Hey guys, I am Saanvi. I read lots of ff and it inspired me to write one so this one is for swalak and ragsan fans. If there are any swalak and ragsan fans left pls support and comment and you can tell me how to improve.
Today is the intro and chapter 1
Shekar- rich businessman, best friend of Durga Prasad, husband of sumi and father of swaragini
Sumi- owns a beauty parlour, best friend of Anupurna,wife of shekar and mother of swaragini
Ragini- elder daughter of shekar and sumi, sister of swara, best friend of kaira, modern, pretty, sweet, loves to play drums
Swara- younger daughter of shekar and sumi, sister of ragini, best friend of mira, modern, pretty, bubbly, loves to play guitar
Kaira- sister of mira, best friend of ragini, modern, pretty, kind, loves to sing
Mira- sister of kaira, best friend of swara, modern, pretty, cute, loves to play piano
(Kaira and Mira are like family members to Gadodia family)
Rest are dadima, dadaji and dida
Durga Prasad(DP)- rich businessman, best friend of shekar, husband of anupurna, father of laksh and sanskar
Anupurna(AP)- housewife, best friend of sumi, wife of Durga Prasad, mother of laksh and sanskar
Sanskar- elder and adopted son of DP and AP, brother of laksh, best friend of raj, loves to play drums, handsome
Laksh(Lucky)- younger son of DP and AP, brother of sanskar, best friend of yuv, loves to play guitar, handsome
Raj- brother of yuv, best friend of sanskar, good looking, kind, loves to sing
Yuv- brother of raj, best friend of laksh, good looking, cute, loves to play piano
(Raj and Yuv are like family members to Maheshwari family)
Rest are Ram, Sujata, Adarsh, Pari and Uttara
Swaragini and KairaMira are in 1 band called Marvellous Girlz
Sanlak and Yuvraj are in 1 band called Cool Devilz
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Chapter 1
Scene 1 ( In Kolkata)
A mansion is shown and we move inside. We see a man shouting. He is DP.
DP:Sanskar,Laksh,Raj,Yuv utho hum ne airport jaana hai.(Wake up, we have to go to airport)
AP:Kya hua, aap itnae jaldi men kyon ho(What happened, why are you in hurry)
Sujata:Haan bhaisa aur aap khush bhi bahut ho( yes bhaisa and you are very happy today)
DP: Aaj shekar aur uske parivaar aa rahe hai(Today shekar and his family are coming)
Everyone gets happy
DP: Uttara, go and wake up your brothers.
Uttara: Yes badepapa
Scene 2(Sanlak and YuvRaj)
Uttara:bhai wake up, badepapa is calling you guys.
Raj: 5 more min
Uttara: Fine, main badepapa ko bataane ja rahe hoon.(I am going to tell badepapa)
SanlakYuvRaj in unison: Hum uth gaye badepapa ki chamchi( We woke up badepapa’s pet)
Uttara: Get ready and come downstairs
Yuv: Ok
Uttara leaves and they start to get ready.
Scene 3
SanlakYuvRaj come downstairs.
Sanskar: Badepapa you called us?
DP: Yes, eat your breakfast then we have to go to airport.
Laksh: Why papa?
DP: We have to go pick up shekar and his family and they are going to stay with us for somedays
SanlakYuvRaj in unison: The bhoot sisters are coming, noooooooooooooooooo!
Others start to laugh.
The screen freezes on SanlakYuvRaj disappointed faces and others still laughing.
Precap: Swaragini and KairaMira entry
Hope you guys like it.
Give me suggestions who should play the role of YuvRaj and KairaMira.
39 Comments
madhyam from ky2 (yuvraj thakur) as raj
sidarth from Jamai raja (Ravi dubey) as yuv
aliya from ky2 (krissan baretto) as kaira
vidya from saath nibhaana saathiya(sonam lamba) as Mira
Thanks for the suggestions xxx
r u gonna pick my suggestion or someone elses…
Wowww i just loved it plzzz continue
Felt interesting
Omgg thank u soooo much for a lovely story. I am the biggest fan of ragsan and swalak. I love them. I don’t like swasan. Thank sooo much ofr doing ragsan and swalak
Super ya nice start…..
Wow superb…and my suggestion is..
Karan Singh Grover as raj.
Karan tracker as yuraaj
Jenifer winget..as kaira..
Kristal di soza.as Mira…or Mira as Tanya Sharma from sathiya …how is it…
I am a big fan of Swalak and Ragsan.. Especially SWALAK … Anywayz Manvi its yuv and raj … not raj and yuvraaj
Agree with u
Karan n krystle
Nice intro plz continue
awersome …nice story …
Thanks everyone and give me more suggestions.
Barun as raj ayaaz as yuv and sanya as kaira and nikita as mira (kavita from the real track) nice keep it up Saanvi
At last you are doing swalak and ragsan. Thanks Saanvi.
Nice
Nice one dear..all the best for your fiction.
thnks for swalak and ragsan
Nice…tnx for ragsan
I really like ragsan. Thanks a lot for writing.
Update soon.
Thank u so much u cared for ragsan swalak fans I just don’t like swasan and there are so many swasan thanks to u a lot pls continue
i agree wid u
Interesting.. Thanks for keeping swalak
Thank god you made it a swalak ff thanks very much
thanku so much for swalak fan fiction….ur fan fiction is amazing
Nice..thank for pairs(ragsan,swalak)
Too gooddddd ??????
And thank you sooooo much for ragsan ?
Superb start..i love d pairs ragsan,swalak..thank u so much
Thank you everyone for the support. I am die hard fan of swalak and ragsan so whatever ff i am going to write in future it is going to be of swalak and ragsan.
Thats really good. Im glad someone cares about swalak and ragsan. When show started I thought it would be ragsan. And I was so excited and only watched the show for them. But its actually turned swasan which I don’t like.
good strt eventhough as swasan fan still i like swalak in ff
Nice yaar.
I would suggest karan wahi and aahil(qubool hai)
Thank you everyone for your support. I am die hard fan of swalak and ragsan. i was so sad when they decided to swasan and raglak so i thought to make people happy who are swalak and ragsan fans. And one more thing who looks great with Ravi dubey?
I think with Ravi dubey his wife sargun Mehta is looking best..and one more thing I m big fan of Ravi dubey he is great actor…thank u for Ravi dubey…
Pls make ..
Ravi dubey and sargun Mehta
Mehar and abheer from batameez dil…
Pearl v Puri and Asmita sood
thank you for swalak I love them very much
sanvi nice one yaarrrrrrrr……….
saanvi nice one yaarrrrrrrr……….
finally someone came up with ragsan……thankyouuuuu
Saanvi where is the ep 2???