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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan- does love need perfection ? Episode 54
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Swasan- does love need perfection ? Episode 54

Sinin_kabirBy Sinin_kabirMarch 16, 201735 Comments4 Mins Read
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hi guys sinin here! thanks for the comments on last part. Many of u didn’t like the teaser . Pls read this episode and suggest me should I continue or end with an epilogue . This story has got soo much love the that I can’t ruin it with new twist . So please do comment what you want.

Sanskar is talking on the phone

Sanskar : hello ?
Doctor : is it sanskar maheshwari ?
Sanskar : yes… Speaking
Doctor : I’m the gynocologist of swara…
Sanskar : yes… Doctor…Is every thing fine…
Doctor : Mr maheshwari i want to meet with you…Can u meet within a hour in my chamber…
Sanskar : sure doctor…

He looks at swara…
Sanskar : why did she sounded so much tensed…
Swara : are you going out ?
Sanskar : yes I’ll be back soon…Take rest and drink the orange juice…

He kisses on her forehead and comes out

He goes out and starts the car….

He starts driving….
He stops at the red signal and waits….
Meanwhile he turns on the radio…

Song was playing there ” phulo ka taro ka sabka kehna..Ha…Ek hajaro me Meri behna Hai…Sari Umar hame sang rehna haiii….”

Sanskar looks at the radio… Shockedly….He remembers his childhood…His hand starts trembling and get sweaty…
He turns off the radio quickly….And drives to the hospital

At chamber

Sanskar : is everything fine doctor…Any complications in her pregnancy ?
Doctor : well yes Mr maheshwari… There is some complications…
Sanskar looks at the doctor horrifiedly…He couldn’t believe swara have complications in her pregnancy

Doctor : actually…There is problems in the fetus..
Sanskar : what doctor ?
Doctor : I observed the ultra sonography report and… Your having conjoined twins…
Sanskar : conjoined twins ?

Doctor : yes…They are joined at hip and sharing the vital organ liver….After getting the other reports tomorrow I can say what percent of liver each have…And then only we can decide will they ever be able to get separated or not…

Sanskar wipes his sweats and drinks water…

Swara : but in every case delivering conjoined twins for swara at this much weakness is too harmful…
Sanskar : harmful…

Doctor : it may cost her life…

Sanskar looks at the doctor..He feels like his world is spinning now…
Sanskar : what will I say to swara…She will be broken.. isn’t there any way…

Doctor : abortion is the best I can see….If you don’t want to take chances with her life…And 87% chance that hip conjoined are stillborn…I know it’s a major shock for u…But u need to take the desicion soon…Really soon !!!

Sanskar comes home and looks at swara…He avoids eye contact with her…What just happened to the ever perfect family of his….Why is god soo cruel…

Swara : sanskar…I saw the room u decorated for the princess.. it’s so beautiful… I’m in love with it..But what about my prince..He will get angry and jealous of his sister..

Sanskar looks at the glowing happiness of his love at the arrival of their kids…How can he bring such a bad news for her…

Sanskar goes into his room and tries to sleep for some peace…He needs to take desicion…But what..How to choose between swara and his kids…

He feels swara is massaging his head in her lap..Sanskar tries to sleep…

“I’ll back….Back for revenge…I swear ! ”
A lady jumps in water….
Goons are chasing someone…
There is blood dripping on road and sanskar follows it madly…
Sanskar comes there and shouts “didi……..”

Sanskar : no….
Swara : sanskar….!! What happened…Did u saw a bad dream…

Sanskar breathes heavily…He was sweating profusely..He looks at swara and hugs her tightly…Swara gently pats her head… Without asking any questions….

Sanskar : god why all this is happening to me…I can’t deal with my past now…God pls save my present from the dark shadow of my past…

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Sinin_kabir

    it's better to cut her legs off than stopping her at every step !!!

    35 Comments

    1. Sus on March 16, 2017 4:32 pm

      Nyc

    2. independent on March 16, 2017 4:57 pm

      so sad

    3. Harshita on March 16, 2017 5:18 pm

      Very emotional and sad

    4. zelena81196 on March 16, 2017 5:19 pm

      amazing…. but so heart wrenching…..continue soon….

    5. NDSG on March 16, 2017 5:24 pm

      Niceeeeeee…

    6. mica on March 16, 2017 5:25 pm

      waaaa,,, it’s so bad…… hmmm, better sanskar telling the truth…

    7. Jj on March 16, 2017 5:40 pm

      Hi,I think the report is false sanky didi want to revenge so she blackmailing. sanky to do this all in teaser part to separate swasan. I think I am correct please continue this type of story not change sanky bad at all please.

    8. praju on March 16, 2017 5:54 pm

      Awesome

    9. Kriti on March 16, 2017 6:17 pm

      nice but so emotional

    10. Swasan on March 16, 2017 6:21 pm

      Nice…..But plz not make sanskar again selfish and bad person …….plzzz

    11. Simi on March 16, 2017 6:37 pm

      Emotional…
      I think sanskar should tell about the reports to Swara.. Then there will be no misunderstanding in future… Plz dont make sanskar negative again, even its for Swara’s safety…

    12. DA on March 16, 2017 7:08 pm

      Hey its totally diff from what i thought in teaser…..!!!! Thanks for not degrading sanskar’s character…..!!!! hope no grave misunderstandings occur between dem….!!

    13. Ishqbaazi on March 16, 2017 7:15 pm

      Plzz dont seperate swasan again. Plzz dont let sanskar cheat plzzzz

    14. Simin on March 16, 2017 7:57 pm

      Superb dear
      I hope his past doesnt come back to him

    15. Ria on March 16, 2017 8:19 pm

      lovely dear

    16. Febi on March 16, 2017 9:30 pm

      Just amazing dear

    17. Meher on March 16, 2017 10:14 pm

      After reading about conjoined twins I recalled the show Amber Dhara.

      Well, I will say do whatever you want. If you really want to end this then I think that conjoined twins part was useless.

      I want it to be fake news and everything simple and happy

      • Shifa96 on March 17, 2017 2:16 pm

        I think he should tell her the truth..
        I think u should decide to continue or to end it.

      • Shifa96 on March 17, 2017 2:18 pm

        Sry comment got posted as reply bimistake.

        Meher plz Post forgotten love.

    18. AnuAnn on March 16, 2017 10:23 pm

      Awesome dear

    19. Priya on March 16, 2017 10:44 pm

      Nice continue plz don’t separate swasan

    20. Swarna01 on March 16, 2017 10:44 pm

      Cntnu bt dnt make sanky negetive.

    21. Pramudi on March 16, 2017 11:16 pm

      Awesome dear. But don’t make sanskaar negative again. Hope he tells the truth to swara.

    22. Nupur on March 16, 2017 11:43 pm

      As a writer, you decide you will continue or end it!
      Bt don’t make Sanskaar bad which you showed in Teaser bcoz that will make Sanskaar unacceptable! Already Sanskaar did wrong in past Bt later he truly fell in love with Swara & then after suffering during their separation & repenting for his mistake he got Swara! Bt if you show that Teaser part, it will ruin Sanskaar’s character completely!
      Hope you understand…

    23. kumu on March 16, 2017 11:47 pm

      nice epi..i dnt knw about d twist..
      its ur story..and ill support u whatever u decide..tc..

    24. Romaisa on March 17, 2017 12:01 am

      Wow loved it me dar gai thi because of the teaser plz continue and don’t seperate swasan and let sanskar tell swara the truth cause in future there wont be any misunderstanding?

    25. neeti on March 17, 2017 2:19 am

      Hi please don’t spoil their relationship, there should be mutual understanding.
      Sanskar should share his concerns with swara as he has promised her. Swara should understand Sanskar and find a mutual path. There are many other ways but protect the love between them

    26. Soujanya on March 17, 2017 10:43 am

      Awesome
      …

    27. anu on March 17, 2017 11:31 am

      awesome but emotinal

    28. IQRA222 on March 17, 2017 1:23 pm

      awesome

    29. maryum on March 17, 2017 3:05 pm

      I think simply story Ka sheath end is better then a bad twist I love ur story and I don’t want that Ka yeh spoli ho jaya twist Ka chakar main but its ur story last is urs do as u wish I hope u will not spoil it

    30. kaynatk01 on March 17, 2017 6:10 pm

      well u should continue it but dont show sanskaar bad plz

    31. vyshu10 on March 17, 2017 6:58 pm

      nice….emotional. Whether u want to continue or end, its ur wish. Just dont spoil make sanskar negative..if he is just acting, its ok

    32. Kakali on March 18, 2017 9:44 am

      Nice episode.! In order to avoid further misunderstanding Sanskar should discuss about the reports with Swara.!! Huh ! Sinin better u post soon & don’t turn Sanskar negative.! hope i can trust u!!
      Continue soon.!! Thnk u.. ;-*

    33. kat on March 20, 2017 11:52 am

      awesome dear..but pls dont make sanskar negative again…it will be repetative…

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