Hello friends sinin here with the next episode… Guys what happened to my other readers..why the comments are less..aren’t you all liking it anymore…
Sanskar breaks the eye lock…Swara gets up and starts going out of room..suddenly sanskar stops her by holding her wrist..swara stops but stays mum…
Sanskar (cups her face) what happened to your sindur…maybe it got wiped..wait I’ll apply it again.. You love na when I do it..
Sanskar takes sindur from dressing table and goes to swara…swara holds his hand when we brings it closer to fill his forehead…
Sanskar shocks…
Sanskar : swara…
Swara speaks for the first time..usually sanskar feels happy to hear her angelic voice..but what she said…shakes him from the core..
Swara : you have lost the right…
Sanskar : swara..no..don’t do it..please forgive me..
Swara : I have forgive you sanskar…
Sanskar became damm happy..he felt he got a new birth after much suffering in the hell…
Swara : you’re free…forever..!
Sanskar : what…swara
Swara : yes…its your forgiveness and my punishment !
Sanskar : no swara don’t do it…I won’t be able to live without you and our baby..
Swara : no sanskar.. It’s not our…its my only my baby..!
Sanskar : swara..its my blood too…
Swara : from today its not your blood.. You have no right on me or my baby..you’re free sanskar.. No need to act in front of me or world..
Sanskar : no..swara I know you’re angry with me…that’s why you’re saying this..
Swara : noo..sanskar I’m angry.. But not on u..on my destiny..it was my fault to expect happiness from life..
Sanskar : swara..
Swara : go..
Sanskar : what…
Swara : I said go….
Sanskar looked at Swara… Who looked no less than a yagyasiani..those eyes..have something else instead of love..
Sanskar : swara please..
Swara holds his hand and drags him out of the room just the way he did with her after knowing about her education…
Swara closes the door on his face..and falls down crying….
Sanskar to sits bside the door while crying… He thinks how would have she felt when he did the same with her…
Swara cries loudly… Like a kid who has lost its mother..like a women who has lost her existence… She sobs holding her tummy..
Her sobbing echoes in the mansion…
Sanskar : swara..don’t cry..please forgive me..I can’t bear ur tears..
Swara sees her vermilion pot…she sees flashback of her marriage.. Her lovely moments… In the red color….
She throws it in the mirror and it breaks in pieces..the red powder which was more precious than her life is falling on everywhere.. Except her forehead…
Sanskar hears the breaking sound and panics..
Swara point of view
Why sanskar.. Why..you did this to me…what was my fault..loving you blindly..?.. Or trusting u more then anything ?..you never loved me..you just wanted this face..this body..this beauty but not this soul..yes I was an illiterate.. I never went to school..but I learnt it na..I learnt English.. So that you don’t face any embressment….I left my dream for you..but uu never said..that you don’t need all this cause the face is you can’t love me..if you have just said once..indeed how did I thought..does love need perfection…its love which makes everything perfect… But it was not love it was…your lust..this child..which I’m carrying thinking symbol of our love…is a symbol of your lust..you didn’t think of me for once…you had to stay away from your family..you lied one after another..you faked everything.. But never said the truth… Okay.. Sanskar.. Your free from now on…there is no bound to love me…no need of lie or…act..its all over from now…
Swara touches her mangalsutra and snatches it…
Sanskar feels someone is strangulating him…
Swara : I’m sorry ..but I don’t have the right to have you…what have u done sanskar…. I’ll never forgive you….
Sorry for short update…very busy in studies..hope u understand ?
39 Comments
awesome. plz don’t separate swasan
super..but dont separate swasan
Feeling bad for swara.. but sanskar should suffer… Though swara is suffering along with sanskar but for sanskar it’s important
nice superb
Awesome…but plsss dont seprte swasan..plzzzz..
It wz osm bt too emotional…..dun b sad abt cmnts dear….n plz post royal love…
nice dont seperate them
awesome dear…!! loved it…!!
Awesome
nice..nw it is sanky’s turn to suffer..tc..
Now he will feel thd pain that swara went through
He deserves this
I am eagerly waiting to see a new swara who is strong and bold
Awesome
now he is feeling guilty he never ever deserved swara never will .
Awesome
oh god…i m crying now
Nice one loved it but plz don’t seperate them????❤️?
Plz don’t separate swasan please
Heart breaking chappyy….Nice…
Awesome….. continue soon……
Ohh dear..its awesome
Superb
Nice
Finally sanskar is going to suffer n get punishmnt for his deeds..
Loved d happh 2day…
Want to see strong n bold swara
Plz Plz don’t separate swasan
am really feeling bad for sanskaar but the truth is he have to suffer
Awesome too good
Feeling bad for Sanskar..but Swaras anger is justiified
Wow… Nice…. I really like this bold swara
nice
Don’t separate them.. Noe sanky loves her na.. Give him one chance. Everyone deserves second chance? I hurts me when sanky cries
Sinin !!! i have question…
we all can understand Swara’s pain … want Sanskar to be punished… i know he had done a mistake..or a sin…using his wife for his lust n he needs punishment…
But i just wanna put myself on Sanskar’s shoe… n d question comes into my mind “Is this soo easy to introduce an uneducated lady to world as his wife,, specially in this 21st century having a great name n fame?”
I thought a lot about it but didn’t get my answer…
Anyway thnk u for d beautiful chappy… 😀
she was not his wife . she was just his mistress. In 21St century keeping mistress is also legally invalid under Hindu marriage act. he married her there was no compulsion he is legally adult then where does the question of education comes . If he wanted to save the girl he could called an Ngo gave her a job but no he just used her . NO one should be like Sanskar though yes its 21 st century every one has the right to have pleasure (specially men) men when does a crime needs to forgotten as these are just mistakes while women should be like satis virgin and for women these are crimes
Thnk u aamias for ur reply … i was really confused… thnk u soo much for cleaning my doubts…
n yeah that’s why i said he did a sin n needs to be punished..
wow
vry vry nice epi.
it ws awsome,superb.
lv it.
nw sanskar is feeling like swara. wow i like it. he hv 2 suffer sm more tym. bt nt sooo long bz he is repenting.
i like swaras nw avatar. swaras pov is so nice.rly her reaction is rly vry gd.
sanskar win ur swara back. try hard dude. 😉
keep writing
be happy always
emotional part dear waiting for next part give it soon
Wow… simply awesome…. read lastvtwo chappys…. i didnt check ur last epi.. just now came across it…. so only didnt comment…
Sinin dear…. if one brings tears in readers eyes with thier writing… its amzing talent of writer…
U kneeled it dear…
Each and every dialog stabs in heart…
Wow.. u have done a grt job…
Superb part dear..
Feeling bad for sanskaar. But he should be punished. Cause he has done a sin. So here i’m with swara..
Take your time & update.
????but????.
whoo… hooo…nice move Swara babe!!!! just nice move for those selfish Sanskar!!