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Home»Fan Fiction»SwaSan: I’m always with you – Few Parts (Part:1)
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SwaSan: I’m always with you – Few Parts (Part:1)

Maha_AijazBy Maha_AijazSeptember 17, 201723 Comments8 Mins Read
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I’m always with you-
Part:1
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“How’s she now?”, a boy in chocking voice and trembling state asked from a doctor
“She’s not fine Sanskar. I’m sorry to say but she’s brutally raped”, he replied while keeping his hand on Sanskar’s shoulder
“Laksh please don’t take that word, it kills me from inside”, he said with extreme pain
“I can understand but please stay strong as she must be devasted at this stage”, laksh said in consoling tone
He slightly nodded while wiping his tears.
“Do you know who did this with her?”, he asked
“Yes I know, and they’ll get such death that death will also shiver”, he said with blood shot eyes
“But before doing anything you’re needed to submit medical reports of her”, he said trying to keep his words as simple as he can
“No need of it, I don’t want any report as proof. She’s my wife, commissioner Sanskar Mehashwari’s wife and he’ll pay for this sin”, he said with firm expressions
“But they’re not ordinary people Sanskar and you know it very well. They’ve strong political background, try to…”, he said trying to convince his friend but was interrupted in mid
“No one is powerful in front of me and after all what he did”, he sighed while gathering some will to complete, “I’ll make sure he gets worst than torturing life that he himself will beg for death” he completed his phrase in stern tone
“I’m sure they’ll but still I’ll advice you to rethink about it as test can be done within 24 hours out of which 3 has been passed”, Laksh said before leaving him alone in the corridor.

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In SwaSan’s room:
Sanksar was siting beside his wife, his love while holding her hands softly. He was eyeing her with pain, a girl who used to be so chirpy, lively and bubbly was laying lifelessly in front him and he couldn’t do anything, he placed a soft kiss on her knuckles while thinking about his first meeting.
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Flashback-
“Thank you so much for visiting this place Mr. Sanskar”, a lady said while welcoming a man dressed up in Commissioner’s uniform
“It’s my pleasure Miss. Helen, please don’t say thanks”, he replied with a deep smile
“But it’s really an honour for us that such a brave officer has visited this orphan to give us donation with so much respect”, she said in order to praise his nobleness
“Actually I really feel happy in visiting such places because like them, I too have no one in my life”, he said while hiding his deep inner pain
“Your parents?”, She asked out of curiosity, though she was cursing herself for asking such question all of a sudden
“They’re no more”, he answered straightly with a weak smile
“Oh I’m sorry”, she took a pause before continuing​ “but wherever they’re they must be proud of you”, she completed her sentence with a light smile
“No, I’m proud of them and always be” he said while taking a deep breath and straight head
She looked at him confusedly as she didn’t get what he tried to say. Meanwhile a group of girls was rushing towards a room happily and excitedly altogether
“Where’re those girls going with so much excitement”, he asked astonishingly as soon as his eyes fall on that group
“Come let’s see with your own eyes” she replied while standing up from her place
Sanskar while looking at her surprisingly followed her. Once reaching that mysterious room, he tried to enter inside and with much difficulty he went in while requesting some girls to give him some space. He and Miss Helen stand at a corner whereas the girl was facing her back to that excited group as well as Sanskar and that lady.
“Yeh dil toh mila hain sirf tujhe pyar karne ke liye,
Yeh aankhen milee hain bas tera didar karne ke liye”, she sang those beautiful lines in her melodious voice unaware of the crowd which was standing behind her
“Tauba mere tauba socha bhe nahe tha, aisa hal hoga Ishq main”, she continued her singing while closing her eyes, though music wasn’t available but who needed it after all she was doing complete justice without instrumental music.

On the other hand Sanskar missed his heart beat listening her pure and sweet voice. He wanted to see her face but he knew, it’ll be awkward to try in front of everyone so remained still at his place
“Surprised?” Miss. Helen asked with a smile
“Yes, I’m. She has a beautiful voice” he complimented surprisingly
“No doubt, and for listening this voice these girls even beg in front of her but she being stubborn don’t listen to them and sing once in a while” she said with a sad face
“But why?” he asked being confused
“She didn’t tell us the reason so we don’t know exactly” she replied shrugging her shoulders.
Once that girl finished her singing, she turned herself only to find those glowing faces
“You all here, don’t know what’s in my voice that you guys gets so attracted”, she said while keeping her hands on her waist
Sanskar was adoring her beauty which was increasing by her innocence, he smile which was playing on her lips, her cheeks which were so pink even without any blush-on, her hairs which were tied in a high pony tail and above all, her eyes which were reflecting how sacred she’s.
“Your melodious voice attracts us”, Sanskar answered unknowingly
“And who’re you?”, she asked getting shocked of his sudden reply
“I’m..” he was about to tell his name but to his luck she went on trying push everyone out
Being obedient all left the room within some seconds but he didn’t move an inch, she stares him in disbelief and walked towards him
“Do you need some kind of invitation”, she asked frowning her brows
“For what”, he asked with a grin
“For getting out of my room”, she replied with an extra sweet smile
“You really don’t know hospitality”, he said trying to realize her straight forwardness
“So you want to see my hospitality”, she said while stepping forward whereas Sanskar stepped back due to her mischievous smirk
“Beta getting free with me will cost you a lot”, she said while raising her brows
“I’m not getting free, actually I was trying to say that you sing really well Miss,” he stopped as he realized he doesn’t know her name
“Swara, my name”, she helped him by telling her name and letting him complete
“Yes Miss. Swara so you have an excellent voice”, he smiled while complementing her
“Thank you, but now you can leave please because I want to change”, she said trying to be as soft as she can
He smiled a little and went outside, as soon as he walked out she shut the door without even glancing her but inside the room she was smiling widely while thinking about him
“She’s kind of straight forward and what had happened to me, my tongue wasn’t supporting me in front of her even my legs were stepping back, coward boy got scared of a girl”, he mumbled under his breath while patting his forehead

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Present,
Sanskar came back to reality once he heard the knock at his door
“Sir a policeman has come to meet you”, a maid after informing him left from there
Sanksar stared at his wife’s face which was so pale then her neck which were having the signs of her misery and gets determined to punish those devils that no one in the world could raise his eye in front of any girl. He after gently keeping her hand at her tummy placed a soft kiss on her forehead while wiping tears from the corner of his eyes. Once standing up he left the room as soon as he lightly shut the door.
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Thank you for reading.
Hello everyone! So it’s my second try on SwaSan. First one was my OS “Fear of loosing” hope you remembered, whereas second is this one. I know it’s an emotional mess but this story was revolving in my mind from couple of days and SwaSan knocked in mind as the lead. Hopefully you liked it! Don’t forget to share your opinions before leaving this page. Silent readers please do comment, your comment will tell me if I should complete or not.
Keep smiling:-)
Love you all<3
Take care!

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    23 Comments

    1. nabamita on September 17, 2017 7:18 am

      Nyc

      • Maha_Aijaz on September 17, 2017 7:44 pm

        Thank you Nabamita!

    2. Sus on September 17, 2017 9:38 am

      nyc starting dear and best Sanskar is supporting her wife otherwise maany left after this

      • Maha_Aijaz on September 17, 2017 7:45 pm

        Thank you so much Sus! Keep reading.

    3. anu on September 17, 2017 10:09 am

      nice

      • Maha_Aijaz on September 17, 2017 7:45 pm

        Thank you Any!

      • Maha_Aijaz on September 17, 2017 7:47 pm

        Anu* sorry, typing error!

    4. Divz on September 17, 2017 10:22 am

      interesting…… post soon…..

      • Maha_Aijaz on September 17, 2017 7:46 pm

        Thank you Divz! Yeah sure.

    5. Kumu on September 17, 2017 12:37 pm

      Nice

      • Maha_Aijaz on September 17, 2017 7:48 pm

        Thank you Kumu!

    6. Mars on September 17, 2017 1:15 pm

      It’s really awesome dear I liked the way sanskar support his wife which I Hope will be swara only.
      And past was sweet one their first meeting was nice.
      Looking forward for it and u had described everything very nicely.
      Continue soon
      Take care???

      • Maha_Aijaz on September 17, 2017 7:49 pm

        Thank you so much Mars for your sweet words!

    7. tani on September 17, 2017 1:21 pm

      outstanding

      • Maha_Aijaz on September 17, 2017 7:50 pm

        Thank you Tani!

    8. AbrahamEzra on September 17, 2017 4:08 pm

      Super concept. And loved sanskars support and care for her

      • Maha_Aijaz on September 17, 2017 7:51 pm

        Thank you so much AbrahamEzra! Keep reading.

    9. Liza on September 17, 2017 6:12 pm

      Nice

      • Maha_Aijaz on September 17, 2017 9:01 pm

        Thank you Liza!

    10. Ansa on September 18, 2017 12:20 am

      Whoa !!! What’s going on sisi in your little head :p Flying in the air finally you are writing something on my swasan <3 Thanks yeah I know you will not admit but writing on swasan is just for me yuppieee..
      I think you all have promised to make me cry right na ? *puffy teary eyes* my pan cake my elder sista urf Maha api m all geared up for ur further parts :p forgot to mention that it was kind of surprise for me :p I repeat "Kind of" 😉 yaad agaya hoga :p
      Keep writing :p
      God bless you sista :p
      Love you :p Ouch I got slap from you 😉 yeh bhe samjh lia hoga intelligent :p tata bachay :p

      • Maha_Aijaz on September 18, 2017 1:03 pm

        Thanks yaara! Love you too<3

    11. mica on September 20, 2017 1:03 am

      uugghhh.. so emotional already :'(

      • Maha_Aijaz on September 20, 2017 12:49 pm

        Emm! Yeah it’s kind of. But thanks for commenting! Hopefully you’ll read the further ones too.

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