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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan ff- No feelings Shot 1
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Swasan ff- No feelings Shot 1

NDSGBy NDSGMarch 29, 2018Updated:March 31, 20189 Comments6 Mins Read
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Shot 1

Prisoner no 1203. He is here since 10 years and now he finally got his freedom. He woke early in morning, he waited for 10 years. After taking breakfast he meets his friends.

“We will miss you.” He smiles.

“I never thought I will got friend like you, Nikhil.” He expresses his gratitude.

“Bus bus ab rulayega kya.” Bell rings it’s 12pm and his time to departure. “Soon I’ll come out and meet Sahil he will help you.”

They share a hug, last one in this prison. “Take care Nikhil.”

“You too.” He leaves. Jailer gives him his belongings and the money that he earned in 10 year.

“Gentle man, now life is waiting for you. I hope I’ll not see you again here.” Though he was little stick but somewhere jailer had seen a child in him. He was 16 when he got jail and at the age of 18 year he came this jail.

“Sir, life is too short and anything can happen.” He leaves.

After coming outside he stretches his arms and feels the air; this sky of freedom that he got after 10 year.

“Auto… Rohini sector 23.” He leaves to meet his friend Sahil. Sahil got bail three days before. He is a theif and his best friend.

“I miss you bro.” They hug each other.

“Sahil you got any home.” He asks

“You just came enjoy today then do your work.” Sahil is carefree but he is not.

“I don’t want waste time. It’s already been 10 year I waited.” He shows his pain. “I lost everyone.”

“Hey easy bro… Okay there is a home. Gadodia house, they need a tenant.” He gives him address.

“Okay.” He turns to leave.

“Swara; owner’s daughter. She is too much clever.” Sahil warns him.

“That I will handle her.” He smirks and leaves.

Gadodia house

Swara is playing cricket with kids. A girl throws the ball and it’s hits the stump.

Kids: “Out…”

Swara: “No no…”

Girl: “Swara di you are cheating.”

“Ishu you are kid and you don’t know first ball is try ball.” She fools them.

He saw door of Gadodia house is locked then he sees her. He moves towards her. Mean time ishani throws and Swara hits and runs and before she can reaches to next side she dashes with him and she falls on him. And she gets out.

Kids: “Yeh Didi out…”

Swara burns in anger. She looks towards him… They get up.

“Excuse me mam…”

Swara: “Are you blind Mr. Xyz. Because of you I lost the bet huh.”

“Sorry…” He apologize.

Swara: “What sorry? Huh blind people.”

Kids: “Di our money.”

With broken heart Swara gives them money and they runs.

“Mam can you tell me where Mr. Shekhar Gadodia went.” He asks gently.

Swara: “I don’t know.”

She turns her face.

“Mam it’s urgent please.” He requests

Swara (in mind): “Swara because of him you lost money now it’s pay back time.”

Swara: “Okay okay… I can help you but in return you have to pay 1000 rupess because of you I lost my money.”

“But you gave them 500.”

Swara: “Oh hello, if I won then I would get 1000 rupess give me money else forget about Mr. Gadodia.”

“Okay.” He gives her money.

Swara opens the door of her home. And asks him to sit in veranda.

“You have keys?” He inquires.

Swara: “Yup because I’m owner of this house.”

“Swara Gadodia.” He says.

Swara: “Yup… (She suspects him.) But how do you know?”

“Actually, I need a room in rent. I heard you have one room empty.”

Swara: “But I need advance.”

“I’m ready to pay.”

Swara: “10 thousand of a month and I need deposit of 5 month.”

He gives her money. “50 thousands. Mam now show me room.”

Swara: “Okay show me your ID.”

Hus reaction just changes. He don’t know from where he will bring this.

Swara: “ID???”

“Mam I forget to bring tomorrow I’ll give.” He tries to cover the situation.

But before Swara can say anything. Shekhar comes and takes money.

Shekhar: “Swara he is right go show him room.”

Swara: “But baba, how can we give room to any stranger.”

Shekhar (wishpers): “Swara you know we need money Ram again came.”

Swara: “Okay. Come with me.”

Shekhar: “Wait we are allowing you to stay here with your ID till you submit it you have give extra 5 thousands rupees.”

He gives him money and then follows Swara. They moves on 3rd floor. It’s only a room in terrace with attach Washroom and kitchen.

Swara: “This is your room. Look Baba gave you permission but it doesn’t mean I’ll leave you. I want you ID prove tomorrow.”

“Sure Swara…”

Swara: “Swara mam… Don’t be so friendly… By the way what’s your name.”

“What name???”

Swara: “Name? Don’t tell me you don’t have any name.”

“Woh… It’s Sanskaar…” He clears his throat.

Swara: “Only Sanskaar?”

“It’s Sanskaar Ali…”

Swara: “Ali??? Sanskaar and Ali?”

“So what what’s problem in my name. My dad was Muslim and mom was Hindu so I’m Sanskaar Ali.”

Swara: “Was?”

Sanskaar: “Yes, I lost my family…”

Swara: “Okay… Give me your ID then I will give it to police for verification.”

Sanskaar: “What’s the need of this?”

Swara: “Why are you afraid Mr. Ali? Are you a terrorist?”

He pulls her with her arms. They are inch apart.

Sanskaar: “Miss. Swara Gadodia very Ali is not a terrorist.”

He jerks her.

Swara: “Sorry Sanskaar…”

“Swara Swara…” Shomi calls her. She leaves. Sanskaar punches on wall.

Sanskaar: “She is too much clever.”

“Ya I know you.”

Sanskaar looks towards the source of sound and socks to see Swara.

Sanskaar: “Sorry Swara mam but what happens to your hair.”

They girl laughs. He extends her hand.

“Hi I’m Kalki Gadodia. I know I look like my sister and di is like this only.”

Sanskaar: “Oh, sorry I should not said that.”

Kalki: “It’s okay. I study in class 12th. Will you be my first male friend?”

Sanskaar: “First male friend?”

Kalki: “Ya my di never allows me to talk boys even I studies in girls School.”

Sanskaar: “Oh…”

Kalki: “Come I’ll show you our zoo…”

He smiles and she takes him outside. There is vacant place in middle of house and from terrace you can see Veranda…

Characters

Sanskaar: He just came from jail and new tenant in Swara’s home. He don’t like talking too much.

Swara: Eldest daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Gadodia. Clever and very talkative. But loves her family too much and keeps her sister away from boys.

Kalki: Swara’s sister looks like her but her hairs are shot and she is sweet and loves making friends and hates studies… Like us????

Mr. and Mrs. Gadodia: Swara’s and Kalki’s parents. They took loan from Ram.

Laksh Maheshwari: Swara’s neighbour and her best friend too. Loves Kavita

Ram and Sujata’s Maheshwari: Lucky’s Uncle and Aunt.

So this is first shot. So I hope you all will like it. Kindly tell me about your views. ??????

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    9 Comments

    1. Rakiba on March 29, 2018 9:25 pm

      Interesting..waiting fr nxt…bt plz ubdate ROWDY SANSKAR
      ….missing it soooo muchhh

    2. Sandymsdian on March 29, 2018 10:01 pm

      New one.very nice dear????

    3. Sanu on March 29, 2018 11:51 pm

      I guess there many twists and suspence do continue pls post ur other ffs

    4. Tani on March 30, 2018 12:27 am

      Nice

    5. Secret on March 30, 2018 1:22 am

      It’s awesome. Post next part soon…

    6. Mars on March 30, 2018 3:32 am

      Ohhhooooo depuuuu colourful epi….???
      Loved the concept and starting….swara is super clever but sanskar know how to handle her???????
      Aur teri stories mai kavita aur laksh ki jodi zarur hoti hai and i like it?????
      Awesome epi….excited for the coming updates???
      Continue soon??????

    7. neha_01 on March 30, 2018 5:12 am

      different.looking forward to it

    8. anu on March 30, 2018 8:10 am

      nice continue

    9. Kumu on March 30, 2018 11:42 pm

      Awesome

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