SWASAN FF ANALYSIS
I was a silent reader of only Vini’s ff and Saba’s ff. Then after Saba went there to the other site and Vini finished season 1, I never came back here.
y’day i randomly came to check on something when i found so many analysis. i opened them one by one and was so amazed to see the fiction list. but the ones that were present in almost everything except for one or two were
anjali’s mr maheshwari and i
anu’s fixing broken souls/fix you
sree’s acceptance
so i was so surprised to see them that i sat and read them all from yest
all 35 chapters of anjali’s, all chapters of fix you and broken souls and 23 chapters of acceptance and i finally realised why you three are getting so much appreciation.
im not going to compare each of ur fics. i loved them all. that’s y i even named them alphabetically so that no one gets confused.
im just going to point out some of ur pluses and minuses. hope u dont mind
1) anjali
ur plus point is ur vocab. it defeats everyone else’s here.. anu,sree everyone (no offense ppl) it is really too good and a very nice charming story with no villains or anything. a realistic ff like everyone says. another plus point is the way you’ve converted an english boook to indian standards. this shows ur fondness for readinf and understanding of words.
no minus point really storywise. i feel is that u underestimate urself and try to edit the story. u think that u r dragging the story but ur not. this is a family story and every chapter counts. dont try to edit that. leave it. even if it doesnt have anjali charm one day, it still has an authors charm which is vry imp.
2) anu
i’m extremely impressed. completely. a very nice portrayal of emotions and u have done complete justice to all the characters, swara sanskar, laksh, ragini, shaurya everyone.. plus u tend to stop the chapter in such a way that we are left begging for more
ur minuses.. not a lot really just a little too informal i guess at times. i feel it is an ff whereas in anjali’s i feel it is a book. im really sorry.. no hard feelings
3) sree
i have read ur limitless love and i must say ur writing skills have become marvellous now. as have ur ideas. acceptance is a very apt title for this story and u have done a great job with all the cliff hangers and twists.. amazing..
ur minuses ; again nothing really, just grammatical errors in the technical side.. but storywise flawless. u have worked on ur story and characters a lot..
ive also seen ur interaction in each others ffs and i must say im very happy about that. its so nice to see people appreciating others works and thinking its better than theirs instead of the other way round.
keep it up u three. fly high.
anu ur pro pic is really cute and nice.
i have to read the other ffs mentioned as well now. have quite a lot to do now.