Hi friends!!!
I tried to give the proposal in my way. But I don’t know it will really work or not. It’s my imagination. It’s a fiction so nothing is impossible, right? If you find any mistakes please tell me. I will correct it. I typed it in urgency. Don’t know how it comes out. No proof reading. Read and comment!!! Go ahead!!!
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Recap: swara’s Past revealed.
‘you are my answered prayer, my realized wish and my fulfilled dream’
‘sanskar, where are you taking me?’, asked swara who was in blindfold. ‘shona, it’s 17th time you are asking the same question. Can’t you be quite for some more minutes?’, said sanskar. ‘but sanskar, we are here, Goa to spend some time with our family. I planned to go for shopping with aarthi. And, sumi ma and ma also asked me to join with them for parlor. Now, What will they think of us?’, said swara, pouting. ‘I talked to them. they are okay with it. so shut your mouth and follow my instruction’, said sanskar. ‘, sanskar, wait. It’s not the car I travelled sometime before. It is so comfortable and I love this chill breeze. Where are we? Say it’, said swara with a wide smile. ‘you will come to know’, said sanskar.
‘count 3… 2… and 1….’, sanskar removed her blindfold. She felt the heavy breeze against her body and felt like flying, slowly opened her eyes and screamed, ‘ahhh!!!!! Paragliding!!!!’ and turned her right side to see smiling sanskar. ‘I love it. it’s just awesome. wow!!!!’, she screamed again and looked at the view before her. She heard some mumbling sound from sanskar. ‘say it aloud sanskar. I couldn’t hear you due to the air force’, she said while controlling the wings. They both are expert in paragliding. Initially, sanskar afraid of it but during the time period when he accompanied swara to jungle and many other places, he learned. ‘will you marry me, shona?’, he screamed, looking at the view below him as if asking in front of the world. Swara’s turned in surprise and looked at his smiling face with her twinkling eyes. ‘shona, I want to be your shadow. I want to be your mirror. I want to be your punching as well as hugging pillow. I want to be the chill breeze which takes away all your worries and lift up your mood.
I want to be the one who can see your naughty side too. I want to protect you. I want to grow old with you. I want to kiss you even after we lost all our teeth. I want to hold you tightly while you saying stories to our grandchildren. I want to design a wonderful, adventurous future with you. I won’t leave you ever. I won’t say you are my world, my life. But you are the most important thing. My soul. Without you, I am just a body with blood and flesh. Will you grant me all my wishes? I am asking with the witness of this nature, will you accept this life imprisonment, being my wife? Will you marry me, shona?’, he shouted, looking into her sparkling eyes. They had a small eye lock which was broken by the sudden jerk. ‘you idiot. Concentrate on the controls too. Otherwise, how can I grant your wishes? I will marry you. you asked me this. So if you want to leave me also, I won’t leave you in your dreams too’, yelled swara while tears were making their way down on their face. they safely landed after some minutes. After that, sanskar knelt down before her and brought out a box from his pocket and opened it in front of her. It was a diamond ring. In that, a heart holding another heart inside was crafted with perfection. The starting point and the ending point couldn’t be identified in it. he made her to wear it. they turned around and found their family clapping and aarthi capturing the moment.
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‘where are you, Mr. Sanskar maheswari? We are waiting, here’, sanskar heard his voice from the other side of the line. ‘say this to her. Mrs. Maheswari is taking so much time to get ready. What can I do?’, complained sanskar. ‘what did you say?’, he heard swara’s voice. ‘hahaha’, sanskar heard the other person’s laugh and cut the call. ‘I said you are looking gorgeous, my lady’, he said pulling her towards him. ‘have some shame sanskar. The door is opened’, said swara. ‘okay. Then, I will close it. after seeing you, I don’t have the mood to go to the party, my hottie shona’, said sanskar while trying to kiss her. She pushed him and went towards the door. ‘you are so unromantic’, she heard his yelling behind.
At the venue,
‘hello, everyone. Thanks for coming here to bless the couple. Here, we are starting the party with the small art exhibition. It’s a present from the charming man to his beautiful lady’, said the event holder who pointing towards opposite side of the stage. He went there and started to uncover the paintings one by one. they were resembling the life events of swara and sanskar. Swara looked at sanskar who held her tightly by shoulder. She put her head on his shoulder. The event holder started to explain how they met, their car crashing, their fight at the boutique, their travel to the jungle, swara’s expression after capturing an unique bird, their travel to manisha’s village, their confession, their hug, all the rituals of marriage, swara announcing her pregnancy to sanskar, their first child sanra, swara cried on sanra’s first day school, their second baby karan, their family outings, sanra’s graduation day and etc., it took one hour to complete swasan’s last 28 years of life in short. ‘lets’ congratulate the couple for their 25th wedding anniversary’, said the event holder who was accompanied by a lady and shouted in unison, ‘happy wedding anniversary dad and mom. We love you a lot’.
Karan and sanra went and hugged them. Sanskar and swara cut the cake followed by the claps. They were surrounded by the people. Pictures were taken. Then the party started as usual with songs, dance, drinks. Sanra joined with her fiancé rohit khanna, an criminal advocate after some time and karan went to look after his friends. Finally, the love birds got some alone time. swara turned to sanskar, ‘thank you for fulfilling the dream I dreamed, sanskar, the dream of having a happy family like others’. Sanskar kissed her forehead and said, ‘you are my happiness and everything, shona. You are a part of me. we don’t say thanks to ourselves right’. Swara nodded and pecked his lips without anyone’s notice. ‘my shona is again becoming romantic. Shall we go out?’, asked sanskar with a teasing smile. The two pair of dreamy eyes shined with satisfaction, happy, mischievousness and with love.
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Everyone has their own dream, their own world. Here, sanskar fulfilled the dream swara dreamed. Money, richness, past, nothing matter in love. Being an example of true gentle man, he helped her to forget her past without her notice and expectation of anything other than her happiness. He stayed by her side. there are many swara in the world but what about sanskar? does he really exist? Should the men change like sanskar? think about it. Be the change. Be the human.
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Yipeee!!!! I finished my first fiction on teleupdates. I am feeling extremely happy. Without your support, it can’t be possible. Thank you so much for your love, support, tolerance and everything. Finally, I penned it for why I started this fiction and end it the way I thought. At last, I blabbered something. Eeee!!! Some of you might have disappointed with my fiction. Honestly, I am too not satisfied because in the middle I lost the track and wrote what came into my mind. sorry for making you wait, confuse, for testing your patience and for any inconvenience. Tell me what you liked and disliked in my fiction. So, I can improve myself. Love you all!!!