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Chapter 24:
Swa(crying yet sleepy tone): sanskar wr u r kidnapping me… its not even 6 wr u taking me at this time… why you’re nt at all allowing me to sleep… she mk crying face…
Sans: ha ha ha kiddo even in sleep you’re talking this much…Sanskar chuckles… swara frowns… Swa: first tell me wr u taking me…
He stops his car… Sans: swara u knw today is last day of 2016… swa: so… sans: shall we gv happy ending to this day and make it memorable… she looks on…
sans: will u be my date today…? Hearing sanskar swara gt shock, all her sleep vanished… she chks his temperature… swa: are u ok..?
Sans: I’m perfectly fine… swa: today I’m having internal exam… sans: however u gng to gv empty paper, so bunk it… she gt an another shock…
swa: suppose if u gt any call regarding ur cases… sans: dialled number is not reachable… he takes sim from his mobi…
Swara jerks and hugs her knees… Swa: r u any ghost…? pls leave my handsome I’ll do whatever u want… I heard this time only ghost roam city… she started to cry… sanskar laughs looking at swara…
Sans: kiddo I’m nt any ghost, ur handsome only… swa: no… no u r lying… if I cries my handsome won’t laugh… he control his laughter and tks her in his arms…
Sans: my kid I’m nt any ghost… swa: thn shw me ur leg…. he shows his legs and show his hand… sans: look this thread, yesterday only u tied this kali ma thread in my hand… she touches him and gt relieved…
Swa:he he he… handsome I was just acted to be afraid, u believed… sans: oh really… Swara grinned wide and nods her head vigorously… he smiles…
Sans:ok now tell me, will u be my date today… she grinned wide… without answering him swara runs out of the car and stands under tree, sanskar looks her confused… he parked his car and gt dwn…
Swa: hey idiot… sanskar looks here and there… Sans: me… swa: haan haan u only… He comes near her…
Swara: dnt u hv eyes… see I’m married even though you’re asking me a date… sanskar rolled his eyes… She folds her hands in waist…
Swa: I knw abt u boys first u ask for a date… thn u guys’ll propose her… thn marriage… if she reject thn u guys complain her that she betrayed u…huh… She made a face… Now oly he looks around they’re in the place wr they first met, he smiles…
Sans: arre don’t worry I won’t do so bz I’m also married… Swa: ohho so sir trying to cheat ur wife… sans: what to do… u looking so beautiful, I can’t stop myself… pls accept this poor boy proposal… swara pretends to be thinking looking upwards…
Sanskar forwards one chocolate from his pocket… swara immediately tk choco frm his hand… Swa: you’re nt lyk other boy… and looking too pity… and after all my husband… so I accepting ur proposal ok…
Sans: aww… cho chweet of you… kiddo… he pulls her cheek… swa: I’m not kiddo… I’m swara… Swara sanskar maheswari… call me swara or mrs.maheswari… sans: no no u r my kiddo… kiddo wife only… both laughs…
Swa: so many things changed na… sans: yeah… but except one thing… swa: what was that..? Sans: your height… saying this he started to run… swara rolled her eyes and runs behind him shouting his name…
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Swa(shockingly): Boat ride..? R u serious at this time… sanskar nods… swa: but it’s just 5 in the morning… sans: u thing I can’t do this… swa: so sir showing his fame and money to his date, not bad… he just smiles…
Swasan are standing in the boat and enjoying thr ride alone… Sans: close ur eyes… swara closes her one eye and open another one… sanskar raises his brow and closes her eyes using his palm… Swa: handsome I knw u tk me to show sunrise am I right…?
Sanskar frowns, sans: huh swara, atleast u should pretend to be surprised na… spoiler… swa: he he he… sanskar … let it be… however it was surprised to me bz i never watched sun rise in my life… she chuckles, he smiles and slowly takes his hand from her eyes…
Its time for sunrise, the moon and the stars slowly dissolved into sky fading dark clouds… as the sun slowly peeked over the horizon… rivers are shimmered with different shades of hue… the dusk sky glazed with streaks of red, pink, violet and orange indicating the new day has been born … the eye treat scenario, watching sunrise while taking the boat ride…
Swara mouth hung opened with scenario… he smiles at her as her eye ball travel between descending moon and ascending sun, finally she fixed her eye in the rising sun… he takes her snap… she slowly taps sanskar without blinking her eyes…
Swa: handsome it’s beautiful, see this sun lookalike orange no no lollipop, my favourite alpenliebe ;P and this clouds are cotton candy… she said with her childish tone and grinned wide…
He laughs hearing her… she pouts… she is the only one who can compare the sun and clouds with her favourite lollipop and cotton candy… Unique girl… but she is right the ball shaped rising sun is lollipop and the shade of the pink over the scattered cloud is cotton candy… he smiles and looks her… the rays of the sun reflecting on their faces… she looks like golden angel… he back hugs and whisper “ Dark clouds become heaven’s flowers when kissed by light”
Swa: line by Tagore… Sans: haan… swara do u remember once u told me if god takes our loved one from us he ll send someone to fill thr place… u r the one swara who god sent to me, to end my loneliness with ur presence… to mk life too colourful lyk this… You’re my light and I bcm flowers of heaven after u entered in my life… she gets overwhelmed hearing him… she turns and hugs him tight kissing his chest over the shirt… he hugs her back…
Sans: don’t leave me ever… swa: never ever…
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After returning home, swara lazily lies n bed… sanskar went to tk bath… after getting ready… he looks at swara, she was sleeping curling herself in bed… he pecked her forehead and leaves to somewhere by asking her to be ready…
After sanskar leaves she awoke nd get freshen up… she struggles to zip her kurti…
‘Swara we will have breakfast at’ sanakar opened door… hearing door sounds she quickly turns her back… he gt awestruck to see her… he glued his eyes on her… her hair’s still wet from her bath, water droplets are dripping in her hair making her top wet…
he walks towards her moony-eyed… she looks here and there and passes nervous smile to him as her top is unzipped… in all of sudden she feels his hand on her bare back and got frozen at the spot… he slowly moves his hand on her till his hand reaches the zip… she closed her eyes… he zipped her kurti and makes her to turnaround and place his chin on her shoulders gluing her back in his front… feeling his breath, she clutches her top…
Sans(whispers): even mirror also having eyes… pointing mirror..
They’re standing infront of dressing table… when she open her eyes… Both hv an eye lock through mirror… he sneaks his around her waist, she gasp… he tk towel and gives to her…
Sans: dry ur hairs, otherwise u’ll catch cold… he kissed her head and turns to leaves… swara slaps her head smilingly… he quickly snaps her pic, she widen her eyes again he snap her pic… she pouts, he snapped one more…
Swa(low voice): huh sanskar… she frowns… he chuckles lil, snapping one more… sans: what to do, u look damn cute in this… she turns crimson red… sans: and also hot eh.. He leaves smilingly making swara blushes more… she goes to lock door, sanskar peeks his head… she gt shocked…
Sans: lock door before change, ok… swa: when we’re in safe place, there is no need to lock… he smiles…
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Swara sits in front and closes the car door… swa(excitement):sanskar wr r we going… San: surprise… swa: sanakar pls tell na… sans: wait a minute… he takes a lilly and orchids boquet from back seat and gvs to swara…
Swa:My favourite lilly… she jumps from her seat and hugs him…
Sans: I want my date should me perfect… swa: ohho.. let see, hw sir gng to impress me…
Sans: swara I’m sorry, I’m nt person who gv… swa:flowers to me first… sans:hmm…
Swa:ohho my jealous partner… she pokes his nose… swa: aju is my frnd but you’re my husband, my love… you’re nt the first one who gv flowers to me but see u oly gv me my favourite lillies…. ( she locks his hand with her…) sanskar you’re the person first in my life, and for the rest of my life u’ll be the only one… so… she signs him to smile… he smiles…
Swa:my good boy tell me wr r we gng… sans: I said na it’s surprise… she pouts, he chuckles…
He stopped his car at a big ship like entrance… swara looks amused… ” Marine Exhibition”she happily shouts…
swa(amusement): U gt tickets, why dnt u tell me… sans: I already told na it’s surprise.. swa: this one is perfect dating for me… sans: lets cme… she follows him..
Both are welcomed by a girl disguised in mermaid who was standing near artificial ponds… to tease swara sanskar shake hands with her and asked swara to tk one snap of them… Mermaid girl blushes and ogles sanskar… swara looks sanskar lyk ‘I ll see u in hme’ and pass death glare to girl… both gulps… she gv her mobi to mermaid girl and ask her to tk photos of swasan holding sanskar possessively… sanskar Smiles at her… girl tks thr photo with full of jealous…
After entering inside both are confused where should go first… One side full of details about marines Aquarium, arts of different kinds of sea shell, craft works, some sculptures, paintings and books about sea animals, ships, bazar… Other side games, Roller coaster ride, water rides, train, super waves, octopus ride, boating, and so…
Sanskar first takes swara to Aquarium side…
Swa:again books…swara pouts…
Sans: kiddo fully water rides, if we bcm wet thn we can’t cme here so… she nods…
Aquarium is fully filled with different kinds of fishes octopus turtles marine plants… both feels lyk they’re in underground sea… swara excitedly turns to sanskar… sanskar was interestingly reading species name history origin… swara huffs thn she started to tk selfies…
Aftr visiting marine side, thy goes to bazaar inside exhibitions he bought conch shell and gt written thr name on it… Swara holds shell near on her ear and smiles widely hearing sounds of ocean wave… thn she place shell on sanakar ear…
Swa(happily): did u heard..? Sans: haan… he smiles… both hears together and grinned… swa: It’s nice na…
Sans: swara you knw its not an ocean sounds it’s actually… Swa (cuts him): huh I don’t need any ur scientific explanation… sans(smiles): haan ok ok… lets move…
Thy went to food side as both of thr stomach starts to growl… when thy crossed seafood’s… aroma of foods filled thr lungs… Swasan remembers something, thy stares each other…
* Swara silently signs sanskar without Rags knowledge… both comes aside… sans: what..? She shows him one large fish… sanskar eyes popped out looking at fish…
Sans(shouts): swara what was it.. dadi, dadi…
She shuts is mouth… swa: sshhh handsome… don’t shout…
He takeoff her hand and mk yuck face and moves back… Sans: dnt touch me… why u bring this here, if dadi knws…
Swa: dnt wry, dadi isn’t home… I want to eat this… she looks him innocently…
Sans: swara it’s a sin if we eat all these… swa: arre sanskar we are in capital city of West bengal if we didn’t eat dis thn oly its sin… sanskar rolled his eyes…
Sans: we are vegetarians… swa: I want to taste fish atleast once… pls… seeing her puppy dog eyes, he melts…
Sans: ok if u want thn eat, pls dnt drag me… swa: he he he… handsome u oly going to cook dis… sans: Huh… She shows her tooth… sans: but Ragini… he sighs… swa: I’m here na… dnt wry…
By saying some works swara sent Rags out from badi… soon both changed thr attire like chef wearing gloves, apron and hat… sanskar wears mask covering his nose…. sanskar is chief cook and swara is his assistant… by watching YouTube sanskar prepared fish fry… swara inhales aroma…
Swa: mummy it’s look yummy… looking fish fry sanky mouth also gt watery… sans: he he he kiddo within a minute it will be in our tummy…
At that time dadi shekar and Rags also return badi… even DP also cmes for some work… 4 watching thr kitchen masti… Rags and shekar signs thm standing behind dadi and DP but thy didn’t turn…
Swa: ha ha ha… mummy yummy tummy… swasan feeds each other one bite… Dadi and DP shouts thr name angrily… thr fish plates falls from swasan hand hearing thr sound… both stands shock with fear… thy looks fish fry poutingly thn licks thr finger…
Rags hits her head… Rags: nw thy gng to make u bth Dummy huh… she nods her head… finally dadi gv thm gangaajal bath in outside of badi and gvs tablet to clean thr stomach… *
Laughing it off remembering the moment, they walks to other sides… swara points sankar cotton candy… he tks her thr… she ask sanky to mk cotton candy for her… he watches hw vendors make candy twirling the stick in large round bowl spinner , he wide his eyes… thn he tried… first tym stick gt brkn nxt his hand bcm stinky with sugar syrup … swara laughs looking at him and tks his snaps… sanskar pouts… after 2-3 attempt sanskar makes big raspberry blue mixed yellow cotton candy floss… swara jumps and claps… he lifts his shirt collar proudly…
Instead of tasting, bth made fun by making a cotton candy as beard and moustache in each other faces and takes selfies giving different pose…
Now time for rides… @Roller coaster ride,
Swasan moves in queue… slowly swara excitement replaced by fear whn thr steps nearer to ride, she held sanskar hand and passed faint smile… swa: sanskar it was so fast na… suppose its stopped in mid, lyk cinema if something happened…
Sans: swara nothing will happened, if you dnt want cme lets leave… Swa: no no.. I want to ride this but… she sighs… her face clearly showed how scared she was… he smiles and assures her holding her hand… sans: I’m with u na… she nods…
Both sat on thr cart and puts thr seat belt… tide start to begun… swara called all the gods to save her… sanskar chuckles… It was slow at start, swara closed her eyes tight and intertwined her fingers with sanskar… by every single second its speed increases… nw swara fear turned into fun… sanskar looks her amused, she was shouting happily by throwing her hands up but thy get jerk for each drops of down…
Thy enjoyed all the rides fully and tks so many selfies… they’re about to leave but notices a crowd that has gathered for some kind of event… Swara peaks into the crowd and learns that fishing competition is going to held, which couples catches high number of fishes within given time they’re winners… swara perks up… sanskar pulls her out but she drags him along to participate in that event…
Sanskar was trying to catch a fish using fly fish rod… swara simply stares him… none gt single fish… swara eyes gt twinkle with idea, she shouts ’handsome I hv an idea..’ all glares her, sanskar hushes swara and concentrates in fishing… (remember advertisement..? :D) she make a face and silently tks one stick, puts fevikwik on wood (don’t ask frm wr she get fevikwik thr, even I don’t knw) and insert it in the water soon stick started to shakes, when swara pulled out a stick, it has fishes… she sings happily “na nana na na” voice over says ‘stick in an instant’ Swasan announced as winners… Sanskar tightly kissed swara cheeks in front of all… swara first gt shock thn she blushes blinking her eyes lyk 90’s heroine… sanskar brushes his hair smiling lyk mad…
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Swara sat inside the car and sanskaar drove off, they were chatting and laughing the whole way remembering what all they did in exhibition… its New Year eve, city was fully busy with celebration and traffics some of the roads are blocked… sanskar halted his car to somewhere lonely place…
He tk some stuff from his car lights fire using sticks… swara was sitting hugging her knees… he sat nxt to her wrapping shawl around her and gvs her food…
Swa: so u knw we’re gng to stay outside today… Sans: Yep… she smile both talks some random stuff… all of sudden swara bcms silent and she fixed her eye somewhere… he change his direction to thr… she is watching one old couples… both are doing action of doing cycle ride… old man was pedalling the standing cycle and the old lady is sitting in front between his arms and she is wiping his sweat… it may looks funny but it showing thr love… sanskar Smiles and places his hand swara shoulder… sans: lets cme… both goes towards them…
Swa: hey young man… old man(OM) stops pedalling and looks at them… OM: hey beauty… Sans: shall we join..? OM: ofcourse handsome…
He gt dwn frm cycle and helps old lady to gt dwn….
(OM): this oldie asked me for cycle ride but it’s really difficult to manage this fatty oldie…
Old lady (OL): ohho look who is saying that…
OM: oh really ask everyone who is looking old… both nok_jhoks.. Old lady huffs… he kissed her cheeks… she hits him…
OL: shameless… blushes… OM: it has been more than 70yrs we gt married still u r blushing… swa:70yrs..? Really… OL: haan… we both are married at the age 12…
OM: at that time we not even know the spelling for Marriage… OL: don’t say now u knw spelling… OM scowls… swasan laughs…
4 sats in the stone lyk chair… Swasan asked thr love story… Thy started tell…
OM: in early days of our marriage she is my enemy, I wnt to share my toys with her… I really hate her so much without knowing I’m gng to share my life with her… he chuckles…
OL: we both used to fight lot… when day passed, slowly we bcm frnds and starts to understand each other…
OM: we bcm mature, we realised we’re nt oly frnds morethan that.. OL: we found the day of love… one day he tk me cycle ride and asked by forwarding his hand lyk this…
OM:will u travel with me in the journey of my life till the end… Old lady held his hand… OM: still she doesn’t leave my hand at any circumstances… OL Smiles…
OL: we gt responsibility… OM: we supports eachother..
OL: we bcm parents, grand parents… OM: nw we retired ourself from responsibilities and enjoying our life together… he winks… Swasan admires them, thn looks eachother…
OM: u bth are looking so cute together… by looking both of u anyone can easily say u bth did love marriage… OL: huh I’m sure thy did arranged marriage…
OM: this oldie always ready to argue with me… u bth tell us who is right… hearing thm swara gt upset…
Swa: we married by fate, its nt arrange neither love, I … sanskar helds her hand… Sans(looking them): we married by fate but one thing is true we’re filling our life with love nd she is the girl I love (looking at swara) only girl whom I always fall more in love with each and every second… he looks swara smilingly…
OL: oh that so sweet of you… (to OM) learn something from him… OM: hw much u do fr dis women’s thy never gt satisfy easily…
Sans: hmm tht was true… swa: Huh what u mean by true… sanskar rolled his eyes.. both couples nok-jhoks…
Swara and OL turns aside angrily… sanskar and OM looks each other, thn sanky forward his hand to OL for dance… as well OM to swara…
OM: you’re nt angry… R u..? Swara nods in no… swa: I can’t be angry on him fr anything…
OL: so possessive, so much of love… sanskar smiles… OL: she is dancing with my hubby but her eyes re here and urs are…
OM: here… swara shies…
Swasan: but its look like someone is jealous…OM/OL: ofcourse I’m… swasan: even I’m…
OM/OL: hmm…will do onething… Swasan: What..?
Both men twirls thr partners and changes them… 4 winks at each other… sanskar holds swara by her waist… he pulled her to himself.. Swara blushed and put both her hands behind his neck and places her hand on his shoulder…
After dance old couples blesses them and bid bye to swasan as they want to celebrate thr new year alone…
Swa: that was you and me… she grinned Pointing them… sans: you’ll be with me until thn.. dnt u..? Swa: always… she places her head on his shoulder and start to play with his shirt button; he wraps his arms around her…
Sans: lyk thm one day we also bcm parents thn grand parents … swara shies and hide her face… sans: swara I never gt a chance to call my mom as ma… but I want our kids to call u.. lyk every Mom u should run between them holding milk, u mk thm gt ready… thy want to complain u to me… I want thm to annoy u by disturbing ur work… whenever I gt romantic with u thy want to drag u frm me… we bth should fight for u and be a partner in crime with me to make u fool… whenever u kiss our kids I should be jealous of thm… U me and our kids… a perfect family…
She senses how much he was longing for family… she held his hand and kissed it…
sans: U too want all these na… swara nods looking into his eyes… he asked her about future plan…
Swa: Handsome… Sans:hmm… Swa: I don’t knw any of these things… all I want is, always to be with you… to grow old with ur fragrance… a trembling walk holding ur hands with my shivering hand… a wet kiss to my wrinkle forehead from ur dry lips… hearing ur heart beats by placing my white hair head in ur loosen chest… loosing myself into ur these killer eyes till eternity… and I Love You from ur dirty mouth… she chuckles at last sentence… finally closing my eyes in ur arms… I want to live in each other hearts beyond ages… (Pointing his heart) here SWARA (pointing hers) here SANSKAR … we are SWASAN and our LOVE wants to live BEYOND AGES… SWASAN LOVE BEYOND AGES… she smiles…
Sanskar looks her lovingly… his eyelids forgets to meet each other… one who always knw to win… one who shuts everyone mouth by his argument… now shuts his mouth, this little Girl his kiddo made his mouth shut… his lips are trembled in searching of words… but he is not getting any words to describe his feeling… he was lost.. totally lost in front of her love… his eyes slowly bcms glassy… she looks him with her hazel doe big eyes which reflects love for him…
He place his forehead on her touching her nose with his and cupping her cheeks, looking into her eyes lovingly…
Sans: Why you love me so much… Swa: dnt knw but I knw one thing I love you… she replied in her most innocent tone and smiles…
Soon he placed his lips on her and kissed her, his eyelids met which made tears flow from his eyes making his cheek and her wet… Her fingers get entangled with his hairs and his hands encircled around her waist pulling her more towards him deepening the kiss… she reciprocates his kiss, letting herself fall into his embrace deeper as he envelops her even closer to him …tears flowing from as well as her eye also, she doesn’t knw why may be she feels his love in his kiss… thy knw these tears and these kiss are bz of thr love… they are kissing each other lyk no tomorrow… they’re the only two people in the world …thr life depends on this kiss… the emotions flowing into that kiss are beyond..there is no hungry no madness no lust no desire only love thr love to each other… he don’t want to leave her for second but he have to do atleast for his love breath… he parted from her when he feels she needs air… both are breathing heavily… again he kissed her and wipes her tears using his thumb fingers…
San: I LOVE YOU… Swa: I LOVE YOU MORETHAN ANYTHING…
Sans: I agree… swa: huh… atleast for god sake u hv to argued with me na… she frowns…
Sans: I love to loose in front of my wife… Swa: Ugh, wakil sir pls stop ur cheesy lines…
Sans: Ji madam ji… he bows, both laughs…
Swa: sanskar I forget one thing… she pouts… sans: what..? Swa: I said my white hair, thn wat about ur blade head lyk dugs (dp) I mean ur papa mera saas… she laughs loud imagining his bald head…
Sans: youuuu… he pulls her, she hits his chest hard… swa: sanskar pls dont do anything… she closes her eyes in fear… he laughs…
Sans: 5…4…3…2…1… let open ur eyes… swa: what..? sans: open ur eyes madam… when she opened her eyes, sky was fully sparkled with different colours and exploded sound bz of fireworks.. night sky bcm daylight… Swara stands surprised.. she comes to her sense hearing sanskar…
Sans: Welcome to 2017… he winks… she jumps into his arms.. Swa: you did this for me don’t you… he nods…
Sans: Wish You Happy New Year… Swa: A Very Happy New Year… she kissed his cheeks tight… he act like fainting… she hits him playfully..
Sans: arre tell me how is ur date, I hope I didn’t bored u with my new syllabus… I mean outing dating surprises and gifts.. Oops I forget my gift… he slaps his head…
Sankar makes her sit and kneels down front of swara taking ring box from his pocket… swara grinned wide forwarding her hand… he slaps and shoves her hand…
He holds her leg and keeps her foot in his lap… she looks him confused… he takes toe ring from the box and into her toe…
Sans: I want each and everything should be present on you which are on my name… by saying this he slips ring in her fingers holding her hand… she smiles…
Swa: you knw u boys are so mean… u all wants to show this world ur wife is married by all these symbol but u all won’t hv any of these…
Sans: what we do… these ornaments are meant to girls…. if we hv anything lyk this thn we too show this world we’re someone husband…
Swa: really thn ready to show this world u r mine, only mine… Sans (teasingly): hw, by making me wear these mangalsutra….
Swa:haan… Sans: what..? He gt shocked… sans:swara r u serious… swa:Yes Mr. She signs him to wait… she removes her chain, one metti and insert it in her chain… sanskar looks on…
Swa : this one is ur mangalstura…today again Im gng to marry you but thr different is I’m going to tie this.. sanskar smiles… She plays Mangalyam tantunaanea in thr mobiles and adores his neck with her self made mangalsutra?
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I suppose to update this one on 1st but asusual bcm irregular… I Knw in this epi I wrote too much of stupid things… sorry… I’m in the mood of pongal..☺
Wish You All Happy Pongal (Iniya Pongal Nalvazhthukal) ????
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Enjoyed every scene nive…so our vakkel sir is turned to romantic…old man women convo also …loved it…
Haha swara tied chain on him…that was different….
In our wedding bride’s brother make wear a gold chain to groom on the marriage day itself….its a symbol of their marriage for boys with engagement ring.
previous dp my nephew dear..☺☺
Sethu nandri (thanks) ☺☺ even in our tradition also bride brother make wear chain or ring to grooms… and in some region groom wear toering 3 days before thr marriage… one wk thy keep that ring in thr toe’s… I saw one old couples that made me write this?? u luvd tat scene I’m happy.. 😀 😀
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Aww.. Hadi Thank you so much dr…☺☺ I thought I bored u all but I’m happy after reading all cmnts..?? regular..? Tat oly making difficult me.. 🙁 buto will try to post 2 or 3 epi’s in wk.. 🙂
han plz dear try to post
Awesome.. Loved it..
The best ever chapter
Each scene were amazing…
Happy pongal dear?
Thank you dr… ☺☺ Wish you the same..??
Just loved it dear…… Please update soon.
Thank you dr..☺☺
Amazing epii nive….
Kalakitta pooo…..semmaiya iruthuchu …idhu onnum boring lam illa….nxt one soon…
&&iniye pongal vazhuthukal….
Nandri..☺☺ Iniya maatu pongal vazhthukal dr..??
Itss amazing dearrr ??? keep it upp ??
Thanks dear☺?☺
OMG???? NIVE excellent episode. …..really soooo amazing nd lovely. ……best chatppy on Makar Sankranti…….??????? every scenes is sooo lovely beautiful nd sweet ??????
HAPPY PONGAL ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
Aww.. Thank you dear☺☺?? wish you the same??
amazing and belated happy new year
Thanks dear..☺☺ Wish you happy pongal??
Awwww it was awesome Dr…. Such a cute one… Nowadays I guess u r getting inspired by fish and aquarium, c in ur dp too???
Yep maybe I was inspired by my sis lil aquarium… and my dp is frm aarya movie.. i lyk tat scene…?? Thank you dear☺☺
Soo cute… OL and OM part was awsome…
I love it???????
Thank you dr.. ☺☺tat part was my favourite too..??
Same pinch…??
Adaaaaaaaaaa droghi idalam bore a mudiyallaaaaaaaaaaa 🙂 idukae un othaikanum di 🙂 ana ne vera adiku adi makayam podaranu suma vidranau 🙂 inoruvati un ff la inda line a pota iruku unaku 🙂 kacheriiiiiiiiii 🙂 😛 semaaaaaaaa dear loved it 🙂 happy pongal 🙂
Ha ha ha… mirna that bz of low bp ena panradhu..? irundhalum na pacha kolandha suppose theriama add pannita ena periya manasu panni manichidu? thank you..☺☺ happy maatu pongal??
Awesome…
Thank you dr ☺☺
Awesome
Thanks dear?☺
amazing .
Thank you dr ☺☺
so lovely..
Thank you dr ☺☺
Awesome
Thank you dr ☺☺
Amazing lovely….. Awesome ?????????????
Thanks swasan?☺?
Its Awesome.. I loved itt…
Thanks dr ☺☺