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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan: my incomplete love story ( chap-4 )
Fan Fiction Swaragini

Swasan: my incomplete love story ( chap-4 )

administratorBy administratorMay 12, 201615 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi guys! I am sorry for the inconvenience. I will try to post regularly. Thank you so much for your comments. Some of you asked for sanskaar’s pov. I will try to post an epi for that. And guys I am getting less comments plz support me. Sorry for the very short epi. This is kind of like a summary, the next epi will also be short and be like kind of summary. But when I post an epi of sanskaar’s pov I will definitely make it up you all. I will definitely write very long Epis. Please forgive me this time.
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Swara’s pov:
OMGGGG!!!!
Oh no he is staring at me. Why is he staring at me?? But he is so cute. “Really swara?” I said to myself.
I wanted to stare away but we both are staring at each other un blinkingly.
What am I supposed to do? Damn why did ragini bring him here.
“BHAIIIIIIIII!!”
We heard ragini scream. He snapped his head for an instant and he turned back but I had closed my eyes pretending to be asleep. I am not a good actor though but for now I had no other option.
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Sanskaar was staring at swara when he heard ragini scream.
He turned back to find a sleeping swara. He shook his head. And was still staring at swara.
Ragini came out and started speaking nope more like blabbering to him which he was barely listening. He was fully concentrated on staring at swara. He could not hear or see anything except swara.
He was brought back to reality by ragini voice.
“Ahem ahem” she fake coughed. She started acting like sanskaar which made him angry and he got up to leave.
Ragini asked sanskaar to go and meet swara while he refused.
At the moment Sumi came and made him sit again and started talking nineteen to the dozen. He was extremely bored but putting on a smile. Ragini said sanskaar was hungry and Sumi forced sanskaar to have dinner. The she went back to kitchen.
Sanskar started chasing ragini and ragini ran inside swara’s room with the food.
Then sanskaar was shocked to find him in swara’s room. He stared at swara and then he heard click of the door knob. Ragini had locked the door from behind.
He asked ragini to open the door but she refused and went away laughing.
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Swara’s pov:
God!! How long do I have to act??? I felt a warm hand on my forehead. OHNO!!! Is he checking my temperature?? This day is the worst day of my life. I almost felt like crying. God please don’t worsen this day anymore or else I will definitely die.
I felt some one walk around me and I could hear the footsteps and I heard the door knob click and footsteps again and silence. “Maybe he left?” I thought and opened my eyes to find him staring at me leaning against the wall. I gasped. I stared at him wide eyed.
Then he… he…he looked straight into my eyes
And…. And… and OH NO!!
He
Smiled at me………
To be continued………

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15 Comments

  1. anu on May 12, 2016 10:28 pm

    nice

    • Ameera on May 13, 2016 11:31 am

      Thank you Anu

  2. shan on May 12, 2016 10:42 pm

    awesome

  3. kumu. on May 12, 2016 11:16 pm

    nice..plz continue..:)

  4. ruhi on May 12, 2016 11:32 pm

    Nice

  5. helsy on May 13, 2016 3:41 am

    Awesome and nice, update next chap aspp

  6. Isabel on May 13, 2016 3:44 am

    Pretty gd, nyc continue writing,

  7. Tvisha on May 13, 2016 4:51 am

    nice

  8. mou on May 13, 2016 6:00 am

    awesome

    • Ameera on May 13, 2016 11:32 am

      Thank you so much mou

  9. ❤?Natasha?❤ on May 13, 2016 10:32 am

    Fabulous ?????

    • Ameera on May 13, 2016 11:32 am

      Glad u like it Bataan’s

    • Ameera on May 13, 2016 11:33 am

      Sorry

    • Ameera on May 13, 2016 11:33 am

      Glad u like it natasha

  10. soujanya on May 13, 2016 4:23 pm

    very nice…but plz write some long

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