Noooooo Meher love Anji more…???
I have posted kit2 yesterday only, you greedy Anji ?
Greedy aur m?? :/ :/ :/
M bilkhul tumhari tarah hoon 😛 😛 :* :*
Huh…Anjali loves Meher and Meher loves Anjali???Eva kaha gayiiii????
JETHANI JETHANI NA RAHIIIII
WESE THE TRUTH STAYS THE SAME ANYWAYS
EVA LOVES ANJI AND MUGGYYY THE MOST B)
Anjali <3 Meher <3 Eva <3 Meher <3 Anjali <3 Eva<3 Anjali 😀 😀
Hi anjali… Today I’m very emotional yaar… I still can’t believe that it’s the last episode of my one of the favourite ff… And as usual it was amazing… I can’t tell about one such moment because Each and every moment of MMAI was awesome… And as you said this is not just a story… Every character meant us alot too… Thanks for giving us such a wonderful story… This ff will always remain in my heart… I will feel very happy if you’ll write a new story again… because I’m gonna miss your writing very much… eagerly waiting for the epilogue… take care n stay blessed dear…
Namra 😀 😀
Aww… Don’t be… It’s just the way of life…
Soo nice of you to tell this… <3 <3 <3
The fact that you'll always keep it in ur heart… i'm grateful for that.. THNXXX soo much…
You'll only miss mmai.. not anything else… I'm already writing She's not for me and i will be continuing my other ff….
THnxxx once again…. <3 <3
Love you!!!!
The pleasure is all mine anjali… n I’m grateful that I got a chance to read a story as MMAI… Thank you once again dear… One more thing can you please give me the names of ff which you are writing… I wanna read them all…
Haha… Thnxx soo much <3 <3
My first ff was swaragini – The path to happiness… But you don't want to read that.. It's really really bad…
my second was mmai..
Ill share links of my discontinued ff in the epilogue…
And the ff i'm currently writing is called She's not for me 🙂
MMAI is the 1st ff which I read and it’s just awesome and the best ff and there r many best moments which I like but to be specific I just loved d holi special episode.
Aww… Thnxxx Sushmitha… Holi was great fun to write…
Glad you like mmai 🙂 🙂
Still Can’t believe its the last chapter.. But us however it is it’s good.. Well there are many moments, a lot, lots n lots of beautiful moments, indeed, the favorite one..Be it the counter-answering part,frenemy relation, zozo encounter with sandbar, Mr. n to be Mrs. Maheshwari’s cute little day out part,the venus park n the several others… One such incident sanskar presenting the garden of flowers before swara..This story is memorable for it is one of the excellent piece of your works so far…
Come up with more such masterpiece (I meant stories) …
May you excel in your work field too..
Well I hope it won’t sound like flattering.. ?..
All The Best..
Stay Blessed..
Have a beautiful future.. Keep smiling..
Heyyy Shiksha!!!
aww… So many moments… So nice of you to tell that!! <3<3 <3<3
haha.. no.. it doesn't sound like flattering…. I will treasure ur opinions and words… Thnxx once again 😀 😀 😀
LOVE YOU!!!!!
Will come back with more stories 😀 😀
No words to say
Aww.. Thnxx Tejasvi 😀 😀
Whole story is precious for me…… Pls start writing another story……
Aww.. Thnxx Purvi 😀 😀
i am already writing one… And will continue my ff that I discontinued long ago… 😀 😀
Amazing . yar l always cherish this story
Thnxxxx Mithu 😀 😀
Missed seeing u in few updates.. How r u? 🙂 🙂
I m gud yar. Sorry yar I was busy in my younger brother wedding. I have to fulfill duties of a mother as well sister. Next time u write something I will definitely respond regular.
You had to be a mother as well as a sister??
I don’t really understand what that means…
Pls don’t tell sorry 😀 😀
That means I don’t have mother. So I have all responsibility
Your story was beautiful Anjali. And you have been very good with the language and the vocabulary. I had been a silent reading all this time and today I am glad that I read a complete story on TU. I didn’t feel sad with one of my favorite Fan fiction ending, instead i felt satisfied. You portrayed all the characters very nicely. Your story was not unnecessarily dramatic. It was intriguing and just so lovable. I am glad i read Mr Maheshwary and I. Keep writing.
Thnxxx Anna 😀 😀
Absolutely loved ur comment…
So nice of you <3 <3 <3 😀 😀
Thnxx a lottt….
Hey I am silent reader of ur story n I loved this story alot.. I will miss it for sure… It’s one of my favorite story or u can say my first ff which I have started reading… Loved it alot.. .
Heyy Anup… Are u the same anup jetty from fb??
Thnxxx for coming forward and commenting?? 😀 😀 😀
First ff?? WOOWW!! Glad you loved it !!!! <3 <3 <3
Anjuuu…What a beautiful story yaar,dil chura liya tumne..I understand right,how a simple story line can grow into your nerves and finally become part of our flesh..I am so gonna miss this story..The characters,what to say,every character is perfect with their imperfections..Laksh and Saanvi are the sweetest,even though it was an impulsive decision it did bring fruits of love,baby.. 😀 Adarsh and Sakshi,I adore them..Their story is another track which I loved the most,Swara’s help to get them together is another sone pe suhaga… 🙂
Last but never the least as I say, Swara and Sanskar,I adore this couple as you know very well..I fell in love with them all over again while reading this story.. 😀
Waiting for the epilogue BETI,haha,only because of this story I got to know you dearest.. 😀
Love you loads and take care.. 🙂
I’m used to calling u by ur real name now.. 😛 😛
But thnxxxx soo much dii.. <3 <3
True… I remember blanking out so many times in coll al bcos i thought of a scene to write in mmai.. 😛 😛 😛
Awww… glad you liked the couples 🙂 🙂 🙂
Will post epilogue soooooon… im so happy I know you too Ur so sweet and kind and nice and cute and… I can go on and on… <3 <<3
LOVE YOU TOOO!!!!!
Like meher said I also found mmai’s mention under swasan ff’s analysis by anu but I started reading it after meher told me about your all three ff’s n I must say you are a brilliant writer for me n wanna thank u for writing for swasanians luv h loads dear ??????. Honestly I didn’t like first 2-3 parts but when I continued reading it I found myself deeply in love ❤ wid dis story n about my fav scenes it’s long list-
1- swara’s fear n sanskaar cansoling her wid utmost care n love “under the table ”
2- sanskaar removing thorns from swara’s body
3- their intense scene at gadodia niwas just after sanskaar returned from Venus garden
4- swasan date
5- holi
6- sanskaar’s realisation about his love for swara
7- their sangeet mehendi haldi n shaadi
8-swara’s pregnancy, mood swings n dat dialogue of sanskaar – Me love this stupid harmones ???? n her delivery
Special mention ??
SwaSan kisses for me always unexpected * * don’t know why ? They were like surprise for me ??
* Their challenges
* sanzozo moments ????
N there r lots of beautiful scenes in mmai but currently they r not striking in my brain???? .will badly miss dis story ???? it was a bliss reading mmai. Saying it again luv u loads n loads anjali ???? n will continue pyaar ka dard h?? Plz reply.
Oops I forgot to mentioned about the scene Samar thinking about giving sahir to ramu kaka along wid 100 rupees ???
N ya u forgot to tell dat who the last challenge I mean what did Samar call first mumma or papa?
HEYY NIK!!!!!
Aww… Thnxxx for giving mmai a chance anyways and reading it…. The scenes u mentioned were very fun to write..:P 😛 Wow.. YOu remember the thorns scene 😮 😮
That was like in the 13th or 14th chapter… It’s a huge deal that you mentioned that bcos that wasn’t even a major moment in the story..
Glad yoou liked all the other scenes that you mentioneddd…. 🙂 🙂 🙂
haha.. Samar sure is a handful…
About the challenge, I was waiting to answer it in the epilogue 😀 😀
So… Keep guessing 😉 😉
And yes.. I will be continuing pkdh once I finish posting the epilogues… <3 <3
LOVE YOU TOOOO!!!!! :* :* :*
Thnxx for being a part of mmai 🙂 🙂
Hey anjali, I am a huge fan of MMAI.. I started reading it when it was in some 20th chapter, I loved it so much that I ended up completing the previous chaters the same night..
You are a fabulous writer.. Sorry I did not comment till date but today I had to comment..
Ican’t believe MMAI ended.. The way swasan always challanges each other, supported each other is just wonderful.. I will miss MMAI a lot..
Love you anjali.. Thanks for sharing such a great story with us..
Thnxx soo much Sahi 😀 😀
Pls don’t tell sorry…. i’m glad you came up and commented now… 🙂 🙂
haha.. Did you get a good night’s sleep then??
I’llmiss MMAI too… <3 <3
Love you!!!
Hi Anjali di,
Wow! I feel privileged. I can finally comment on MMAI. Damn. I was addicted to this story that I left all my work during my breaks and read it. I stopped writing my fan fic, stopped reading all the stories I do and completed this story in 90 hours. Damn. I didnt expect to finish it so quickly, but ofcourse it took me to an another world and I couldn’t stop reading. 🙂
Well, penning down what I felt about this story would be really wrong and unjustified. Everything is just afresh in my mind and why not! Just a mere 90 hours, but ofcourse these 90 had been incredibly amazing for I got to read your story every single time I was free.
My favourite moment:
When Sanskaar finally told Swaragini about his belief. The thought that Sanskaar was finally able to confide in Swara, stole my heart away.
Although, all the moments and scenes you’ve jotted down are equally special, but this scene had a different magic.
I’m going to read ‘She’s Not For Me’ soon and there was some other fan fic I read about from your side. Something with ‘Pyaar’, would you mind letting me know it?
Also, thanks to Ashu for insisting me to read this wonderful story. This is going to be one of those fan fics which would always be in my fav list. ?
All love,
Ria.
* When finally Sanskaar told Swara.
** You’ve jotted and penned
Heyy Ria!! Am I glad to see you here 🙂 🙂 🙂
I stillcan’t believe you read 63 chappies in under 4 days.. Srsly the privilege is mine.. The fact that u actualy loved this story enough to comment is overwhelming…
THNXXX SOO MUCH!!! I’m glad you liked that scene…
loved* not liked..
it’s one of my fave scenes as well 🙂 🙂
I had posted 3 chappies of Pyaar ka dard hai.. But I discontinued it after those 3 chappies… Will be starting it once again once I finish posting the epilogues…
She’s not for me has 11 chappies ithink… Will soon post an update for that too 🙂 🙂 🙂
Tell thnxx To ashu from me tooo 😀 😀 😀 😀
LOVE YOU LOADSS!! :* :* :*
Even being a raglak fan I read ur story coz it’s just amazing u nailed every chapter and right now I am so sad that one of my favourite ff is ending but it’s OK otherwise the ff will lose its charm. U portrayed every character beautifully .
Will miss u.. and come soon with a new ff
Heyy Aadhya….
I can’t believe you read this even though it’s a Swasan ff.. That really means a lot to me 🙂 🙂 🙂 <3 <3
Thnxxx for ur kind words 😀
I'm writing another ff : She's not for me..
Though that too is a swasan one…
Thnxxx once again 🙂 🙂
Well I have become addicted to ur ff so I will definitely try to read that ff whenever I get tym to read as my exams are approaching so a bit busy
And keep writing this..
Good luck:)
TYSM!!!! <3
All the best for ur exams <3 <3
I just cant believe its ending….. i dont have words dear… it was just mindblowing.. i just cant write any one particular scene coz when i am thinking a lot of beautiful scenes and the way u potrayed each character are clouding my mind…. love u dear and will surely miss u and ur ff… keep writing and stay happy and blessed and ha waiting 4 ur epilogue
Thnxxx soo much Saranya 😀 😀
YOu may not have words but what you did write just adds another notch of inspiration to me.. Thnxx soo much for supporting me 🙂 🙂
You may miss mmai but you won’t miss me.. I will be back with 2 new ffs… But only after the epilogueee… 🙂 🙂
Love you :* :*
Anjali akka (hope it’s fine ?)
Missed me or not ?
Imissed you and also commenting in mmai ….
April amd May was the heaven ….
My favorite part of this beautiful mmai is the one where they play the ball(mallet) game and it rains….swara and sanskar will sit under the tree right…! That’s my most favorite….
I love almost all the parts equally coz of ur most wonderful writing …. ?
Loved everything ….
Feeling nostalgic when I recall how I started reading mmai (just for a readerlike me….this story has many memories which are to be cherished forever…I guess u will have a book of them ?)
This part was just fab and specially the wood bundle story (though old one…it’s a golden one?)
Arey yaar you didnot say whether samar told mumma or papa first ? just kidding bur it’s fine ?
Loved the best story by best story writer…this will definitely remain in my heart forever…
MR.MAHESHWARI AND I ?❤
DHARSHUUUUU!!!! I can’t believe ur here 😮 😮 😮 😮
I’m just about ready tofall dead.. the same way i was when i saw ur name that day…
how are u even active here??
And since when do ucall me akka?? We’ve never had formalities between us… :* :* :*
And ur asking me if i missed u?? What nonsensee… I missed u soo much…You just left 🙁 🙁 🙁 🙁
I keep remembering april May too… All our ppl,,, i miss them all 🙁 🙁 🙁
Glad you loved this…. ur right… I do have so many memories here 🙂 🙂 🙂 Each of them mean so much to me <3 <3 <3
I'll tell what Samar said in the epilogue 😛 😛 😛 😛
LOVE YOU SOOOO MUCH DHARSHUU <3 <3 <3
Still cant believe that MMAI is ending…
First chapter i read was i think 30th chapter.. Then i read from first chapter..
Choosing one best moment is so difficult.. Each scene was amazing…
U r asking for mentioning best moment then it was swara gifting painting to sanskar n Swasan’s reaction after knowing Swara’s first pregnancy ??
Stay blessed dear.. ?
Waiting for Epilogue
Thnxxx Soo much Simi 😀 😀
Aww… so nice of you <3 <3
i loved those moments too 😀 😀
Will post epilogue soooon….
Thnnxxx once again 😀 😀
Love you <3
i read it trice and still i can’t believe it’s he last chappy. and now as always i’m speechless. coming to the favorite scene, well each and every thing were precious, but still to be more precise i would like to prefer the chappy were sanskar confessed i guess its chapter 50 i loved it to the core
Aww… So nice of you mariya <3 <3
Haha… you don't seem speechless to me 😛 😛 😛
Glad you loved that scene… I love it too…
By the way.. i have seen ur name in some ff but i forgot the name.. Can u tell the name pls?
Thnxxx <3 <3
didi!!!!! awww!!!!!!! you know what will i say didi! i really don’t know many words for apperciation, i have already said as much as i know and have even repeated few words. but this last one……i can’t believe you are really ending it. MMAI was
fabulous,
fantastic,
marvellous,
superb,
beautiful,
lovely,
amazing,
awesome,
wonderful,
too good,
emotional,
cute and hilarious,
one of the best
and of course too much close to my heart no no, it is in my heart! i love your whole story from the core of my heart and i can’t choose any one part of them but still there was one scene which was my most favourite, when sanskar surprised swara with too many varieties of flowers in a go down. god! i can’t even describe the happiness i felt i get by reading that scene. its my most favourite. well done for such a beautiful story. i am so scared, i said all the words i know, what i am going to say for your epilogue? you said that your readers have to comment about their favourite scenes, i will say my favourite fact about you too. my favourite fact about you is that you called me cutie. i jump in happiness whenever you call me like that. i love that name so much, no one had called me like that. thank you so much didi. love you
CUTIEEE!!!!
You are really over whelming me… How can u tell all these words for mmai 😮 😮 😮
i’m sure it doesn’t deserve all that…
Now.. I’m not sure how I’m supposed to make my reply compare to ur comment??
well… Just hope it’s okay…
Ofc u r my cutie pie.. Ur so sweet and kind and friendly and God knows what all… My little sister… just like my Fifi… <3 <3
I loved the flower scenes too.. I had no idea what I was gonna do until I wrote it 😛 😛 😛 😛
haha… don't be scared… even if you don't say a word, i'll know what you'll think :* :* :*
LOVE YOU LOADSSSS!!!!! <3 <3
Wow fabulous fantastic amazing wonderful happy ending.. loved it so much anjali……
every chapie was super… loved it…
Awesome anjali…tc
Heyy navi.. I had given an earlier reply.. guess it didn’t get posted..
Anyways.. Thnxx soo much for always being here… Love you to bits <3 < 3 :* :* :*
And glad you loved mmai 😀 😀
Anju its awesome epi…everyone’s bonding is roo gud….but i am nt getting any words ???..i don’t want this to end…bt evry story needs to end…i am nt able to digest dis fact???….i miss mmai vry badly…many many many memories we made here …I’ll nt miss u.. coz u know y?….bt mmai ??????….ahh i am nt getting more words??
VAISHUUU!!! <3 <3
yayy… ur here 🙂 🙂 🙂
Glad you loved mmai….don't need words… We've known each other longer than the others 🙂 🙂 🙂
yess…. don't miss me 😀 😀
Thnxxxx baby…. LOVE YOU LOADSSSS
Best ff ever….followed this ff when it starts…i will miss this ff badly?n i love the way u descrined swasan so perfectly as anthony n kate…i conected to this ff soo much…
N my favourite scenes in this ff is every swasan moment is memorable…mostly swasan first kiss..sanky’s fear about loving swara.swara’s fear about storms n how swasan overcomed…swasan game moments…all emotional n romantic moments
Thnxxx Seebu 😀 😀
Aww… just tried to do anthony and kate justice….
ah… The first kiss… *memoriess*
Thnxx for giving ur opinion 😀 😀
I am a silent reader but I love your story a lot you are an awesome writer every part of your story will be too good to read love your writing skills you explain all the emotions in an apt way so I love this story I am sad that you are ending this story but as they say every good thing has an end
But I will surely miss your story to the core
Thnxxx soo much Sophia for coming up and commenting… MEans a lot to me 😀 😀 😀
Glad you understand me and am really happy that u love mmai…
Will miss this story too… Thnxx once again 😀 😀
Hey finally I’m here… Well I’m gonna miss this story as I’ve once told it gave a new definition of love… Truly the way as u made sanskar confess here…. One moment that blew all my senses… Well I don’t have one there are many… Sanlak sanadar swasan vilak n more never to forget mother daughter or mother son moments all are beautiful heart touching in their own way…. Anji I love this story not to mention never will forget… Today’s epic dialogue was Samar giving sahir with 100 rs… Well kahan se layi yeh unique soch yaar ????… I don’t have one moment… The whole journey was just lovely…i can’t talk abt one moment… Sorry…
Yaar I wish yeh bol sakti mat khatm kar but naa I can’t…. Swasan kya bolu me I just love the way swasan were… So much of passion without even confessing… Their attitude the way sanskar confided in swara… Sanskar saying bade papa is his inspiration n she’s his strength… Every bond was just fabulous.. I don’t have words… I’ll miss this …
Give the biggest epilogue.. U are bound for it… Lovely anju will miss reading it ??
NEHAAA!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 It feels so nice to see ur dp again 😛 😛 That cat is so cutee <3 <3
You're just sooo… i don't have any words to tell.. You've been here for me from the very beginning… 🙂 🙂
i don't know how to thank you for all the support and love…
So i won't… i won't thank you… i'll just tell you i Love you loadssss.. We've been friends for almost a year and though our gang isn't here… we still got our other gang…
i love talking to you :* :* :* :*
haha…. samar's soch… just imagine if the gardener had agreed 😛 😛 😛
I'll miss mmai too… Will give a epilogue just bcos you want it <3 <3
Though i told i won't.. I can't help myself…
Neha Thnnxxxx soo much for always being here for me.. Love you loadsss <3 <3
No need to thank I would have regularly registered my presence if tu wouldn’t have irritated to the limit….
I love u too… Loadsssss… Glad ur writing epilogue… N yup we’re connected not here but nevertheless…. I have loved this story n will always do…. No matter what ??
Okay anjali i read ur msg and even read it out to her. And she was like squealing while listening to ur sweet wrds and u knw wat she made me read all the chappies she missed on the phone. We talked for an hour. And here is the comment she dictated to me:
Diiiiiii missingggg u sooooooo much. And this is endingg????? U knw tis is a very sad day fr me. Mmai is endingggg? I really cant cme in terms wth this fact. I was really angry on u fr nt wishing me bt o cld nt stay angry at u fr a lng tym. After all u r my fav di. And i am ur sweet sis hai na? A d reg mmai….. ah it makes me feel nostalgic. I remember cmng across tis website by chance. And to be frank i dnt even remember hw i found ur ff. Bt all i can say is once i started reading tis i cld nt stp. I jst fell in luv wth each and evry character. There is no villian in tis story. No negativity. Everything is so peaceful. U knw initially i was a silent reader di. Bt watching ur conversations and ur friendliness i wanted to be a part of them. And even u ppl used to request silent readers to comment. So finally i commented and i was amazed by ur sweet reply. And thn i started conmenting in other ffs too. I used to tell what i felt whn i read ur ff u used to reply me saying that i was showering too much praise on u. Bt the truth is every wrd i spoke was what i felt frm the bottom of my heart. I loved sanskar as a healthy flirt and i loved swara as the strong girl. I luv strong girls actually. I was overwhelmed whn u tld me that i am the sweetest. I was happy that i hav a made a spl place in ur heart. Each and every thing associated wth u and ur ff has made a place in my heart. I cant name a few instances i like the moat in ur ff cause every instance is beautiful. Every scene is so perfect. I hav read the viscount who loved me bt believe me i liked ur version more. Though the initial story is same bt the way u took forward mmai was jst amazing. U completely deviated frm the original story and i loved ur version. After my hols whn i started attending college ur ff used to be my stress buster. I used to enjoy every episode so much. Now i am wishing i shd nt hav read this because though i read it again and again the thrill of reading a story fr the frst tym is completely diff. And i want to experience it again and again. I jst want to complete my 11th & 12th fast so thst i can cme and meet u. Yah i seriously wanna meet this angel of mine. Yah i jst cant understand hw u can be so sweet and soo caring with smeone whom u hav never met. U are one among the amazingg ppl i hav ever met. I am searching fr wrds to praise u cause my vocab is nt as good as urs. Bt i jst cant describe hw spl u r to me. I luv u di. Luv u soooooooooo much. Thanks a ton fr writing this amazingggg ff. Plz start ur nxt one soon. Though i cannot read it i hav found a way to stay updated to ur stories ie through this cousin of mine. I dnt knw hw lnv tis came out to be bt i am pitying my cousin and am stpping here. Take care di
Love u loadsss
??????????
Okie i comleted typing. She even specified the above symbols. She said that she
Srru for the incomplete comment. Yah she said that she used the above symbols nly fr ur writings. Anyways congratulations anjali for completing this. And yah though i hav nt read this i hope to do so soon.
FIFI!!!!!
And FIFI’s cousin.. .You reallyhave to tell me ur name btw.. 😛 😛 i don’t want to call u like that.. 🙂 🙂
fifi… I can’t believe it.. You made the poor dear READ out all the chappies?? How many were there 😮 😮
I want you to give her a present 😀 😀 She deserves it…
Now coming to u…how are you??/ i really am sorry I forgot to send u a bday wish later at least
🙁 🙁 don’t stay mad… 🙁 🙁
I remember you telling me that u began commenting mmai just for me.. I knew then itself that you were one of the sweetest people i know… but i didn’t realise how sweet until later…
Thebest thing about u was u always told me the truth and elaborated it.. if you didn’t like it, you told me to my face and convinced me to become better… that’s why ur the sweetest person ik..
I miss you soooo much… when will u come back?? 🙁 🙁 🙁
But studies first.. concentrate hard… and i hope the proud girl who’llhear about her Fif acing the exams… 😀
And yes.. You’ll always be in my heart.. Don’t ever doubt that.. Even when i’m 60yrs old.. I’ll make sure i remember all of you 😀 😀 <3 <3
I know if i tell anymore.. ull give ur cousin a heart attack by asking her to type another long reply.. So i'll stop here too…
All i can say I'm so happy to have u in my life <3 <3 Thnxxx for being a part of mmai and yes… LOVE YOU LOADSSSS!!!!!
Fifi's cousin :
Thnxxx soo much for keeping me in touch with her… And yes.. thnxxx for ur kind words.. <3 <3 It'll be amazing if u could read mmai 😀 😀
ALL THE BET FIFI!!!!! :*:*
Loved it dear.. Every swasan moments from this ff is special for me.. Never ever forget MMAI in my life
Thnxxxx AnuAnn… You’ve been here a long time too… <3 😀 😀
i'm really happy that you supported me for soo long 😀 😀 😀
touched by ur words :* :*
Anjiii I was thinking ki mein tujhe kisehh pitu?U finished it? Anji ,this was the only way to improve my language as hate reading books B)
Now I think u r used to writing this ff…oh anjiii how will u live without writing this???Won’t u feel strange? I’m feeling exactly the same as I felt during swaragini’s ending…
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE I EVER READ WITH PERFECT GRAMMER AND EXCEELNT VOCAB U COMPLETED THESE 63 PARTS AND MADE YOUR TELLY UPDATE JOURNEY SUCCESSFUL!CONGRATES JETHANI
I HOPE U WILL CONTINUE WRITING,MMAI IS NOT THE END.PLZ WRITE MORE..
I MISS OUR “FAMILY MOMENTS” AND OUR STUPID CONVERSATION
MY FAMILY MEMBERS…MISS U ALL
AND MY SABSE ACCHE LADKI JETHANI STAY BLESSED
EVEN TODAY U HELPED ME,U SAVED ME ALONG WITH MUGGY
THE BEST THING I LIKED HERE WAS…NEH NOT LIKED BUT LOVED WAS SAANVI WEDS LAKSH AND NOT RAGLAK B) I LOVE U FOR THAT,THOUGH IT WAS NOT PLANNED BUT I LOVED THAT!!
DID U EVER NOTICE WHAT HAPPENS IF U REPLACE “S” WITH “J” IN SANVI THEN WHAT HAPPENS?WELL WHATEVER HAPPENS IS MY LIFE’S TRUTH 😉
MUGSAN
ANSAN
JANLAK ROCKS!!!!!!
STAY BLESSED,CONTINUE YOUR JOURNEY AND I’M NO WAY READING PYAAR KA DARD AS IT IS A NALA FF BUT I’M SURE THAT THE STORY LINE IS AWESOME THERE TOO
I LOVE UUUUUUUUUUUUU JETHAAAANNNNIIIIIII
SABSEEE ACCCHIIIIII LADKIIIII
haww… love you bhi bolti ho.. aur hate you bhi?? :/ :/ :/
Which is it??
Vaise.. Read proper books to improve ur vocab… 😛 😛 My story really won’t 🙂 🙂
Don’t ask me how I feel.. It’s gonna be damn weird… I’ve been writing mmai since Feb 15th.. It’s gonna be a year since i started it…
i guess i’l think of something in the middle of class and then i’ll be like.. Oh shit i finished that story.. What do i do now? 😛 😛
But i do plan to continue my other 2 ffs.. so hopefully it won’t be too weird…
Thnxxx Evus.. I still remember commenting in ur samjhota for the first time and then asking u to read mmai.. I’ve always respected u as a writer and always will… the concepts u have maybe controversial but they’re amazing and the way u portray them is absolutely lovely..
uk the thing that i miss the most is the group that the three of us had.. u meher and me.. U two kept fightin and i was lost trying to figure out ur madness 😛 😛
i’m sure sautan will agree with me 🙂 🙂
Aur haan.. Raglak hater 😛 😛 i’m sure ur happy about saanvi and laksh.. lol… Bonus point for me 😀 😀
haha.. maybe next time i’ll include janvi <3 <3
I miss our family too… uk i actually miss riya kapoor only for the fact that our mummyji used to give the best comments ever..
And haan… I'm so not the duniya's sabse acchi ladki.. far from it 😛 😛
BUT I'LL ALWAYS LOVE YOU!!!! I WILL NEVER FORGET YOU BECAUSE EvEN IF WE don't talk as much as before.. i will never stop talking to u…
LOVE OUR FAMILY… LOVE YOUR WRITINGS… LOVE YOU… <3 <3
HAHA… U CAN READ PKDH.. I'M NOT GONNA WRITE RAGLAK UNTIL SEASON 2.. SO RELAX… B) B)
I missed out so many chappies! I don’t know when will i read that….! ???
Im big fan of u…. Chappy was gud… I thought of write a big paragraph for u… But words are not coming! ???
Thnxxx heltej.. Missed u a lot 😀 😀
It’s been ages since i saw you… Don’t worry… Words are not needed.. the fact that you read it.. is enough for me 🙂 🙂 🙂
OH SHIT…BHUTTT ADA COMMENT HOGAYA NA? WELL TUMHARE BAREMEIN BAAT KARTE KARTE MEIN TIRED HII NEHI HOTIH…PATANEHI KYU MUJHE RONAH ARAHA HAI.EXAM KE BADH I READ ALL YOUR EPISODES AND NOW I’M FEELING BAD THAT I COULD NOT COMMENT.EVEN THE RAGLAK FANS LOVED YOUR FF,,,DID U KNW THAT?
THE MODERN LOVE STORY
MR MAHESHWARI AND I ROCKS!!!
AND YEAHHH I FORGOT TO APPRECIATE SWASAN,JAB MEIN LAKSH KE BAREME SOCHTI HU KISIKA KHYA NEHI REHTA..U KNW NA?? 😉
SWASAN CONFESSION AND HOW SANKU CHANGED THROUGH OUT THIS F,U WERE SUCCESSFUL IS SHOWING ALL
SANSKAR MAHESHWARI’S CHARACTER HAD SOME DIFFERENT CHARM IN THIS FF
A BOLD PERSONALITY AND I FOUND NP “NAUTANKI” IN THIS FF….THINGS WENT SLOWLY AND THE SWEET MEMORIES,THE BEAUTIFUL SCENES…
I CAN SAY ONLY ONE THING ABOUT THIS DESICION
“PRACTICAL DESICION MADE BY HEART”
REALITY WITH EMOTIONS FLOWING
MY STORY IS FAR AWAY FROM REALITY CAUSE IT HAS SACRIFICES WHICH PEOPLE DON’T DO I REALITY AND WHAT U DID WAS ALL PRACTICAL…
PYAAR 2 DAYS MEIN NEHI HOTAH HAI
U SHOWED THERE LOVE AND TRULY THIS IS CALLED LOVE STORYYYYYY
PREVIOUS COMMENT WAS YOUR TARIIFFF AND THIS WAS YOUR MMAI’S TARRIFFFF
ANJIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII ROCKED MMAI!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
EVA <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
Dude…. Yeh toh too much nhi ho gya??
I don’t deserve so much… Srsly yaar.. *thinking face*
now… i’m not gonna reply to ur comment here cos i don’t know how to… other than the fact that this was a practical decision and i’m happy u understand that…
i’m gonna talk about u instead..
as i said.. i remember asking u to read mmai and i was happy when u said u did and actually told me u liked my story..
later when ppl were annoyed bcos of the couples.. I was damn annoyed and till today, have never thought differently..
but that was when i found about how strong u were… we’ve had numerous conversations since then.. and ik so much about u… i just have to admire u for the person u r now…
i love you soo much evu… and ur stories… they may not be stories that we hear nowadays but everyone could use a little bit of magic and imagination..
LOVE YOU!!!! <3<3<3
Awesome dear…….. Aah….there r so many moments…….Sanskar getting hurt n swara ka weeping seeing that…….. Sanskar supporting swara during engagement…..N swara’s bade papa ki painting………N much more…….
Thnxxx Milestone 😀 😀 😀
I loved those scenes too 😀 😀
love you!!!
Awesome..from today’s epi i really loved sanky and samar’s bonding..
I loved the whole story..don’t know which scene to mention..
Bt I really enjoyed swara and sanky’s challenges..tc..
Thnxxx kumu 😀 😀
Glad you loved all scenes <3 <3
Love you!!!
love u 2..
Oh god…. Finally this amazing wondeful and lovely story has come to an end… ???.. But what an amazing journey… Loved it toooo much.. I have loved reading every update again and again.. Felt sad to see that this is the last update but waiting eagerly for epilogue.. ????..
Now coming to the as usual amazingg update… starting from another challenge between Swasan.. Hehehe.. Who will their Samar call first.. ??.. They can never change.. Heheh.. but they love each other soooo much.. loved their small moment when Swara went and helped him with the tie and their moment .. Very nice.. And also Samar seeking their attention.. Hehe.. finally Laksh confessed.. Awwww… And 5 years later was awesomeeeee… So many kids .. Heheh.. And Sanskaar’s story for Samar and their moments were just lovely… What a scene and what a story ya…
Last update was worth waiting for and trust me m gonna sit thru it and read the entire story again.. U have said it right that good they both hated each other in the start coz of which their love and care for each other was more later.. ????.. I would love to read more of ur stories… But hopefully on Swasan.. ???.. Love this couple…and this will always be one of my most favourite stories… Coz they have been awesome in this… You are an amazing writer … Thanks a ton for this wondeful and fabulous story.. ????
Aww… thnxxx nisha 😀 😀
Ur verrryyy nicee… I could think of more words to describe u… but none are running through my brain other than thank you and thank you…
haha…yess.. swasan will never change.. 😛 😛 😛
read the entire story again?? 😮 😮
Woahhh.. that’s like overwhelming for me <3 <3 <3
i am writing 2 more stories on swasan.. will continue them soon.. thnxxx
LOVE YOU!!!!
seriously !!!!! u ended mmai !!!!!!
kinda shocking yr/………
loved all d parts yr…..
ab kya favourite batuon ……… 😉
sochna padega 😉 😉
an amazing story……
beautiful concepts…….
shocking suprises also…..
makes mmai a fantastic story !!!!!!!!!
reallyy loved all d parts till date 🙂 🙂
areee my anji …… i will miss u yr……..
uska kya karun mai bata mujhe………. 🙂
jaldi wapaas aa jana …… tu main 😉
waiting for u dear ……..
bubye !!!!!!!
tc………
Thnxxx pooja 😀 😀
You’ve been here for me since day 1… Just love you sooo much for that.. <3<3<3
thnxxx soo much for liking mmai 😀 😀
aur haan… i won't be disappearing..
i'll be back with ffs 😀 😀
LOVE YOU!!!!
I can’t say anything…..,just wanna say ,u r a great writter.keep going on n give us more story like. MMAI…..
favourite moment was …….sansker found vulnerable swara in his study under the table after thunderstrome……
thank u again for such a beautiful ff.its one of my favourite ff……who can give me a tissue paper now????????
Thnxxx Sanji 😀 😀
I love that scene too <3 <3 *memoriessss*
Thnxxx for telling it's one of ur favourites <3 <3 <3
No tissue papers.. pls don't cry :/:/
I can’t believe it’s ending??? i am so happy that i’ve read it???
Today’s update was as usual superb, awesome, fabulous, lovely etc❤❤❤
How can u ask any particular fav scene coz everything you’ve written is beyond awesome??? each n every scene of SwaSan described their relation and it’s uniqueness??? like 1st time when he gave flower to her? zozo?? their tashan? sanskaar calming swara under the table? sanskaar removing thorn from swara’s body(the trust she showed for sanskaar)? their first kiss? actually their each and every kiss was different, special actually something else? their date? how can i forget holi? SwaSan marriage? unique first night? again their tashan?finally their patch up with confession? swara’s gift of bade papa’s portrait? then their beautiful consummation? then their life after marriage? their each n every moment was sweet and cute? the ball game?? swara getting pregnant? different phases of pregnancy? then samar? then sahir? these are few thing coming in mind right now but there are more scenes which are my fav???
Now waiting for a dhamakedar epilogue???
Awww.. Ariba!! Don’t cry :* :* :*
haha.. Am really happy that you loved the update 😀 😀
Love all the scenes u’ve mentioned <3 <3 😀 😀
I wish i would say more.. but ur emojis and ur words… have made me speechless.. maybe tom.. I can reply properly..
im sorry for not giving a proper reply.. <3
LOVE YOU!!!!!
It’s ok np dear???
I am really gonna miss MMAI???? these were only few scenes that came to my mind but trust me each and every scene actually the whole ff was way too awesome????????? All i can say is it was perfect❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Anji… Oh my god… At last it ended… ????I am crying on road… Everything is just perfect… Matlab suru se lekar end tak… Everything so perfect and natural… Swasan challenges… I will miss it a lot… But I have a complain…. Why another son… I wanted a girl…. Samar is so cute…. Thank you so much dear for this lovely ff…. Want a biiiiiiiiiggggggggg wala epilogue…. Love u… Love mmai
And han I forget to tell about laksh and saanvi… They are also a cute jodi… Adorable siblings bond… Just amazing
Sibling bond ???
They are a couple not siblings.
Guys guys siblings means sanlakad sakswaragsan
Thnxxx Sawsana 😀 😀
Don’t cry 🙁 🙁
So sweet u r 😀 😀 <3 <3
haha.. don't worry… They'll have a girl 🙂 🙂 🙂
Will post a big epilogue…
And glad you love laksh-saanvi.. 😀 😀
Love you tooo!!!!!
amazing…!! loved it soo much…!!! It’s one of the ff’s which got started when I was new to telly updates…!! Your writing style, scenes everything were like woww to me…!! I loved everything in this story…and nothing in particular…!! If I need to pick up one…I liked the scene where sanskar calmed down and gave support to swara during storms..!!
Thnxxx Chandu 😀 😀
glad you loved that scene 😀 🙂
Glad you loved mmai… Really touched by ur words…<3 :* :*
Anjaliii!!!!!! What an awsm chapter…..you know what i read last three chapters just now,so want to appreciate them even too….dey were just amazing….!!!
Urghhh…MMAI came to an end?? it was one of the very first ffs i read on tu….and one of my fav ffs on swasan??
Selecting the best moment is too difficult as the whole ff is sooo amazing……everything is so perfect here..? but one thing i would love to mention will be the extracts of poems and the prose you put in the darjeeling encounter of laksh and saanvi…and in dis chappie too…. that was soo good i liked it a lot.
Your writing style is soo captivating i wonder whether u are pursuing literature as ur main subject….
You always take me by awe and u know what since i started commenting on your story i just wanna write big big comments for you and one thing for sure whenever i will join social media i am definitely gonna be ur friend…and i am longing for that moment……
Do come up with new story on swasan….waiting for u….
Loads of love and stay blessed!!!!????
Thnxxx DA 😀 😀
aww… sonice of you 😀 😀 😀
thnxx for telling this is one of ur fave ffs <3 <3
The poems..Lol..I just read it somewhere and loved it so much that i decided to post it… 😀 😀
Aww.. glad tou love mmai… wil lbe continuing my other ff soon 😀 😀
And I'm not a lit student.. I'm a B-tech IT major in my second yr.. What about you??
Love you too!!!!
hey biwi….sorry for disappearing….and OMG…u have already finished it!!!Thanks to eva i got to read the last part…i will try to read the prev parts after having some time….i missed TU so much….i missed u all too…
U r a good writer
HUBBYYY!!!!!!
I’m dying now.. I srsly can’t believe that ur actually here <3 <3
thnxxx soo much.. The factthat ur actually here means a lot to me 😀 😀 😀
MISS YOU TOO!!!!! <3 <3
Love you!!! More than sautan does anyways 😛 😛
As usual it’s awesome. It’s really difficult for me to choose my favorite moment in this ff and I am surely going to miss this.
R u going to continue with Pkdh along with she’s not for me??
Thnxxx soo much Shifa 😀 😀
Why did u change the name anyways??
am really happy that u were always there for me 😀 😀
And yes.. I’ll be continuing both ffs.. 😀 😀
Love you!!!
My actual name is shifa only..
Afra is my sister’s name..I thought to leave TU this yr but I cannot as I am so addicted to reading ff’s these days so I created my own user ID..
Will be waiting for your next updates..
Keep smiling and stay blessed
Love u too.
haha… the stories are really addictive 😛 😛
So u used to read through afra’s name? or afra used to read and then u started..
sorry if i’m being too curious
Forgot me? Come on! I just commented on your one shot a few days ago!
So, Miss Anjali Ramprasad, who, tell me, who has given you thr permission to end the most beautiful story I have read till date? As far as I remember, I haven’t done that!
I know there won’t be any use in howling and wailing and weeping over and over. Every story has an end, and so did this. To be true, (I sm being frank please don’t mind) She’s not for me is good, but it can never reach the same heights as MMAI did. That’s my belief.
I never knew that the ending to a story can be this beautiful ever. I ak so much looking up to the two epilogues. And yes, I need more one shots. More and more, coz you are the besy at them. Do start with another story, though I know that you are writing SNFMA presently.
Another thing I completely forgot to mention, I so damn loves the proposal!! Young lady, you should be working as a scriptwriter for Bollywood!
And I ain’t joking. Well, don’t you think I spoke too heavy words today? Maybe that’s why Meher di calls me Nani Amma!
Anyways, loads and loads and loads to my beloved Anju di..her little sister really loves her a lot. Stay blessed forever.♡
Lots of typos! Please manage! 😉
And oh yeah, favourite moment…
One is definitely when Sanskaar reveals everything to Swara.
The marriage was totally enjoyable.
All Laksh-Saanvi scenes have touched my heart.
How do I forget Swara’s fear of storms!
And yeah, the papad rasam!!
I was seriously going ROTFL in this moment!
I agree with u Nani amma, Anji should be a scriptwriter.
So that we can see beautiful scenes ???
Come on.. DO YOU THINK I’LL FORGET YOU SO SOON??
Laddooooo… Even if you wanted, I wouldn’t forget you… 😀 😀
You’ve supported me soo much and though ik you don’t want me to end this… But i think if i continue it any further.. It won’t be a good story anymore..
as for snfm and mmai… I’m not gonna compare them.. maybe ppl don’t like it as much as mmai.. but i’ve always writen for myself so it doesn’t matter… and yes.. ofc i don’t mind 🙂 🙂
as long as ur truthful with me, I’m not gonna feel bad 🙂 🙂
oss… If i think of another plot.. i’ll write for sureee <3 <3
lol… script writer?? I don't think ppl will like it 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
Meher can call u nani amma… but i'll always call u my little sis…
LOVE YOU TOO!!!!
and yess.. love all the moments you said 😀 😀
You know what? I read wach and ever Episode of Tour ff from the start….. I Used to open the Blog only to See if you’ve updated…. Many a Times… I did feel Bad for Not seeing your updates… I understand… You would have had many other works…. But still I loved it always….
As a writer…. Even I know portraying a character yet isn’t that easy as we sense…. You did it to the brink…. I loved your story…. I love it even now. .. I have added it to my favorite number….
I didn’t think you’d finish it this soon…. Well do tell me if you’ve started any new one…. I miss this now….
Heyy Jnana 😀 😀
aww.. so nice of you… Sorry to be so irregular.. 🙁 🙁
you write stories? Can u give me the name of it? I would love to read it…
Thnxx soo much for saying this is one of ur favourites… <3 <3 <3
I'm writing another ff She's not for me.. and i'll be continuing another ff from before.. 🙂 🙂 🙂
thnxx a lott
I’m a silent reader. I loved this story. I can’t tell one favorite moment. I love every single line in this story.
Thnxxx soo much Ann for coming up and speaking <3 <3 <3
Means a lot to me 🙂 🙂
aww.. every single line?.. <3
love you!!!
Heyy u guys… I’m so sorry for noot replying to everyone… Will def finish tom…
Thnxxx for all the love!!!
It’s so greattt to see all the old names : Neha, Vaishu, fifi, DHARSHUUU!!! , EVUU!!! , My Laddoooo<3 <3
Love you all…
Anjali no love Meher ????
are u an old name meher?? :/ :/ :/
And i only included evus name bcos i hadnt replied to her..
go look at ur reply.. I told u i love u :/ :/
Still where ever you say love you, you should mention meher’s name???????
Awesome .
Amazing
No words dear
Thnxxx Shagun 😀 😀
Glad you loved it!!! <3 <3
Anjali,this sasuma is really very sorry for being inactive for so long!
I saw Meher replying to someone “Anjali can write scripts” and I totally agree.
Honestly speaking the last chapter I read was chapter 50 and i’m totally clueless about what happened next but i’m sure that whatever is written(In chapter 51 onwards) is praiseworthy so praising you beforehand.
All the very best for your next ff and that’s gonna be another hit for sure..
I loved Sanskar’s personality here,however I never expected this ff to end before completing a 100,no did I think..
(I’m here as Eva informed me that you published your last chappy and then I was like “i have to be here to appreciate this awesome and memorable fanfiction journey!!)
Meher rock your kuch iss tarah
Eva I don’t know your ff name but i’ll surely read it(Kabhi na kabhi :P)
Stay blessed people..
Love you all!!
MUMMYJI!!!! 😀 😀 😀
I can’t believe ur here <3 <3
and don't tell sorry 🙁 🙁 🙁
ik ur busy and i'm glad eva and meher's comment made u come here to comment 🙂 😀
haha.. don't worry.. If u can u read it.. else… the fact that you read the other chappies is enough.. <3 <3
Miss you loads mummyji… Miss our family like hell.
I've told meher and evus to look upyour comment.. so maybe they'll reply 😀 😀
LOVE YOU TOO!!!!!!..
Hey Anjali,
I really enjoeyed reading MMAI. Though I do not comment regularly but i still loved the story…you did justice to each and every character and portrayed their emotions really well. Do keep writing??
Thnxxx Aniya 😀 😀
Don’t worry about commenting.. m just glad u enjoyed mmai 😀 🙂
Thnxxx <3 <3
MMAI is the ist story i read on tellyupdates… And i swear anji it is one of my best….
I know i read it after long long time …. Sirry for that darling….
I loved each and every episode of this story… U have a brialliant writung skill… Keep on writing… Love u much anji…. ,????
Dii <3 <3
TYSM for readinggg 😀 😀 😀
And pls don't tell sorry and all :* :*
LOVE YOU TOOO!!!!! 😀