swasan-an everlasting love episode 4

Hai i think this ff is not intresting please do comments if it is good or bad i will try to make it better

Here we go
@shopping mall
Ragini:(innocentiy):shona………….water………….
swara:opps! aunty ji lijeye you feel better.are u ok now
Ap:ha beta iam fine
Sanlak:thank u so muchu
Swara:no need to thank its my duty.chello ragini its getting late
Ragini:shonaa……..lekin…….
swara:ladoo
swaragini leaves laksh get disapointed sanskar observes him
Sanky:my dear lucky what are thinking now
Lucky:nothing bhai
Sanky:mom u have to take rest hum ghar chelle
morning in mm
parineta doing some work she supposed to lift some heavy stuff
Lucky:bhabi ………how many times mom said u don’t do any thing u order me i will do that
(sanky arrived there he bents to parineta belly)

Sanky:come on cham come fast ur sanskar chachu is waiting for u
Lucky: not only u.iam also waiting for him
Ap:Agar tum dhono ki baat hogaya tho hato yaha se hum bi appne grand son se baat karna
Lucky:bhai r u seeing this
Sanky:ha lucky she changed her party
Parineta:don’t worry devar ji i will be with u because you both are not my devar’s you are my eler sons u both always treated me as your mother not as bhabi
sanlak hugged her
Adharsh:Did u remember meor not.adharsh also joined with them. Ap felt very happy
Sanky:ok thaen laksh today ur first day of collage after a long time in kolkata.shall i drop u
Lucky:ok bhai
they took ap’s blessings again hugged adharsh and parineta.sanlak(shouted)bye cham they ran from there every one smiles
they reached to collage
Lucky:bye sanky
Sanky:take care
Lucky:ok my dear sanskar
laksh entered to his class and sits in place he introduced himself to his bench mates.All the boys are to class entrence
Lucky:manish(bench mate)why every one looking there
Manish:becoz angel is coming almost everone proposed her
Lucky:and u?
manish:n she is my best buddy
Lucky:whats her name ?

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