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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan…Love Beyond Ages… Chapter 5
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Swasan…Love Beyond Ages… Chapter 5

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Link to previous Chap: Chapter 4

Chapter 5:

Days started to pass… it’s been an n days swasan getting married…   swasan are staying in separate room… sanskar resume his work… He completely made himself busy in his work… and also he done all the formalities of college admission for swara…  

@morning,

Swara was sleeping by covering herself in blanket… Sanskar tries to wakeup swara… swa: handsome 2 mins pls… sans: no way swara u need to wake up right now… already u passed 20 mins by saying 2 mins… swa: sanskar pls pls one more 2 mins… Sans: swaraaa… today is ur first day college but its look alike mine… swa: exactly today mine first day coll not urs… so u go and sleep now…

Swara place a pillow over her head… sanskar tries to take pillow, swara drags from his hand… swa: sanskar nowadays u r behaving like didi… sanskar leaves pillow from his hand… swara realise what she told… swa slowly: handsome… sanskar smiles faintly… sans: swara get ready soon…

He turns to leave from her room but stops… without turning… Sans: R u missing her..?  She changed her mobile not her mail id… swara smiles… swara: Its true I’m missing my didi and it’s also true you’re filling her absence in these days but… sans: but… swara: all the whole my handsome only missing…  sans: I’m here only swara… swara: but he is not my old sanskar… sans turns towards swara… swa: nowadays he lost himself somewhere…  sans: he needs some time to heal… swa: time never heals if we didn’t try… it’s always remain our wound… Sanky looks on…

After sometime both leaves to coll at car… swara: oh god… sanskar I’m damn exited… today my first day coll… you know na seniors will rag juniors… it means they will rag me… they gv some task to me… yippee… Sanskar: swara you are the one who getting exited for ragging and all… sans nods his head in disbelief… swara: sans pls pls tell me ur ragging experience…

Sans: hey kiddo I studied in law coll… Ragging is strictly prohibited… swa: ur coll is such a boring… sans: oye ragging is offensive… as a law coll they follows rules…  swa: but it really fun na… I watched in so many cinemas… sans: swara everything is fine only it was in limit… even fun…  see we reached college…

 

Sans: swara don’t start ur naughtiness first day itself… If someone ragged you dont be afraid… swa: haan…haan… ok ok… you don’t worry… sans: ha ha ha… swara all my worries are one who going to rag you… he gives her one pen and choco… swa: I thought you forget… san: how should I forget my regular routines… swara smiles…

 

Sans notices sindoor in her maang… Sans: swara dnt say anyone that u r married… ok… by saying this he goes to wipe her sindoor… swara holds his hand… she felt too hard when he tries to wipe her sindoor… swa: sanskar what u r doing… sans: just nw I said dnt inform anyone that u r married… if they see this sindoor… they find… swa: so what..? I dnt care… sans: swara I’m telling for reason… what’s a big deal in this… swa: but… sans: dont u want listen me… swa: you want to hide I’m married, thats it na… ok… she take some hair and hides her sindoor… and wrap the scarf around her neck… swa: now it’s ok na… she gt down from car angrily… sanskar looks at her but she didn’t turn to sanskar… 

Sans sends message to her… swara phone beeps… “I’m sorry…” she avoids it… again she receive a message… again she ignore it… 3rd time sanky comes infront of her… swara look away… sans holds his ear… swara smiles… Sans: that’s like my kiddo… ok bye… it’s getting late… haan… all the best… swara waives bye to him…

 

@Night,

Sanskar was returning from his law firm… he switched on his mobile… he get swara voice call…  “Sanskar why don’t you come to pickup me from college and you not even attend my call… I thought to intro all my friends to you… so bad, your kiddo was angry…you know this college was too boring I don’t like it, first day itself they started classes and they gave assignment also… oh I forget to say, here seniors are utter waste no ragging and all like ur college… I knew today also you gonna to come late only… don’t worry I had my dinner, you too take… I kept your dinner on dining table… ok ok bye I need to do my assignments… however I will be in deep sleep when you reached home, so good night…” sanskar smiles imagining  swara pout face all the while… Sans:pagal…

 

After reached home, he directly heads to swara room… (it’s his daily routine every day after return from firm directly goes to her room and made her sleep properly…) there he found her who is already asleep on the couch by hugging her knees… her note books are scattered on a table… he notices swara name in her note he remembers morning he written swara gadodia in her note but now Gadodia had been strike by pen and its written swara sanskar maheswari… he touches it and placed her book properly…

 

He stares her innocent face… her life changes upside down within a day but  her face doesn’t show any worry… she had a lil cute smile in her face… it’s give some pleasant to him… he feels afresh…

 

He reminds there morning convo,..You’re right when we don’t try to heal, it will remain the scar, he thought… then slowly carries her to his bed and carefully place her in… He cover her with blanket and brushes his fingers against her cheek… Swara hw can u sleep peacefully… sanskar asked himself… bz she is pious soul… she don’t love anyone… his inner voice replied… yeah she is pious, he murmured and turns to leave but stopped when he heard “Handsome” did she awake..? Sanskar looks at swara… no she muttering his name in sleep…

 

Sanskar smiles…even in sleep she thinks only about him… he doesn’t know why this thought made him feels good… kisses her forehead and leaves to his room…

To be continued…

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73 Comments

  1. Neha on July 2, 2016 11:58 pm

    Wonderful…..plz update soon dear

    • Nive... on July 3, 2016 10:20 pm

      Thanks dr… 🙂 🙂 will try to update asap… 🙂 🙂

  2. aahna on July 2, 2016 11:59 pm

    awsm…

    • Nive... on July 3, 2016 10:21 pm

      Thanks dr… 🙂 🙂

  3. maryum on July 3, 2016 12:04 am

    Awesome

    • Nive... on July 3, 2016 10:23 pm

      Thanks dr… 🙂 🙂

  4. mou on July 3, 2016 12:06 am

    superb

    • Nive... on July 3, 2016 10:37 pm

      Thanks dr… 🙂 🙂

  5. Malar on July 3, 2016 12:11 am

    awesome

    • Nive... on July 3, 2016 10:39 pm

      Thanks dr… 🙂 🙂

  6. niya on July 3, 2016 12:13 am

    nyc

    • Nive... on July 3, 2016 10:41 pm

      Thanks dr… 🙂 🙂

  7. surabhi Srivastava on July 3, 2016 12:21 am

    Awesome pls post nxt part soon

    • Nive... on July 3, 2016 10:46 pm

      Thanks yaar… will try to update asap… 🙂 🙂

  8. hadi on July 3, 2016 12:39 am

    Good one yr am waiting for ur update since 5 days plz post next soon dear

    • Nive... on July 3, 2016 10:49 pm

      I’m really sorry for late yaar… will try to upload next epi asap… and thanks for support… 🙂 🙂

  9. Divyanshri on July 3, 2016 12:42 am

    it is truely a beautiful story nive……. please try to. post soon..

    • Nive... on July 3, 2016 10:50 pm

      Thanks yaar… 🙂 🙂 will try to post soon…!!

  10. Lucky on July 3, 2016 12:55 am

    AWESOME

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:16 am

      Thanks lucky… 🙂 🙂

  11. Radhika on July 3, 2016 1:02 am

    Awsm….pls update tmrw…

    • Nive... on July 3, 2016 10:57 pm

      I’m really sorry yaar… my browser was not supporting tu from morning… nw I’m replying u all frim my bro mobile… will try to update next epi tomo… thanks for comment dr… 🙂 🙂

  12. Tulina on July 3, 2016 1:17 am

    Awesome update but please try to give regular updates………

    • Nive... on July 3, 2016 11:05 pm

      Thanks dr… will try to be regular… 🙂 🙂

  13. tamanna on July 3, 2016 4:56 am

    Awesome…. Waiting for next one…. Plz update soon….

    • Nive... on July 3, 2016 11:14 pm

      Thanks yaar… will try to post asap… 🙂 🙂

  14. sanya on July 3, 2016 5:04 am

    Oh omg you are back I love this epi yaar continue soon na

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:13 am

      yup.. thanks dear… 🙂 🙂

  15. SHAN on July 3, 2016 9:06 am

    Awesome….. Update next asap

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:14 am

      Thanks shan… 🙂 🙂 will try to post asap.. 🙂 🙂

  16. Soujanya on July 3, 2016 9:10 am

    Awesome

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:28 am

      Thank u.. 🙂 🙂

  17. Sethooty on July 3, 2016 9:16 am

    Nive..loved this epi….slowly slowly.. They will fall for each other…I loved that scene when try to wipe her sindoor… She protestes and hide it with hair…haha…

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:30 am

      Thanks sethu… yeah they will fall for each other slowly… 🙂 🙂

  18. chandu on July 3, 2016 9:28 am

    superb!! waiting for next part!!!

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:33 am

      Thanks chandu… will try to post asap… 🙂 🙂

  19. Sethooty on July 3, 2016 9:42 am

    Hey..I simply chked previous epi..u r hospitalized.. How u. Nive?…how is is ur health now?

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:38 am

      Hey sethu I’m super fine yaar… 3days back itself discharged from hospital… 🙂 🙂

  20. Jj on July 3, 2016 9:52 am

    Hi,slowly sanskar will fall in love with swara.after wards some college student proposed swara that sanky feel jealous so they start to realise the feeling for its to very nice to watch because I love swasan a lot.

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:39 am

      Thanks dear.. 🙂 🙂 I too love swasan lot.. 🙂 🙂

  21. deeksha on July 3, 2016 11:06 am

    Nice… Update soon

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:40 am

      Thank u… 🙂 🙂 will try to update asap … 🙂 🙂

  22. shiksha on July 3, 2016 11:30 am

    It’s really wonderful. Beautiful story nive. Just love it. Thanks for such a cute storyline seethoothy. N thanks for d lovely update nive. Update next chapter ASAP dr.

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:46 am

      Thanks shiksha… 🙂 🙂 you’re right this one has cute story line… I’m preety sure, if sethu written this it will be more beautiful.. 🙂 🙂

  23. meena on July 3, 2016 11:57 am

    Awsome plz update daily its awsome

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:49 am

      Thanks meena… 🙂 🙂 daily, its difficult yaar… I’m sorry but will try..!!

  24. anu on July 3, 2016 12:07 pm

    awesome update please update soon…

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:57 am

      Thanks anu… 🙂 🙂 I’ll try to update asap.. 🙂 🙂

  25. Jwala on July 3, 2016 12:35 pm

    Please update soon dear.. I was waiting for it

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 7:59 am

      Hey jwala I’ll try my best to update asap… 🙂 🙂 I’m really sorry for making you wait …!! Thanks for the support dear…’ 🙂 🙂

  26. Varu on July 3, 2016 12:41 pm

    I think shona loves sanky…. interesting

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 8:02 am

      Thanks Varu… 🙂 🙂

  27. Afra on July 3, 2016 12:43 pm

    Nice

  28. ria..!! on July 3, 2016 1:17 pm

    too good yar..suprb

  29. vyshu10 on July 3, 2016 3:30 pm

    awesome….very emotional. Loved it so much

  30. AnuAnn on July 3, 2016 3:48 pm

    Awesome dear

  31. Swapna on July 3, 2016 3:49 pm

    Just one word – FANTABULOUS !!!!!

  32. Navi on July 3, 2016 4:01 pm

    oi nive epudi iruka… see my msg in chap 4…
    and ipa epudi iruka???? olunga medicines la sapdu…. tke rst dr… job la two days leave potuko..
    chapiee na read panala.. first unta pesitu read panalam iruken…
    and seen near my name.. unakaga i did it.. 🙂 🙂

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 8:14 am

      Navi indha pg open pannadhum first na notice pannadhu adha tha… he he he… hmm… na semaya irukkean… fyn yaar.. 🙂 🙂 eeee medicines, its made me irritating… after taking medicines I’m feeling dizzy… epo thungurean kuda theriya mattikudhu…!!”

  33. navi on July 3, 2016 7:35 pm

    Wr is my comment tu??? And nive plz check chapie 4.. and epudi iruka.m tc rest dr… olunga tablets la sapdu..

  34. navi on July 3, 2016 7:39 pm

    Inum few chapters dhan.. aprm palaiya madhuri unnoda charm na pakka poren.. all naughty fights pranks ellam.. and indha epi superb.. semma…

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 8:21 am

      ha ha ha… ok lets see… ur cmnts already posted…

  35. Nive... on July 3, 2016 11:02 pm

    Thanks yaar… 🙂 🙂

  36. mica on July 4, 2016 1:30 am

    love it so much…..(Y)

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 8:21 am

      Thank u… 🙂 🙂

  37. Nive.. on July 4, 2016 11:06 am

    hey navi and sethu now I’m also registered member… 🙂 🙂

    • navi on July 4, 2016 4:38 pm

      hey nive… i hav som pblm in logging in… if i can i wil join u dhr.. or else i wil speak to u directly in comment or personal

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 10:55 pm

      hmm.. ok navi… no prob 🙂 🙂

  38. Nive.. on July 4, 2016 11:09 am

    TU doesnt post my cmnts… 🙁 🙁 anyways… Afra, ria, vyshu10, anuann, swapna thank you so much dearies.. 🙂 🙂 🙂

  39. Shagun on July 4, 2016 5:19 pm

    Ur story is soo amazing
    I read all the chs today
    All were awesome

    • Nive... on July 4, 2016 10:40 pm

      awww… thanks dr… 🙂 🙂

  40. navi on July 6, 2016 1:38 pm

    hi nive……….. hw r u ??
    hw s ur health… dont stress.. how abt ur wrk???
    tc bye…

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