Swasan love hurts love heals … By samaira Episode 1

Heyy guys I’m back again .. This will again be from the show track guys I really didn’t like the way they portrayed I mean I enjoyed but still some changes … And it will be on both their POV I know iam kinda sanskae supporter but no in this!!! Hope so u like it do comment bad or gud both accepted!!
Let’s start:-
This exactly starts after the time swara leaves Sanskar and goes with ragini… ( nd in between it will be my POV tht wht shouldn’t have been there..)
1 I really don’t believe tht sanskar will fall low to throw stone at laksh.m
2 I hate the fact swara didn’t wear vermillion I mean she was right at her place but it doesn’t mean she doesn’t wear the things tht makes connected to her LOVE….

At night :-
Swara room:-
Swara was standing near the window after checking tht ragini slept…tears were continuously flowing from her eyes….
Swara POV..
Iam really sorry sanskar I know I did wrong when u needed me the most but sanskar how could u say tht our relation was over!! U don’t know how hurted I felt tht time… I am just regretting for blaming you I TRUST you sanskar I know tht u were not the reason of laksh s missing !! But I was also hurted did u think abt me for once… Nd I had to chose over ragini cause she is really depressed don’t know what could she do if I don’t go with him…
After thinking all this she silently goes and sleeps besides ragini…
Sanskar s room-
Sanskar is emotionalessly and lifelessly standing near window and thinking abt the recent happenings…
Sanskar POV:-

Iam really sorry swara !! I know I shouldnt have told all tht our relation is over.. Iam really sorry nd I know tht u TRUST me but because of my mistake ur hurted nd reacted tht way!! But swara wht u did was also not right !! I warned u from meeting my family members gave u my promise but still u didn’t care … I know u did this for me but still I hate it I had always been by ur side but u could have make me explained y did u meet my family !! ….. The things which makes u mine u removed them!! How could u do tht !! I know u are hurted but am I not??!!
He also cries silently and then goes to sleep but as his and swara s moments starts to haunt him badly he takes the pillow and silently goes to guest room!! ….
# guys I think both of them r correct at their place…
And I want to make few changes…
1 sujata won’t be against swara … Cause swara did a lot for them.. Nd I hated sujata s character at tht time…
So shall I continue??

17 Comments
  1. Tamil

    Amazing dear…..Interesting…..I agree with you

  2. Amazing….. Waiting

  3. Pls continue

  4. Of course u continue it it was awesome

  5. Independent

    Update soon dear

  6. Shilpi99

    Amazing continue

  7. Awesome dear

  8. Sus

    nyc dear

  9. Pnap

    superb
    pls do continue

  10. Awesome and excellent dear

  11. Amazing…… interesting

  12. Adishu

    post soon it’s interesting

  13. Nice…continue

  14. Gayathri.visu

    Continue…. Awesome n Suju’s character I agree with u.

  15. Neptune

    i m loving it…
    post soon..

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