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Home»Fan Fiction»SWASAN… EK SIMPLE SI LOVE STORY chapter 16
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SWASAN… EK SIMPLE SI LOVE STORY chapter 16

independentBy independentMarch 18, 201737 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hai guys i’m sheeja, hope you all are doing fine and a big thanks for all your comments. I will provide a link for all the episodes for your convenience

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Shekar: ok….ok now everything settled na so shona shall we leave. Your mom and bedi ma are waiting to take you for shopping and ragini beta you too come with us.

Sanlak: nooooooo

Others were startled for a second.

DP: what happened?????

Sanskar: vho dad….

Swaragini were blushing and shekar and DP were trying hard to suppress their laughs.

Swara: (audible to ragini only) idiots…. Don’t know to keep their mouth shut

Sanskar: dad, baba vho can we four go for an outing please

DP and Shekar laughed at their antics and swaragini were blushing hard.

Shekar: ok you can go but be at the mall at sharp 4, other wise your ma and bedi ma will kill me

DP: and your mom muche

Laksh: nahi dad nothing will happen to you and chachu we be there before 4.

They went to a nearby park, and went in different directions to give privacy for each other

Sanskar and swara were sitting on a bench and he was rapping his one hand around her shoulder protectively and was playing with her fingers with the other and she was resting her head on his shoulder wrapping her one hand around his waist and keeping the other on his chest.

Sanskar: swara kab se mujse pyaar karthi ho

Swara: from three years

San: what, three years?????????

Meanwhile in raglak side

They were walking in the park and ragini was talking nonstop without even giving a chance for laksh to talk.

Ragini: you know laksh I’m so happy for bhai. I’m sure they are going to be the best couple ever. Bhai se syada Swara love…….

Before she could complete laksh pulled her into an intense kiss and ragini become numb for a second and after coming back to her senses she too reciprocated. They kissed for long and break the kiss when they were out of breath. They stood for some more time joining their foreheads to catch breath.

Ragini: what was that????

Laksh: you don’t have any idea how much I waited for this moment

Swasan side

Swara: haan, whenever ragini or lucky say about you don’t know why i always felt a connection with you, but as we never met i thought it to be my attraction bcz you are smart intelligent and according to lucky a perfect boy for any girl. But do you remember two years before you had an accident and mom, dad and ragu came there as you were serious.

San: yeah

Swara: that time i felt like i was going to die

Sanskar: chup. Kaise baatein bol rahi ho

Swara: sanskar i’m telling you the truth, i was not even able to breath properly. First i didn’t understand why i’m feeling like this but that day evening when i called lucky he told me about your accident and you were critical. It was then i realised that what ever feeling i have for you is none other than love.

Sanskar was seeing her with soo much love and tears in his eyes

Swara: you know when i realised my feelings i was on cloud nine and also sad of your condition. And you know what i kept fast for you for three days and when mom asked me i told her i’m in diet and you know what the best part was when ragu told me that you are fine i started to eat like i was seeing food for the first time in my life, and mom, she almost fainted.

Swara was laughing all the while and sanskar was admiring her.

San: (slightly hitting on her head) pagal

Swara: in your love

And he couldn’t stop himself from kissing her forehead. And she too clenched more into him.

Raglak side

Ragini: toh kaun rok regards tha tumhe

Laksh: vho, you and sanky told me na that your via wanted to make you her DIL and your dad never goes against her wish

Ragini: haan, toh

Laksh: toh I had always a fear of losing you, as I don’t want to marry you going against your dad.

Ragini: means if dad didn’t agreed for our marriage then you would have left me.

Laksh: not so easily, but still if he had bee stubborn in getting you married with raj I don’t want you have any gut feeling of cheating him. So I always controlled my feelings for you.

Ragini was overwhelmed by his care and within no time she hugged him tight and he too reciprocated.

Like they spent some more time.

Swasan side

They were talking about each others likes and dislikes and sanskar was amused to know that she knows almost everything about him.

San: Swara how do you know this much about me!!!!!!!!!!

Swara: obviously ragu aur laksh se

San: means you asked them about me

Swara: no, whenever they talk about friendship or childhood automatically it ends up in you and once they start talking about you they will talk for hours. Even though I admired their talks a lot but (pouting) somewhere it irritates me bcz when it comes to you they forgets me.

Sanskar was amazed to see her childishness and he had an argue to kiss her pout which he did instantly. Swara who was talking nonstop became numb for a second and then look towards him and seeing him coming close to her she closed her eyes tightly. Sanskar smiles seeing her and moves towards her ears

San: don’t make that face again or else I won’t be able to control myself.

Swara looked at him shocked and then ran from their pushing him a little and blushing hard.

Raglak side

Laksh: ragu it’s a park someone will see

Ragini: I don’t care

Laksh: ohhh so you don’t care someone is seeing us like this??

Ragini: no

Laksh: so you don’t care if I do something

Ragini said that she doesn’t care without thinking much but her breath got stuck when he slide his hands under her top.

Ragini: laksh kya Kar Rahe ho.

She tried to push him but his hold was strong enough to break it. Her heart skipped a beat when she saw him coming close to her. But their moment were disturbed by a phone and grabbing the opportunity ragini ran away and laksh stand there cruising the caller

Then they all left for the mall for shopping.

*********************

Thanks a lot for your prayers and well wishes. My husband is fine now. And from now I will try my best to be regular. Thank you all

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    37 Comments

    1. Simin on March 18, 2017 2:28 pm

      Superb diii
      All are very naughty
      Really cute

      • independent on March 18, 2017 3:06 pm

        thank u dear

    2. Sus on March 18, 2017 2:54 pm

      Awesome dear
      So lovly

      • independent on March 18, 2017 3:07 pm

        thank u dear

    3. Kaur Daljeet on March 18, 2017 4:13 pm

      Loved it

      • independent on March 18, 2017 4:34 pm

        thank u dear i’m happy that u loved it

    4. Stg on March 18, 2017 4:33 pm

      Awesome ??

      • independent on March 18, 2017 4:41 pm

        thank u dear

    5. praju on March 18, 2017 4:35 pm

      Awesome

      • independent on March 18, 2017 4:41 pm

        thank u praju

    6. mica on March 18, 2017 4:42 pm

      uughhh.. happy to hear your good news.. 🙂

      waaa,,, my Swasan is connected by soul..omg!!!!
      you know what Sheeja! your story remind me on SR serial, when Sanskar looked out of his window, summoned swara’s name on his mind and Swara who walked toward MM gate kinda heard his voice….
      gooooosssshhh.. i missed my Swasan soo much!!!!!

      • independent on March 18, 2017 5:05 pm

        thank u soo much micu dear

    7. independent on March 18, 2017 4:45 pm

      thank u soo much micu dear

    8. a on March 18, 2017 4:57 pm

      Nice

      • independent on March 18, 2017 5:06 pm

        thank u dear

    9. Kakali on March 18, 2017 5:32 pm

      See Sheeja Di, our prayers worked..!! Huh! we are soo special after all..!! ?
      i LIVED today’s part..!! LIVED it..!!,
      Too peaceful to read..!! M loving it dii.!! Do continue soon!! Thnk u.. ;-*

      • independent on March 18, 2017 5:39 pm

        Thank you so much dear not only for liking my ff but also for the prayers, as u said u all are so special

    10. Simi on March 18, 2017 6:33 pm

      Superb dear ??

      Happy to know he is okay now??

      • independent on March 20, 2017 8:47 pm

        Thank you dear for ur comment and prayers

    11. kat on March 18, 2017 7:16 pm

      nice dear

      • independent on March 20, 2017 8:48 pm

        Thank you dear

    12. anu on March 18, 2017 7:53 pm

      nice

      • independent on March 22, 2017 5:30 pm

        thank u anu

    13. Priya on March 18, 2017 8:03 pm

      hi sis nice one and happy that he is fine plz update soon

      • independent on March 22, 2017 5:30 pm

        thank u priya

    14. Seebu_s on March 18, 2017 9:12 pm

      Nice dear…

      • independent on March 22, 2017 6:52 pm

        thank u seebu

    15. aradhya on March 19, 2017 1:10 am

      di this is the first time i am commenting on ur ff it is really sooooooooo gd

      • independent on March 22, 2017 6:57 pm

        thank u sooooooooo much dear and plz keep comenting

    16. Soujanya on March 19, 2017 9:27 am

      Awesome..

      • independent on March 22, 2017 6:57 pm

        thank u soujanya

    17. Shifa96 on March 19, 2017 12:25 pm

      Awesome..

      • independent on March 22, 2017 6:57 pm

        thank u shifa

    18. ritu on March 19, 2017 2:38 pm

      nice

      • independent on March 22, 2017 6:58 pm

        thank u ritu

    19. Febi on March 19, 2017 10:43 pm

      Awesome and excellent dear

      • independent on March 22, 2017 6:58 pm

        thank u febi

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