There will not be any changes in the characters. It will be as per the real story. The starting point of this FF is from where Sanskar informs Kavita that Swara is his wife.
Kavita is shocked to know from Sanskar that he is married and already moved on in his life. Her facial expressions shows sanskar that she did not expect this from him. By seeing her Sanskar felt little bad but he could not resist himself from telling the truth to her. Both Swara and Sanskar thinks about Kavita’s reaction after knowing the truth but kavita thinks how could sanskar moved on in his life without her, she is finding words to express her emotions.
Sujata : (interrupting everyone’s thoughts) But they signed for Divorce.
Till that time no one think abt the divorce, but Sujata suddenly hits their minds with her statement which makes everyone felt very bad especially for Swara.
Kavita: Oh thank god, i thought i have lost my Sanskar, but not. To Swara, Thank you Swara, you not only saved me, but you gave my life back and saying this she hugs him again ( frown emoticon sorry guys, even i am angry for this)
Swara: Try to hide her tears, she called Sumi, maa shall we go?
Sumi: Yes shona, we will go now. shekar, shall we?
Shekar: Ha Yes. Will leave now. He greets everyone and 3 of them start to leave.
When swara moves, she saw the mangalsutra on the floor and take it in her hand. With full of love she hold that near her heart and tears start falling from her eyes. She couldn’t face Sanskar, so she started running from there. Sumi and Shekhar also running behind her.
All the while, Sanskar feels very guilty and even he was not able to face anyone, he stormed to his room and locked the door. Then he slowly he sat on the floor and thinking about his lovely moments with Swara. Tears are flowing down from his eyes, which shows how much he loves Swara.
Friends, since this is my very very first fiction. please read it and provide your comments so that i can improvise my writing. pls do suggest if you feel any. 🙂
19 Comments
Loved it
its excellent…but it is short..
It’s really good…..
Nice 1.. bt its too short make it long…waiting fr next
Its nice satz… cool epi. … continue without hesitation according to me dnt correlate wth the epi dats happening nw in swaragini… imagine urself like nw and bring us a cloud nine epi… bt today part ws nice..
hey satz its amazing ????
really heart broking. .
unite swasan soon
Wow dear its nice n vry emotional keep writing n make it bit lengthy.all the best
A very good start.. Please continue ur ff.. Post ur nxt ff asap..
I liked ur ff becoz its near to reality.. Continue.. I would lik to read ur upcomng ff too
nice start dear…pls continue
it is awesome. .
nice one
bt u should show ragini also concerned abt swasan and kavita iin negative role
Superb plzz cont
Really superb dear plz make it long
loved Yarr I love tat dear updates next
Plzzzzzz don’t make it similar like show only
Thank you all 🙂 I have posted my next 2 episodes. Soon it will be published and give me ur valuable comments. Love u all
nice