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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan FF: Entangled Love chapter 43
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Swasan FF: Entangled Love chapter 43

bhumijaBy bhumijaSeptember 3, 201698 Comments9 Mins Read
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Thank you so much guys, I can’t tell you how overwhelmed I am with your response, please keep showering your love….. thank you so much friends, you all made me feel special….

Previous chapter link: Chapter 42
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Chapter 43

Evening, Swara’s room

Entire day Swara was upset due to some reason, she didn’t talk much with anybody not even her mother….. most of the time she was in her room. Surprisingly Sharmishtha also not much bothered about her behavior, the mother who could sense her state with her one look didn’t notice anything today….. she was lost in her thoughts when she heard a knock on the door, with an unhappy face she turned around….
“Shona di” Siya called her….
Swara: (sadly) Yes dear…..
Siya: (came up to her) I want to play, will you come with me in garden….
Swara: (hesitant) Siya, it’s soon going to be dark…. We will play tomorrow ok…
Siya: (pleading eyes) nobody is playing with me… Ananad Bhaiya is also busy in some work…..please just for some time….
Swara didn’t want to disappoint the little kid “Ok, come…. But just half an hour” she said holding her hand
Siya: (jumping) thank you di…..
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Evening, lawn….

It was a winter evening, the air was little cold but not harsh, and sky was dark…. Swara puzzled as she reached there, holding Siya’s hand….. there was complete darkness, no lights at all….
Swara: (confused) what happened to lights? It’s so dark here……
As she moved ahead with small and steady steps…. She felt someone’s touch on her face, precisely on her eyes as some unknown hands were on her eyes…. She baffled initially on the touch but then as she touched the hands, it feels familiar…..
“Who is this? please tell me” she said anxiously
“Happy birthday di” the voice came…..
Recognizing the voice, she delighted and turned around quickly…. The lights were on now…. As she looked the person the tears of happiness brimmed in her eyes…. She quickly took him in a tight hug
“Ashu!! You are here or I am dreaming?” she said in astonishment
Ashu: (smiling) well it’s your birthday today, how could I miss it……
Swara: you remember, I thought like Ma you also forgot…..
Ashu: Ma can never forget your birthday….
Swara: (puzzled) then why she didn’t wish me?
Looking at Swara’s puzzled face, he smiled while making her turn to other side…… she was stunned to look at the sight in front of her….. all were there, entire Maheshwari family, her mother and Surprisingly Bushra and Sanjeet….. Smiling at her…..
Laksh: (shouted) Swara, are going to stay like that forever?
She came back to her senses with his shrilling voice…. Ashu and Siya brought her in the middle where all were waiting for her with a small cake placed in the middle of a table…..
Annapurna: (kissed her forehead) Happy birthday dear….
Sanjeet: (smiles) So, how do you like the Surprise?
Swara: I am totally speechless, what could I say….
Sanjeet: happy birthday princess…..
All wished her one by one, Ragini, Bushra, Laksh, Sujata, Ram….
Sharmishtha: (kissing her cheek) Happy birthday Shona….
Swara: Ma, you knew all this, the surprise thing? I thought you forgot…
Sharmishtha: how could I forget this dear, you don’t know how difficult it is for me to hold myself
Siya: (irritated) when will my turn come?
All laughed at her frowning face… “oh, my ladoo… sorry for being rude to you, come here… now Your Shona di is all yours” Annapurna said with a smile
Siya: (kissing Swara’s cheek) Happy Birthday di…
Swara: thank you dear….
Laksh: (smirk) what do you think? only you are good at planning…. We Maheshwaries excel in everything.
Swara: thank you so much Laksh, you did all this for me!!
Laksh: No dear, it’s not me, it was bhai’s planning…. We just accompanied him
Swara was in shock to know about the planner, she looked at Laksh in disbelief….
“Yes Shona di dad did all this, I told you about the secret in the morning…. This was the secret” Siya revealed
Swara was searching for him but surprisingly he wasn’t there, disappointed with his absence on her special evening she looked around….
Laksh: (reading Swara’s face) I don’t know why he is not here, it was his planning and he is missing…
“I am not missing, I am here” Sanskar replied as he stepped towards the lawn….
Ragini: where were you Sanskar?
Sanskar: I was on an important call…
Siya: dad, please stop talking…. Shona di cut the cake, it looks so yummy….
With a broad smile on her face she blew the candles followed by cake cutting….. She gave first bite to Siya and Ashu, the impatient ones….
Later everyone got busy in talking, she took blessing of all the elders and received gifts from them…. Siya gifted her a beautiful Sketch of hers, she made it by herself….. for Swara it was one of the best gift she ever received….. the birthday she was cursing since morning as worst ever turned out the best…… full of pleasant surprises, Her family was there with her….. the every important person of her life was present there….. Her eyes searched for the person who made all this possible…. He was standing there with Laksh little far from them…. she looked at him with loving eyes….
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Laksh: I hope you are prepared, please don’t miss it today….
Sanskar: (annoyed) Lucky I am already nervous…. Please don’t irritate me
Laksh: I don’t understand why you are so scared, where is that confident businessman I know?
Sanskar: it’s not Business my brother, it’s about my life….
Laksh: just go and say it, well today she is already impressed because of your surprise…. I am sure she will easily accept, after all you did so much for her…
Sanskar: it’s nothing in comparison with what she did for Siya, in return I want to fix every single misery of her life….
Swara heard his sympathetic words as she came there to thank him for today…. She didn’t feel good about his sympathy for her….. But ignoring that feeling, she moved closer….
Laksh: (noticing Swara) oh, the birthday girl is here…..
Sanskar turned to look at her…..
Laksh: (teasingly) Swara, you have crossed your sweet sixteen or not?
She gave him a displeased smile on his teasing words….
Laksh: (looking at Sanskar) Ok guys, I have to make an important call…. You carry on
With his usual charming smile he left from there, leaving them alone…. There was an awkward silence between them like always…. She looked at him with gratified eyes, overwhelmed with his gesture…. He was little nervous….
Swara: (to herself) he didn’t wish me!!!
Sanskar: Happy birthday Swara…..
Swara: (smile) thank you…..
“Shona di come, we all are going inside” Ashwin shouted from distance…. She turned to go back but he stopped him….
“Swara wait, I want to talk to you….. Would you like to have a walk?” he said with his eyes fixed on her…. she nodded, and soon they were alone in the lawn….
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For past fifteen minutes they were just walking in the lawn aimlessly, neither of them spoke a word but still they were enjoying it….

Swara: (to herself) he said, he wants to talk then why is not saying anything now?
Sanskar: (to himself) I don’t understand how some people have the courage to express their love so freely to their girl when I took almost 15 minutes to ask her for a walk with me
Swara: (to herself) what he wants to talk? Anything serious!!
Sanskar: (to himself) but I have to do it today, it’s now or never…..
Swara: thank you so much for today, what you did really means a lot for me….
Sanskar: (staring her) you like it?
Swara: I love it…. I never expected you to be so good at planning surprises….
Sanskar: you always underrate me, right!!
Swara: that’s not true, it’s just that you never indulge in such things, you are….
She was searching for an apt word to describe him properly but he interrupted in the middle…..
“Dull and boring” he completed looking at her…..
Swara: (disappointed) I wasn’t going to say that….. now who is underrating?
He didn’t say anything, just stared her with a smile……
Swara: (serious tone) you know my Baba always used to come up with such surprises…… he was master of planning, after dad I thought I would never be able to celebrate my birthday, the day means nothing without his presence in it….. but you proved me wrong, I could have never asked for a better day…… Though I am missing Baba’s presence but I do have reasons to smile……
Sanskar: I know, no one can fill a father’s place in our life…. But I believe our loved once never leave, they are always around us to care, to guide…..
She smiled with her little moist eyes…..
Sanskar: (to himself) Swara, I know you have suffered a lot…..just give me a chance I promise I will fill your life with happiness….
He took out a small box from his pocket and forwarded it to her “This is for you”. She was little surprised as she never expected a gift from him…. Hesitantly she raised her hand with bemused expression on her face…. It was a small box, neatly wrapped in a gift paper….
“Open it” he asked her softly, being curious she quickly unwrapped it
“What!! Why he gifted me this? Who gives such gift on birthday? Oh god, he knows nothing about all this….. he gave me a ring!!” she was busy in her own thoughts when he called …..
“Swara” he said in hushed tone with his intense gaze fixed on her….
“Swara I want you in my life, forever…… will you marry me?” he scripted so much for this moment since morning, imagined this for thousand times but in real this is all he managed to speak….
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Precap: what do you think…. What will happen?

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    98 Comments

    1. Anniya on September 3, 2016 4:15 pm

      Awsm…
      Di, u leave us at peak point…
      Just little afraid she don’t mistook it as sympathy…

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:10 pm

        thanks dear….

    2. Anjali on September 3, 2016 4:22 pm

      Superb

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:15 pm

        thanks anjali….

    3. Dharshini on September 3, 2016 4:25 pm

      Awesome…Waiting for the next part…????

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:17 pm

        thanks dear…..

    4. Harleen on September 3, 2016 4:27 pm

      Swara say yes, say yes plz na. i have been a silent reader all along but i couldn’t wait to say something in the comments. I absolutely love this fan fiction, and hopefully u excel to great heights

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:18 pm

        thank you so much Harleen……

    5. sarswati on September 3, 2016 4:28 pm

      cliffhanger…..i m not going survive today……i think i m the most desperate reader here….but again, it is coz u r a very good writer…

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:20 pm

        ha ha…… thanks dear and have patience…..

    6. Pia on September 3, 2016 4:30 pm

      Ohh wow bt plzz let her accept it plzz make swasan together….

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:22 pm

        thanks Pia….. and just wait…..

    7. Shreeyu on September 3, 2016 4:35 pm

      It was a wonderful episode dear….. Eagerly waiting for next update …… Fingers crossed…..

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:23 pm

        thanks dear……

    8. Deeksha gupta on September 3, 2016 4:38 pm

      Awesome yr … Sanskar’s proposal was definitely a unique one …loved it but it was really short ..waiting for next ..pls post next part ASAP ….

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:24 pm

        thanks Deeksha…..

    9. pavi on September 3, 2016 4:48 pm

      awesome

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:24 pm

        thanks Pavi…..

    10. mica on September 3, 2016 4:50 pm

      waaaaaa…. i got heart attack Bhumijaaaaaa!!!!!
      YAY! YAY! YAY!….you did it.. you did it Sanskar!! good luck Dud!
      love it soo very much… ty

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:24 pm

        thanks Mica…. i am happy u like it….

    11. Kakali on September 3, 2016 4:52 pm

      Ohhhhh dear… what a lovely episode it was!!!!… u know what dear u r a BLESSED writter…?… after reading ur chappy it always brigns a bright smile on my face..☺…ur each n every word are really pleasurable for me…?.. no more words to say dear… stay blessed…?

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:25 pm

        thanks dear……. you praise means a lot, thank u once again….

    12. sona on September 3, 2016 4:57 pm

      Really surprise epi…….lovely…. Just awesome…..no word to describe my happiness……. I’m waiting for 2 days for this……..really itsfabulous…..

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:26 pm

        thanks Sona…..

    13. Goldiesnehi on September 3, 2016 4:59 pm

      Thank god. He confessed. Hey, where were you, waiting since 3days

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:27 pm

        thanks dear…..

    14. Crystal on September 3, 2016 5:14 pm

      Amazing update?? please let her accept… He is not used to tell so much… So please let her accept ?

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:26 pm

        thanks dear….. u have to wait for this dear…..

    15. Haripriyacivil on September 3, 2016 5:19 pm

      Super episode

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:27 pm

        thanks buddy….

    16. Juan on September 3, 2016 5:20 pm

      Awesome dear……

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:27 pm

        thanks Juan

    17. Tweetypankaj on September 3, 2016 5:23 pm

      Well I’m a new reader if ur ff. I read all parts in a go . It’s awesome. What will swara do now. Plzz update fast Na. I know u will update. Fast but can’t wait. Bhumija u are really fabulous. ??

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:28 pm

        thanks dear…..

    18. Thamiazh Magan on September 3, 2016 5:24 pm

      Want a lovely scene between them

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:28 pm

        thanks you like it…..

    19. Purvi on September 3, 2016 5:39 pm

      Pls make swara accept…….

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:28 pm

        u have to wait for next dear,,,,

    20. priyanka on September 3, 2016 5:39 pm

      Awsme…may b nw she don’t accept…pls post the next soon

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:29 pm

        thanks Priyanka…..

    21. nehasuhana on September 3, 2016 5:41 pm

      Yes our sanky done that oh so Romeo confessed finally Jan awesome

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 6:29 pm

        thanks Neha…..

    22. Soujanya on September 3, 2016 6:10 pm

      Awesome

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:41 pm

        thanks dear…..

    23. s on September 3, 2016 6:12 pm

      awsm..loved it..lz udate soon..

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:42 pm

        thanks dear…..

    24. rahima on September 3, 2016 6:18 pm

      awesome epi love it

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:43 pm

        thanks dear…….

    25. Madhu on September 3, 2016 6:19 pm

      I think she will MU sanky……she will think this,all sympathy……..
      Oh god…….dont know what to think about precap……plz dr do what u feel best but dont separate them dr…ok…..

      Part was awesome…..i thought she is in some problem….but u rock it…..amazing part dr……waiting fr next one…..

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:43 pm

        thanks Madhu……..

    26. Jency robert on September 3, 2016 6:21 pm

      Again suspense…..wht s this yaar?bt loved it…..?????update d next part soon plz dr

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:44 pm

        thanks dear…….

    27. Paru on September 3, 2016 6:26 pm

      Wow at last he proposed oh my god

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:44 pm

        thanks Paru…..

    28. chanu on September 3, 2016 6:28 pm

      nice epi as always sry 4 late cmnt
      plz update nxt part asap. cdn wait.
      keep writing
      be happy always dr

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:44 pm

        thanks Chanu….

    29. AnuAnn on September 3, 2016 6:55 pm

      Can’t wait for next part

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:45 pm

        thanks dear…..

    30. praju on September 3, 2016 7:09 pm

      u write so well that I keep checking this site now and then just to see ur ff……. really awsm

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:45 pm

        thanks dear, thank u for ur love….

    31. Pramudi on September 3, 2016 7:16 pm

      Superb dear.. ??
      He proposed her… Finally… ?
      I’m also scared about her answer.. Hope she won’t misunderstand it as sympathy..
      When will we get the nxt update bhumija? Can’t wait for a long.. ?

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:46 pm

        thanks dear……. i will try to make it soon but can’t promise

    32. Arshaanya on September 3, 2016 7:25 pm

      Aaaww i loved it… finally he said it..
      Yeyyyy
      Bt i guess she wil mistook it as sympathy..
      Continue sokn

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:46 pm

        thanks dear…..

    33. Jammie on September 3, 2016 7:28 pm

      OMG.. did he really proposed her or was it imagination.. I just hope it is not some imagination.. U have left us at cliffhanger.. I can’t wait..it was awesome update..eagerly waiting for next update.

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:48 pm

        have patience dear soon u will get to know….

    34. lucky sravzzz on September 3, 2016 7:31 pm

      Wow!!!!! I have been a silent reader so far but today’s ch was just amazing…….seriously your stories make our day……thank you so much for this lovely story….looking forward for new twists…..all the best…

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:49 pm

        thanks Dear……. u appreciation means a lot

    35. SHAN on September 3, 2016 7:55 pm

      Awesome very nice pls post soon

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:50 pm

        thanks Shan……

    36. vyshu10 on September 3, 2016 8:18 pm

      omg…he did propose her finally! Waiting for him to say I L U too. How will swara react? Will she think that he is showing sympathy on her? Or will she accept …..plz plz upload d next part soon

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 11:00 pm

        thanks dear….

    37. Ishita on September 3, 2016 8:56 pm

      I think she will either faint or their conversation will get haltedbor even worse she will misunderstand him!

      Even I think saying yes won’t be good for now as every love story has some ups and downs some mus and some separations without which it never gets complete…eh!

      I so hell want to see his reaction and action after her NO and her guilt after then…..
      …

      Di
      One thing more I wud love to see a scene where ashu and sia both compete for swaras love ….one for sisterly love and another for motherly!

      Also I want some more of ashu as I love this kid …..still remember how he was embarrassed and shied when lawyer uncle teased him about crying like girl and his secret crush!

      Love

      Ishita

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:58 pm

        thanks dear for your suggestions, although including all wouldn’t be possible but i will try to add some…..

    38. ishita on September 3, 2016 8:58 pm

      hey Di I think either she will faint ,something will interrupt their conversation or even worst she wud mu him thinking it to be sympathy!

      I also think saying yes will make story plain as how can a story be complete without my separations though short ….ehhhh?

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 11:00 pm

        keep speculating…..

    39. Vidhi on September 3, 2016 10:00 pm

      O god so thus was the surprise…. Wow it was amazing…. Loved it?????? n Ha update soon….

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:38 pm

        thanks Vidhi…..

    40. Vidhi on September 3, 2016 10:04 pm

      O god she should say yes…. Wow so cute couple.. ???????just in love with this ff…. Superb……

      • bhumija on September 3, 2016 10:59 pm

        they will make u fall in love more…..

    41. Nive on September 3, 2016 10:45 pm

      Awesome bhumija.u r really great writer.

      • bhumija on September 4, 2016 12:07 am

        tysm dear…..

    42. Mahjabeen on September 3, 2016 10:52 pm

      Yeahh finally sanskar said..oh god how sweet it was…thanks a lot bhujima..it ws rllyyy awesm..m rlly curious to knw da reply frm swara….pls swara agree for da marraoge..pls say yes….update nxt part soon dear..waitng eagrly

      • bhumija on September 4, 2016 12:09 am

        thanks dear…..

    43. Sanji on September 3, 2016 11:34 pm

      awww so beautiful

      • bhumija on September 4, 2016 12:07 am

        thanks dear…..

    44. chandu on September 3, 2016 11:34 pm

      awesome…!! Yahoo…!! Sanky proposed…!! Woww…!!

      • bhumija on September 4, 2016 12:05 am

        thanks dear…..

    45. rosh on September 4, 2016 12:08 am

      🙂 you’ve portrayed such a lovely gesture, such an elation….
      plot fits the right timing, full of emotional hesitations, I’m curious as how these entangled feelings will find their way around, I really enjoy this story, my gratitude for writing a simple yet intriguing story…………
      You keep writing and tc 🙂

      • bhumija on September 4, 2016 10:50 am

        thanks dear for your lovely words…..

    46. Shani on September 4, 2016 12:27 am

      It’s so lovely Bhumija..
      I thought Swara upset because she’s missing Ashu.. But it’s her birthday.. So it’s totally surprise for us also.. And love that sweet family moment..
      But as always, the best part was Swasan scene.. You described Sanskar anxiety, eagerness so beautifully..
      Hope there’ll be no confusion.. Hope Swara didn’t misunderstand his love as a sympathy.. ??

      • bhumija on September 4, 2016 10:52 am

        thanks Shani…..

    47. Rock Leon on September 4, 2016 2:03 pm

      Hello dear !
      Yiiiiiiipppppppeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!
      Finally sanskar proposed swara
      I loved this chapter !
      It’s truly amazing dear!.
      I really love the way u write !!!
      Loveee u loadssssss :-*

      • bhumija on September 5, 2016 12:50 pm

        thanks dear, tysm….

    48. Rock Leon on September 4, 2016 2:05 pm

      Hello dear !
      Yiiiiiiippppppeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!
      Finally sanskar proposed swara
      I loved this chapter !
      It’s truly amazing dear!.
      I really love the way u write !!!
      Loveee u loadssssss :-*

    49. rupa on September 4, 2016 4:19 pm

      Awsome
      Finally he propose swara ???but i think swara will mossunderstand him .
      Oh cant wait pls post soonnnnnn
      Lots of luv to u bumija

      • bhumija on September 5, 2016 12:51 pm

        thanks dear and love to u tooo….

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